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** Alexander has a a strict policy against swearing to the point where even he himself must pay up TheSwearJar.
** Alexander has a a strict policy against swearing to the point where even he himself must pay up TheSwearJar.
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** Crystalis - An {{Magitek}} Empire that seems to be similar to Magic Kingdom Levianta due to its uses of Magic and Tech with a Greek-based culture. The only difference is that it's a peaceful place made of beautiful gems and alabaster stone.
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** Crystalis - An {{Magitek}} Empire that seems to be similar to Magic Kingdom Levianta due to its uses of Magic and Tech with a Greek-based Mediterranean-based culture. The only difference is that it's a peaceful place made of beautiful gems and alabaster stone.stone, and the culture is based on Greece instead of Rome.
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** The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin, near the end of Chapter 21. What he does next in Chapter 22 is a complete nightmare to Allen. Not only that, but [[spoiler:Tom's]] more demonic traits are mostly inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's [[Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu Cthulhu]] and to some minor degree Hachishakusama.
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** The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin, near the end of Chapter 21. What he does next in Chapter 22 is a complete nightmare to Allen. Not only that, but [[spoiler:Tom's]] more demonic traits are mostly inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's [[Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu Cthulhu]] Cthulhu]], and to some minor degree degree; Hachishakusama.
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* FictionalCountry: Many of the Countries and Continents in the Canon series are based off of real-life nations, with Maistia being America, Evillious being Europe, and Akuna being Asia. The newer worlds in this story follow the same suit:
** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:It bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, New York. It even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:It bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, New York. It even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
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* FictionalCountry: Many of the Countries and Continents in the Canon series are based off of on real-life nations, with Maistia being America, Evillious being Europe, and Akuna being Asia. The newer worlds in this story follow the same suit:
** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:Itbares bears many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, New York. It even has it's its own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:It
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** Chapter 10 is full of this, mostly due to the fact that the basement is over run with female Black Widow Spiders who are due for egg laying, [[spoiler:and the fact that the Black Widows started biting the shit out of the Sinners after being driven out of the Basement by Margarita's Gift-Bomb experiment is totally jarring]]. The [[WordOfGod author even stated]] that it was [[SpidersAreScary inspired by her Arachnophobia(Fear of Spiders), and that she finds Black Widows to be the scariest]].
** The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous [[spoiler: ouija board and flatwoods monsters]], of course, the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].
** The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous [[spoiler: ouija board and flatwoods monsters]], of course, the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].
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** Chapter 10 is full of this, mostly due to the fact that the basement is over run overrun with female Black Widow Spiders who are due for egg laying, [[spoiler:and the fact that the Black Widows started biting the shit out of the Sinners after being driven out of the Basement by Margarita's Gift-Bomb experiment is totally jarring]]. The [[WordOfGod author even stated]] that it was [[SpidersAreScary inspired by her Arachnophobia(Fear of Spiders), and that she finds Black Widows to be the scariest]].
** The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous [[spoiler: ouija board andflatwoods Flatwoods monsters]], of course, the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].
** The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous [[spoiler: ouija board and
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* TearJerker: The entire mini-arc wherein Gallerian and Nemesis learn that Ma was a Hereditary Evil Raiser the whole time. Gallerian in particular goes into a VillainousBSOD upon discovering that his lover was just playing him like a fiddle all along.
* TearJerker: The entire mini-arc wherein Gallerian and Nemesis learn that Ma was a Hereditary Evil Raiser the whole time. Gallerian in particular goes into a VillainousBSOD upon discovering that his lover was just playing him like a fiddle all along.
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** The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin, near the end of Chapter 21. What he does next in Chapter 22 is a complete nightmare to Allen. Not only that, but Tom's [[spoiler:Tom's]] more demonic traits are mostly inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's [[Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu Cthulhu]] and to some minor degree Hachishakusama.
* TearJerker: The entire mini-arc wherein Gallerian and Nemesis learn that Ma was a Hereditary Evil Raiser the whole time.Gallerian Gallerian, in particular particular, goes into a VillainousBSOD upon discovering that his lover was just playing him like a fiddle all along.
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** The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin, near the end of Chapter 21. What he does next in Chapter 22 is a complete nightmare to Allen. Not only that, but Tom's more demonic traits are mostly inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's [[Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu Cthulhu]] and to some minor degree [[HellISThatNoise Hachishakusama]].Hachishakusama.
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** The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin, near the end of Chapter 21. What he does next in Chapter 22 is a complete nightmare to Allen. Not only that, but Tom's more demonic traits are mostly inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's [[Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu Cthulhu]] and to some minor degree [[https://villains.wikia.com/wiki/Eight_Feet_Tall [[HellISThatNoise Hachishakusama]].
