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'''You'd Expect:''' Learning that a jutsu exists that allows the dead to come back to life, Obito immediately goes to seek Nagato out and manipulate him into resurrecting Rin, or at the very least taking the Rinnegan and doing it himself, before returning to the Leaf Village with Rin and getting back on track to become the Hokage.\\
'''Instead:''' He never once considers the possibility of bringing Rin back to life whether through Edo Tensei or Rinne Rebirth, even when he himself possesses the Rinnegan later on, choosing instead to embrace Madara's plan because he refuses to accept living in a world where Rin is dead, kicking off a scheme that results in pretty much every single hardship occurring in the series.
'''You'd Expect:''' Learning that a jutsu exists that allows the dead to come back to life, Obito immediately goes to seek Nagato out and manipulate him into resurrecting Rin, or at the very least taking the Rinnegan and doing it himself, before returning to the Leaf Village with Rin and getting back on track to become the Hokage.\\
'''Instead:''' He never once considers the possibility of bringing Rin back to life whether through Edo Tensei or Rinne Rebirth, even when he himself possesses the Rinnegan later on, choosing instead to embrace Madara's plan because he refuses to accept living in a world where Rin is dead, kicking off a scheme that results in pretty much every single hardship occurring in the series.
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* Madara manipulated the Mist Shinobi to seal the Three-Tails inside of Rin in order to use her as a bomb against the Leaf Village, planning for the despair over Rin's death at the hands of Kakashi to turn Obito over to the dark side. Then when Obito is in the process of a HeelFaceTurn, Madara attempts to remove his eye.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara to keep his mouth shut since no one would have any reason to suspect him and simply take Obito's eye, then kill him so he no longer has to deal with a potential problem later on.\\
'''Instead:''' He can't resist doing some EvilGloating about how pathetic Obito is, cementing Obito's HeelFaceTurn and reigniting his heroic spirit when he realizes what he's done, and his failure to kill him off allows Black Zetsu in Obito's body to betray him to Kaguya which results in Obito still being around to make a heroic sacrifice and Madara dying a pointless death.
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara to keep his mouth shut since no one would have any reason to suspect him and simply take Obito's eye, then kill him so he no longer has to deal with a potential problem later on.\\
'''Instead:''' He can't resist doing some EvilGloating about how pathetic Obito is, cementing Obito's HeelFaceTurn and reigniting his heroic spirit when he realizes what he's done, and his failure to kill him off allows Black Zetsu in Obito's body to betray him to Kaguya which results in Obito still being around to make a heroic sacrifice and Madara dying a pointless death.
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'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village into a spec of dust out of despair and anger.
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'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village into a spec speck of dust out of despair and anger.
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'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village in a spec of dust out of despair and anger.
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'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village in into a spec of dust out of despair and anger.
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'''Instead:''' They are outright hostile towards him for something he ''didn't do'', leave him on his own with no real adult supervision in his life, and encourage their children to do the same. All without ever telling him why.
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'''Instead:''' They are outright hostile towards him for something he ''didn't do'', leave him on his own with no real adult supervision in his life, and encourage their children to do the same. All without ever telling him why.\\
'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village in a spec of dust out of despair and anger.
'''Result:''' Naruto lives the first twelve years of his life in isolation and depression and only through the sheer luck that he had the strength of character as a MessianicArchetype to move on from their mistreatment of him did the Leaf Village dodge the bullet of a walking nuclear bomb with the emotional stability of an Uchiha turning their village in a spec of dust out of despair and anger.
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'''Or You'd Expect''': Him to tell Naruto, who he is conversing with simultaneously, or after the defeat of Kaguya when he shows up with the kage, that Sasuke is a nutjob and shouldn't be trusted because he plans to destroy the ninja world and take rule it through hatred, so Naruto at least has a heads up to Sasuke's end goal and can try to talk some sense into him before the final showdown. Or, failing that, foreknowledge of the information would allow the Hokage + Naruto + The Tailed Beasts to lay the smackdown on Sasuke before the edo tensei is released.\\
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke's ambitions which allows him to catch the Tailed Beasts like Pokémon and force Naruto into a one-on-one fight that costs them both an arm.
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke's ambitions which allows him to catch the Tailed Beasts like Pokémon and force Naruto into a one-on-one fight that costs them both an arm.
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'''Or You'd Expect''': Him to tell Naruto, who he is conversing with simultaneously, or after the defeat of Kaguya when he shows up with the kage, that Sasuke is a nutjob and shouldn't be trusted because he plans to destroy the ninja world and take rule it through hatred, so Naruto at least has a heads up to Sasuke's end goal and can try to talk some sense into him before the final showdown. Or, failing that, foreknowledge of the information would allow the Hokage + Naruto + The Tailed Beasts to lay the smackdown on Sasuke before the edo tensei is released.\\
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke'sambitions betrayal which allows him to catch the Tailed Beasts like Pokémon and force Naruto into a one-on-one fight that costs them both an arm.
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke's
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'''Instead''': Hagoromo gives it to him anyway, expecting Naruto to clean up the mess.
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'''Instead''': Hagoromo gives it to him anyway, expecting Naruto to clean up the mess.\\
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'''Or You'd Expect''': Him to tell Naruto, who he is conversing with simultaneously, or after the defeat of Kaguya when he shows up with the kage, that Sasuke is a nutjob and shouldn't be trusted because he plans to destroy the ninja world and take rule it through hatred, so Naruto at least has a heads up to Sasuke's end goal and can try to talk some sense into him before the final showdown. Or, failing that, foreknowledge of the information would allow the Hokage + Naruto + The Tailed Beasts to lay the smackdown on Sasuke before the edo tensei is released.\\
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke's ambitions which allows him to catch the Tailed Beasts like Pokémon and force Naruto into a one-on-one fight that costs them both an arm.
