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Thrombin excellent Since: Jun, 2010
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#226: Jun 25th 2012 at 10:08:42 PM

Yeah, I removed it. Followed Ragna's suggestion to change it to Gil-level armour and keep Battle Continuation. Waiting for further instructions.

edited 25th Jun '12 10:09:29 PM by Thrombin

Clawthewolf from Sweden Since: May, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#227: Jun 27th 2012 at 12:18:46 PM

As he has not been summoned yet I wonder if there's still time to do some small last minute tweaks on William, such as adding something that makes it so that his promises and oaths works like lesser Command Seals on him, it's origin is that once he had made a promise he never broke it, an example: On his deathbed (73 years old months after his final battle and duel, which he won... And according to his biography he still had the perfect body of a knight that he had when he was young) he fulfilled his promise to die a Knights Templar, a promise he made 30-40 years (a lifetime ago during the medieval ages) ago while on a pilgrimage/crusade to the Holy Land in place of his lord who had sworn to go on one but didn't bother until he died. Hmm, whith that in mind, would it also be possible for him to take on others promises, making them his own?

The second thing I wanted to tweak was his Magical Energy by increasing the rank from E to D or C

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#228: Jun 27th 2012 at 12:21:24 PM

Well, I think that C is the Saber base, so having it E was weird in the first place. tongue

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#229: Jun 27th 2012 at 12:23:12 PM

He also has Magic Resistence E due to him only encountering one curse during his life, a curse cast upon his entire family that did it so his sons would die childless. Though Lancelot did also originally have a very low Resistence too

edited 27th Jun '12 12:24:10 PM by Clawthewolf

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#230: Jun 27th 2012 at 12:43:38 PM

[up] That's due to an enchanted ring.

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#231: Jun 27th 2012 at 12:46:15 PM

Was it not raised from a E to a D thanks to the ring?

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#232: Jun 27th 2012 at 12:47:01 PM

No, it was E due to being Berserker, the ring is D-Rank.

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#233: Jun 27th 2012 at 1:11:30 PM

Ah ok. But was it not that a Servant automatically has all the class skills of ther Class?

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#234: Jun 27th 2012 at 1:13:08 PM

But at a low rank if it doesn't suit them.

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Clawthewolf from Sweden Since: May, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#235: Jun 27th 2012 at 1:18:58 PM

Therefore Williams E rank Magic Resistence.

AnnoR "Of course, Satsuki-sama." from Honnouji Academy Since: Sep, 2010
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#236: Jun 27th 2012 at 4:30:58 PM

  • Name: Coney Satin
  • Age: 17
  • Gender: Female
  • Appearance: "It's very simple."
  • Personality: Coney is sarcastic to a fault. She rarely restrains her tongue, and is liable to make biting comments almost constantly over everything. Coney is prone to judging others rather harshly. However, she doesn't intend to be cruel... even if she is by accident. She has a severe fear of heights which she tries to keep hidden, and a fear of darkness to a lesser extent.
  • Abilities: Coney's elemental affinity is air. As a magus-in-training, she has yet to learn some more advanced techniques. However, what she has learned includes the manipulation of air currents to accelerate throne objects, primarily knives.
    • Mystic Code-Olympus Dagger: A heavy dagger. When the entire blade is inside the target, it induces a vast electric shock that is extremely deadly. However, it is not capable of harming Servants, and it is too heavy to be thrown or accelerated with Coney's air manipulation. It also has no more penetrating power then an ordinary knife.
  • Bio: Born in the Satin magus family, Coney's early life was filled with hard training and focus. However, when she entered her teens, her family decided to have her work as a maid for another magus family in order to pay back a favor. She resents this, to some extent, but likes the uniform.
  • Assets: A lot of knives, a sizable sum of money, and a mansion home.

Editing her Mystic Code.

edited 28th Jun '12 11:25:00 AM by AnnoR

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Shadowbell Macinatrix Insana from Massachusetts Since: Jan, 2001
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#237: Jun 27th 2012 at 4:59:50 PM

Hey, uh sorry for disappearing for the weekend. Anyone still in the market for a servant?

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#238: Jun 27th 2012 at 5:49:43 PM

A knife that causes time to slow down twice and speed up once for an outside span of ten seconds.

Yeah, no. Sorry, but no time manipulation.

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AnnoR "Of course, Satsuki-sama." from Honnouji Academy Since: Sep, 2010
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#239: Jun 27th 2012 at 6:22:15 PM

This only effects the person who has been stabbed with the knife. This is weaponized time manipulation, the causing damage to the target by making the center of several useless alterations of time. The strain on their body causes severe damage. However, the knife must penetrate flesh up to the hilt in order to cause these affects. It does not work on heroic spirits, as the knife's penetrative ability is no more than that of a mundane knife's.

