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** Tubs himself, who easily shrugged off a suplex from the aforementioned robot.
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* Badass: Heavy Maintenance Worker 01, who somehow managed to build and pilot a mech capable of going toe to toe with Tubs for extended periods of time.
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* Badass: BadAss: Heavy Maintenance Worker 01, who somehow managed to build and pilot a mech capable of going toe to toe with Tubs for extended periods of time.
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* RecordNeedleScratch: When past-Connie's plan to get the Mist-lookalike drunk is derailed by LL taking the strong drink instead.
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* InSpiteOfANail: In an attempt to prevent her date with LL from going wrong like it did the first time, Connie convinces him to go to the Alpha Hall instead of the Skylight, which is where the Mist look-alike crashed their date. Unfortunately, she shows up at the Alpha Hall and manages to lure LL away anyways, much to Connie's frustration.
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* ImagineSpot: An EasterEgg in the "Ride." animation.
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''Waterworks'' is an InteractiveComic, created by [=LuFa=] as a [[MSPaintAdventures MSPA Forum Adventure]]; apart from normal and animated panels, it also makes use of Flash animations accompanied by music, ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''-style.
It follows the adventures of Connie Cohen, a "concerned citizen" who arrives at the local waterworks to investigate the mysterious lack of water in her household. As it turns out, the facility has been taken over by a gang of thugs who apparently wish to steal the water for reasons unknown, and it is up to Connie to stop them. And, of course, then it turns out that there is far more at stake than that...
Combat and action abound throughout.
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
It follows the adventures of Connie Cohen, a "concerned citizen" who arrives at the local waterworks to investigate the mysterious lack of water in her household. As it turns out, the facility has been taken over by a gang of thugs who apparently wish to steal the water for reasons unknown, and it is up to Connie to stop them. And, of course, then it turns out that there is far more at stake than that...
Combat and action abound throughout.
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
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''Waterworks'' is an InteractiveComic, created by [=LuFa=] as a [[MSPaintAdventures [[Webcomic/MSPaintAdventures MSPA Forum Adventure]]; apart from normal and animated panels, it also makes use of Flash animations accompanied by music, ''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''-style.
''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''-style.
It follows the adventures of Connie Cohen, a "concerned citizen" who arrives at the local waterworks to investigate the mysterious lack of water in her household. As it turns out, the facility has been taken over by a gang of thugs who apparently wish to steal the water for reasons unknown, and it is up to Connie to stop them. And, of course, then it turns out that there is far more at stake thanthat...
that...
Combat and action aboundthroughout.
throughout.
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworkshere]].
here]].
It follows the adventures of Connie Cohen, a "concerned citizen" who arrives at the local waterworks to investigate the mysterious lack of water in her household. As it turns out, the facility has been taken over by a gang of thugs who apparently wish to steal the water for reasons unknown, and it is up to Connie to stop them. And, of course, then it turns out that there is far more at stake than
Combat and action abound
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks
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* AnAxeToGrind: Acquired from a [[IncrediblyLamePun can of Axe deodorant.]]
* BadassCape: Acquired by Connie later on.
* BadassCape: Acquired by Connie later on.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Acquired from a [[IncrediblyLamePun can of Axe deodorant.]]
]]
* BadassCape: Acquired by Connie later on.
* BadassCape: Acquired by Connie later on.
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* BadassMoustache: Tubs.
* BattleDiscretionShot: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=413 This page,]] complete with [[ScreenShake the entire image shaking]].
* BerserkButton: Connie goes for an off-screen ExtremeMeleeRevenge after being splashed with what she thinks could be toilet water.
* BattleDiscretionShot: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=413 This page,]] complete with [[ScreenShake the entire image shaking]].
* BerserkButton: Connie goes for an off-screen ExtremeMeleeRevenge after being splashed with what she thinks could be toilet water.
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* BadassMoustache: Tubs.
Tubs.
* BattleDiscretionShot: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=413 This page,]] complete with [[ScreenShake the entire imageshaking]].
shaking]].
* BerserkButton: Connie goes for an off-screen ExtremeMeleeRevenge after being splashed with what she thinks could be toilet water.
* BattleDiscretionShot: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=413 This page,]] complete with [[ScreenShake the entire image
* BerserkButton: Connie goes for an off-screen ExtremeMeleeRevenge after being splashed with what she thinks could be toilet water.
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* BoldInflation: Pretty much every other word is bolded! Only in the original forum thread though; the mirror eschews all of this boldage.