'''Instead''': ...He doesn't say one word about it until Sasuke makes the first move, choosing instead to spend his short time left helping the Hokage pass on and preaching about family and ninja, so Naruto and the others are completely blindsided by Sasuke's ambitions which allows him to catch the Tailed Beasts like Pokémon and force Naruto into a one-on-one fight that costs them both an arm.
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* Prior to becoming the Six-tailed Version 2 form, Hinata confesses her love to Naruto just before she tries to fight Pain with all her effort.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That after his fight with Pain is finished, he talks to her and clarify what exactly is Hinata talking about.\\
'''Instead:''' He never does and [[ObliviousToLove he simply assumes her love as like his love for Ramen]]. He won't finally get it right until [[Anime/TheLastNarutoTheMovie two years later]].
'''You'd Expect:''' That after his fight with Pain is finished, he talks to her and clarify what exactly is Hinata talking about.\\
'''Instead:''' He never does and [[ObliviousToLove he simply assumes her love as like his love for Ramen]]. He won't finally get it right until [[Anime/TheLastNarutoTheMovie two years later]].
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'''You'd Expect:''' That after his fight with Pain is finished, he talks to her and clarify what exactly is Hinata talking about.\\
'''Instead:''' He never does and [[ObliviousToLove he simply assumes her love as like his love for Ramen]]. He won't finally get it right until [[Anime/TheLastNarutoTheMovie two years later]].
'''You'd Expect:''' That after his fight with Pain is finished, he talks to her and clarify what exactly is Hinata talking about.\\
'''Instead:''' He never does and [[ObliviousToLove he simply assumes her love as like his love for Ramen]]. He won't finally get it right until [[Anime/TheLastNarutoTheMovie two years later]].
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'''Result:''' [[BerserkButton Six-tails and an ass-whoopin']] courtesy of Naruto.
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'''Result:''' [[BerserkButton Six-tails Six-tails, eight-tails, and an ass-whoopin']] courtesy of Naruto.
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'''Instead:''' He decides he wants Naruto to be juiced up by the Kyuubi chakra when he defeats him (even though he already had Naruto NAILED TO THE GROUND with his chakra disrupting black spikes), so he stabs [[LivingEmotionalCrutch Hinata]] in the chest, pretending to kill her, [[ForTheEvulz just to piss Naruto off]].\\
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'''Instead:''' He decides he wants Naruto to be juiced up by the Kyuubi chakra when he defeats him (even though he already had Naruto NAILED TO THE GROUND with his chakra disrupting black spikes), so he stabs [[LivingEmotionalCrutch Hinata]] in the chest, stomach, pretending to kill her, [[ForTheEvulz just to piss Naruto off]].\\
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'''Instead:''' He decides he wants Naruto to be juiced up by the Kyuubi chakra when he defeats him (even though he already had Naruto NAILED TO THE GROUND with his chakra disrupting black spikes), so he stabs Hinata in the chest, pretending to kill her, just to piss Naruto off.\\
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'''Instead:''' He decides he wants Naruto to be juiced up by the Kyuubi chakra when he defeats him (even though he already had Naruto NAILED TO THE GROUND with his chakra disrupting black spikes), so he stabs Hinata [[LivingEmotionalCrutch Hinata]] in the chest, pretending to kill her, [[ForTheEvulz just to piss Naruto off.off]].\\
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* The fillers did this with Neji in the Hoshikagure Arc. BigBad Akahoshi hires the heroes to protect the village's secret weapon, but then takes measures to recover it himself, then declares them enemies of the Hidden Star Village, in front of a large crowd because they know of their motives. In the finale, everybody comes together, Akahoshi's plan to mutate the children of the village with the power of the meteorite into an army that will help him conquer the other nations is exposed, and he decides to use the meteor by himself to slaughter his own people and the Leaf genin present.\\
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* The fillers {{filler}}s did this with Neji in the Hoshikagure Arc. BigBad Akahoshi hires the heroes to protect the village's secret weapon, but then takes measures to recover it himself, then declares them enemies of the Hidden Star Village, in front of a large crowd because they know of their motives. In the finale, everybody comes together, Akahoshi's plan to mutate the children of the village with the power of the meteorite into an army that will help him conquer the other nations is exposed, and he decides to use the meteor by himself to slaughter his own people and the Leaf genin present.\\
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* Filler Neji again. During the penultimate filler arc of the original series, Menma Arc, Naruto escorts an amnesiac ninja to the Land of Rice Fields, to help him recover his memory. Neji is ordered to follow them and keep an eye on the latter, due to strong evidence of him being a sound ninja, and his possible connection with the man who attacked the village. They arrive to a village near the Land of Rice Fields that has been burned to the ground by sound ninjas, and there's a good possibility they might return at any moment, killing many innocents. The amnesiac Menma decides to stay and help the people defend themselves.\\
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* Filler {{Filler}} Neji again. During the penultimate filler arc of the original series, Menma Arc, Naruto escorts an amnesiac ninja to the Land of Rice Fields, to help him recover his memory. Neji is ordered to follow them and keep an eye on the latter, due to strong evidence of him being a sound ninja, and his possible connection with the man who attacked the village. They arrive to a village near the Land of Rice Fields that has been burned to the ground by sound ninjas, and there's a good possibility they might return at any moment, killing many innocents. The amnesiac Menma decides to stay and help the people defend themselves.\\
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* Anime filler. Sasuke and Suigetsu have stormed a castle to get their hands on the Executioner's Blade. After Sasuke convinces him not to kill the lord of the castle, Suigetsu then slices the castle's main support beams, and tells the lord that the place will collapse soon, and that he should get out if he wants to live.\\
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* Anime filler.{{filler}}. Sasuke and Suigetsu have stormed a castle to get their hands on the Executioner's Blade. After Sasuke convinces him not to kill the lord of the castle, Suigetsu then slices the castle's main support beams, and tells the lord that the place will collapse soon, and that he should get out if he wants to live.\\
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* More anime filler. In episode 183, Tsunade believes that Naruto is carrying a virus that affects chakra, and fears that it may ruin things for the village. She decides to have Naruto go to the hospital and get checked.\\
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* Even more anime filler. While Naruto's travelling to the Land of Lightning, a gigantic eagle kidnaps Guy, who's on the journey as part of Naruto's escort. The rest of the group tracks the eagle to an island, and go ashore to search for Guy. Naruto offers to use Sage Mode's AuraVision to try and find him.\\
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* Even more anime filler.{{filler}}. While Naruto's travelling to the Land of Lightning, a gigantic eagle kidnaps Guy, who's on the journey as part of Naruto's escort. The rest of the group tracks the eagle to an island, and go ashore to search for Guy. Naruto offers to use Sage Mode's AuraVision to try and find him.\\
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'''Instead:''' He continues to ask her, and she continues to turn him down. [[ShipSinking He does finally stop completely after Chapter 469]], but he really should've stopped long before that.