It's explicitly an ability of the knife itself, and not something she can use on her own. It's also only a way to do damage to the target, by causing time alteration centered on them(which, as Kiritsugu demonstrates, causes some nasty damage to the body). Coney can't use time manipulation herself, and all that would happen if she tried to use the knife on herself is she'd die, so... yeah.

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#240: Jun 27th 2012 at 6:25:40 PM

Even still, it's basically a knife of insta-kill. No means no.

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Clawthewolf from Sweden Since: May, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#241: Jun 27th 2012 at 9:05:35 PM

KSPAM, am I allowed to make the tweaks?

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#242: Jun 27th 2012 at 9:49:55 PM

Go ahead.

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daltar The Maid from the fantasy of green. Since: Jul, 2009 Relationship Status: All is for my lord
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#244: Jun 28th 2012 at 12:35:44 AM

Here's a Master for William.

  • Name: Selina Morgan
  • Age: 17
  • Gender: Female
  • Description: Plebeians.
  • Personality: A snob, a noble that acts with the self assurance of an aristocrat of centuries past. While having a difficult personality and a hot temper she is an avid follower of Noblesse Oblige, and thus will try, with great condescension and possible irritation, to help those she considers beneath her as long as they are not her enemies. She comes from a venerable family and carrying the pride of her name she puts a lot of effort into the magic of her clan. While indulging herself in aristocratic interests, to her great embarrassment she feels attracted and curious of modern forms of entertainment which her family have taught her are beneath her station.
  • Abilities: Selina is the heiress to a family of Alchemists, whose trade has been the basis for their monetary fortune. Thus from her family she knows about the conversion of matter through various magical procedures and formulas. However her greatest asset comes from her elemental affinity of Fire with special emphasis subaffinity of Light. These affinities she uses in creating optical illusions, enhancing her hypnotic abilities and Fires serves in a pinch for combat.
  • Bio: The heir to an aristocratic family of Alchemist who have not been very notable for quite a few generations ago. She was raised as a rich aristocrat kept apart from normal society. With great expectations put on her due to her unexpected talent, she was put into a harsh training schedule to ensure that her potential would not be wasted. Now with the news of the Grail War raging in America, Selina is sent as her family's representative in order to accomplish the mage's dream of reaching Akasha.
  • Assets: A vast fortune and a recently acquired five bedroom home on Redrock Town.

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RagnaTheSaviour Red-headed Smasher from Mid-Childa Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: You can be my wingman any time
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#245: Jun 28th 2012 at 12:47:14 AM

[up] Accepted!

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Clawthewolf from Sweden Since: May, 2011 Relationship Status: They can't hide forever. We've got satellites.
#246: Jun 28th 2012 at 6:09:47 AM

Tweaks on William is done

AnnoR "Of course, Satsuki-sama." from Honnouji Academy Since: Sep, 2010
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#247: Jun 28th 2012 at 11:25:18 AM

Edited Coney's Mystic Code.

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RagnaTheSaviour Red-headed Smasher from Mid-Childa Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: You can be my wingman any time
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#248: Jun 28th 2012 at 12:08:06 PM

@Coney: Accepted.

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Augustine My King from the Church on the hill Since: Sep, 2010 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
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#249: Jun 28th 2012 at 6:44:23 PM

Master:

Name: Aaron Skyfield

Age: 32

Gender: Male

Description: I hope this will do

Personality: Neutral Evil by his own admission. Everything he does is for himself. While he can form relationships with people, in the end they are nothing but a means to an end. However, he does not needlessly cause pain. That is not his goal. He just looks out for number 1. He despises the Magic Association for kicking him out.

Abilities: To further his goal, he has poured all of his time and effort into learning the mysteries of the human body. His powers have developed as a form of biomancy. If he can concentrate, he can control any bodily fluid that he comes in contact with. Blood, adrenaline, and other hormones can be easily regulated. Over time he has used this power to reinforce his muscles and bones. He rarely uses it against enemies due to the concentration it takes, but if he hypothetically remains calm and touches a foe's open wound, he could potentially bleed them out in seconds. He has no hand to hand skills other than brawling, but his reinforced muscles make him deadly nonetheless.

Bio: Aaron has one goal, become the perfect being. To further this goal, he researched biomancy first and then the Dead Apostles. When his research was discovered, the Magic Association attempted to kill him. They were unsuccessful and he managed to escape. Aaron was never able to find a way to transform himself into a perfect Dead Apostle, and his thoughts turned to the Grail. It would be his only way to achieve his wish.

Assets: 10,000 American dollars. Three fine suits. A combat knife.