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* BoldInflation: Pretty much every other word is bolded! Only in the original forum thread though; the mirror eschews all of this boldage.
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* CarryABigStick: A mace (transformed from a [[IncrediblyLamePun CAN OF MACE]]).
* ChandlersLaw: The plot stalls... suddenly, [[spoiler:[[http://files.myfrogbag.com/enyovk/animation14.swf forklift mecha crashing through the door! Followed by Tubs.]]]].
* CrowdPanic: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=406 This page.]] Though it's more of a mass jawdrop.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The factory employees are referred to simply by their job titles. Connie herself is just a "concerned citizen" and doesn't get named until a few hundred pages in.
* TheFaceless: Slick, [[spoiler:except in his expository flashback]].
* ChandlersLaw: The plot stalls... suddenly, [[spoiler:[[http://files.myfrogbag.com/enyovk/animation14.swf forklift mecha crashing through the door! Followed by Tubs.]]]].
* CrowdPanic: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=406 This page.]] Though it's more of a mass jawdrop.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The factory employees are referred to simply by their job titles. Connie herself is just a "concerned citizen" and doesn't get named until a few hundred pages in.
* TheFaceless: Slick, [[spoiler:except in his expository flashback]].
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* CarryABigStick: A mace (transformed from a [[IncrediblyLamePun CAN OF MACE]]).
MACE]]).
* ChandlersLaw: The plot stalls... suddenly, [[spoiler:[[http://files.myfrogbag.com/enyovk/animation14.swf forklift mecha crashing through the door! Followed by Tubs.]]]].
]]]].
* CrowdPanic: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=406 This page.]] Though it's more of a massjawdrop.
jawdrop.
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The factory employees are referred to simply by their job titles. Connie herself is just a "concerned citizen" and doesn't get named until a few hundred pagesin.
in.
* TheFaceless: Slick, [[spoiler:except in his expository flashback]].
* ChandlersLaw: The plot stalls... suddenly, [[spoiler:[[http://files.myfrogbag.com/enyovk/animation14.swf forklift mecha crashing through the door! Followed by Tubs.
* CrowdPanic: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=406 This page.]] Though it's more of a mass
* EveryoneCallsHimBarkeep: The factory employees are referred to simply by their job titles. Connie herself is just a "concerned citizen" and doesn't get named until a few hundred pages
* TheFaceless: Slick, [[spoiler:except in his expository flashback]].
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* GeniusBruiser: [[spoiler:[[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=562 Typhoon]]]], apparently.
* GISSyndrome: Most of the inventory items, as well as the backgrounds in [[spoiler:José's]] {{Flashback}}.
* GISSyndrome: Most of the inventory items, as well as the backgrounds in [[spoiler:José's]] {{Flashback}}.
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* GeniusBruiser: [[spoiler:[[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=562 Typhoon]]]], apparently.
apparently.
* GISSyndrome: Most of the inventory items, as well as the backgrounds in[[spoiler:José's]] {{Flashback}}. [[spoiler:José]]'s {{Flashback}}.
* GISSyndrome: Most of the inventory items, as well as the backgrounds in
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* HyperspaceArsenal: The mood ring, where each specific mood is a separate inventory slot that can only be accessed when Connie is in that mood. A source of much frustration.
* ImprovisedWeapon: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=411 A laser pointer]].
* ImprovisedWeapon: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=411 A laser pointer]].
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* HyperspaceArsenal: The mood ring, where each specific mood is a separate inventory slot that can only be accessed when Connie is in that mood. A source of much frustration.
frustration.
* ImprovisedWeapon: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=411 A laser pointer]].
* ImprovisedWeapon: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=411 A laser pointer]].
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* InnocentBystanders: The waterworks workers. At least initially.
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* InnocentBystanders: The waterworks workers. At least initially.
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* {{Jetpack}}: José can use his water hose (made of a toilet tank) as a primitive jetpack.
* KnifeNut: Flush.
* KnifeNut: Flush.
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* {{Jetpack}}: José can use his water hose (made of a toilet tank) as a primitive jetpack.
jetpack.
* KnifeNut: Flush.
* KnifeNut: Flush.
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* MistakenNationality: José ''hates'' being called "French".
* MostCommonSuperpower: Connie. [[spoiler: And Mist]].
* MustMakeAmends: Connie needs to fix the situation once she [[spoiler:destroys the fish whose smell was the only thing keeping the workers safe from Tubs]].
