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* GoodColorsEvilColors: As with the show, the good ponies tend to be lighter, more gentle colors, while [[spoiler: Sombra and bis magic]] has a decidedly sharper, darker color scheme. This becomes more obvious as [[spoiler: Spike is further infected by Sombra's power, his brighter colors darkening.]]
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* GoodColorsEvilColors: As with the show, the good ponies tend to be lighter, more gentle colors, while [[spoiler: Sombra and bis his magic]] has a decidedly sharper, darker color scheme. This becomes more obvious as [[spoiler: Spike is further infected by Sombra's power, his brighter colors darkening.]]
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* EvilMakeover: [[spoiler: Spike's eyes look decidedly more lizard-like and less gentle when Sombra is more actively affecting his mind.]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: It is feared that Sombra's horn is one of these, which is why Twilight is asked to help destroy it. [[spoiler: It is, but. Ot for the reasons they think.]]
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* ArtifactOfDoom: It is feared that Sombra's horn is one of these, which is why Twilight is asked to help destroy it. [[spoiler: It is, but. Ot but not for the reasons they think.]]
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* HostageSituation: A benign example with [[spoiler: Spike's egg.]] It seems the Princesses took it to ensure the peaceful behavior of the original guardian of the Crystal Heart. Whether or not this is the whole of the situation or just what [[spoiler: Sombra]] is showing remains to be seen.
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* ArtifactOfDoom: It is feared that Sombra's horn is one of these, which is why Twilight is asked to help destroy it. [[spoiler: It is, but. Ot for the reasons they think.]]
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* TheCorruptor: [[spoiler: How Sombra is exerting his influence on Spike.]]
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* Arc Symbol: Dripping water represents [[spoiler: Sombra eroding Spike and ponies hearts with his magic]]
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* Arc Symbol: ArcSymbol: Dripping water represents [[spoiler: Sombra eroding Spike and ponies hearts with his magic]]
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* Arc Symbol: Dripping water represents [[spoiler: Sombra eroding Spike and ponies hearts with his magic]]
** "Drop by drop even the strongest heart will erode"
** "Drop by drop even the strongest heart will erode"
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* EnvironmentalSymbolism: Cold blizzard that threatens the Empire.
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* PurpleIsPowerful: Sombra's umbrum magic is purple
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* EvilIsDeathlyCold: Sombra magic weakens Crystal Heart's magic, causing Blizzard to rage over the Empire.
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* EvilIsDeathlyCold: Sombra magic weakens Crystal Heart's magic, Heart, causing Blizzard the blizzard to rage over the Empire.
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* AccentuatetheNegative: Just like in [[Literature/TheSnowQueen The Snow Queen]], umbrum shard in Spike's eye makes him see only twisted and bad memories.
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* AccentuatetheNegative: Just like in [[Literature/TheSnowQueen The Snow Queen]], umbrum shard in Spike's eye makes him see only twisted and bad memories.
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* YourWorstNightmare: Sombra exploits and expands Spike's fear revealed in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E2TheCrystalEmpirePart2 Season 3]] sending him dreams and hallucinations.
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* YourWorstNightmare: Sombra exploits and expands Spike's fear revealed in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E2TheCrystalEmpirePart2 Season 3]] sending him dreams and hallucinations.3]].
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* YourWorstNightmare: Sombra exploits and expands Spike's fear revealed in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E2TheCrystalEmpirePart2 episode]] sending him dreams and hallucinations.
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* YourWorstNightmare: Sombra exploits and expands Spike's fear revealed in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E2TheCrystalEmpirePart2 episode]] Season 3]] sending him dreams and hallucinations.
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* YourWorstNightmare: Sombra exploits and expands Spike's fear revealed in [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS3E2TheCrystalEmpirePart2 episode]] sending him dreams and hallucinations.
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* Black Magic: Umbrum, Sombra's magic fuelled by fear, hatred and despair.
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* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: [[spoiler: Spike slashes her cheek in anger]]
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* PhysicalScarsPsychologicalScars: Twilight [[spoiler: when Spike slashes her cheek in anger]]
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother: Twilight. [[spoiler: Even if she doesn't think herself his mother at first]]
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* AbsurdlyYouthfulMother: Twilight. [[spoiler: Even if she doesn't think herself his a mother at first]]
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* FantasticRacism: The Canterlot elite are very rude to Young Spike simply because he is a dragon. Their treatment gets worse after he [[spoiler:calls Twilight his mommy]].
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Twilight ignores Spike's first attempts at discussing his dreams and later it is who Spike refuses to talk to her.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: Twilight ignores Spike's first attempts at discussing his dreams and later it is who Spike who refuses to talk to her.
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* TragicMonster: [[spoiler: Spike]]
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* The Bully: Young Spike is bullied by Canterlot colts for being a dragon.
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dSana's art page can be found [[http://dsana.deviantart.com/ here]], and the comic itself can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/The-Shadow-Shard-Page-1-688636365 here]].
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dSana's art page can be found [[http://dsana.deviantart.com/ here]], and the comic itself can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/The-Shadow-Shard-Page-1-688636365 here]].here]].
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!!''The Shadow Shard'' provides examples of:
* AlmostKiss: While speaking alone Starlight and Sunburst slowly lean in and nearly kiss until [[MomentKiller Spike interrupts them]]. [[spoiler:Subverted when their second attempt is successful.]]
* BigBad: [[spoiler:King Sombra]]
* DeflectorShields: Just like [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E3AFlurryOfEmotions in the series]], Flurry Heart puts a bubble shield around herself when she's scared.
* NightmareSequence: Present throughout the comic due to [[spoiler:Sombra haunting everyone's dreams and manipulating their memories via the magic from his horn]].
* ShutUpKiss: [[spoiler:Starlight tells Sunburst to shut up before planting a deep kiss on him.]]
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!!''The Shadow Shard'' provides examples of:
* AlmostKiss: While speaking alone Starlight and Sunburst slowly lean in and nearly kiss until [[MomentKiller Spike interrupts them]]. [[spoiler:Subverted when their second attempt is successful.]]
* BigBad: [[spoiler:King Sombra]]
* DeflectorShields: Just like [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS7E3AFlurryOfEmotions in the series]], Flurry Heart puts a bubble shield around herself when she's scared.
* NightmareSequence: Present throughout the comic due to [[spoiler:Sombra haunting everyone's dreams and manipulating their memories via the magic from his horn]].
* ShutUpKiss: [[spoiler:Starlight tells Sunburst to shut up before planting a deep kiss on him.]]
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An ongoing Fan Webcomic drawn and written by dSana, based off ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''
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An ongoing Fan Webcomic drawn and written by dSana, based off ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic''
dSana's art page can be found [[http://dsana.deviantart.com/ here]], and the comic itself can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/The-Shadow-Shard-Page-1-688636365 here]].
dSana's art page can be found [[http://dsana.deviantart.com/ here]], and the comic itself can be read [[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/The-Shadow-Shard-Page-1-688636365 here]].
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