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* BetterThanCanon: Quite a few fans found this fic to be a far more preferable sequel than "The Cursed Child". Ironically finding The Cursed Child to be less original and more Fan Fic-like than the ACTUAL FanFic. Pointing out the fact that Hogwarts Houses Divided decided to tell its own story with its own conflict rather than relying on plot points that had already been done before.
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* BetterThanCanon: Quite a few fans found this fic to a preferable sequel to "The Cursed Child". Ironically finding The Cursed Child to be less original and more Fan Fic-like than the ACTUAL FanFic. Pointing out the fact that Hogwarts Houses Divided decided to tell its own story with its own conflict rather than relying on plot points that had already been done before.
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* BetterThanCanon: Quite a few fans found this fic to be a far more preferable sequel to than "The Cursed Child". Ironically finding The Cursed Child to be less original and more Fan Fic-like than the ACTUAL FanFic. Pointing out the fact that Hogwarts Houses Divided decided to tell its own story with its own conflict rather than relying on plot points that had already been done before.
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* JerkassWoobie: Strangely enough, Pansy Parkinson comes across as this.
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* JerkassWoobie: Strangely enough, Pansy Parkinson comes across as this.this - she DidNotGetTheGuy, Draco married Astoria Greengrass and she became a StrugglingSingleMother who is shunned by the Wizarding World for suggesting handing over Harry to Voldemort, but she did it [[spoiler: to protect her unborn daughter.]] She's still a haughty AlphaBitch and a bigot against Muggles, but it's hard not to feel sorry for her, especially as she's turned to drinking to cope with her lot and Draco apparently sees her as an unfit mother.
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* OneSceneWonder: Luna Lovegood only appears in one chapter, but she gives Violet some important exposition on why Pansy is the way she is and provides some contest of what it was like during the war. She then warns Violet about eavesdropping because, "People seldom like what they hear."
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* TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodCharacter: Calliope Young is introduced as a hotshot young Auror who kicks quite a lot of ass during the battle against the goblins, but she's killed off quite unceremoniously and only receives some belated backstory when Ophilia explains WeUsedToBeFriends.
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* MarySue: The dissenting opinion on Ophilia.
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* BetterThanCanon: Quite a few fans found this fic to a preferable sequel to "The Cursed Child". Ironically finding The Cursed Child to be less original and more Fan Fic-like than the ACTUAL FanFic. Pointing out the fact that Hogwarts Houses Divided decided to tell it's own story with it's own conflict rather than relying on plot points that had already been done before.
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* BetterThanCanon: Quite a few fans found this fic to a preferable sequel to "The Cursed Child". Ironically finding The Cursed Child to be less original and more Fan Fic-like than the ACTUAL FanFic. Pointing out the fact that Hogwarts Houses Divided decided to tell it's its own story with it's its own conflict rather than relying on plot points that had already been done before.
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* NeverLiveItDown: Pansy Parkinson's attempt to give Harry up to Voldemort has naturally haunted her every since. But it turns out [[spoiler:she was already pregnant with Violet, and not quite thinking straight in her attempts to keep her unborn child safe.]] Harry knows why she did it, and he doesn't hold it against her.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Chloe is pretty much set up as an intentional {{Scrappy}}, but she is redeemed in the later parts of the fic by turning her into TheAtoner, and at the end having her [[spoiler:make a HeroicSacrifice. Which almost kills her, but though she survives she's drained of all her magic and essentially becomes a Squib. It's hard to hate her at all after that, especially when she takes it philosophically instead of growing bitter.]]
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Chloe is pretty much set up as an intentional {{Scrappy}}, but she is redeemed in the later parts of the fic by turning her into TheAtoner, and at the end having her [[spoiler:make a HeroicSacrifice. Which almost kills her, but though she survives she's drained of all her magic and essentially becomes a Squib. It's hard to hate her at all after that, especially when she takes it philosophically instead of growing bitter.]]
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* NeverLiveItDown: Pansy Parkinson's attempt to give Harry up to Voldemort has naturally haunted her every since. But it turns out [[spoiler:she [[spoiler: she was already pregnant with Violet, and not quite thinking straight in her attempts to keep her unborn child safe.]] Harry knows why she did it, and he doesn't hold it against her.
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Chloe is pretty much set up as an intentional {{Scrappy}}, but she is redeemed in the later parts of the fic by turning her into TheAtoner, and at the end having her[[spoiler:make [[spoiler: make a HeroicSacrifice. Which almost kills her, but though she survives she's drained of all her magic and essentially becomes a Squib. It's hard to hate her at all after that, especially when she takes it philosophically instead of growing bitter.]]
* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Chloe is pretty much set up as an intentional {{Scrappy}}, but she is redeemed in the later parts of the fic by turning her into TheAtoner, and at the end having her
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* BetterThanCanon: Quite a few fans found this fic to a preferable sequel to "The Cursed Child". Ironically finding The Cursed Child to be less original and more Fan Fic-like than the ACTUAL FanFic. Pointing out the fact that Hogwarts Houses Divided decided to tell it's own story with it's own conflict rather than relying on plot points that had already been done before.
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* TheWoobie: After the war, Hogwarts pretty much turned into a world of woobie.
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* TheWoobie: After the war, Hogwarts pretty much turned into a world of woobie.woobie.
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* HarsherInHindsight: When trying to convince [[spoiler: Stephen White]] not to commit suicide, Mercy says, "I...I don't want to see Thestrals, not yet." During the [[spoiler: goblin attack]] on Hogwarts, Mercy is one of the Hufflepuffs to witness [[spoiler: Alduin's murder.]]
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Chloe.
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* RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap: Chloe.Chloe is pretty much set up as an intentional {{Scrappy}}, but she is redeemed in the later parts of the fic by turning her into TheAtoner, and at the end having her [[spoiler:make a HeroicSacrifice. Which almost kills her, but though she survives she's drained of all her magic and essentially becomes a Squib. It's hard to hate her at all after that, especially when she takes it philosophically instead of growing bitter.]]
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Ophelia Karait.
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* EnsembleDarkhorse: Ophelia Ophilia Karait.
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* MarySue: The dissenting opinion on Ophilia.
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* NeverLiveItDown: Pansy Parkinson's attempt to give Harry up to Voldemort has naturally haunted her every since. But it turns out [[spoiler:she was already pregnant with Violet, and not quite thinking straight in her attempts to keep her unborn child safe.]]
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* NeverLiveItDown: Pansy Parkinson's attempt to give Harry up to Voldemort has naturally haunted her every since. But it turns out [[spoiler:she was already pregnant with Violet, and not quite thinking straight in her attempts to keep her unborn child safe.]]]] Harry knows why she did it, and he doesn't hold it against her.
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* TheWoobie: After the war, Hogwarts pretty much turned into a WorldOfWoobie.
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* TheWoobie: After the war, Hogwarts pretty much turned into a WorldOfWoobie.world of woobie.
