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* EsotericHappyEnding: If the ambiguous epilogue is interpreted as [[spoiler:Alice/Kyla's death]], she seems happy just to be [[spoiler:free and out of suffering, plus Ray is probably dead - but it's not as much of a happy ending as being reunited with her family would be.]]
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* EsotericHappyEnding: If the ambiguous epilogue is interpreted as [[spoiler:Alice/Kyla's death]], she seems happy just to be [[spoiler:free and out of her suffering, plus Ray is probably dead - but it's not as much of a happy ending as being reunited with her family would be.]]
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle. He also intends to kill her once he has his new "Alice,"[[note]]though he claims he'll let her stay on as "mother" to "Anabelle", whenever a suitable "Anabelle" is found[[/note]] and it’s implied that he’ll kill her parents anyway once she's dead, [[ForTheEvulz despite lacking any reason to do so]].
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle. He also intends to kill her once he has his new "Alice,"[[note]]though he claims he'll let her stay on as "mother" to "Anabelle", whenever a suitable "Anabelle" is found[[/note]] and it’s implied that he’ll kill her parents anyway once she's dead, [[ForTheEvulz despite lacking any reason to do so]]. He killed the first Alice's parents after killing her and got away with it.
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle. He also intends to kill her once he has his new "Alice,"[[note]]though he claims he'll let her stay on as "mother" to "Anabelle", whenever a suitable "Anabelle" is found[[/note]] and it is implied that he will kill her parents anyway once she's dead, [[ForTheEvulz despite lacking any reason to do so]].
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle. He also intends to kill her once he has his new "Alice,"[[note]]though he claims he'll let her stay on as "mother" to "Anabelle", whenever a suitable "Anabelle" is found[[/note]] and it is it’s implied that he will he’ll kill her parents anyway once she's dead, [[ForTheEvulz despite lacking any reason to do so]].
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* EsotericHappyEnding: If the ambiguous epilogue is interpreted as [[spoiler:Alice/Kyla's death]], she seems happy just to be [[spoiler:free and out of suffering, plus Ray is probably dead - but it's not as much of a happy ending as being reunited with her family would be.]]
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* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: Yes, this is in fact a YA book. Hard as that may be to believe.
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle. He also intends to kill her once he has his new "Alice," and it is implied that he will kill her parents anyway once she's dead, [[ForTheEvulz despite lacking any reason to do so]].
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle. He also intends to kill her once he has his new "Alice," "Alice,"[[note]]though he claims he'll let her stay on as "mother" to "Anabelle", whenever a suitable "Anabelle" is found[[/note]] and it is implied that he will kill her parents anyway once she's dead, [[ForTheEvulz despite lacking any reason to do so]]. so]].
* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: Yes, this is in fact a YA book. Hard as that may be to believe.
* WhatDoYouMeanItsForKids: Yes, this is in fact a YA book. Hard as that may be to believe.
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle. He also intends to kill her once he has his new "Alice," and it is implied that he will kill her parents anyway once she's dead, [[ForTheEvulz despite lacking any reason to do so]].
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another 'Alice' before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle.
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* CompleteMonster: Ray kidnapped the heroine Alice when she was ten, and five years hence has raped her daily and starves her. Ray had another 'Alice' "Alice" before this one, but when she outgrew her child body, he murdered her. Ray keeps control of Alice by threatening to murder her parents should she try to escape, and makes Alice try to find him a new girl to continue the cycle.
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* TheWoobie[=/=]JerkassWoobie: Alice. You feel sorry for her, but then you see what she does to others in order to make herself feel stronger.
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* TheWoobie[=/=]JerkassWoobie: Alice. You feel sorry for her, but then you see what she does to others in order to make herself feel stronger.stronger.
** Rather understandable considering her circumstances, though. Five years as an abused, underaged sex slave isn't very good for your moral compass.
** Rather understandable considering her circumstances, though. Five years as an abused, underaged sex slave isn't very good for your moral compass.
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*TheWoobie[=/=]JerkassWoobie: Alice. You feel sorry for her, but then you see what she does to others in order to make herself feel stronger.
