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** Richard in his own route describes why he's at the shelter. He was a happy husband and father of two. His marriage lost the love it once had, as his wife, Marci said that she no longer felt the spark. Richard turned to alcohol to fall asleep and get through his job, eventually he was caught and fired. He eventually had to leave as his alcoholism would've broken his daughter's hearts. Then at his youngest's 4th birthday party she asked why couldn't her parents be together and that she missed him, Richard and the child started sobbing uncontrollably. It becomes heartwarming, because his family is Richard's motivation to stay sober.
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** Richard in his own route describes why he's at the shelter. He was a happy husband and father of two. His marriage lost the love it once had, as his wife, Marci said that she no longer felt the spark. Richard turned to alcohol to fall asleep and get through his job, eventually he was caught and fired. He eventually had to leave as his alcoholism would've broken his daughter's daughters' hearts. Then at his youngest's 4th birthday party she asked why couldn't her parents be together and that she missed him, Richard and the child started sobbing uncontrollably. It becomes heartwarming, because his family is Richard's motivation to stay sober.
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** Richard in his own route describes why he's at the shelter. He was a happy husband and father of two. His marriage lost the love it once had, as his wife, Marci said that she no longer felt the spark. Richard turned to alcohol to fall asleep and get through his job, eventually he was caught and fired. He eventually had to leave as his alcoholism would've broken his daughter's hearts. Then at his youngest's 4th birthday party she asked why couldn't her parents be together and that she missed him, Richard and the child started sobbing uncontrollably. It becomes heartwarming, because his family is Richard's motivation to stay sober.
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*** Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did due to A.I.D.S. He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then when you help him fix said relationship and things look like they're going well [[spoiler:until Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma with no resolution to that, despite the fact that he's just fixed his connection to his father, he's completely distraught about the idea of his father dying]].
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*** Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did died due to A.I.D.S. He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then when you help him fix said relationship and things look like they're going well [[spoiler:until Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma with no resolution to that, despite the fact that he's just fixed his connection to his father, he's completely distraught about the idea of his father dying]].
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*** Dozer was a cool jock in high-school until he found out his girlfriend was cheating on him with his then best friend, he beat said 'friend' within an inch of his life and was forced to change schools, only for his reputation to catch up with him. At his new high-school almost everyone was afraid of him.
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*** Dozer was a cool jock in high-school until he found out his girlfriend was cheating on him with his then best friend, he friend. He beat said 'friend' within an inch of his life and was forced to change schools, only for his reputation to catch up with him. At him at his new second high-school where almost everyone was afraid of him.
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** Spencer's relationship with his brother, DJ is not great. Spencer actively tries to avoid his brother's wedding. Spencer claims that DJ was homophobic and anti-human beast people marriage. When we meet DJ he's a friendly goofball, and Spencer can't stop antagonizing his brother. DJ actually asks why Spencer has been acting this way and Spencer reveals that he thought that DJ was jealous of his skills and having surpassing him. Spencer believed this for years.
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** Spencer's relationship with his brother, DJ is not great. Spencer actively tries to avoid his brother's wedding. Spencer claims that DJ was homophobic and anti-human beast people marriage. When we meet DJ he's a friendly goofball, and Spencer can't stop antagonizing his brother. DJ actually asks why Spencer has been acting this way and Spencer reveals that he thought that DJ was jealous of his skills and having surpassing surpassed him. Spencer believed this for years.
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*** [[Spoiler:Dianna breaks into Harold's house and one of the first things she does is tear apart the teddy bear you got Harold at the amusement park. Later when she breaks in while you're there she goes on a rant about 'fixing his bisexual desires.]]
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*** [[Spoiler:Dianna breaks Dianna [[spoiler:breaks into Harold's house and one of the first things she does is tear apart the teddy bear you got Harold at the amusement park. Later when she breaks in while you're there she goes on a rant about 'fixing his bisexual desires.]]
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** It's a small scene in Harold's route but when you're talking with Spencer and Darius about Dianna and her attacks, Darius will chime in with how he thinks Isaac is out to get him. Spencer admits he's terrified of both his friends dying.
*** [[Spoiler:Dianna breaks into Harold's house and one of the first things she does is tear apart the teddy bear you got Harold at the amusement park. Later when she breaks in while you're there she goes on a rant about 'fixing his bisexual desires.]]
*** It's more of a BittersweetEnding but at the end of Harold's route [[spoiler:after Dianna reveals your relationship with the teacher, and is arrested for trespassing and assault the accusations against Coach are more serious than ever and you are forced to break up, and restart the relationship later.]]
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** Harvey was thrown out of his house during winter for being gay.
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** Spencer in any route other than his own, considering he spent most of his life denying his feelings for his childhood best friend, only to learn that his friend was gay, but ended up with someone else. It's even worse in Darius's route because he dated Darius and thought that Darius had taken advantage of a past lover, to the point where he constantly tells you that Darius is only using you for sex, sometimes saying that you're stupid for not knowing it.
