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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: A temporary swerve into Type 2, when Kyle reveals the first time he discovered he could [[PlayingWithFire play with fire]] was during ADateWithRosiePalms that caused him to accidentally burn down his foster parent's house, Annihilator laughes. Quickly averted, however, when Annihilator realizes Kyle [[DudeNotFunny ''isn't'' exaggerating]], and in fact gravely hurt his foster sister and was abandoned by his foster parents after the incident.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: A temporary swerve into Type 2, when Kyle reveals the first time he discovered he could [[PlayingWithFire play with fire]] was during ADateWithRosiePalms that caused him to accidentally burn down his foster parent's house, Annihilator laughes. Quickly averted, however, when Annihilator realizes Kyle [[DudeNotFunny ''isn't'' isn't exaggerating]], and in fact gravely hurt his foster sister and was abandoned by his foster parents after the incident.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: A temporary swerve into Type 2, when Kyle reveals the first time he discovered he could [[PlayingWithFire play with fire]] was during ADateWithRosiePalms that caused him to accidentally burn out his foster parent's house, Annihilator laughes. Quickly averted, however, when Annihilator realizes Kyle [[DudeNotFunny ''isn't'' exaggerating]], and in fact gravely hurt his foster sister and was abandoned by his foster parents after the incident.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: A temporary swerve into Type 2, when Kyle reveals the first time he discovered he could [[PlayingWithFire play with fire]] was during ADateWithRosiePalms that caused him to accidentally burn out down his foster parent's house, Annihilator laughes. Quickly averted, however, when Annihilator realizes Kyle [[DudeNotFunny ''isn't'' exaggerating]], and in fact gravely hurt his foster sister and was abandoned by his foster parents after the incident.
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* EvilHasABadSenseOfHumour: A temporary swerve into Type 2, when Kyle reveals the first time he discovered he could [[PlayingWithFire play with fire]] was during ADateWithRosiePalms that caused him to accidentally burn out his foster parent's house, Annihilator laughes. Quickly averted, however, when Annihilator realizes Kyle [[DudeNotFunny ''isn't'' exaggerating]], and in fact gravely hurt his foster sister and was abandoned by his foster parents after the incident.
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* SceneryCensor: during his battle in the market place he has somehow gotten completely naked while [[spoiler: being invisible]] and fighting his enemy... all without showing his cash'n'prizes.
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* SceneryCensor: during During his battle in the market place he Kyle has somehow gotten completely naked while [[spoiler: being invisible]] and fighting his enemy... all without showing his cash'n'prizes.
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* JailBaitWait: Not that Anni has to wait very long.
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler:58]]) and Kyle (17) seem to be heading to one of these.
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler:58]]) and Kyle (17) (17, going on 18) seem to be heading to one of these.
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* NinetiesAntiHero: Hunter and Killer, the vigilantes who show up to fight Annihilator in Hong Kong. They're cocky [[JerkAss Jerkasses]] who don't care about collateral damage in the service of their work.
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* {{Invisibility}}: When their first date goes wrong,[[spoiler:Kyle]] is turned invisible.
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* {{Invisibility}}: When their first date goes wrong,[[spoiler:Kyle]] wrong, [[spoiler:Kyle]] is turned invisible.
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* PunctuatedForEmphasis / PunctuatedPounding: DON'T! *Punch* BE A! *Punch* DICK! *Punch*
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* SceneryCensor: during his battle in the market place he has somehow gotten completely naked while [[spoiler: being invisible]] and fighting his enemy... all without showing his cash'n'prizes.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Annihilator. One one hand, he is a known supervillain (whose alias doesn't exactly inspire confidence in his benevolence) and doesn't seem to have a problem with manipulation. On the other, his evilness is (so far) an InformedAttribute.
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* AmbiguouslyEvil: Annihilator. One one hand, he is a known supervillain (whose alias doesn't exactly inspire confidence in his benevolence) and doesn't seem to have a problem with manipulation. On the other, his evilness is (so far) an InformedAttribute.InformedAttribute; at worst, he's played some mind games.