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** The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin, near the end of Chapter 21. What he does next in Chapter 22 is a complete nightmare to Allen. Not only that, but Tom's more demonic traits are mostly inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's Cthulhu [[Literature/TheCallOfCthulhu Cthulhu]] and to some minor degree Hachishakusama.[[https://villains.wikia.com/wiki/Eight_Feet_Tall Hachishakusama]].
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** The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin, near the end of Chapter 21. What he does next in Chapter 22 is a complete nightmare to Allen. Not only that, but Tom's more demonic traits are mostly inspired by H.P. Lovecraft's Cthulhu and to some minor degree Hachishakusama.
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** The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous [[spoiler: ouija board and flatwoods monsters]], of course course, the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].
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* TheseTropesShouldWatchTheirLanguage: A lot of characters, [[SirSwearsalot mostly Nemesis]], seem to have a long record of muttering insults and curse words. Being a T-Rated story, however, extreme words such as the [[ClusterFBomb F-Bomb]] for example are censored to avoid trouble, this this, of course course, goes the same for [[ForeignCussWord foreign curses]].
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** Crystalis - An {{Magitek}} Empire that seems to be similar to Magic Kingdom Levianta due to it's uses of Magic and Tech with a Greco-Roman Greek based culture. The only difference is that it's a peaceful place made of beautiful gems and alabaster stone.
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** Crystalis - An {{Magitek}} Empire that seems to be similar to Magic Kingdom Levianta due to it's uses of Magic and Tech with a Greco-Roman based culture. The only difference is that it's a peaceful place made of beautiful gems and alabaster stone.
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** Crystalis - An {{Magitek}} Empire that seems to be similar to Magic Kingdom Levianta due to it's uses of Magic and Tech alongside with a Greco-Roman theme.culture. The only difference is that it's a peaceful place made of beautiful gems and alabaster stone.
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** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:It bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, New York. It even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to the VOCALOID Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
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** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:It bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, New York. It even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to the VOCALOID Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
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** Yingmu - An oriental themed Kingdom built by Jun and many survivors with and upon the ruins of [[spoiler:first]] and Second Period China.
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* FictionalCountry: Many of the Countries in the Canon series are based off of real-life nations, with Maistia being America, Evillious being Europe, and Akuna being Asia. The newer worlds in this story follow the same suit:
** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:it bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, it even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to the VOCALOID Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:it bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, it even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to the VOCALOID Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
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* FictionalCountry: Many of the Countries and Continents in the Canon series are based off of real-life nations, with Maistia being America, Evillious being Europe, and Akuna being Asia. The newer worlds in this story follow the same suit:
** [[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm -[[spoiler:it [[spoiler:It bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, it New York. It even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to the VOCALOID Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
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**[[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:it bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, it even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to the VOCALOID Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
**Yingmu - An oriental themed Kingdom built by Jun and many survivors with and upon the ruins of [[spoiler:first]] and Second Period China.
**Crystalis - A Empire made of beautiful gems
**[[spoiler:Chanban City]]/Capriccio Realm - [[spoiler:it bares many references to North America, mostly New York City and Brooklyn, it even has it's own moniker: "The Big Orange", a reference to the VOCALOID Kagamine Rin's character item and New York City's moniker: "The Big Apple".]]
**Yingmu - An oriental themed Kingdom built by Jun and many survivors with and upon the ruins of [[spoiler:first]] and Second Period China.
**Crystalis - A Empire made of beautiful gems
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** The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous[[spoiler: ouija board and flatwoods monsters]], of course the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].
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** The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous[[spoiler: infamous [[spoiler: ouija board and flatwoods monsters]], of course the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].Mask"]].
**Cherubim's angry breakdown near the end of Chapter [[spoiler:20]] after discovering [[spoiler:his brother's plot to kill him, causing Behemo's Black Box Banica stole to overheat, which gives us the implication that will cause the box the shut down and trap them inside]]. Imagine what would happen if they never make it out?
**The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin.
**Cherubim's angry breakdown near the end of Chapter [[spoiler:20]] after discovering [[spoiler:his brother's plot to kill him, causing Behemo's Black Box Banica stole to overheat, which gives us the implication that will cause the box the shut down and trap them inside]]. Imagine what would happen if they never make it out?
**The introduction of the fabled [[EldritchAbomination Demon of Discord]], the very first demon of sin.
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* NightmareFuel: Chapter 10 is full of this, mostly due to the fact that the basement is over run with female Black Widow Spiders who are due for egg laying, [[spoiler:and the fact that the Black Widows started biting the shit out of the Sinners after being driven out of the Basement by Margarita's Gift-Bomb experiment is totally jarring]].