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'''Instead:''' He continues to ask her, and she continues to turn him down. [[ShipSinking He does finally stop completely after Chapter 469]], but he really should've stopped long ''long'' before that.
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* From the [[{{Filler}} non-canon]] [[Anime/NarutoTheMovieRoadToNinja sixth movie]]:
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* From the fifth movie, Naruto is framed for attempting to assassinate a number of important ninja from various nations, including the Raikage himself. Tsunade knows that Naruto's innocent, but decides to send him to Blood Prison, due to the fact that there's a MacGuffin there that Konoha wants destroyed.\\
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** Naruto is framed for attempting to assassinate a number of important ninja from various nations, including the Raikage himself. Tsunade knows that Naruto's innocent, but decides to send him to Blood Prison, due to the fact that there's a MacGuffin there that Konoha wants destroyed.\\
** Naruto is framed for attempting to assassinate a number of important ninja from various nations, including the Raikage himself. Tsunade knows that Naruto's innocent, but decides to send him to Blood Prison, due to the fact that there's a MacGuffin there that Konoha wants destroyed.\\
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'''Instead:''' Sakura seems to think that they would understand her desire to not have parents. Depending on whether or not you consider the Naruto movies to be {{canon}}, at this point in the series, you could probably consider Sakura a {{hypocrite}} whenever she calls Naruto out for idiocy.
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'''Instead:''' Sakura seems to think that they would understand her desire to not have parents. Depending on whether or not you consider Although this movie is {{Filler}} (along with the Naruto rest of the movies to be {{canon}}, preceding it), at this point in the series, you could probably consider Sakura a {{hypocrite}} whenever she calls Naruto out for idiocy.
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'''Instead:''' [[BlatantLies He says that she is]]. Sakura [[ArmorPiercingSlap reacts violently]] on both occasions. Even if she wasn't in earshot, lying about your purely platonic friendship with someone is generally not good.
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'''Instead:''' He continues to ask her, and she continues to turn him down. [[ShipSinking He does finally stop completely after Chapter 469]], but it really should've stopped long before that.
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'''Instead:''' He continues to ask her, and she continues to turn him down. [[ShipSinking He does finally stop completely after Chapter 469]], at least.
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'''Instead:''' He continues to ask her, and she continues to turn him down. [[ShipSinking He does finally stop completely after Chapter 469]], at least.but it really should've stopped long before that.
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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and his heart gets broken thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a three-day HeroicBSOD [[NotGoodWithRejection giving up on everything]]. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary power to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.
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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and [[NotGoodWithRejection his heart gets broken broken]] thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a three-day HeroicBSOD [[NotGoodWithRejection giving up on everything]].everything. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary power to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.
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* Chapter 10 reveals that while she was pregnant with Sarada, Sakura had travelled with Karin in order to look for Sasuke, and that she gave birth to her daughter during their travels.\\
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'''Result:''' Six-tails and an ass-whoopin' courtesy of Naruto.
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'''Result:''' [[BerserkButton Six-tails and an ass-whoopin' ass-whoopin']] courtesy of Naruto.
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'''Instead:''' He never does and [[ObliviousToLove he simply assumes her love as like his love for Ramen]].
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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and his heart gets broken thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a HeroicBSOD giving up on everything. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary power to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.
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'''Result:''' Naruto gets seriously wounded and his heart gets broken thinking that Hinata betrayed him and stopped loving him. He then goes into a three-day HeroicBSOD [[NotGoodWithRejection giving up on everything.everything]]. Meanwhile, Hinata gets caught red-handed by the BigBad trying to destroy his WeaponOfMassDestruction, and [[HypnotizeThePrincess she gets turned into one of his puppets.]] And THEN it turns out that [[DidntThinkThisThrough she didn't have the necessary power to destroy the Tenseigan on her own anyway]]. Really, it was only because of a bit of ContrivedCoincidence that the world didn't get destroyed.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Him to answer truthfully; she isn't (at this point in the story).\\
'''Instead:''' [[BlatantLies He says that she is]]. Sakura [[ArmorPiercingSlap reacts violently]] on both occasions. Even if she wasn't in earshot, lying about your status with someone is generally not good for your relationship with them.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Him to answer truthfully; she isn't (at this point in the story).and [[LikeBrotherAndSister she never will be]].\\
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'''Result:''' Madara to takes Kakashi eye and teleports to Obito.
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* Nagato decided to believe in the way of Naruto and wants to make amends his guilt by means of resurrection of all those whom he killed.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Knowing that he will die after using this jutsu and knowing that his ''ally in the mask'' will continue to hunt for Naruto even after his death, he will tell Naruto all he knows about him, about his abilities, about his plans, about the location of the Akatsuki bases and about remaining members of the organization. Even if he could not tell by himself, he could say Konan to tell Naruto about this, after his death in order to help Naruto in the future.\\
'''Instead:''' He resurrects of all those whom he killed, not having told anything important Naruto and just dies. Konan also nothing tells Naruto and decides to deal with Tobi by herself.\\
'''Result:''' Fourth Shinobi World War and Tobi kills Konan and takes the Rinnegan back.