* MostCommonSuperpower: Connie. [[spoiler: And Mist]].
* MustMakeAmends: Connie needs to fix the situation once she [[spoiler:destroys the fish whose smell was the only thing keeping the workers safe from Tubs]].
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* MistakenNationality: José ''hates'' being called "French".
"French".
* MostCommonSuperpower: Connie. [[spoiler: AndMist]].
Mist]].
* MustMakeAmends: Connie needs to fix the situation once she [[spoiler:destroys the fish whose smell was the only thing keeping the workers safe from Tubs]].
* MostCommonSuperpower: Connie. [[spoiler: And
* MustMakeAmends: Connie needs to fix the situation once she [[spoiler:destroys the fish whose smell was the only thing keeping the workers safe from Tubs]].
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* TheNoseless: The art style makes everyone into this.
* PerpetualFrowner: [[spoiler:Mist]].
* PerpetualFrowner: [[spoiler:Mist]].
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* TheNoseless: The art style makes everyone into this.
this.
* PerpetualFrowner: [[spoiler:Mist]].
* PerpetualFrowner: [[spoiler:Mist]].
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* PortalPool: The Spatial Transport ability of Slick's suit allows Slick to use any puddle as a portal to any other puddle. Spatial Transport II is this for any body of water.
* PoweredArmor: Slick's suit. Has a lot of funky features.
** XRayVision: One of the abilities offered by it. Though it requires the suit to release x-rays which are harmful to living beings in the vicinity.
* PresentTenseNarrative: Except for [[spoiler:Slick's backstory exposition break.]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Flush gets these as soon as he boots up his [[SpinAttack Cyclone Cistern]].
* PoweredArmor: Slick's suit. Has a lot of funky features.
** XRayVision: One of the abilities offered by it. Though it requires the suit to release x-rays which are harmful to living beings in the vicinity.
* PresentTenseNarrative: Except for [[spoiler:Slick's backstory exposition break.]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Flush gets these as soon as he boots up his [[SpinAttack Cyclone Cistern]].
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* PortalPool: The Spatial Transport ability of Slick's suit allows Slick to use any puddle as a portal to any other puddle. Spatial Transport II is this for any body of water.
water.
* PoweredArmor: Slick's suit. Has a lot of funkyfeatures.
features.
** XRayVision: One of the abilities offered by it. Though it requires the suit to release x-rays which are harmful to living beings in thevicinity.
vicinity.
* PresentTenseNarrative: Except for [[spoiler:Slick's backstory exposition break.]]
]]
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Flush gets these as soon as he boots up his [[SpinAttack Cyclone Cistern]].
* PoweredArmor: Slick's suit. Has a lot of funky
** XRayVision: One of the abilities offered by it. Though it requires the suit to release x-rays which are harmful to living beings in the
* PresentTenseNarrative: Except for [[spoiler:Slick's backstory exposition break.
* RedEyesTakeWarning: Flush gets these as soon as he boots up his [[SpinAttack Cyclone Cistern]].
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* ShoutOut: [=Urist McWorkman=] is one walking ''DwarfFortress'' reference.
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* ShoutOut: [=Urist McWorkman=] is one walking ''DwarfFortress'' ''VideoGame/DwarfFortress'' reference.
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* SpinAttack: Flush's Cyclone Cistern ability. [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=242 It gets truly spectacular]].
* SplitScreenPhoneCall: Between Urist and the supervisor.
* StreetUrchin: [[spoiler:José]], in his youth.
* SuperStrength: Tubs seems to border on this, at least.
* SplitScreenPhoneCall: Between Urist and the supervisor.
* StreetUrchin: [[spoiler:José]], in his youth.
* SuperStrength: Tubs seems to border on this, at least.
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* SpinAttack: Flush's Cyclone Cistern ability. [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=242 It gets truly spectacular]].
spectacular]].
* SplitScreenPhoneCall: Between Urist and thesupervisor.
supervisor.
* StreetUrchin: [[spoiler:José]], in hisyouth.
youth.
* SuperStrength: Tubs seems to border on this, at least.
* SplitScreenPhoneCall: Between Urist and the
* StreetUrchin: [[spoiler:José]], in his
* SuperStrength: Tubs seems to border on this, at least.
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* WhoForgotTheLights: A rare non-video game example. Whenever there's something happening in the underground, you really should turn your monitor's brightness up to the max if you want to be able to tell what's going on.
