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** Kentu, the second son, is shipping Jintu with Razendi.
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-->--''Kizarasunga, "Six-Feathers" of Zizumbir.''
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** Zusufula as well; his name means ''Shark'', and he was given it for killing one - and judging by the size of the tooth he wears as a necklace, it was HUGE.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Emperor Mriazosa has six sons [[note]]from oldest to youngest: Rantu, Kentu, Jintu, Suntu, Sintu and Sentu[[/note]]. The eldest (Rantu) has been effectively demoted, and the third-eldest (Jintu) has been promoted to Crown Prince.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Emperor Mriazosa has six sons [[note]]from oldest to youngest: Rantu, Kentu, Jintu, Suntu, Sintu and Sentu[[/note]]. The eldest (Rantu) has been effectively demoted, and the third-eldest (Jintu) has been promoted to Crown Prince. Downplayed as they seem to get along reasonably well for the most part.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: In order to become "Six-Feathers" (Warlord) of Zizumbir, you must prove yourself to be the best warrior in your tribe, and (probably) become chieftain (who each only have five feathers). The chieftains choose the next "Six-Feathers" from the available candidates. Chieftains who are unhappy with the results have the right to challenge the new "Six-Feathers" to a fight to the death (after which, presumably, there will be a new election).
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: In order to become "Six-Feathers" (Warlord) of Zizumbir, you must prove yourself to be the best warrior in your tribe, and (probably) become a chieftain (who each only have five feathers). The chieftains then choose the next "Six-Feathers" from the available candidates. Chieftains who are unhappy with the results have the right to challenge the new "Six-Feathers" to a fight to the death (after which, presumably, death. If the challenger wins, there will (presumably) be a new election).election.
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* SnakesAreSinister: A viper attacks Jintu and almost bites him. However, Kizarasunga grabs it and gets bitten in his place.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: in order to become "Six-Feathers" (Warlord) of Zizumbir, you must [[KlingonPromotion challenge the reigning "Six-Feathers" to a fight to the death]]. It is not known if you have to be a chieftain first, or if anyone can make a challenge at any time.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: in AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: In order to become "Six-Feathers" (Warlord) of Zizumbir, you must [[KlingonPromotion prove yourself to be the best warrior in your tribe, and (probably) become chieftain (who each only have five feathers). The chieftains choose the next "Six-Feathers" from the available candidates. Chieftains who are unhappy with the results have the right to challenge the reigning new "Six-Feathers" to a fight to the death]]. It is not known if you have to death (after which, presumably, there will be a chieftain first, or if anyone can make a challenge at any time.new election).
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* EarnedStripes: In Zizumbir, your rank is indicated by the number of feathers in your hair. Chieftains get five, and the "Six-Feathers" (Chieftain of Chieftains) gets six.
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%% YouAreWorthHell: The people of Zizumbir believe that when you marry someone, you split the years you will spend in Hell with them, so that you can meet each other in the next life faster. This is part of the reason Kizarasunga strongly objects to marrying Jintu, since she's only just met him and it would be ridiculous to ask a complete stranger to share her time in Hell.
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%% YouAreWorthHell: The people of Zizumbir believe that when you marry someone, you split the years you will spend in Hell with them, so that you can meet each other in the next life faster. This is part of the reason she strongly objects to marrying Jintu, since she's only just met him and it would be ridiculous to ask a complete stranger to share her time in Hell.
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%% YouAreWorthHell: The people of Zizumbir believe that when you marry someone, you split the years you will spend in Hell with them, so that you can meet each other in the next life faster. This is part of the reason she Kizarasunga strongly objects to marrying Jintu, since she's only just met him and it would be ridiculous to ask a complete stranger to share her time in Hell.
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* SacredHospitality: Zizumbir believes in this, which is why Kizarasunga doesn't try to take revenge against her father's killer when she encounters him in the Jaezean Imperial Palace. It also makes it all the more egregious when Jaezean guards tried to assassinate her. [[spoiler: Said guards were all ethnically Gamhian, tried to kill Prince Jintu as well, and acted without Emperor Tazaal's permission or approval]].