** The [[WordOfGod author even stated]] that it was [[SpidersAreScary inspired by her Arachnophobia(Fear of Spiders), and that she finds Black Widows to be the scariest]].
** The [[WordOfGod author even stated]] that it was [[SpidersAreScary inspired by her Arachnophobia(Fear of Spiders), and that she finds Black Widows to be the scariest]].
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**Chapter 10 is full of this, mostly due to the fact that the basement is over run with female Black Widow Spiders who are due for egg laying, [[spoiler:and the fact that the Black Widows started biting the shit out of the Sinners after being driven out of the Basement by Margarita's Gift-Bomb experiment is totallyjarring]].
**jarring]]. The [[WordOfGod author even stated]] that it was [[SpidersAreScary inspired by her Arachnophobia(Fear of Spiders), and that she finds Black Widows to be the scariest]].scariest]].
**The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous[[spoiler:ouija board and flatwoods monsters]], of course the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].
**Chapter 10 is full of this, mostly due to the fact that the basement is over run with female Black Widow Spiders who are due for egg laying, [[spoiler:and the fact that the Black Widows started biting the shit out of the Sinners after being driven out of the Basement by Margarita's Gift-Bomb experiment is totally
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**The [[HalloweenEpisode Halloween Chapter]] which features the infamous[[spoiler:ouija board and flatwoods monsters]], of course the latter switches to a shootout similar to [[spoiler: the Romani Ranch sidequest]] from [[VideoGame/TheLegendOfZeldaMajorasMask "Majora's Mask"]].
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** Becomes HarsherInHindsight too, seeing as the story was written before it was revealed that [[spoiler:Ma was Gallerian's mother too]].
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* TheseTropesShouldWatchTheirLanguage: A lot of characters, [[SirSwearsalot mostly Nemesis]], seem to have a long record of muttering insults and curse words. Being a T-Rated story, however, extreme words such as the [[ClusterFBomb F-Bomb]] for example are censored to avoid trouble, this of course goes the same for [[ForeignCussWord foreign curses]].
**Humorously, Cherubim often asks his peers if they had kissed their mother's for cursing.
--->'''Cherubim:''' "Do you kiss your mother with that mouth? Pfffffft."
* TheseTropesShouldWatchTheirLanguage: A lot of characters, [[SirSwearsalot mostly Nemesis]], seem to have a long record of muttering insults and curse words. Being a T-Rated story, however, extreme words such as the [[ClusterFBomb F-Bomb]] for example are censored to avoid trouble, this of course goes the same for [[ForeignCussWord foreign curses]].
**Humorously, Cherubim often asks his peers if they had kissed their mother's for cursing.
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**The [[WordOfGod author even stated]] that it was [[SpidersAreScary inspired by her Arachnophobia(Fear of Spiders), and that she finds Black Widows to be the scariest]].
**The [[WordOfGod author even stated]] that it was [[SpidersAreScary inspired by her Arachnophobia(Fear of Spiders), and that she finds Black Widows to be the scariest]].
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: As per tradition in Fanfiction, some of the characters, if not all of them, seemed to have notably different personalities compared to their canon counterparts(I.E. Margarita is seen as more of a cheery yet [[DitzyGenius Ditzy Genius]] than a [[BrokenBird Broken Bird]]. Albeit still a [[DeadlyDoctor Deadly Doctor]]).
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: As per tradition in Fanfiction, some of the characters, if not all of them, seemed to have notably different personalities compared to their canon counterparts(I.E. Margarita is seen as more of a cheery yet [[DitzyGenius Ditzy Genius]] than a [[BrokenBird Broken Bird]]. Albeit still a [[DeadlyDoctor Deadly Doctor]]).
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: As per tradition in Fanfiction, some of the characters, if not all of them, seems seemed to have notably difference different personalities compared to their canon counterparts(I.E. Margarita is seen as more of a cheery yet [[DitzyGenius Ditzy Genius]] than a [[BrokenBird Broken Bird]]. Albeit still a [[DeadlyDoctor Deadly Doctor]]).
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* TearJerker: The entire mini-arc wherein Gallerian and Nemesis learn that Ma was a Hereditary Evil Raiser the whole time. Gallerian in particular goes into a VillainousBSOD upon discovering that his lover was just playing him like a fiddle all along.
** Becomes HarsherInHindsight too, seeing as the story was written before it was revealed that [[spoiler:Ma was Gallerian's mother too]].
** Becomes HarsherInHindsight too, seeing as the story was written before it was revealed that [[spoiler:Ma was Gallerian's mother too]].