- Genius Bonus: on Page 37, Mr. Army capitalizes the names of two cheeses "Gouda" and "burrata" wrong in the line "Well, Burrata is good, but I'm much more partial to gouda myself."
- You can tell the author knew because he has shown his work by having Miss Paloma capitalize the cheeses correctly in surrounding dialogue.
- Interestingly, this sentence was provided by a reader (they won the opportunity to give the author a sentence to use in the story). Was the wrong capitalization a test by the reader or a mistake?
- What an Idiot!: Mr. Army, arguably, though he could be seen as sympathetically out of place and confused.
YMMV / Dream High School