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* SacredHospitality: Zizumbir believes in this, which is why Kizarasunga doesn't try to take revenge against her father's killer when she encounters him in the Jaezean Imperial Palace. It also makes it all the more egregious when Jaezean guards tried to assassinate her. [[spoiler: Said guards were all ethnically Gamhian, tried to kill Prince Jintu as well, and acted without Emperor Tazaal's Tuzaal's permission or approval]].
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** Tazaal and his eldest son Rantu are both shipping Jintu and Kizarasunga, the former so the marriage alliance goes through and the latter so Jintu will be happy.
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** Tazaal Tuzaal and his eldest son Rantu are both shipping Jintu and Kizarasunga, the former so the marriage alliance goes through and the latter so Jintu will be happy.
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* BallroomBlitz: [[spoiler]]Kizarasunga is attacked during the royal ball. The attackers were all ethnically Gahmian.[[/spoiler]]
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* BallroomBlitz: [[spoiler]]Kizarasunga [[spoiler:Kizarasunga is attacked during the royal ball. The attackers were all ethnically Gahmian.[[/spoiler]]]]
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** Kizarasunga. She agreed to the peace talks, and came to Jaez to negotiate in good faith.
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* CuteBruiser: Kizarasunga, as described by High General Khotsu.
-->'''Khotsu''': She's got these tiny little hands just like any other woman, but it's like being hit with lead. Makes no sense.
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** She also does it to Jintu when she gets to the palace, most likely just to mess with him.
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* DoesNotLikeShoes: Kizarasunga goes barefoot as often as possible.
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* AwesomeMcCoolName: His Imperial Majesty, Tuzaal Mriazosa, the Emperor of Jaez.
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* AwesomeMcCoolName: His Imperial Majesty, Tuzaal Korino Mriazosa, the Emperor of Jaez.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Emperor Tuzaal Mriazosa has six sons [[note]]from oldest to youngest: Rantu, Kentu, Jintu, Suntu, Sintu and Sentu[[/note]]. The eldest (Rantu) has been effectively demoted, and the third-eldest (Jintu) has been promoted to Crown Prince.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Emperor Tuzaal Mriazosa has six sons [[note]]from oldest to youngest: Rantu, Kentu, Jintu, Suntu, Sintu and Sentu[[/note]]. The eldest (Rantu) has been effectively demoted, and the third-eldest (Jintu) has been promoted to Crown Prince.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: How you get to be "Six-Feathers" (Warlord) of Zizumbir. You [[KlingonPromotion challenge the reigning "Six-Feathers" to a fight to the death]]. It is not known if you have to be a chieftain first, or if anyone can make a challenge at any time.
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* AsskickingEqualsAuthority: How you get in order to be become "Six-Feathers" (Warlord) of Zizumbir. You Zizumbir, you must [[KlingonPromotion challenge the reigning "Six-Feathers" to a fight to the death]]. It is not known if you have to be a chieftain first, or if anyone can make a challenge at any time.
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* ReallyGetsAround: Rantu lost his position as Crown Prince due to his many, many affairs (mostly with the palace maids). [[spoiler: And he still hasn't stopped, even now.]]
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* ReallyGetsAround: Rantu lost his position as Crown Prince due to his many, many affairs dalliances (mostly with the palace maids). [[spoiler: And he still hasn't stopped, even now.]]
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* ReallyGetsAround: Rantu lost his position as Crown Prince due to his many, many affairs (mostly with the palace maids). [[spoiler: And he still hasn't stopped, even now.]]
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Emperor Tuzaal Mriazosa has six sons (from oldest to youngest: Rantu, Kentu, Jintu, Suntu, Sintu and Sentu). The eldest (Rantu) has been effectively demoted, and the third-eldest (Jintu) has been promoted to Crown Prince.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Emperor Tuzaal Mriazosa has six sons (from [[note]]from oldest to youngest: Rantu, Kentu, Jintu, Suntu, Sintu and Sentu).Sentu[[/note]]. The eldest (Rantu) has been effectively demoted, and the third-eldest (Jintu) has been promoted to Crown Prince.