'''You'd Expect:''' Knowing that he will die after using this jutsu and knowing that his ''ally in the mask'' will continue to hunt for Naruto even after his death, he will tell Naruto all he knows about him, about his abilities, about his plans, about the location of the Akatsuki bases and about remaining members of the organization. Even if he could not tell by himself, he could say Konan to tell Naruto about this, after his death in order to help Naruto in the future.\\
'''Instead:''' He resurrects of all those whom he killed, not having told anything important Naruto and just dies. Konan also nothing tells Naruto and decides to deal with Tobi by herself.\\
'''Result:''' Fourth Shinobi World War and Tobi kills Konan and takes the Rinnegan back.
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* Madara knows that Obito was going to resurrect Naruto and the only way to get to him this an eye Kakashi.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara ignores all enemies, will take the eye Kakashi (what he would do later) and prevent Obito resurrect Naruto.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara is spending all his time fighting with Guy and even not think about it.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara ignores all enemies, will take the eye Kakashi (what he would do later) and prevent Obito resurrect Naruto.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara is spending all his time fighting with Guy and even not think about it.\\
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* Madara knows that Obito was going to resurrect Naruto and the only way to get to him this an him: the eye Kakashi.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will ignores allenemies, enemies and will take the eye Kakashi (what (that he would will do but later) and prevent Obito to resurrect Naruto.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara is spending all his time on fighting with Guy and even not think about it.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will ignores all
'''Instead:''' Madara is spending all his time on fighting with Guy and even not think about it.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' While Madara busy in battle, he will restore his strength and teleports to Obito. So Madara can not return his Rinnegan.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' While Madara busy in battle, he will restore his strength and teleports to Obito. So Madara can not will unable to return his Rinnegan.\\
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'''Result:''' Madara takes Kakashi eye and teleports to Obito.
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'''Result:''' Madara to takes Kakashi eye and teleports to Obito.
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'''Instead:''' She lands on him and ''bites his arm'', doing nothing while he repeatedly punches her on the head.
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'''Instead:''' She lands on him and ''bites his arm'', doing nothing while he repeatedly punches her on the head. While a FreezeFrameBonus reveals that she managed to stab him in the other arm, this doesn't explain why she didn't use her advantage to draw ''another'' kunai.
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This example is not What An Idiot since is a logically justified in the universe. As explained in the canon Tailed Beast should to be sealed seriatim so it makes sense to leave Kyuubi on last since was necessary to find the other eight (information about the Jinchuuriki was secrecy in every country and some as we know traveling and not stay in place). Also Akatsuki had need to a certain amount of strong shinobi to start sealing Tailed Beasts and for this would be required 3 day and 3 night to seal at least one and herewith is necessary to take into account than fewer people in the organization the more time this occupies. Also if he took Naruto right away he would only add unnecessary problems since Konoha would immediately reacted to the loss of his only Jinchuuriki (as we know Balance Of Power among hidden villages is based on Tailed Beast and their Jinchuuriki and Konoha would definitely react to loss their only Tailed Beast) that in turn would quickly attracted unnecessary attention to Akatsuki, which (before Pain destroyed Konoha) trying to be hidden from the eyes in order to quietly perform the task. And it if is not to take into account Itachi Uchiha who in his time helped Tobi in the destruction of the clan Uchiha with the proviso that he will not take any hostile action to Konoha and that in turn as a member Akatsuki Itachi will be those who will catch Kyuubi (that he tried to perform but Jiraiya prevented this and the next 3 years it was impossible because they traveled and not stay in place).
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* Tobi can teleport wherever he wants on a whim without anyone having any way of actually knowing he's done so until he's there, and them similarly having no actual way of stopping him.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Tobi to appear whenever Naruto leaves the village, ever, and/or is either alone or with only a few people who aren't expecting immediate danger, and try and capture him. Hell, Naruto's childhood would have been a perfect time to try it (remember, Naruto was alone most of his life, Iruka and others acknowledging him is a major part of his story arc). Then he can either extract the Kyuubi to use as a weapon, or hold him until the Kyuubi is necessary. Granted, he might not have known what happened to the Kyuubi after his last intrusion into Konoha, but he could have easily infiltrated the village and kept his ears out for any information on the fox.\\
'''Instead:''' Tobi just leaves Naruto alone for 13 years instead of actually trying to capture him. Then sends Itachi and Kisame to try once, then ignores him for 3+ years, particularly while he's out in the world with only Jiraiya to protect him.\\
'''Addendum:''' Obviously this applies to the other 8 Jinchuriki as well, making Akatsuki ultimately totally superfluous in nearly every possible way, aside from unsealing the tailed beasts.
'''You'd Expect:''' Tobi to appear whenever Naruto leaves the village, ever, and/or is either alone or with only a few people who aren't expecting immediate danger, and try and capture him. Hell, Naruto's childhood would have been a perfect time to try it (remember, Naruto was alone most of his life, Iruka and others acknowledging him is a major part of his story arc). Then he can either extract the Kyuubi to use as a weapon, or hold him until the Kyuubi is necessary. Granted, he might not have known what happened to the Kyuubi after his last intrusion into Konoha, but he could have easily infiltrated the village and kept his ears out for any information on the fox.\\
'''Instead:''' Tobi just leaves Naruto alone for 13 years instead of actually trying to capture him. Then sends Itachi and Kisame to try once, then ignores him for 3+ years, particularly while he's out in the world with only Jiraiya to protect him.\\
'''Addendum:''' Obviously this applies to the other 8 Jinchuriki as well, making Akatsuki ultimately totally superfluous in nearly every possible way, aside from unsealing the tailed beasts.
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'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju impossible and the dedicated all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following one.
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'''Instead:''' Madara decides that the peace between Uchiha and Senju impossible impossible, then makes nonsensical a warning his clan to leave the village (which they understandably reject) and later the dedicated all his time to studying the Uchiha stone tablet leading to the following one.
