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* CrazyIsCool: A few secondary characters.
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* CrazyIsCool: A At least one primary and a few secondary characters.characters.
** Generator, emphasis on the 'crazy'. In fact, this is Diane Castle's goal in writing her.
*** She animated a stuffed cabbit doll as part of an epic chase, then later rigged that cabbit with enough weaponry to rip a man's arm off, she's obsessed with ''Franchise/HelloKitty'', and created the Radioactive Condor Girl issue.
*** She decided she needed to wear the school's 'pacifist' and 'ultra-violent' armbands, and just switch off on different days.
*** She's a driving force in Team Wondercute, known for insane tactics.
** Generator, emphasis on the 'crazy'. In fact, this is Diane Castle's goal in writing her.
*** She animated a stuffed cabbit doll as part of an epic chase, then later rigged that cabbit with enough weaponry to rip a man's arm off, she's obsessed with ''Franchise/HelloKitty'', and created the Radioactive Condor Girl issue.
*** She decided she needed to wear the school's 'pacifist' and 'ultra-violent' armbands, and just switch off on different days.
*** She's a driving force in Team Wondercute, known for insane tactics.
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** Jade Sinclair, 'Radioactive Condor Girl!' In fact, this is Diane Castle's goal in writing her.
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* BrokenAesop: Sara has a speech on how she doesn't understand why humans are so possessive of the people they love and uses branding as a metaphor, no one points out that she has branded people she loves with a [[ClaimedByTheSupernatural demon mark]], irreversible marks of ownership. If you have one, the demon owns your soul and can control you almost utterly any time they want. However, as said [[http://whateleyacademy.net/index.php/content_page/9/443 Insanity Prerequisite (Part 1)]]:
--> you have to be willing to accept it on some subconscious level for the mark to appear."
--> you have to be willing to accept it on some subconscious level for the mark to appear."
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* ValuesDissonance: Multiple examples, mostly as a result of the odd balancing act a super-neutral school would have in dealing with super-heroes and super-villains.
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** Deathlist is a psychopathic, NighInvulnerable {{cyborg}} who gets off on widespread carnage and considers the world to owe him a debt of pain. The most horrific thing he's done so far was to kidnap a mutant superheroine, jam a power-neutralizing device into her skull, then [[AnArmAndALeg hack off her arms and legs]] and give her to his troops as a sex toy. Then, when she died after more than a month of torture and rape, he impaled her corpse on a pole with a thank-you message to one of her former teammates carved into her chest. Not even his FreudianExcuse--that his parents tried to kill him by crushing him in a garbage compactor--nets him any sympathy after that.
** [[EvilSorceress Hekate]] is a wizardess supervillain-in-training whose rap sheet includes using a spell to enslave two of her classmates for a year, during which they were repeatedly raped and otherwise abused while [[AndIMustScream being completely aware of what was happening but powerless to stop it]], as well as the fact that the athamé she used in the spell was empowered by the ritual [[HumanSacrifice sacrifice]] of [[WouldHurtAChild two young children]]. Not only that, but during a magical battle with Fey, after trying and failing to ensnare her in the same enslavement spell, she summons a trio of iron elementals using the promise of dozens of future sacrifices. To top all that off, she used her athamé to stab Jade in the heart beforehand, just to torment Fey.
** [[EvilSorceress Hekate]] is a wizardess supervillain-in-training whose rap sheet includes using a spell to enslave two of her classmates for a year, during which they were repeatedly raped and otherwise abused while [[AndIMustScream being completely aware of what was happening but powerless to stop it]], as well as the fact that the athamé she used in the spell was empowered by the ritual [[HumanSacrifice sacrifice]] of [[WouldHurtAChild two young children]]. Not only that, but during a magical battle with Fey, after trying and failing to ensnare her in the same enslavement spell, she summons a trio of iron elementals using the promise of dozens of future sacrifices. To top all that off, she used her athamé to stab Jade in the heart beforehand, just to torment Fey.
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** [[AxCrazy Deathlist]] is a psychopathic [[FullConversionCyborg cyborg]] who has an obsessive desire to spread carnage for his own sadistic pleasure. Responsible for the horrific butchering of innocent men, women, and [[WouldHurtAChild children]], Deathlist is reaches a psychopathic, NighInvulnerable {{cyborg}} who gets off on widespread carnage and considers the world to owe him a debt new height of pain. The most horrific thing he's done so far was to kidnap a depravity when he kidnaps an innocent mutant superheroine, jam [[HeroKiller superheroine]]. [[AnArmAndALeg Removing her limbs]] and jamming a power-neutralizing device into her skull, then [[AnArmAndALeg hack off her arms and legs]] and give her Deathlist has the mutant subjected to his troops as a sex toy. Then, when she died after more than a month of torture and rape, he impaled rape by his own troops. Deathlist later kills her corpse on a pole with a thank-you message to one of and leaves her former teammates carved into body as a taunt towards her chest. Not even his FreudianExcuse--that his parents tried to kill him by crushing him in a garbage compactor--nets him any sympathy after that.