** Harvey was thrown out of his house during winter for being gay. He sees his best friend and ex-boyfriend becoming closer to someone else and lashes out ruining the relationship in the process. He's still a jerk for this.
** Harvey was thrown out of his house during winter for being gay. He sees his best friend and ex-boyfriend becoming closer to someone else and lashes out ruining the relationship in the process. He's still a jerk for this.
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*** It's a small moment, but during one of your tennis matches, Darius will joke that nobody could ever love Chester and he will flip out. Vernon did a number on the poor bull.
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*** If you don't say yes to the relationship option after his suicide attempt, [[spoiler:the game route will have end with him feel feeling so unloved in the relationship that he will check himself into a psychiatric hospital for his depression. It's a painful scene to play through]]through.]]
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*** Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did due to A.I.D.S.He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then when you help him fix said relationship and things look like they're going well [[spoiler:until Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma with no resolution to that, despite the fact that he's just fixed his connection to his father, he's completely distraught about the idea of his father dying]].
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*** Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did due to A.I.D.S. He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then when you help him fix said relationship and things look like they're going well [[spoiler:until Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma with no resolution to that, despite the fact that he's just fixed his connection to his father, he's completely distraught about the idea of his father dying]].
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*** And the trauma of certain routes can be painful. He is [[spoiler:nearly raped by Vernon in Chester's route]],[[spoiler:assaulted and nearly killed by Dianna in Harold's route]], [[spoiler:molested by one of Darius's friends in Spencer's route]], [[spoiler:watches Darius's motorcycle accident in Darius's route]] and [[spoiler:learns that a random man he met on the mountain vacation died.]]
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*** Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did due to A.I.D.S.He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then [[spoiler: Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma
with no resolution to that]].
with no resolution to that]].
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*** Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did due to A.I.D.S.He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then [[spoiler: when you help him fix said relationship and things look like they're going well [[spoiler:until Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma
coma with no resolution to that]].that, despite the fact that he's just fixed his connection to his father, he's completely distraught about the idea of his father dying]].
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** Spencer and Darius as a relationship, Darius helped Spencer come to terms with his sexual orientation and it's implied that Spencer made Darius feel loved, but Isaac, Darius's vicious ex lied and claimed that Darius had gotten him drunk and taken advantage of him. This makes Spencer view Darius as a pervert and decimates the relationship. The sadder part is that Spencer immediately believed Isaac, someone he barely knew over Darius.
** Spencer's relationship with his brother, DJ is not great. Spencer actively tries to avoid his brother's wedding. Spencer claims that DJ was homophobic and anti-human beast people marriage. When we meet DJ he's a friendly goofball, and Spencer can't stop antagonizing his brother. DJ actually asks why Spencer has been acting this way and Spencer reveals that he thought that DJ was jealous of his skills and having surpassing him. Spencer believed this for years.
** Spencer's relationship with his brother, DJ is not great. Spencer actively tries to avoid his brother's wedding. Spencer claims that DJ was homophobic and anti-human beast people marriage. When we meet DJ he's a friendly goofball, and Spencer can't stop antagonizing his brother. DJ actually asks why Spencer has been acting this way and Spencer reveals that he thought that DJ was jealous of his skills and having surpassing him. Spencer believed this for years.
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** Dozer has a pretty sad backstory considering his father was abusive to him and his mother, his school life was hell and his past relationship is not great.
***Dozer's relationship with his father is not great. As the father beat him and his mother. [[spoiler:When Dozer's dad tries to make contact to apologize, Dozer wants nothing to do with him and actively tries to avoid him, only speaking to him when he sees how terrifying his anger has become.]] The talk is very painful for him as the horrors he endured have left him very numb, during the confrontation his angry tears rip at your soul.
*** Dozer was a cool jock in high-school until he found out his girlfriend was cheating on him with his then best friend, he beat said 'friend' within an inch of his life and was forced to change schools, only for his reputation to catch up with him. At his new high-school almost everyone was afraid of him.
***Dozer's relationship with Harvey becomes dark once the player dates Dozer, as Harvey becomes emotionally and verbally abusive, shaming Dozer for 'throwing their relationship away'.
** Harvey was thrown out of his house during winter for being gay.
***Dozer's relationship with his father is not great. As the father beat him and his mother. [[spoiler:When Dozer's dad tries to make contact to apologize, Dozer wants nothing to do with him and actively tries to avoid him, only speaking to him when he sees how terrifying his anger has become.]] The talk is very painful for him as the horrors he endured have left him very numb, during the confrontation his angry tears rip at your soul.
*** Dozer was a cool jock in high-school until he found out his girlfriend was cheating on him with his then best friend, he beat said 'friend' within an inch of his life and was forced to change schools, only for his reputation to catch up with him. At his new high-school almost everyone was afraid of him.