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes:
* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes:
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* WhoForgotTheLights: A rare non-video game example. Whenever there's something happening in the underground, you really should turn your monitor's brightness up to the max if you want to be able to tell what's going on.
on.
*WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes:
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Tubs' WeaksauceWeakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap fish]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes:
** Tubs' WeaksauceWeakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheapfish]]. fish]].
** Connie is pretty germ-phobic, specifically in relation to toilets, and will freak out at the drop of a hat about them.
** Tubs' WeaksauceWeakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap
** Connie is pretty germ-phobic, specifically in relation to toilets, and will freak out at the drop of a hat about them.
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** Also, there's the aforementioned "Hitmontop" worker. In addition to spinning around on his head, he attempts to use triple-kick on Slick.
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** Also, there's the aforementioned "Hitmontop" worker. In addition to spinning around on his head, he attempts to use triple-kick on Slick. Later, Slick is told to "mash the B button" to stop [[spoiler:one of the goo creatures]] from evolving.
** The sisters Philia and Phobia are [[SuperMarioBros two overall & cap wearing plumber siblings, one red and one green.]] There's also one to ''SuperMarioSunshine'' when Connie asks José if he's going to use his pack to fly around collecting blue coins.
** The sisters Philia and Phobia are [[SuperMarioBros two overall & cap wearing plumber siblings, one red and one green.]] There's also one to ''SuperMarioSunshine'' when Connie asks José if he's going to use his pack to fly around collecting blue coins.
* ThemeNaming:
** Slick, Flush, Tubs, and José (Hose) all have a plumbing theme.
** Philia and Phobia, the heavy plumber sisters.
** Slick, Flush, Tubs, and José (Hose) all have a plumbing theme.
** Philia and Phobia, the heavy plumber sisters.
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Tubs' weakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap fish]].
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* WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes: Tubs' weakness WeaksauceWeakness is [[spoiler:the smell of cheap fish]].
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* GagEcho: "that's new" -- [[spoiler:When Slick and Connie each see the black goo "tree" for the first time.]]
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* WhamEpisode: Derelix and the revelation that [[spoiler:the black goo is some sort of organism]].
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Way out of alphabetical order.
* HairTriggerTemper: Connie gets angry rather easily... usually with [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry destructive results]]; as it turns out, this is pretty much the main reason she has [[IJustWantToHaveFriends barely any friends]], let alone [[IJustWantToBeLoved a boyfriend.]]
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* HairTriggerTemper: Connie gets angry rather easily... usually with [[YouWouldntLikeMeWhenImAngry destructive results]]; as it turns out, this is pretty much the main reason she has [[IJustWantToHaveFriends barely any friends]], let alone [[IJustWantToBeLoved a boyfriend.]]
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Derelix.
** Even moreso, the {{EasterEgg}}s hidden in some of the later updates, for the readers to unravel within the discussion thread. They mostly consist of creepy imagery of things just as bad as what was in Derelix and creepy noises... Worse, [[spoiler:they seem to imply that there is some sort of creature for whom the "tree" in Derelix was just his tail... and in the page where Slick did an X-Ray scan of the elevator another such thing can be traced out in the background!]]
** Even moreso, the {{EasterEgg}}s hidden in some of the later updates, for the readers to unravel within the discussion thread. They mostly consist of creepy imagery of things just as bad as what was in Derelix and creepy noises... Worse, [[spoiler:they seem to imply that there is some sort of creature for whom the "tree" in Derelix was just his tail... and in the page where Slick did an X-Ray scan of the elevator another such thing can be traced out in the background!]]
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: WORKER ZOMBIE. It's Flush's reaction that really sells it, though.
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It follows the adventures of Connie Cohen, a "concerned citizen" who arrives at the local waterworks to investigate the mysterious lack of water in her household. As it turns out, the facility has been taken over by a gang of thugs who apparently wish to steal the water for reasons unknown, and it is up to Connie to stop them. Combat and action abound throughout.
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum thread are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum thread are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
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It follows the adventures of Connie Cohen, a "concerned citizen" who arrives at the local waterworks to investigate the mysterious lack of water in her household. As it turns out, the facility has been taken over by a gang of thugs who apparently wish to steal the water for reasons unknown, and it is up to Connie to stop them. And, of course, then it turns out that there is far more at stake than that...
Combat and action abound throughout.
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forumthread threads are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
Combat and action abound throughout.