I am certainly willing to adjust his skills. I'll leave it to the D Ms to determine what is overpowered or not.

edited 28th Jun '12 6:45:12 PM by Augustine

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#250: Jun 28th 2012 at 11:11:55 PM

  • Class: Rider
  • Master: TBA
  • True Name: Genghis Khan
  • Gender: Female
  • Height/Weight: 178 cm, 68 kg
  • Alignment: Lawful Evil
  • Appearance: "I am the punishment of God. If you had not committed great sins, God would not have sent a punishment like me upon you."
  • Personality: Imagine something terrible. Some great, malignant force that sends decorated men fleeing for their lives at the mention of its name, and razes villages to the ground with a word. It does not stop. It does not quit. It does not feel, it does not pity. It is a cute blonde. Genghis Khan (or Temülen, as she was born), is not exactly known by history for being a kind, loving and gentle soul. No, she is known for being singlehandedly responsible for more deaths than World War I. She is bloodthirsty, and easily angered. And her anger is as... well, ask the men, women, children, dogs, and cats of Khwarezmia what it's like. She does not forgive easily, if at all, and often seems like she's looking for an excuse to kill someone, just to get her daily fix. She gets high on conquest and domination, viewing it as the purest form of ecstasy. And once she starts, well... it's hard to get her to stop. And when she gets going, she gets going. This aside, she is a rather charming gal to those on her good side, and can make for a loyal ally and friend, valuing respect and camaraderie. Just don't test the limits of her patience. She does appreciate recognition for her deeds as a warrior and a conqueror, but doesn't raise a fuss about it, preferring the experience to the honor (which is why she didn't mind her most trusted general, Muqali, becoming the face of Genghis Khan).
  • Stats:
    • Strength: C
    • Endurance: C
    • Agility: B
    • Mana: B
    • Luck: A
    • Noble Phantasm: A++
  • Class Skills:
    • Magic Resistance (B): Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for her to be affected
    • Riding (A+): Creatures on the level of Phantasmal Beast and Divine Beast can be used as mounts. However, that does not apply to members of the Dragon Kind.
  • Personal Skills:
    • Charisma (B): Suitable for a king of a country.
    • Military Tactics (A+): Bonus modifiers are provided during use of one's own Anti-Army Noble Phantasm or when dealing with an enemy Anti-Army Noble Phantasm. At this rank, one is said to be one of the most feared military commanders in history.
    • Protection From Arrows (B)
      An increased defense against ranged attacks by predicting the projectiles' trajectories through exceptional means, such as hearing the sound of air being cut, or sensing the killing intent of the enemy.
    • The Grand Empire (EX): A skill representing Genghis Khan's greatest achievement in life, the Mongol Empire, the largest contiguous empire in history. It embodies the nature of an undeniable conqueror, who makes all they see theirs. Anywhere Khan steps becomes her territory, shifting the tides of battle ever in her favor. While it is certainly not a make or break ability, the skill greatly increases the chance of victory, essentially making every battle a fight on home turf. This ability is nullified upon the destruction of The Golden Whip.
  • Noble Phantasm:
    • The Punishment of God ~ Army of the Khan (Anti-Army): A Noble Phantasm used in conjunction with the Grand Empire skill. Using this ability, Khan can summon any number of undead Mongol soldiers within her territory, and command them to attack her enemies. This NP also allows her to call forth her own personal horse, as per her preferred method of warfare - on horseback. This ability's usefulness is hindred extremely by the destruction of the Golden Whip, and once Khan loses her territory, she will only be able to summon and command a limited number of troops before she loses control of them.
    • The Golden Whip ~ Right of the Khan (Anti-Unit):The golden whip Khan supposedly found as a child, the one which grants her divine right as a ruler. The whip, true to its name, is solid gold, and is studded with a large number of barbs which respond to the flesh of an enemy, emerging when an enemy is struck, or when someone other than Khan attempts to take hold of the whip. Oh, and it's also on fire. Did we mention Khan likes fire? While a useful melee weapon in its own right, the main privileges bestowed upon Khan by the whip are first and foremost her most useful skill, The Grand Empire, and one other special functionality.
      • The Wrath of Khan (Anti-Army): The aforementioned Anti-Army part of this Noble Phantasm. By channeling prana through the whip and cracking it, Khan can unleash a sea of hellfire, shrapnel, scalding pitch, and gale force winds. This attack represents the fate of the many who thought they could stand before the Mongol's onslaught, and like with most of Khan's campaigns, little remains of whatever it's used on. It burns flesh to a crisp and reduces even the ground in its wake to slag. It's not something that can just be thrown around however, and appropriate care should be taken when using it.
  • Misc: Likes her drink almost as much as her conquest, and while not quite as eager as the general who would later father the prodigious number of children attached to the name of Genghis Khan, well... let's just say she gets around.

edited 19th Jul '12 11:43:47 AM by KSPAM

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