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'''You'd Expect:''' He will learn a lesson from this story and would try help Hashirama create a village of their dreams.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' He will learn a lesson from this story and would try help Hashirama create a village of their dreams.dreams or would try to do something else than what he did in any case.\\
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* Sarutobi has to break the news of what happened to the Kyuubi and the Yondaime to the village.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died with the Yondaime and Naruto is the Yondaime's son asking the village to help raise their hero's son.\\
'''Instead:''' He tells them the truth (except the Yondaime's son part), forbids people to talk about it and then does nothing as Naruto experiences the worst childhood ever. Even worse, he does nothing to help make Naruto's life better yet has the gall to feel guilty about it.
'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died with the Yondaime and Naruto is the Yondaime's son asking the village to help raise their hero's son.\\
'''Instead:''' He tells them the truth (except the Yondaime's son part), forbids people to talk about it and then does nothing as Naruto experiences the worst childhood ever. Even worse, he does nothing to help make Naruto's life better yet has the gall to feel guilty about it.
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* Sarutobi has to break the news of what happened to the Kyuubi and the Yondaime 4th Hokage to the village.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died withthe Yondaime 4th Hokage and Naruto is the Yondaime's 4th Hokage's son asking the village to help raise their hero's son.\\
'''Instead:''' He tells them the truth (exceptthe Yondaime's 4th Hokage's son part), forbids people to talk about it and then does nothing as Naruto experiences the worst childhood ever. Even worse, he does nothing to help make Naruto's life better yet has the gall to feel guilty about it.it.
* Gaara's father needs to insure that he has control over the Shukaku to make sure that he won't lose control of him.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Him to wait until Gaara is older and make sure that he's being treated fairly to keep him and Shukaku in control.\\
'''Instead:''' He has his uncle betray him, lie to him and say that his mother never loved him and then try to blow him up... And he had already been having a horrible day already. Not to mention he was only '''six years old!''' '''''Any''''' six-year old child would have little control of their emotions! Idiotic {{Jerkass}}...
'''You'd Expect:''' He (lies and) tells them that the Kyuubi died with
'''Instead:''' He tells them the truth (except
* Gaara's father needs to insure that he has control over the Shukaku to make sure that he won't lose control of him.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Him to wait until Gaara is older and make sure that he's being treated fairly to keep him and Shukaku in control.\\
'''Instead:''' He has his uncle betray him, lie to him and say that his mother never loved him and then try to blow him up... And he had already been having a horrible day already. Not to mention he was only '''six years old!''' '''''Any''''' six-year old child would have little control of their emotions! Idiotic {{Jerkass}}...
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'''Instead:''' They feel insulted and isolate themselves from the rest of the village, decide to take over by staging a coup d'etat. This action makes them look as if they're guilty, leading to the following one.
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'''Instead:''' They feel insulted and isolate themselves from the rest of the village, decide to take over by staging a coup d'etat.d'etat (apparently decided to take an example from aforementioned Madara). This action makes them look as if they're guilty, leading to the following one.
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'''You'd Expect:''' That Itachi would use either genjutsu or transformed shadow clones to make it look to Sasuke like a load of foreign ninja carried out the attack, and that Itachi killed them all. That way, Sasuke, while still having lost much of his family, wouldn't have anyone he could take revenge on, and he'd have a loving brother who could help ease his pain, therefore giving him a lot less reason for his FaceHeelTurn. As for the rep problem, he can then encourage Sasuke to work on proving it wrong, similar to what Naruto does for most of the series.\\
'''Instead:''' He tells Sasuke that he was responsible for the attack, makes himself out to be a monster, and [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him for good measure, before running. He does this in order to give Sasuke motivation to hunt him down, kill him, and therefore redeem the Uchiha.\\
'''Result:''' This scheme ends up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]], before [[GoneHorriblyWrong failing completely]]: In order to become strong enough to kill Itachi, Sasuke ends up defecting from Konoha to Orochimaru, a guy who wants to possess him for his eyes. And Sasuke happily embraces the possibility of this happening if it would help him get his revenge. When Sasuke does kill Itachi, he's taken into the custody of the BigBad, who explains the truth of what Itachi was up to, causing Sasuke to want to [[DisproportionateRetribution destroy]] [[MisplacedRetribution the whole of Konoha]].
'''Instead:''' He tells Sasuke that he was responsible for the attack, makes himself out to be a monster, and [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him for good measure, before running. He does this in order to give Sasuke motivation to hunt him down, kill him, and therefore redeem the Uchiha.\\
'''Result:''' This scheme ends up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]], before [[GoneHorriblyWrong failing completely]]: In order to become strong enough to kill Itachi, Sasuke ends up defecting from Konoha to Orochimaru, a guy who wants to possess him for his eyes. And Sasuke happily embraces the possibility of this happening if it would help him get his revenge. When Sasuke does kill Itachi, he's taken into the custody of the BigBad, who explains the truth of what Itachi was up to, causing Sasuke to want to [[DisproportionateRetribution destroy]] [[MisplacedRetribution the whole of Konoha]].
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'''You'd Expect:''' That Itachi would use either genjutsu or transformed shadow clones to make it look to for all other people including for Sasuke like a load of foreign ninja carried out the attack, and that Itachi killed them all. That way, Sasuke, while still having lost much of his family, wouldn't have anyone he could take revenge on, and he'd have a loving brother who could help ease his pain, pain (while also staying with him in order to avoid any of action with Sasuke, from the side Danzo), therefore giving him a lot less reason for his FaceHeelTurn. As for the rep problem, he can then encourage Sasuke to work on proving it wrong, similar to what Naruto does for most of the series.\\
'''Instead:''' He requests for help [[BigBad Tobi]] and together with him arranges mass genocide the entire clan Uchiha and herewith taking all the blame for the destruction of the clan on himself (even thinking of the fact that this makes it very convenient for Tobi since none but Itachi and Danzo even do not know about his involvement in the massacre). And later he tells Sasuke that he was responsible for the attack, makes himself out to be a monster, and [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him for good measure, before running. He does this in order to give Sasuke motivation to hunt him down, kill him, and therefore redeem the Uchiha.\\
'''Result:'''This In the end, the destruction of the entire clan brought a strong weakening of the military power of Konoha, allowed Tobi acquire a large number of Sharingans in his laboratory and also acquire another member of the Akatsuki for sealing Tailed Beasts. Itachi scheme with Sasuke ends up working [[GoneHorriblyRight a little too well]], before [[GoneHorriblyWrong failing completely]]: In order to become strong enough to kill Itachi, Sasuke ends up defecting from Konoha to Orochimaru, a guy who wants to possess him for his eyes. And Sasuke happily embraces the possibility of this happening if it would help him get his revenge. When Sasuke does kill Itachi, he's taken into the custody of the BigBad, Tobi, who explains the truth of what Itachi was up to, causing Sasuke to want to [[DisproportionateRetribution destroy]] [[MisplacedRetribution the whole of Konoha]].
