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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Colin]] is the greedy, sadistic crime boss in both Sarah's and George's worlds. In Sarah's world, he's caused the mass murder of dozens of innocents, includes [[CopKiller several of Sarah's colleagues]]. He also responsible for much more personal crimes in George's world, where he kidnaps and tortures George's wife, threatening to kill her unless George gives him lots of money; despite his demands being met, Colin [[spoiler:[[ILied kills her anyway]]]]. He later kidnaps George believing he can extort him for more money before attempting to [[{{Fingore}} cut off]] and feed George his own fingers when he learns he doesn't have any more money left.
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* CompleteMonster: In the real world, [[BigBad Colin]] is the greedy, sadistic a [[AxCrazy psychopathic]] crime boss lord who in both the past carried out a horrific massacre that claimed at least [[CopKiller 15 police lives]] and seriously traumatized the heroine Sarah. Although he was easily caught when he suggested to his colleagues to attack the city hall with [[NukeEm nuclear weapons]], his actions ruin Sarah's life, driving her into a coma and George's worlds. In Sarah's world, he's caused the mass murder of dozens of innocents, includes [[CopKiller several of Sarah's colleagues]]. He also responsible for much more personal crimes in George's world, where he kidnaps and tortures George's wife, threatening to kill dooming her unless George gives him lots of money; despite his demands being met, Colin [[spoiler:[[ILied kills her anyway]]]]. He later kidnaps George believing he can extort him for more money before attempting to [[{{Fingore}} cut off]] and feed George his own fingers when he learns he doesn't have any more money left.eternal suffering.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Colin]] is the greedy, sadistic crime boss in both Sarah's and George's worlds. In Sarah's world, he's caused the mass murder of dozens of innocents, includes [[CopKiller several of Sarah's colleagues]]. He also responsible for much more personal crimes in George's world, where he kidnaps and tortures George's wife, threatening to kill her unless George gives him lots of money; despite his demands being met, Colin [[spoiler:[[ILied kills her anyway]]]]. He later kidnaps George believing he can extort him for more money before attempting to [[{{Fingore}} cut off]] and feed George his own fingers when he learns he doesn't have anymore money left.
* TearJerker: The DownerEnding that sees Sarah reject her happy real life - including a loving marriage and a decorated career - in favour of the widowed George's CrapsackWorld, seemingly out of a subconscious desire to punish herself for surviving when many of her colleagues died.
* TearJerker: The DownerEnding that sees Sarah reject her happy real life - including a loving marriage and a decorated career - in favour of the widowed George's CrapsackWorld, seemingly out of a subconscious desire to punish herself for surviving when many of her colleagues died.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Colin]] is the greedy, sadistic crime boss in both Sarah's and George's worlds. In Sarah's world, he's caused the mass murder of dozens of innocents, includes [[CopKiller several of Sarah's colleagues]]. He also responsible for much more personal crimes in George's world, where he kidnaps and tortures George's wife, threatening to kill her unless George gives him lots of money; despite his demands being met, Colin [[spoiler:[[ILied kills her anyway]]]]. He later kidnaps George believing he can extort him for more money before attempting to [[{{Fingore}} cut off]] and feed George his own fingers when he learns he doesn't have anymore any more money left.
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** The DownerEnding that sees Sarah reject her happy real life - including a loving marriage and a decorated career - infavour favor of the widowed George's CrapsackWorld, seemingly out of a subconscious desire to punish herself for surviving when many of her colleagues died.
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* TearJerker: The DownerEnding that sees Sarah reject her happy real life - including a loving marriage and a good job decorated career - in favour of the widowed George's CrapsackWorld, seemingly out of a subconscious desire to punish herself for surviving when many of her colleagues died.
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** Sarah's wife Katie being left to mourn her still-living but brain-dead spouse, especially since it was Katie who gave Sarah access to the "vacation" technology in the first place.
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** Sarah's wife Katie being left to mourn her still-living but brain-dead now permanently comatose (and possibly brain-dead) spouse, especially since it was Katie who gave Sarah access to the "vacation" technology in the first place.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Colin]] is the greedy, sadistic crime boss in both Sarah's and George's worlds. In Sarah's world, he's caused the mass murder of dozens of innocents, includes [[CopKiller several of Sarah's colleagues]]. He also responsible for much more personal crimes in George's world, where he kidnaps and tortures George's wife, threatening to kill her unless George gives him lots of money; despite his demands being met, Colin [[spoiler:[[ILied kills her anyway]]]]. He later kidnaps George believing he can extort him for more money before attempting to [[{{Fingore}} cut off]] and feed George his own fingers when he learns he doesn't have anymore money left.
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* CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Colin]] is the greedy, sadistic crime boss in both Sarah's and George's worlds. In Sarah's world, he's caused the mass murder of dozens of innocents, includes [[CopKiller several of Sarah's colleagues]]. He also responsible for much more personal crimes in George's world, where he kidnaps and tortures George's wife, threatening to kill her unless George gives him lots of money; despite his demands being met, Colin [[spoiler:[[ILied kills her anyway]]]]. He later kidnaps George believing he can extort him for more money before attempting to [[{{Fingore}} cut off]] and feed George his own fingers when he learns he doesn't have anymore money left.left.
* TearJerker: The DownerEnding that sees Sarah reject her happy real life - including a loving marriage and a good job - in favour of the widowed George's CrapsackWorld, seemingly out of a subconscious desire to punish herself for surviving when many of her colleagues died.
** Sarah's wife Katie being left to mourn her still-living but brain-dead spouse, especially since it was Katie who gave Sarah access to the "vacation" technology in the first place.
* TearJerker: The DownerEnding that sees Sarah reject her happy real life - including a loving marriage and a good job - in favour of the widowed George's CrapsackWorld, seemingly out of a subconscious desire to punish herself for surviving when many of her colleagues died.
** Sarah's wife Katie being left to mourn her still-living but brain-dead spouse, especially since it was Katie who gave Sarah access to the "vacation" technology in the first place.
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*CompleteMonster: [[BigBad Colin]] is the greedy, sadistic crime boss in both Sarah's and George's worlds. In Sarah's world, he's caused the mass murder of dozens of innocents, includes [[CopKiller several of Sarah's colleagues]]. He also responsible for much more personal crimes in George's world, where he kidnaps and tortures George's wife, threatening to kill her unless George gives him lots of money; despite his demands being met, Colin [[spoiler:[[ILied kills her anyway]]]]. He later kidnaps George believing he can extort him for more money before attempting to [[{{Fingore}} cut off]] and feed George his own fingers when he learns he doesn't have anymore money left.