***Dozer's relationship with Harvey becomes dark once the player dates Dozer, as Harvey becomes emotionally and verbally abusive, shaming Dozer for 'throwing their relationship away'.
** Harvey was thrown out of his house during winter for being gay.
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* TearJerker: A lot of the characters have depressing elements to their stories.
**Eric is homeless due to the business he worked for going under and not being able to rely on his parents, as his father is a strict military man and implied to be homophobic.
**Chester [[spoiler:was the victim of rape. His 'buddies' on the football team got him drunk, tied him to the bed and had a prostitute assault him to try to 'turn him straight'.]] Vernon continuously picks on him and Eric in the route.
**Coach Harold Grifter has depression and nearly committed suicide at one point. There's also his abusive biphobic ex-wife repeatedly verbally and physically abusing him and the player. One shudders to think what their marriage was like. He repeatedly calls himself 'pathetic' and blames his divorce on his bisexuality. Plus there's [[spoiler:death of his best friend and first man he'd ever loved, Jess]].
***If you don't say yes to the relationship option after his suicide attempt, [[spoilers:the game will have him feel so unloved in the relationship that he will check himself into a psychiatric hospital for his depression. It's a painful scene to play through]]
**Darius's route has [[spoiler:two of his exes try to kill him. When he's in the hospital you learn from the nurses that of his family and friends only Spencer, Maria and the player have visited him. Nobody else cared.]]
***Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did due to A.I.D.S.He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then [[spoiler: Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma
with no resolution to that]].
**Eric is homeless due to the business he worked for going under and not being able to rely on his parents, as his father is a strict military man and implied to be homophobic.
**Chester [[spoiler:was the victim of rape. His 'buddies' on the football team got him drunk, tied him to the bed and had a prostitute assault him to try to 'turn him straight'.]] Vernon continuously picks on him and Eric in the route.
**Coach Harold Grifter has depression and nearly committed suicide at one point. There's also his abusive biphobic ex-wife repeatedly verbally and physically abusing him and the player. One shudders to think what their marriage was like. He repeatedly calls himself 'pathetic' and blames his divorce on his bisexuality. Plus there's [[spoiler:death of his best friend and first man he'd ever loved, Jess]].
***If you don't say yes to the relationship option after his suicide attempt, [[spoilers:the game will have him feel so unloved in the relationship that he will check himself into a psychiatric hospital for his depression. It's a painful scene to play through]]
**Darius's route has [[spoiler:two of his exes try to kill him. When he's in the hospital you learn from the nurses that of his family and friends only Spencer, Maria and the player have visited him. Nobody else cared.]]
***Darius's relationship with his father is very strained to the point where Darius doesn't have many good memories of him. His father, Cyrus is homophobic partially because Darius's uncle was also gay and did due to A.I.D.S.He wants to help his father mend his relationship with his wife, and then [[spoiler: Cyrus has a heart attack and is left in a coma
with no resolution to that]].
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, depending on choices made early on, he may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, refusing Eric's demands to be released. Despite a difference in motive, this is noticeably similar to what Vernon once did to Chester, and what's more alarming is that Darius is visibly amused by Eric's anger.
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, depending on choices made early on, he may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, refusing Eric's demands to be released. Despite a difference in motive, this is noticeably similar to what Vernon once did to Chester, and what's more alarming is that Darius is visibly amused by Eric's anger.Chester.
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, depending on choices made early on, he may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, refusing Eric's demands to be released. Despite a difference in motive, this is noticeably similar to what Vernon once did to Chester.Chester, and what's more alarming is that Darius is visibly amused by Eric's anger.
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* FanNickname: MC for the protagonist, short for "Main Character."
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, he may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, refusing Eric's demands to be released. Despite a difference in motive, the player may be reminded of this is noticeably similar to what Vernon once did to Chester.
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, Darius he may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, despite refusing Eric's demands to be released. Despite a difference in motive, this is noticeably similar to the player may be reminded of what Vernon once did to Chester.
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, Darius may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, despite Eric's demands to be released. This is noticeably similar to what Vernon once did to Chester.
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, Darius may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, despite Eric's demands to be released. This Despite a difference in motive, this is noticeably similar to what Vernon once did to Chester.
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* ProtagonistCenteredMorality: Late in Darius's route, Darius may decide to leave Eric cuffed, naked, on Darius's bed, despite Eric's demands to be released. This is basically the same thing that noticeably similar to what Vernon once did to Chester.
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* HeartwarmingMoments: It's meta, but the pink wristband Spencer wears is based on the wristband the creator Dyne wears for breast cancer awareness.
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* HeartwarmingMoments: SugarWiki/HeartwarmingMoments: It's meta, but the pink wristband Spencer wears is based on the wristband the creator Dyne wears for breast cancer awareness.