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** [[EvilSorceressHekate]] Hekate]], real name Kallysta Thessellarean, is a wizardess supervillain-in-training whose rap sheet includes using a spell sadistic sorceress who [[AmbitionIsEvil aspires to become something much worse]]. Sacrificing two [[WouldHurtAChild children]] to learn a spell, Hekate uses her newfound magic to mentally enslave two of her classmates for a year, during which they were repeatedly raped and otherwise abused while [[AndIMustScream being completely aware of what was happening but powerless keeping them aware]] while they were raped and abused. Later trying to stop it]], as well as use the fact that the athamé she used in the same spell was empowered by the ritual on Fey, Hekate summons three iron elementals to brutalise her, promising them [[HumanSacrifice sacrifice]] of [[WouldHurtAChild two young children]]. Not only that, but during a magical battle with Fey, after trying and failing to ensnare her in the same enslavement spell, she summons a trio of iron elementals using the promise of dozens of future sacrifices. sacrifices]]. To top all that off, she used her athamé to stab spite Fey, Hekate stabs Jade in the heart beforehand, heart, just to torment Fey.her foe.
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* {{Squick}}: Several examples. Almost all the main characters are UsefulNotes/{{transgender}} in some way shape or form and there are rather frank discussions of gender issues in the early chapters -- for example, Ayla is mostly female except for... certain elements of his body, Jade uses her powers to "tuck" herself in and this is described rather frankly -- did we mention that Jade is physically 12 years old? Sara essentially vomits out her entire set of internal organs when she "awakens". For the most part however, the series is a fairly standard slice-of-life high-school drama, except with super-powers.
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* {{Squick}}: {{Squick}}:
** Several examples. Almost all the main characters are UsefulNotes/{{transgender}} in some way shape or form and there are rather frank discussions of gender issues in the early chapters -- for example, Ayla is mostly female except for... certain elements of his body, Jade uses her powers to "tuck" herself in and this is described rather frankly -- did we mention that Jade is physically 12 years old? Sara essentially vomits out her entire set of internal organs when she "awakens". For the most part however, the series is a fairly standard slice-of-life high-school drama, except with super-powers.
** Several examples. Almost all the main characters are UsefulNotes/{{transgender}} in some way shape or form and there are rather frank discussions of gender issues in the early chapters -- for example, Ayla is mostly female except for... certain elements of his body, Jade uses her powers to "tuck" herself in and this is described rather frankly -- did we mention that Jade is physically 12 years old? Sara essentially vomits out her entire set of internal organs when she "awakens". For the most part however, the series is a fairly standard slice-of-life high-school drama, except with super-powers.
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** ''Fire Over Phoenix'' introduces [=FrankenCorp=], a company that abducts mutants and other powered beings and sells them- either intact or in pieces- to people who want to vivisect metahumans, use their body parts for transplants, or just find out what non-humans taste like.
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** For example, imagine if the neighborhood daredevil developed a healing factor. What does he do? Go into business as a paid guinea pig/test pilot for the [[GadgeteerGenius mad scientist students']] more iffy experiments at the school. And he lets Phase pretend to rip off his dick in the cafeteria. At lunch. In front of the entire school.
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** For example, imagine Peril. Imagine if the neighborhood daredevil developed a healing factor. What does he do? Go into business as a paid guinea pig/test pilot for the [[GadgeteerGenius mad scientist students']] more iffy experiments at the school. And he lets Phase pretend to rip off his dick in the cafeteria. At lunch. In front of the entire school.
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** For example, imagine if the neighborhood daredevil developed a healing factor. What does he do? Go into business as a paid guinea pig/test pilot for the [[GadgeteerGenius mad scientist students']] more iffy experiments at the school.
*** And he lets Phase rip off his dick in the cafeteria. At lunch. In front of the entire school.
*** And he lets Phase rip off his dick in the cafeteria. At lunch. In front of the entire school.
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** For example, imagine if the neighborhood daredevil developed a healing factor. What does he do? Go into business as a paid guinea pig/test pilot for the [[GadgeteerGenius mad scientist students']] more iffy experiments at the school.
***school. And he lets Phase pretend to rip off his dick in the cafeteria. At lunch. In front of the entire school.
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