'''Instead:''' He requests for help [[BigBad Tobi]] and together with him arranges mass genocide the entire clan Uchiha and herewith taking all the blame for the destruction of the clan on himself (even thinking of the fact that this makes it very convenient for Tobi since none but Itachi and Danzo even do not know about his involvement in the massacre). And later he tells Sasuke that he was responsible for the attack, makes himself out to be a monster, and [[MindRape Mind Rapes]] him for good measure, before running. He does this in order to give Sasuke motivation to hunt him down, kill him, and therefore redeem the Uchiha.\\
'''Result:'''
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* Gaara's father needs to insure that he has control over the Shukaku to make sure that he won't lose control of him.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Him to wait until Gaara is older and make sure that he's being treated fairly to keep him and Shukaku in control.\\
'''Instead:''' He has his uncle betray him, lie to him and say that his mother never loved him and then try to blow him up... And he had already been having a horrible day already. Not to mention he was only '''six years old!''' '''''Any''''' six-year old child would have little control of their emotions! Idiotic JerkAss...
'''You'd Expect:''' Him to wait until Gaara is older and make sure that he's being treated fairly to keep him and Shukaku in control.\\
'''Instead:''' He has his uncle betray him, lie to him and say that his mother never loved him and then try to blow him up... And he had already been having a horrible day already. Not to mention he was only '''six years old!''' '''''Any''''' six-year old child would have little control of their emotions! Idiotic JerkAss...
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'''Instead:''' [[BondVillainStupidity He decides to just let him go]] and decides to duel Hiruzen to the death with his Edo Hokages. Even though Hiruzen still dies in the end, Orochimaru lost the usage of his arms thus preventing him from using any Ninjutsu [[spoiler: until he regains it through an Uzumaki ritual, 4 years later]].
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'''Instead:''' [[BondVillainStupidity He decides to just let him go]] and decides to duel Hiruzen to the death with his Edo Hokages. \\
'''Result:''' Even though Hiruzen still dies in the end, Orochimaru lost the usage of his arms thus preventing him from using any Ninjutsu[[spoiler: until he regains it through an Uzumaki ritual, 4 years later]].later.
'''Result:''' Even though Hiruzen still dies in the end, Orochimaru lost the usage of his arms thus preventing him from using any Ninjutsu
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'''Instead:''' He uses [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill Tsukuyomi]] to force Sasuke to relive the Uchiha massacre ''again'' (having done the same thing to Sasuke immediately after it happened). End result: Sasuke defects from Konoha and later plans to destroy it and everyone in it. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Good job, Itachi]].
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'''Instead:''' He uses [[ThereIsNoKillLikeOverkill Tsukuyomi]] to force Sasuke to relive the Uchiha massacre ''again'' (having done the same thing to Sasuke immediately after it happened). End result: \\
'''Result:''' Sasuke defects from Konoha and later plans to destroy it and everyone in it. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Good job, Itachi]].
'''Result:''' Sasuke defects from Konoha and later plans to destroy it and everyone in it. [[NiceJobBreakingItHero Good job, Itachi]].
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* During the Itachi Pursuit Arc, we learn that Jiraiya has access to a technique called Sage Mode, which [[SuperMode enhances the user's physical abilities as well as their jutsu]]. One arc later, Naruto is able to learn this technique within the span of a week, and in fact manages to surpass Jiraiya in it. He doesn't have to do anything special to be able to start learning it either; the only requirement for the student is that they have a large amount of chakra, which Naruto easily fills. Now let's go back to the [[TimeSkip two and a half year training trip]] Naruto went on with Jiraiya, which Naruto undertook for the sole purpose of becoming strong enough to both bring Sasuke back and defend himself against the Akatsuki.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Jiraiya to have Naruto trained in using Sage Mode during the trip, so that he'll have the skills necessary to fulfil his goals. This would really have been a good idea after it became too dangerous for Naruto to use Kurama's chakra because of how weak the seal had become.\\
'''Instead:''' He doesn't, and as a result, Naruto has to fight much harder battles, and the first time he meets Sasuke after the TimeSkip, his former teammate easily overpowers him.
'''You'd Expect:''' Jiraiya to have Naruto trained in using Sage Mode during the trip, so that he'll have the skills necessary to fulfil his goals. This would really have been a good idea after it became too dangerous for Naruto to use Kurama's chakra because of how weak the seal had become.\\
'''Instead:''' He doesn't, and as a result, Naruto has to fight much harder battles, and the first time he meets Sasuke after the TimeSkip, his former teammate easily overpowers him.
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* [[spoiler: Nagato]]/Pain has a pretty big one. It's plainly evident for all to see that he could have succeeded in kidnapping Naruto at one point, and indeed that was the entire goal of him going to Konoha in the first place.\\
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* [[spoiler: Nagato]]/Pain Nagato/Pain has a pretty big one. It's plainly evident for all to see that he could have succeeded in kidnapping Naruto at one point, and indeed that was the entire goal of him going to Konoha in the first place.\\
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'''Instead:''' He decides he wants Naruto to be juiced up by the Kyuubi chakra when he defeats him (even though he already had Naruto NAILED TO THE GROUND with his chakra disrupting black spikes), so he stabs Hinata in the chest, pretending to kill her, just to piss Naruto off. End result six-tails and an ass-whoopin' courtesy of Naruto.