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* GeniusBruiser: Jintu is the tallest and strongest one in his family, but he's also an avid reader. His bedroom resembles a library, and he carefully researched the war between Jaez and Zizumbir in order to prove that they were part of the Empire. He failed.
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* HellishHorse: Kizarasunga and Zusufala both ride supernatural mounts that resemble horses, have many rows of teeth, and are demonic in nature. Their name in the Zizumbir language ("Therrin") literally translates to ''nightmare''.
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* HellishHorse: Kizarasunga and Zusufala both ride supernatural mounts that resemble horses, have many rows of teeth, and are demonic in nature. Their name in the Zizumbir language ("Therrin") ("Thrreins") literally translates to ''nightmare''.
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* AdoptedIntoRoyalty: Kezkaramki, Kizarasunga's adoptive father, was King/Six-Feathers of Zizumbir.
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* PrinceCharmless: Jintu. He might be the Crown Prince, but he sure doesn't act like it.
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* PrinceCharmless: Jintu. He might be The three eldest Mirazos brothers qualify.
** Rantu, theCrown Prince, but eldest son, was disinherited for having sex with maids.
** Kentu, the second son, was disqualified from succession because hesure doesn't act like it.has a bad temper. Additionally, he is actively trying to sabotage the marriage alliance his father planned.
** Jintu, the third son and the heir, spends the first part of the story moping about his arranged marriage and being rude to the woman he's supposed to marry.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: Emperor Mriazosa. Rather than continue a meaningless war, he decides to make peace with Zizumbir.
** High General Khatilo Khotsu. He doesn't like being diplomatic towards Kizarasunga, but he does his job.
** High General Khatilo Khotsu. He doesn't like being diplomatic towards Kizarasunga, but he does his job.
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* ReasonableAuthorityFigure: The story has a few of them.
** Emperor Mriazosa. Rather than continue a meaningless and unjustified war, he decides to make peace with Zizumbir.
** High General Khatilo Khotsu. He doesn't like being diplomatic towardsKizarasunga, Kizarasunga because she is holding his son hostage, but he does his job.
** Emperor Mriazosa. Rather than continue a meaningless and unjustified war, he decides to make peace with Zizumbir.
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* MistakenForCheating: During the ball, the senior maid calls Rantu out of the main hall. Once they're in private she accuses him of trying to seduce Kizarasunga (who by this point is betrothed to Jintu), [[WhatTheHellHero berates Rantu for seemingly being so irresponsible]], and uses blackmail to get Rantu to stop it. WordOfGod is that Rantu [[ShipperOnDeck was actually trying to get Jintu to like Kizarasunga more]].
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* ShipperOnDeck: There are two of them in the Mirazos family.
** Tazaal and his eldest son Rantu are both shipping Jintu and Kizarasunga, the former so the marriage alliance goes through and the latter so Jintu will be happy.
** Kentu, the second son, is shipping Jintu with Razendi.
** Tazaal and his eldest son Rantu are both shipping Jintu and Kizarasunga, the former so the marriage alliance goes through and the latter so Jintu will be happy.
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* KickingAssInAllHerFinery: [[spoiler: Kizarasunga in the attack at the ball.]]
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* KickingAssInAllHerFinery: [[spoiler: Kizarasunga in during the attack at the ball.]]
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* EntendreFailure: [[spoiler:During the ball, a very drunk Rantu tried the old "[[DoubleEntendre does the carpet match the drapes]]" line on Kizarasunga. Fortunately for him, she didn't get the joke and Jintu distracted her by asking her to dance.]]
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** "Kizarasunga" means "a beautiful, flame-colored threat". This probably refers to her actions during the war with Jaez, or perhaps how she fought her way up to become "Six-Feathers" ("Queen") of Zizumbir.
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** "Kizarasunga" means "a beautiful, flame-colored threat". This probably refers to her actions during the war with Jaez, or perhaps how she fought her way up to become "Six-Feathers" ("Queen") of Zizumbir. Her friends [[AffectionateNickname just call her "Kazhra"]].
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* * ToWinWithoutFighting: Lampshaded by Kizarasunga [[spoiler:when she tells Jintu a story about herself and (then-Captain) Khotsu.]]
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