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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Reicheru is supposedly meant to be an AntiHero JerkassWoobie, but many readers found her too much of a {{Jerkass}} to feel sorry for her. Reicheru commits some pretty heinous actions throughout the story including her aforementioned bullying of Lucy, [[YourCheatingHeart cheating on Denmark with Inuyasha]], attempting to kill Kagome, selling out her friend to Alucard, and neglecting her own daughter. She supposedly repents via [[spoiler:a {{Gorn}}-filled ritual where she loses her arms and eyes]], but she doesn't change much afterwards and many readers didn't buy it.
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Reicheru is supposedly meant to be an AntiHero JerkassWoobie, but many readers found her too much of a {{Jerkass}} to feel sorry for her. Reicheru commits some pretty heinous actions throughout the story including her aforementioned bullying of Lucy, [[YourCheatingHeart cheating on Denmark with Inuyasha]], Inuyasha, attempting to kill Kagome, selling out her friend to Alucard, and neglecting her own daughter. She supposedly repents via [[spoiler:a {{Gorn}}-filled ritual where she loses her arms and eyes]], but she doesn't change much afterwards and many readers didn't buy it.
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** Reicheru's father turning out to be [[spoiler: an evil Goku]] becomes even funnier when you realize that just a few years down the line [[Anime/DragonBallSuper such a character would be canon the actual series.]] This is made all the more hilarious as the story keeps [[RougeAnglesOfSatin referring to back as black]], ironically putting a new meaning to the phrase "now he was black (sic)" given that Black is the in-universe nickname that said character was given in the series.
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** Reicheru's father turning out to be [[spoiler: an evil Goku]] becomes even funnier when you realize that just a few years down the line [[Anime/DragonBallSuper such a character would be canon the actual series.]] This is made all the more hilarious as the story keeps [[RougeAnglesOfSatin referring to back as black]], ironically putting a new meaning to the phrase "now that he was black (sic)" given that Black is the in-universe nickname that said character was given in the series.
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** Reicheru's father turning out to be [[spoiler: an evil Goku]] becomes even funnier when you realize that just a few years down the line [[Anime/DragonBallSuper such a character would be canon the actual series.]]
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** Reicheru's father turning out to be [[spoiler: an evil Goku]] becomes even funnier when you realize that just a few years down the line [[Anime/DragonBallSuper such a character would be canon the actual series.]]]] This is made all the more hilarious as the story keeps [[RougeAnglesOfSatin referring to back as black]], ironically putting a new meaning to the phrase "now he was black (sic)" given that Black is the in-universe nickname that said character was given in the series.
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** In Chapter 11, Reicheru has a flashback of her father beating her. What should've been a TearJerker becomes unintentionally hilarious with this line:
---> "'You stupid asshole,' he wa [[FreudianSlip shitting]] her intensly onto the floor."
---> "'You stupid asshole,' he wa [[FreudianSlip shitting]] her intensly onto the floor."
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* UnintentionallyUnsympathetic: Reicheru is supposedly meant to be an AntiHero JerkassWoobie, but many readers found her too much of a {{Jerkass}} to feel sorry for her. Reicheru commits some pretty heinous actions throughout the story including her aforementioned bullying of Lucy, [[YourCheatingHeart cheating on Denmark with Inuyasha]], attempting to kill Kagome, selling out her friend to Alucard, and neglecting her own daughter. She supposedly repents via [[spoiler:a {{Gorn}}-filled ritual where she loses her arms and eyes]], but she doesn't change much afterwards and many readers didn't buy it.
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** From the fanime's first opening, there's "Ahh ni kum kum". The author does not understand Latin.
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** From the fanime's first opening, there's "Ahh ni kum kum". The author does not understand Latin.
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* UnintentionallySympathetic: The author clearly intended for Lucy to be a bitch and a half, but to most readers many of the things she does are mild compared to the ways [[DisproportionateRetribution Reicheru gets revenge for those actions]], such as Reicheru pulling off Lucy's horns in response to being called a bitch. It doesn't help that Lucy has no friends because "she's retarded and has brain damage and nobody likes her", in the offensive words of the story.
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Critical Research Failure is now a disambiguation page.
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* CriticalResearchFailure:
** A good chunk of the Japanese in this fic is incorrect. Most notably, the suffix "-kun" is used for many female characters, particularly Reicheru, even though it's a term of endearment typically used for boys.
** Sesshomaru's first appearance has him bring up that he wants to kill Inuyasha and Reicheru to avenge the death of his and Inuyasha's mother. Any ''Anime/InuYasha'' fan can tell you that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have the same ''father'', not the same mother.
** Sakura trees are shown to be blooming in the summer, even though real sakura trees bloom in the spring.
** The {{Fanime}} uses [[Anime/ElfenLied "Lilium"]] as its first opening with the lyrics appearing on-screen... except they're all completely wrong. The author apparently wrote them down thinking they were in Japanese when the song is actually in Latin.
** Every single canon character who appears is at least somewhat OutOfCharacter.
** A good chunk of the Japanese in this fic is incorrect. Most notably, the suffix "-kun" is used for many female characters, particularly Reicheru, even though it's a term of endearment typically used for boys.
** Sesshomaru's first appearance has him bring up that he wants to kill Inuyasha and Reicheru to avenge the death of his and Inuyasha's mother. Any ''Anime/InuYasha'' fan can tell you that Inuyasha and Sesshomaru have the same ''father'', not the same mother.
** Sakura trees are shown to be blooming in the summer, even though real sakura trees bloom in the spring.
** The {{Fanime}} uses [[Anime/ElfenLied "Lilium"]] as its first opening with the lyrics appearing on-screen... except they're all completely wrong. The author apparently wrote them down thinking they were in Japanese when the song is actually in Latin.
** Every single canon character who appears is at least somewhat OutOfCharacter.
