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* BreakoutCharacter: Technically Kyle from ''The Prophecy'', as he's one of the main characters in the SonsOfTheDark series.
* DieForOurShip: Michael for some. There's actually quite a few fans who enjoy the brief Vanessa/Stanton pairing from ''Goddess of the Night''
* DieForOurShip: Michael for some. There's actually quite a few fans who enjoy the brief Vanessa/Stanton pairing from ''Goddess of the Night''
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* BreakoutCharacter: Technically Kyle from ''The Prophecy'', as he's one of the main characters in the SonsOfTheDark ''Literature/SonsOfTheDark'' series.
* DieForOurShip: Michael for some. There's actually quite a few fans who enjoy the brief Vanessa/Stanton pairing from ''Goddess of theNight''Night''.
* DieForOurShip: Michael for some. There's actually quite a few fans who enjoy the brief Vanessa/Stanton pairing from ''Goddess of the
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* FoeYay: When Vanessa first encounters and tries to avoid the followers at Planet Bang, Cassandra begs her to dance with them while sensually rubbing against her.
** When Vanessa first encounters and tries to avoid the followers at Planet Bang, Cassandra begs her to dance with them while sensually rubbing against her.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: ''The Prophecy'' could be seen as this, as it sets up the SonsOfTheDark series.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: ''The Prophecy'' could be seen as this, as it sets up the SonsOfTheDark ''Literature/SonsOfTheDark'' series.
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*** He also gets on her case a couple of times about how she should get a boyfriend (Because Morgan told him she needed one). But when he finds her getting close with Zahi at Planet Bang, he [[BigBrotherInstinct he acts very confrontational towards him]].
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*** He also gets on her case a couple of times about how she should get a boyfriend (Because (because Morgan told him she needed one). But when he finds her getting close with Zahi at Planet Bang, he [[BigBrotherInstinct he acts very confrontational towards him]].
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** Cassandra is introduced as a major follower in the early books, but never appears again after book 5. Possibly justified due to her losing her powers and status after displeasing the Atrox
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** Cassandra is introduced as a major follower in the early books, but never appears again after book 5. Possibly justified due to her losing her powers and status after displeasing the AtroxAtrox.
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* {{Contemptible Cover}}: The cover of ''The Final Eclipse''. It's just a badly photoshopped collage of all the other covers. [[http://www.coverbrowser.com/image/bestselling-sci-fi-fantasy-2007/3318-1.jpg See for yourself.]]
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** Considering the reputation fedoras would get in later years, it can be funny to see the Atrox's human form described as wearing one.
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** Considering the reputation fedoras would get in later years, it can be funny to see one being worn by [[SealedEvilInACan Ethan]].
** One of theAtrox's human form described as wearing one."cheesy" things Aura makes Serena wear while possessing her body is exaggerated winged eyeliner, which has since come back into style.
** One of the
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* {{Contemptible Cover}} - The cover of ''The Final Eclipse'' for many. It's just a badly photoshopped collage of all the other covers. [[http://www.coverbrowser.com/image/bestselling-sci-fi-fantasy-2007/3318-1.jpg See for yourself.]]
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* {{Contemptible Cover}} - Cover}}: The cover of ''The Final Eclipse'' for many.Eclipse''. It's just a badly photoshopped collage of all the other covers. [[http://www.coverbrowser.com/image/bestselling-sci-fi-fantasy-2007/3318-1.jpg See for yourself.]]
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** Serena can sometimes become this as well due to this pairing.
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** Serena can sometimes become get this as well due to this pairing.from Stanton/Vanessa shippers.
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* HilariousInHindsight: In ''The Becoming'', Catty is described wearing a sweater that has a [[Toys/MonsterHigh skull wearing a bow]] on the front.
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* HilariousInHindsight: In HilariousInHindsight:
**In ''The Becoming'', Catty is described wearing a sweater that has a [[Toys/MonsterHigh skull wearing a bow]] on thefront.front.
**Considering the reputation fedoras would get in later years, it can be funny to see the Atrox's human form described as wearing one.
**In ''The Becoming'', Catty is described wearing a sweater that has a [[Toys/MonsterHigh skull wearing a bow]] on the
**Considering the reputation fedoras would get in later years, it can be funny to see the Atrox's human form described as wearing one.
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Collin comes off as this a couple of time during ''Into the Cold Fire'':
** When Morgan tells him how unpopular and jealous of her Serena is, Collin doesn't stick up for Serena and looks at her as though she's disappointed ''him''.
** He also gets on her case a couple of times about how she should get a boyfriend (Because Morgan told him she needed one). But when he finds her getting close with Zahi at Planet Bang, he [[BigBrotherInstinct he acts very confrontational towards him]].
** When Morgan tells him how unpopular and jealous of her Serena is, Collin doesn't stick up for Serena and looks at her as though she's disappointed ''him''.
** He also gets on her case a couple of times about how she should get a boyfriend (Because Morgan told him she needed one). But when he finds her getting close with Zahi at Planet Bang, he [[BigBrotherInstinct he acts very confrontational towards him]].
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* TookALevelInJerkass: Collin TookALevelInJerkass:
**Collin comes off as this a couple of time during ''Into the Cold Fire'':
** *** When Morgan tells him how unpopular and jealous of her Serena is, Collin doesn't stick up for Serena and looks at her as though she's disappointed ''him''.
** *** He also gets on her case a couple of times about how she should get a boyfriend (Because Morgan told him she needed one). But when he finds her getting close with Zahi at Planet Bang, he [[BigBrotherInstinct he acts very confrontational towards him]].