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* MostWonderfulSound: The sound of Eric receiving a text or call on his phone is pleasant to hear.
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* MostWonderfulSound: SugarWiki/MostWonderfulSound: The sound of Eric receiving a text or call on his phone is pleasant to hear.
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** Darius. At first when he was announced and his route started, the reception was mixed due to his perverted nature and nonchalant treatment of MC wanting a serious relationship. He became TheScrappy after a short while, but afterwards when his story unfolded and more was discovered about him, he was RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap by turning him into a more complex and likable character. That said, some still haven't completely forgiven Darius over his first impressions.
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** Darius. At first when he was announced and his route started, the reception was mixed due to his perverted nature and nonchalant treatment of MC Eric wanting a serious relationship. He became TheScrappy after a short while, but afterwards when his story unfolded and more was discovered about him, he was RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap by turning him into a more complex and likable character. That said, some still haven't completely forgiven Darius over his first impressions.
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* BigBeautifulMan: Both Chester and Coach Grifter sport rather large bellies despite their athletic pursuits.
* BrokenBase: Due to personal issues outside of the novel itself, [=CursedMarked=] left the team during its production. In his place, artist Creator/CaptainGerBear has taken the wrings to update all character art into a consistent and congruent style. The problem is that CM's and CGB's art styles are ''vastly'' different, with CGB having a less {{Animesque}} feel to his style and more of a westernized flair to it. Naturally, this has split fans of the project into one that enjoys the new style and one that doesn't. Compare and contrast [[https://img.itch.zone/aW1hZ2UvNjI5MDYvMjgzODgwLnBuZw==/original/7Bbgm1.png CM's art]] to [[https://img.itch.zone/aW1hZ2UvNjI5MDYvMTEyMjc1OS5wbmc=/original/tttr5L.png CGB's art.]]
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Maria is loved by fans for being a kind, supportive, and motherly person to MC.
* BrokenBase: Due to personal issues outside of the novel itself, [=CursedMarked=] left the team during its production. In his place, artist Creator/CaptainGerBear has taken the wrings to update all character art into a consistent and congruent style. The problem is that CM's and CGB's art styles are ''vastly'' different, with CGB having a less {{Animesque}} feel to his style and more of a westernized flair to it. Naturally, this has split fans of the project into one that enjoys the new style and one that doesn't. Compare and contrast [[https://img.itch.zone/aW1hZ2UvNjI5MDYvMjgzODgwLnBuZw==/original/7Bbgm1.png CM's art]] to [[https://img.itch.zone/aW1hZ2UvNjI5MDYvMTEyMjc1OS5wbmc=/original/tttr5L.png CGB's art.]]
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Maria is loved by fans for being a kind, supportive, and motherly person to MC.
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* IronWoobie: MC who despite losing his job, home, and most of his money in rapid succession nevertheless keeps up with school and tennis with most people he knows not even realizing anything was wrong.
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* MostWonderfulSound: The sound of MC receiving a text or call on his phone is pleasant to hear.
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** When MC suggests Chester to cook steak, he gets mortified while Chester explains that [[spoiler:he knows how his kind is eaten, even going as far as cooking and eating steak himself.]]
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** MC Eric due to his living situation and the series of events that led up to it.
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** Darius doesn't seem like it at first but during his route [[spoiler: a motorcycle accident sends him to the hospital. Bad enough already but it's quickly shown that neither his family nor any of his other friends are concerned about his condition or in visiting him while he's there. It seems likely that the MC is one of the few real friends he actually has.]]
** Darius doesn't seem like it at first but during his route [[spoiler: a motorcycle accident sends him to the hospital. Bad enough already but it's quickly shown that neither his family nor any of his other friends are concerned about his condition or in visiting him while he's there. It seems likely that the MC is one of the few real friends he actually has.]]
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** Dozer when it's revealed that [[spoiler:he had a close friend in high school who would help him with math]] like how MC Eric does now. [[spoiler:Not to mention, his father abandoned him and his mom when he was at a young age.]]
** Darius doesn't seem like it at first but during his route [[spoiler: a motorcycle accident sends him to the hospital. Bad enough already but it's quickly shown that neither his family nor any of his other friends are concerned about his condition or in visiting him while he's there. It seems likely thatthe MC Eric is one of the few real friends he actually has.]]
** Darius doesn't seem like it at first but during his route [[spoiler: a motorcycle accident sends him to the hospital. Bad enough already but it's quickly shown that neither his family nor any of his other friends are concerned about his condition or in visiting him while he's there. It seems likely that
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* AlternativeCharacterInterpretation: Spencer shames Darius for being so promiscuous is that him being a hypocrite, is he in denial, is he ashamed or does he just expect better from Darius because Spencer is ashamed of what he's doing?Darius?
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