It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum
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** Even moreso, the {{EasterEgg}}s hidden in some of the later updates, for the readers to unravel within the discussion thread. They mostly consist of creepy imagery of things just as bad as what was in Derelix and creepy noises... Worse, [[spoiler:they seem to imply that there is some sort of creature for whom the "tree" in Derelix was just his tail... and in the page where Slick did an X-Ray scan of the elevator another such thing can be traced out in the background!]]
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** Subverted in that despite liking knives, he has 'no clue'' what to do with one in a fight.
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* TalkingWeapon: The axe. Despite it's ominous red glow, it just wants to cut down trees.
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''Waterworks'' is an InteractiveComic, created by [=LuFa=] as a [[MSPaintAdventures MSPA Forum Adventure]]; apart from normal and animated panels, it also makes use of Flash animations accompanied by music, ''{{Homestuck}}''-style.
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''Waterworks'' is an InteractiveComic, created by [=LuFa=] as a [[MSPaintAdventures MSPA Forum Adventure]]; apart from normal and animated panels, it also makes use of Flash animations accompanied by music, ''{{Homestuck}}''-style.''Webcomic/{{Homestuck}}''-style.
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Connie]]... [[{{Understatement}} Has anger issues]].
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Connie]]... [[{{Understatement}} Has anger issues]].issues.
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* MustMakeAmends: Connie needs to fix the situation once she [[spoiler:destroys the fish whose smell was the only thing keeping the workers safe from Tubs]].
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* RedemptionQuest: Connie needs to fix the situation once she [[spoiler:destroys the fish whose smell was the only thing keeping the workers safe from Tubs]].
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* HighOctaneNightmareFuel: Derelix.
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* NightmareFuel: Derelix.
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* AbandonedArea: Derelix.
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* AbandonedArea: Derelix. [[spoiler:Actually another planet.]]
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* BladeBelowTheShoulder: [[spoiler:Everyone on [=Slick/Rheo Wasser's=] planet get four of these, on the arms and legs, at birth and are supposed to care for them until the end of their life.]]
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* BladeBelowTheShoulder: [[spoiler:Everyone on in [=Slick/Rheo Wasser's=] planet underground civillization get four of these, on the arms and legs, at birth and are supposed to care for them until the end of their life.]]
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* InformedDeformity: [[spoiler:Mist. Supposedly incredibly ugly, but, as Connie lampshades, [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=560 by media standards she's hot.]] However, it is apparently mostly because of the deformity affecting her shoulder blades.]]
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* InformedDeformity: [[spoiler:Mist. Supposedly incredibly ugly, but, as Connie lampshades, [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=560 by media standards she's hot.]] However, it is apparently mostly because of the deformity affecting her shoulder wrist/ankle blades.]]
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* SaveTheVillain: Connie, towards [[spoiler:José.]]
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* SaveTheVillain: Connie, towards [[spoiler:José.]][[spoiler:José]].
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* [[spoiler:{{Ultraterrestrials}}]]: [[spoiler:[=Slick/Rheo's=] civilization.]]
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* ByWallThatIsHoley: [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43&p=568 Slick's repair module.]]
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* BridalCarry: [[spoiler:Slick carries Connie this way when they're heading to the elevator.]]
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It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum thread is [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]].
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It can be read [[http://nixshadow.com/mspfa/?s=43 here]], and the original forum thread is are [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?28137 here]] and [[http://www.mspaforums.com/showthread.php?39003-Waterworks here]].
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* UnstoppableRage: [[spoiler: Connie]]... [[{{Understatement}} Has anger issues]].
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* ShoutOut: [=Urist McWorkman=] is one walking ''DwarfFortress'' reference.
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* ShoutOut: [=Urist McWorkman=] is one walking ''DwarfFortress'' reference. reference.
** Also, there's the aforementioned "Hitmontop" worker. In addition to spinning around on his head, he attempts to use triple-kick on Slick.
** Also, there's the aforementioned "Hitmontop" worker. In addition to spinning around on his head, he attempts to use triple-kick on Slick.
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* BrickJoke: The worker who "Spins on his head like a [[{{Pokemon}} Hitmontop]]."
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* NeatFreak: Connie's fear of dirty toilets.
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* NeatFreak: Connie's fear of dirty toilets.toilets.
* NightmareFuel: Derelix.
* NightmareFuel: Derelix.
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* CrowningMomentOfFunny: WORKER ZOMBIE. It's Flush's reaction that really sells it, though.
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* AbandonedArea: [[spoiler:Derelix]].
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* AbandonedArea: [[spoiler:Derelix]].Derelix.