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Wrote in first person, others.
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Zaran il Legio is a comic written by Tropers/{{Nomic}}, which can be found [[http://elder-thing.deviantart.com/gallery/27967846 here]]. It is updated whenever I get an idea for a new story and have time to draw it, which is to say infrequently. I do have plans for it and am trying to update more regularly, tho.
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Zaran il Legio is a comic written by Tropers/{{Nomic}}, which can be found [[http://elder-thing.deviantart.com/gallery/27967846 here]]. It is updated whenever I get the author gets an idea for a new story and have has time to draw it, which is to say infrequently. I do have plans for it and am trying to update more regularly, tho.infrequently.
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Zaran il Legio is about romankhis'asa Zarangora il Legio Ered'nash (Zaran for short), the daughter of one of the demon overlords that rule the Netherword. Zaran is supposed to some day inherit her father's throne, but much to his frustration, she isn't very interested at all in learning the skills needed to become a proper overlord. The comic consists of short episodes where Zaran does something. Eventually there may also be longer storylines where the plot is a bit more complex but still consist mostly of Zarn doing stuff.
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Zaran il Legio is about romankhis'asa Zarangora il Legio Ered'nash (Zaran for short), the daughter of one of the demon overlords that rule the Netherword. Zaran is supposed to some day inherit her father's throne, throne someday, but much to his frustration, she isn't very interested at all in learning the skills needed to become a proper overlord. The comic consists of short episodes where Zaran does something. Eventually there may also be longer storylines where the plot is a bit more complex but still consist mostly of Zarn doing stuff.
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* AllThereInTheManual: The comic is based on a setting I created for another unfinished project, so there is a lot of background information that is never really brough up (for example, there are six other Overlords).
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* AllThereInTheManual: MissingEpisode: The comic is based on a setting I that Nomic created for another unfinished project, so there is a lot of background information that is never really brough brought up (for example, there are six other Overlords).
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* EvilChancellor: The Chancellor. Altho he hasn't really done anything evil in the comics, WordOfGod says he is indeed evil, since chancellors are supposed to be evil.
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* EvilChancellor: The Chancellor. Altho Although he hasn't really done anything evil in the comics, WordOfGod says he is indeed evil, since chancellors are supposed to be evil.
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: All demons have glowy pupilless eyes.
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: All demons have glowy pupilless pupil-less eyes.
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* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: All demons have lots of pointy teeth, altho it's very prominent with Zaran.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Not that different, really. Unlike most, they aren't AlwaysChaoticEvil, tho (most of them are actually ChaoticNeutral).
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Not that different, really. Unlike most, they aren't AlwaysChaoticEvil, tho (most of them are actually ChaoticNeutral).
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* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: All demons have lots of pointy teeth, altho although it's very prominent with Zaran.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent:Not that different, really. Unlike most, they aren't AlwaysChaoticEvil, tho though (most of them are actually ChaoticNeutral).
* OurDemonsAreDifferent:
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Spoiled Sweet clean-up. In order to fit the archetype, the character must be priviledged, optimistic, naive, sheltered, etc. Examples \"s/he\'s rich but a decent person\" are misuse. Also, the TRS discussion leans towards agreement that this is a gendered trope (Always Female). Zero Context Example deleted.
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* SpoiledSweet: Zaran.
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: All demons ahve glowy pupilless eyes.
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* GlowingEyesOfDoom: All demons ahve have glowy pupilless eyes.
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* SpoiledSweet: Zaran.
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* MadScientistsBeutifulDaughter: More like Evil Overlord's Sort-Of Cute Daughter, but close enough.
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* MadScientistsBeutifulDaughter: MadScientistsBeautifulDaughter: More like Evil Overlord's Sort-Of Cute Daughter, but close enough.
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* GlowyEyesOfDoom: All demons ahve glowy pupilless eyes.
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* GlowyEyesOfDoom: GlowingEyesOfDoom: All demons ahve glowy pupilless eyes.eyes.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Most episodes are called "In which Zaran il Legio [[does something]].
* InWhichATropeIsDescribed: See above.
* MadScientistsBeutifulDaughter: More like Evil Overlord's Sort-Of Cute Daughter, but close enough.
* FacelessMooks: The legionnaires. The only one shown without a helmet is a supporting character.
* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: All demons have lots of pointy teeth, altho it's very prominent with Zaran.
* IdiosyncraticEpisodeNaming: Most episodes are called "In which Zaran il Legio [[does something]].
* InWhichATropeIsDescribed: See above.
* MadScientistsBeutifulDaughter: More like Evil Overlord's Sort-Of Cute Daughter, but close enough.
* FacelessMooks: The legionnaires. The only one shown without a helmet is a supporting character.
* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: All demons have lots of pointy teeth, altho it's very prominent with Zaran.
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* MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: All demons have lots of pointy teeth, altho it's very prominent with Zaran.
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* EvilChancellor: The Chancellor, tho he hasn't really done anything evil in the comics, WordOfGod says he is indeed evil.
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* EvilChancellor: The Chancellor, tho Chancellor. Altho he hasn't really done anything evil in the comics, WordOfGod says he is indeed evil, since chancellors are supposed to be evil.
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* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Not that different, really. Unlike most, they aren't AlwaysChaoticEvil, tho (most of them are actually ChaoticNeutral).
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*GlowyEyesOfDoom: All demons ahve glowy pupilless eyes.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Not that different, really. Unlike most, they aren't AlwaysChaoticEvil, tho (most of them are actuallyChaoticNeutral).ChaoticNeutral).
*MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: All demons have lots of pointy teeth, altho it's very prominent with Zaran.
* OurDemonsAreDifferent: Not that different, really. Unlike most, they aren't AlwaysChaoticEvil, tho (most of them are actually
*MoreTeethThanTheOsmondFamily: All demons have lots of pointy teeth, altho it's very prominent with Zaran.
