Seems ok to me....Didn't we already have this thread?
Sparkling and glittering! Jan-Ken-Pon!Third, that is really small text.
Infinite Tree: an experimental storyPulled.
Rhymes with "Protracted."
We did already have this thread, but I have to agree with Ghilz and INUH. The image itself is completely superfluous. And might actually detract a little, as the woman doesn't appear to be especially attractive.
Reaction Image RepositoryThe image is fine, but a properly-sized cut would be better.
good point... I was more talking about the pulling because of right to left was a bad reason alone which the other thread went over.
I am drawing a blank on a replacement image though.
Sparkling and glittering! Jan-Ken-Pon!Yeah, really, this had no reason to be pulled. Can we find another image? Maybe. But as it stands it's a good enough image.
Un-pulled until we come up with a better one.
edited 8th Feb '11 11:59:00 AM by ThePope
What about Dahlia Hawthorne◊ from the Ace Attorney series?
She's a great example, but that image doesn't show the trope.
Infinite Tree: an experimental storyDoesn't show she gets her way because of her looks.
Sparkling and glittering! Jan-Ken-Pon!The text bubbles of the former image say: "No matter what I do, I will always be forgiven. Why, you ask? It is because I am beautiful!" The graphics communicate virtually no information, except possibly that a female is speaking, which seems unimportant.
Depending on many variables, it may be okay if the text does a lot of work, but all of it? Bad image.
edited 8th Feb '11 5:18:39 PM by rodneyAnonymous
Becky: Who are you? The Mysterious Stranger: An angel. Huck: What's your name? The Mysterious Stranger: Satan.There is a scene of she literaly kicking a puppy in the anime, only for everyone to promptly cheer her on after she fakes a moe apology.
Two screenshots couldwork, maybe?
I'm thinking just put that line of hers in as a page quote and leave it at that. I did a search but this◊ is about all I could come up with, and that's not much better than the current one.
^ That one, cropped and stacked.
...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
That doesn't really fit the "Screw the Rules" part of the trope very well.
Rhymes with "Protracted."Yeah, it needs that first panel for the setup.
Bump...should we go with a new version of the last webcomic example or just leave this with a quote or two and no pic?
...if you don’t love you’re dead, and if you do, they’ll kill you for it.
Looks good, but I'd resize it down to a small enough point that the smaller text in the last panel is still legible...as is, it'll be huge on the page.
edited 31st May '11 12:25:53 PM by Willbyr
How's this?
Bump...any other thoughts?
I think the last panel alone works for the trope.
Sparkling and glittering! Jan-Ken-Pon!Mmmmm...no, the last panel alone feels like a trope other than this one.
One last bump.
First: The image is backwards. It's an english wiki, put your stuff in the english direction
Two: The image is all text. It works as well as a quote:
Look ! We've lost nothing, and in fact, this is EASIER TO READ!