**The Daughters can come off a bit as this in ''Moon Demon'' to Vanessa.
**Collin comes off as this a couple of time during ''Into the Cold Fire'':
**The Daughters can come off a bit as this in ''Moon Demon'' to Vanessa.
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** At the end of ''Possession'', Aura's spirit is not defeated flies away before the Daughters can do anything. She never shows up again.
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** At the end of ''Possession'', Aura's spirit is not defeated and flies away before the Daughters can do anything. She never shows up again.
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** At the end of ''Possession'', Aura's spirit is not defeated flies away before the Daughters can do anything. She never shows up again.
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** Serena can sometimes become this as well due to this pairing.
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* Squick: The Atrox's plan with [[spoiler: Tianna]], had Selene not stolen her away. Although she was created by the Atrox, [[spoiler: Tianna]] didn't start out as a fully grown adult. She remembers being a child and growing up to her current age. So if Selene hadn't saved her, [[WifeHusbandry the Atrox would have created an infant whom he would have raised until it was of the age where he could marry and impregnate them]].
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* Squick: {{Squick}}: The Atrox's plan with [[spoiler: Tianna]], had Selene not stolen her away. Although she was created by the Atrox, [[spoiler: Tianna]] didn't start out as a fully grown adult. She remembers being a child and growing up to her current age. So if Selene hadn't saved her, [[WifeHusbandry the Atrox would have created an infant whom he would have raised until it was of the age where he could marry and impregnate them]].
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* Fanon: Many like to interpret Zahi as a follower who was [[Really700YearsOld born and became one centuries ago]], despite his age never being mentioned. Due to his French/Arabic background, its popular to interpret him being born during the crusades.
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* Fanon: {{Fanon}}: Many like to interpret Zahi as a follower who was [[Really700YearsOld born and became one centuries ago]], despite his age never being mentioned. Due to his French/Arabic background, its popular to interpret him being born during the crusades.
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* Narm: Hector's introduction in ''Moon Demon'' is pretty good, but it's kind of undermined when his described outfit makes it sound like he just walked off the set of a [[Creator/RoyRogers Roy Rogers]] movie.
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* Narm: {{Narm}}: Hector's introduction in ''Moon Demon'' is pretty good, but it's kind of undermined when his described outfit makes it sound like he just walked off the set of a [[Creator/RoyRogers Roy Rogers]] movie.
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* Narm: Hector's introduction in ''Moon Demon'' is pretty good, but it's kind of undermined when his described outfit makes it seem like he just walked off the set of a [[Creator/RoyRogers Roy Rogers]] movie.
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* Narm: Hector's introduction in ''Moon Demon'' is pretty good, but it's kind of undermined when his described outfit makes it seem sound like he just walked off the set of a [[Creator/RoyRogers Roy Rogers]] movie.
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* Narm: Hector's introduction in ''Moon Demon'' is pretty good, but it's kind of undermined by the fact that his described outfit makes it seem like he just walked off the set of a [[Creator/RoyRogers Roy Rogers]] movie.
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* Narm: Hector's introduction in ''Moon Demon'' is pretty good, but it's kind of undermined by the fact that when his described outfit makes it seem like he just walked off the set of a [[Creator/RoyRogers Roy Rogers]] movie.
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* Narm: Hector's introduction in ''Moon Demon'' is pretty good, but it's kind of undermined by the fact that his described outfit makes it seem like he just walked off the set of a [[Creator/RoyRogers Roy Rogers]] movie.
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* Squick: The Atrox's plan with [[spoiler: Tianna]], had Selene not stolen her away. Although she was created by the Atrox, [[spoiler: Tianna]] didn't start out as a fully grown adult. She remembers being a child and growing up to her current age. So if Selene hadn't saved her, [[WifeHusbandry the Atrox would have created an infant whom he would have raised until it was of the age where he could marry and have a child with them]].
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* Squick: The Atrox's plan with [[spoiler: Tianna]], had Selene not stolen her away. Although she was created by the Atrox, [[spoiler: Tianna]] didn't start out as a fully grown adult. She remembers being a child and growing up to her current age. So if Selene hadn't saved her, [[WifeHusbandry the Atrox would have created an infant whom he would have raised until it was of the age where he could marry and have a child with impregnate them]].
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: ''The Prophecy'' could be seen as this , as it sets up the SonsOfTheDark series.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: ''The Prophecy'' could be seen as this , this, as it sets up the SonsOfTheDark series.
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* Squick: The Atrox's plan with [[spoiler: Tianna]], had Selene not stolen her away. Although she was created by the Atrox, [[spoiler: Tianna]] didn't start out as a fully grown adult. She remembers being a child and grew up to her current age. So if Selene hadn't saved her, [[WifeHusbandry the Atrox would have created an infant whom he would have raised until it was of the age where he could marry and have a child with them]].
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* Squick: The Atrox's plan with [[spoiler: Tianna]], had Selene not stolen her away. Although she was created by the Atrox, [[spoiler: Tianna]] didn't start out as a fully grown adult. She remembers being a child and grew growing up to her current age. So if Selene hadn't saved her, [[WifeHusbandry the Atrox would have created an infant whom he would have raised until it was of the age where he could marry and have a child with them]].
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* FoeYay: When Vanessa first encounters and tries to avoid the followers at Planet Bang, Cassandra begs her to dance with then while sensually rubbing against her.
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* FoeYay: When Vanessa first encounters and tries to avoid the followers at Planet Bang, Cassandra begs her to dance with then them while sensually rubbing against her.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: ''The Prophecy'' can be seen as this for some, as it sets up the SonsOfTheDark series.
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* PoorlyDisguisedPilot: ''The Prophecy'' can could be seen as this for some, , as it sets up the SonsOfTheDark series.