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* HarsherInHindsight: Finn's real parents being portrayed as a caring and loving father and mother along with a heartwarming reunion in the afterlife along with his twin sister makes the canon reunion even more heartbreaking [[spoiler: when his real father Martin is revealed to be the [[AbusiveParents most]] [[HateSink despicable]] [[{{Jerkass}} person]] Finn has ever met]].
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* HarsherInHindsight: Finn's real parents being portrayed as a caring and loving father and mother along with a heartwarming reunion in the afterlife along with his twin sister makes the canon reunion even more heartbreaking [[spoiler: when his real father Martin is revealed to be one of the [[AbusiveParents most]] [[HateSink despicable]] [[{{Jerkass}} person]] Finn has ever met]].met and then even harsher when it's revealed that Martin was once kind but various circumstances changed him into the person he became]].
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* HilariousInHindsight: One of the main theme in this fan fiction centers around the Citadel of Truth. Later however, another citadel concept has been released, this time a prison for crimes that commit the most heinous of crimes. The author eventually acknowledge this fact in one of his notes.
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* HilariousInHindsight: One of the main theme in this fan fiction centers around the Citadel of Truth. Later however, another citadel concept has been released, this time a prison for crimes criminals that commit the most heinous of crimes. The author eventually acknowledge this fact in one of his notes.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Finn's real parents being portrayed as a caring and loving parent father and mother along with a heartwarming reunion in the afterlife along with his twin sister makes the canon reunion even more heartbreaking [[spoiler: when his real father Martin is revealed to be the most despicable person [[AbusiveParents most]] [[HateSink despicable]] [[{{Jerkass}} person]] Finn has ever met]].met]].
* HilariousInHindsight: One of the main theme in this fan fiction centers around the Citadel of Truth. Later however, another citadel concept has been released, this time a prison for crimes that commit the most heinous of crimes. The author eventually acknowledge this fact in one of his notes.
* HilariousInHindsight: One of the main theme in this fan fiction centers around the Citadel of Truth. Later however, another citadel concept has been released, this time a prison for crimes that commit the most heinous of crimes. The author eventually acknowledge this fact in one of his notes.
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* HarsherInHindsight: Finn's real parents being portrayed as a caring and loving parent along with a heartwarming reunion in the afterlife along with his twin sister makes the canon reunion even more heartbreaking [[spoiler: when his real father is revealed to be the most despicable person Finn has ever met]].
