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* MoralEventHorizon: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Aeire wanted to see how close she could get a character to a Moral Event Horizon without crossing it - or if she could cross it, and then make a backstory that could bring them ''back'' across it. The Event was in the past when Felix broke up with Kestrel by cheating on her, then telling her all she was to him was a "pretty good fuck." And then the backstory was how he and his college sweetheart Julie had planned to get married, only to have her parents break it up under the assumption they weren't mature enough; Julie was pregnant, and one day while Felix was out, her parents came and removed her from their apartment and hid her from him. All the time he was with Kestrel, Felix had felt like he was betraying Julie. Then when Julie finally emailed him and asked him to never contact her again, he [[BungledSuicide attempted suicide via OD.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Aeire wanted to see how close she could get a character to a Moral Event Horizon without crossing it - or if she could cross it, and then make a backstory that could bring them ''back'' across it. The Event was in the past when Felix broke up with Kestrel by cheating on her, then telling her all she was to him was a "pretty good fuck." And then the backstory was how he and his college sweetheart Julie had planned to get married, only to have her parents break it up under the assumption they weren't mature enough; Julie was pregnant, and one day while Felix was out her parents came and removed her from their apartment and hid her from him. All the time he was with Kestrel, Felix had felt like he was betraying Julie. Then when Julie finally emailed him and asked him to never contact her again, he [[BungledSuicide attempted suicide via OD.]]
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Aeire wanted to see how close she could get a character to a Moral Event Horizon without crossing it - or if she could cross it, and then make a backstory that could bring them ''back'' across it. The Event was in the past when Felix broke up with Kestrel by cheating on her, then telling her all she was to him was a "pretty good fuck." And then the backstory was how he and his college sweetheart Julie had planned to get married, only to have her parents break it up under the assumption they weren't mature enough; Julie was pregnant, and one day while Felix was out out, her parents came and removed her from their apartment and hid her from him. All the time he was with Kestrel, Felix had felt like he was betraying Julie. Then when Julie finally emailed him and asked him to never contact her again, he [[BungledSuicide attempted suicide via OD.]]
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' whenDonna Dawna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Aeire wanted to see how close she could get a character to a Moral Event Horizon without crossing it - or if she could cross it, and then make a backstory that could bring them ''back'' across it. The Event was in the past when Felix broke up with Kestrel by cheating on her, then telling her all she was to him was a "pretty good fuck." And then the backstory was how he and his highschool sweetheart Julie had planned to get married, only to have their parents break it up under the assumption they weren't mature enough, and for Julie's parents to hide her away. All the time he was with Kestrel, Felix had felt like he was betraying Julie. Then when Julie finally emailed him and asked him to never contact her again, he [[BungledSuicide attempted suicide via OD.]]
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
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* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Aeire wanted to see how close she could get a character to a Moral Event Horizon without crossing it - or if she could cross it, and then make a backstory that could bring them ''back'' across it. The Event was in the past when Felix broke up with Kestrel by cheating on her, then telling her all she was to him was a "pretty good fuck." And then the backstory was how he and his highschool college sweetheart Julie had planned to get married, only to have their her parents break it up under the assumption they weren't mature enough, enough; Julie was pregnant, and for Julie's one day while Felix was out her parents to hide came and removed her away.from their apartment and hid her from him. All the time he was with Kestrel, Felix had felt like he was betraying Julie. Then when Julie finally emailed him and asked him to never contact her again, he [[BungledSuicide attempted suicide via OD.]]
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-agegirl.
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* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age
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'''Backup Singers:''' Char-les Dar-win! He's our he-ro! Baggin' those with an IQ of ze-ro!
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%%* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: The [[http://www.queenofwands.net/d/20031208.html Chainsaw Of Natural Selection]].
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[DeconstructedTrope Deconstructed]]. Aeire wanted to see how close she could get a character to a Moral Event Horizon without crossing it - or if she could cross it, and then make a backstory that could bring them ''back'' across it. The Event was in the past when Felix broke up with Kestrel by cheating on her, then telling her all she was to him was a "pretty good fuck." And then the backstory was how he and his highschool sweetheart Julie had planned to get married, only to have their parents break it up under the assumption they weren't mature enough, and for Julie's parents to hide her away. All the time he was with Kestrel, Felix had felt like he was betraying Julie. Then when Julie finally emailed him and asked him to never contact her again, he [[BungledSuicide attempted suicide via OD.]]
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* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: The [[http://www.queenofwands.net/d/20031208.html Chainsaw Of Natural Selection]].
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* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
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%%* SugarWiki/MomentOfAwesome: The [[http://www.queenofwands.net/d/20031208.html Chainsaw Of Natural Selection]].
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* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-agegirl.girl.
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* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age
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* MemeticMutation: [[http://www.queenofwands.net/d/20040121.html Vagina Dentata, what a wonderful phrase...]]
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* MemeticMutation: [[http://www.queenofwands.net/d/20040121.html Vagina Dentata, what a wonderful phrase...]]]]
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
* OnlySixFaces: Almost all of the female characters had the same face and body type, and the men had their own as well. This became more noticeable in ''Punch an' Pie'' when Donna was revealed to be a somewhat overweight, middle-aged woman instead of a taller version of a pretty college-age girl.
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* DesignatedHero: The "GrammarNazi" originally seemed like a hilarious satire on how people are stupidly obsessed with online grammar ... however, as it turns out the author actually is one of those people who despise anything who uses LeetLingo, so the Grammar Nazi was actually meant to be a heroic figure (who happened to gouge out people's eyes with sporks and gruesomely kill people who did not write the way she wanted them to ...)
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* DesignatedHero: The "GrammarNazi" originally seemed like a hilarious satire on how people are stupidly obsessed with online grammar ... however, as it turns out the author actually is one of those people who despise anything anyone who uses LeetLingo, so the Grammar Nazi was actually meant to be a heroic figure (who happened to gouge out people's eyes with sporks and gruesomely kill people who did not write the way she wanted them to ...)
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* DesignatedHero: The "GrammarNazi" originally seemed like a hilarious satire on how people are stupidly obsessed with online grammar ... however, as it turns out the author actually is one of those people who despise anything who uses LeetLingo, so the Grammar Nazi was actually meant to be a heroic figure (who happened to gouge out people's eyes with sporks and gruesomely kill people who did not write the way she wanted them to ...)