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'''Instead:''' He decides he wants Naruto to be juiced up by the Kyuubi chakra when he defeats him (even though he already had Naruto NAILED TO THE GROUND with his chakra disrupting black spikes), so he stabs Hinata in the chest, pretending to kill her, just to piss Naruto off. End result six-tails \\
'''Result:''' Six-tails and an ass-whoopin' courtesy of Naruto.
'''Result:''' Six-tails and an ass-whoopin' courtesy of Naruto.
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'''Instead:''' He pleads the Raikage to stop pursuing Sasuke without offering any alternative solutions. Unsurprisingly, the Raikage ended up making a much better argument on why he should eliminate Sasuke and make Naruto look like a whiny wimp who still thinks of Sasuke as his own friend.
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'''Instead:''' He pleads the Raikage to stop pursuing Sasuke without offering any alternative solutions. Unsurprisingly, the \\
'''Result:''' The Raikage ended up making a much better argument on why he should eliminate Sasuke and make Naruto look like a whiny wimp who still thinks of Sasuke as his own friend.
'''Result:''' The Raikage ended up making a much better argument on why he should eliminate Sasuke and make Naruto look like a whiny wimp who still thinks of Sasuke as his own friend.
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'''Instead:''' [[{{Jerkass}} He just leaves both of them to die]] ([[UngratefulBastard Despite saving his life]]) and hastly rushes to the meeting room to confront Danzo head on. He gets his ass completely kicked by both Mei and Onoki and would have died too if it weren't for the help of Zetsu and Tobi.
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'''Instead:''' [[{{Jerkass}} He just leaves both of them to die]] ([[UngratefulBastard Despite saving his life]]) and hastly hastily rushes to the meeting room to confront Danzo head on. on.\\
'''Result:''' He gets his ass completely kicked by both Mei and Onoki and would have died too if it weren't for the help of Zetsu and Tobi.
'''Result:''' He gets his ass completely kicked by both Mei and Onoki and would have died too if it weren't for the help of Zetsu and Tobi.
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'''You'd Expect:''' That if he really is Madara, they demand that he unmask himself in order to prove he really is the man in legend. And if he really turns out to be [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], someone whom they have no idea of, they immediately fight him off until he is forced to retreat.\\
'''Instead:''' They immediately believed him to be "Madara" despite having little proof of his identity.
'''Instead:''' They immediately believed him to be "Madara" despite having little proof of his identity.
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'''You'd Expect:''' That if he really is Madara, they demand that he unmask himself in order to prove he really is the man in legend. And if he really turns out to be [[spoiler: Obito Uchiha]], Uchiha, someone whom they have no idea of, they immediately fight him off until he is forced to retreat.\\
'''Instead:''' They immediately believed him to be "Madara" despite having little proof of hisidentity.identity (well except Sharingan).
'''Instead:''' They immediately believed him to be "Madara" despite having little proof of his
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'''Instead:''' She uses knockout gas on them to keep them from interfering. As a result, when the plan goes wrong, she only survives due to Kakashi and Naruto coincidentally being in the nearby area.
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'''Instead:''' She uses knockout gas on them to keep them from interfering. As a result, when \\
'''Result:''' When the plan goes wrong, she only survives due to Kakashi and Naruto coincidentally being in the nearby area.
'''Result:''' When the plan goes wrong, she only survives due to Kakashi and Naruto coincidentally being in the nearby area.
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* Assuming that he didn't intentionally throw the fight against the heroes to outgambit Tobi, Kabuto intends to supplement the BigBad with his army of Edo Tenseied ninjas.\\
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* Assuming that he didn't intentionally throw the fight against the heroes to outgambit Tobi, Kabuto intends to supplement the BigBad with his army of Edo Tenseied ninjas.\\
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'''Instead:''' He only does erase their personalities if he really wants to, not thinking that it will somehow backfire against him. As a result, this ended up causing many of the heroic Edo Tensei nijas to get easily sealed with little resistance.
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'''Instead:''' He only does erase their personalities if he really wants to, not thinking that it will somehow backfire against him. As a result, this ended up \\
'''Result:''' This causing many of the heroic Edo Tensei nijas to get easily sealed with little resistance.
'''Result:''' This causing many of the heroic Edo Tensei nijas to get easily sealed with little resistance.
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'''Instead:''' Kabuto never does this, forcing Sasori to use Shin as his exploding puppet without any poison in his arsenal. This cost them their defeat without accomplishing anything at all save the death of one Konoha member.
* [[TheDragon Kabuto]] has now managed to capture both [[MessianicArchetype Naruto]] and [[CrazyAwesome Killer Bee]] with the rejuvenated Nagato. \\
* [[TheDragon Kabuto]] has now managed to capture both [[MessianicArchetype Naruto]] and [[CrazyAwesome Killer Bee]] with the rejuvenated Nagato. \\
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'''Instead:''' Kabuto never does this, forcing Sasori to use Shin as his exploding puppet without any poison in his arsenal. \\
'''Result:''' This cost them their defeat without accomplishing anything at all save the death of one Konoha member.
*[[TheDragon [[DragonAscendant Kabuto]] has now managed to capture both [[MessianicArchetype Naruto]] and [[CrazyAwesome Killer Bee]] with the rejuvenated Nagato. \\
'''Result:''' This cost them their defeat without accomplishing anything at all save the death of one Konoha member.