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* BuffySpeak: Kyle refers to the Crisis of Collided Trans-World Identities as "Calamity of Infinite Super-whatsit Thing".
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* InstantSedation: With magic dust thrown on [[spoiler:Kyle's]] face. Only temporarily though.
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* InstantSedation: With magic dust thrown on [[spoiler:Kyle's]] face. Only temporarily momentarily though.
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* {{Invisibility}}: When they're first date goes wrong,[[spoiler:Kyle]] is turned invisible.
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* {{Invisibility}}: When they're their first date goes wrong,[[spoiler:Kyle]] is turned invisible.
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* InstantSedation: With magic dust thrown on [[spoiler:Kyle's]] face. Only temporarily though.
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** Fluke, an African American .
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** Fluke, an African American .American male.
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-->'''So-far unnamed hero:''' So sorry to interrupt your brunch date, [[PreAssKickingOneLiner but we're here to kick your ass.]]
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* {{Invisibility}}: When they're first date goes wrong,[[spoiler:Kylet]] is turned invisible.
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* {{Invisibility}}: When they're first date goes wrong. [[Spoiler:Kyle gets invisibility dust thrown in his face]]
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* {{Invisibility}}: When they're first date goes wrong. [[Spoiler:Kyle gets invisibility dust thrown in his face]]wrong,[[spoiler:Kylet]] is turned invisible.
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* {{Invisibility}}: When they're first date goes wrong. [[Spoiler:Kyle gets invisibility dust thrown in his face]]
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* KnightTemplar: Two rather violent heroes attacked the Anihilator and used brutal force on Kyle (who they thought was the Invisible Man).
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* PaintingTheFourthWall: One is left wondering exactly how Kyle said "PLATINUM PRIESTESS" to make it appear in huge silver block letters.
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* PaintingTheFourthWall: PaintingTheMedium: One is left wondering exactly how Kyle said "PLATINUM PRIESTESS" to make it appear in huge silver block letters.
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* FlatWhat: The Annihilator's response to being hurled across a room into a wall hard enough to leave a small crater is just a genuinely perplexed "What?"
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* IncomingHam:
-->'''So-far unnamed hero:''' So sorry to interrupt your brunch date, [[PreAssKickingOneLiner but we're here to kick your ass.]]
* InstantSedation: With magic dust thrown on [[spoiler:Kyle's]] face.
-->'''So-far unnamed hero:''' So sorry to interrupt your brunch date, [[PreAssKickingOneLiner but we're here to kick your ass.]]
* InstantSedation: With magic dust thrown on [[spoiler:Kyle's]] face.
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** [[spoiler: They do have one sinister scene that seems to imply planned youth stealing, but so far nothing has come out of it.]]
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* [[SensibleHeroesSkimpyVillains Sensible Heroine, Skimpy (Anti?)Villainess]]: Compare [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch1-page-5/ The Commander]] with [[http://webcomics.yaoi911.com/archive/ete-ch1-page-14/ The Platinum Priestess]].
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler: 58]]) and Kyle (17) seem to be heading to one of these.
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler: 58]]) ([[spoiler:58]]) and Kyle (17) seem to be heading to one of these.
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* MayDecemberRomance: Annihilator ([[spoiler: 58]]) and Kyle (17) seem to be heading to one of these.
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* WhenTheClockStrikesTwelve. Complete with a ShoutOut to Disney.
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* WhenTheClockStrikesTwelve. WhenTheClockStrikesTwelve: Complete with a ShoutOut to Disney.
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** But recently {{Averted}} with the addition of the Platinum Priestess.
* TheSmurfettePrinciple: The Commander is the only named female in the comic so far and the only girl in the Young Protectors.
** But recently {{Averted}} with the addition of the Platinum Priestess.
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* TheSmurfettePrinciple: The Commander is the only named female in the comic so far and the only girl in the Young Protectors.
** But recently {{Averted}} with the addition of the Platinum Priestess.