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* Naruto is facing Tobi's Jinchuriki Six Paths. They have taken their [[SuperPoweredEvilSide V2 forms]], while he and Bee are standing in front of them. \\
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* Naruto is facing Tobi's Jinchuriki Jinchuuriki Six Paths. They have taken their [[SuperPoweredEvilSide V2 forms]], while he and Bee are standing in front of them. \\
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'''Instead:''' Naruto and Bee stand there, doing nothing as Tobi orders the Six Paths to attack. Bee gets his hand melted slightly, Naruto is hit by three of the Jinchuriki Paths and incapacitated since [[IForgotICouldFly he forgets about his speed]] and needs to be saved by Kakashi and Gai.
* [[TheDragon Kabuto]] is confronting Itachi and Sasuke. \\
* [[TheDragon Kabuto]] is confronting Itachi and Sasuke. \\
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'''Instead:''' Naruto and Bee stand there, doing nothing as Tobi orders the Six Paths to attack. Bee gets his hand melted slightly, Naruto is hit by three of the Jinchuriki Jinchuuriki Paths and incapacitated since [[IForgotICouldFly he forgets about his speed]] and needs to be saved by Kakashi and Gai.
*[[TheDragon [[DragonAscendant Kabuto]] is confronting Itachi and Sasuke. \\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take the eye immediately because any man at a time could to understand that Obito not his friend since Obito himself had said him that he had never considered his ally and also betrayed him when become the Ten Tails Jinchuuriki. Also Madara has forced Obito to resurrect him through jutsu which kills the user at using and anyone was understandable that Obito will be displeased this.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily and aslo says him come up and shake him hand.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily and aslo says him come up and shake him hand.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take the his eye immediately because any man at a time could to understand that Obito not his friend friend, since Obito himself '''himself''' had said him that he had never considered his as ally and also betrayed him when become the Ten Tails Jinchuuriki. Also Madara has forced Obito to resurrect him through jutsu which kills the user at using and anyone any sensible person was understandable that Obito will be displeased this.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily and aslo says him come up and shakehim his hand.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily and aslo says him come up and shake
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'''Instead:''' Madara is spending all their time fighting with Guy and even not think about it.\\
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'''Instead:''' Madara is spending all their his time fighting with Guy and even not think about it.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' While Madara busy in battle he will restore his strength and teleports to Obito. So Madara can not return his Rinnegan.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' While Madara busy in battle battle, he will restore his strength and teleports to Obito. So Madara can not return his Rinnegan.\\
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'''Result:''' Madara takes him eye and teleports to Obito.
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'''Result:''' Madara takes him Kakashi eye and teleports to Obito.
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* Black Zetsu has to take over Madara's body to revive Kaguya. He knows that the seals on Naruto and Sasuke's hands will seal Kaguya if they touch her together.\\
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* Black Zetsu has to take over Madara's body to revive Kaguya. He Kaguya but also he showed that he knows that about the seals on Naruto and Sasuke's hands that will seal Kaguya if they touch her together.\\
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'''You'd Expect''': Her to just...you know...leave. They're already trapped in an alternate dimension, with no way of getting back, so the only thing standing in her way of killing everyone in the world is the Kages, who aren't anywhere near her level.\\
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* During the Itachi Pursuit Arc, we learn that Jiraiya has access to a technique called Sage Mode, which [[SuperMode enhances the user's physical abilities as well as their jutsu]]. One arc later, Naruto is able to learn this technique within the span of a week, and in fact manages to surpass Jiraiya in it. He doesn't have to do anything special to be able to start learning it either; the only requirement for the student is that they have a large amount of chakra, which Naruto easily fills. Now let's go back to the [[TimeSkip two and a half year training trip]] Naruto went on with Jiraiya, which Naruto undertook for the sole purpose of becoming strong enough to both bring Sasuke back and defend himself against the Akatsuki.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' Jiraiya to have Naruto trained in using Sage Mode during the trip, so that he'll have the skills necessary to fulfil his goals. This would really have been a good idea after it became too dangerous for Naruto to use Kurama's chakra because of how weak the seal had become.\\
'''Instead:''' He doesn't, and as a result, Naruto has to fight much harder battles, and the first time he meets Sasuke after the TimeSkip, his former teammate easily overpowers him.
'''You'd Expect:''' Jiraiya to have Naruto trained in using Sage Mode during the trip, so that he'll have the skills necessary to fulfil his goals. This would really have been a good idea after it became too dangerous for Naruto to use Kurama's chakra because of how weak the seal had become.\\
'''Instead:''' He doesn't, and as a result, Naruto has to fight much harder battles, and the first time he meets Sasuke after the TimeSkip, his former teammate easily overpowers him.
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'''You'd Expect:''' Itachi, at some point after he left Konoha, to have set up a steady flow of information to his village on the Akasuki's activites, such as the details of extracting the bijuu, his "teammates" powers and abilities, etc. in order to give as much of an advantage to Konoha.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Itachi, at some point after he left Konoha, to have set up a steady flow of information to his village on the Akasuki's Akatsuki's activites, such as the details of extracting the bijuu, his "teammates" powers and abilities, etc. in order to give as much of an advantage to Konoha.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take the eye immediately.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara makes a convoluted explanation about Obito's impersonation and trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily (and it is the man who had already betrayed him when become the Ten Tails Jinchuriki and also that who said him that had never considered his ally). and aslo says him come up and shake him hand.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara makes a convoluted explanation about Obito's impersonation and trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily (and it is the man who had already betrayed him when become the Ten Tails Jinchuriki and also that who said him that had never considered his ally). and aslo says him come up and shake him hand.\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' Madara will try to take the eye immediately.immediately because any man at a time could to understand that Obito not his friend since Obito himself had said him that he had never considered his ally and also betrayed him when become the Ten Tails Jinchuuriki. Also Madara has forced Obito to resurrect him through jutsu which kills the user at using and anyone was understandable that Obito will be displeased this.\\
'''Instead:''' Madaramakes a convoluted explanation about Obito's impersonation and trying to convince him to give Rinnegan voluntarily (and it is the man who had already betrayed him when become the Ten Tails Jinchuriki and also that who said him that had never considered his ally). and aslo says him come up and shake him hand.\\
'''Instead:''' Madara
