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* ProductPlacement: There's plenty of free advertising for products Chris likes. For example, Issue 10 features an ad for ''VideoGame/LittleBigPlanet'' and a warning not to buy or download illegal versions of it for the UsefulNotes/{{Wii}} and UsefulNotes/Xbox360, even though they don't exist.
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* ProductPlacement: There's plenty of free advertising for products Chris likes. For example, Issue 10 features an ad for ''VideoGame/LittleBigPlanet'' and a warning not to buy or download illegal versions of it for the UsefulNotes/{{Wii}} MediaNotes/{{Wii}} and UsefulNotes/Xbox360, MediaNotes/Xbox360, even though they don't exist.
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* UnstoppableRage: When Jason Kendrick Howell throws a pickle at Rosechu, she snaps, [[{{Squick}} strips naked, and claws the shit out of his head while face-raping him]].
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* UnstoppableRage: When Jason Kendrick Howell throws a pickle at Rosechu, she snaps, [[{{Squick}} strips naked, and claws the shit out of his head while face-raping him]].him.
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* {{Crossover}}: Of VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog and Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, originally.
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* {{Crossover}}: Of VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog and Franchise/{{Pokemon}}, originally.
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* SuperMode: Ultra Sonichu, based on [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog Super Sonic]]. Colossal Chan, based on the [[Anime/DragonBallGT Super Saiyan 4 transformation.]]
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* SuperMode: Ultra Sonichu, based on [[VideoGame/SonicTheHedgehog [[Franchise/SonicTheHedgehog Super Sonic]]. Colossal Chan, based on the [[Anime/DragonBallGT Super Saiyan 4 transformation.]]
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Sonichu saves Slaweel Ryam's life in episode 20 because "the final blow belongs to Christian." Chris-Chan returned the next issue, had a heart-to-heart talk with Slaweel, learned about her FreudianExcuse, declared she'll never forgive her anyway and [[WishFulfillment beat her up]], [[FateWorseThanDeath paralyzing her in the process]].
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* TheOnlyOneAllowedToDefeatYou: Sonichu saves Slaweel Ryam's life in episode 20 because "the final blow belongs to Christian." Chris-Chan returned the next issue, had a heart-to-heart talk with Slaweel, learned about her FreudianExcuse, declared she'll never forgive and thus has her anyway and [[WishFulfillment beat her up]], [[FateWorseThanDeath paralyzing her in the process]].arrested without lasting harm.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Mary Lee Walsh. Even after her FreudianExcuse (having never been loved herself) is revealed to her adversary, she still beats her into a state of paralysis.
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* WoobieDestroyerOfWorlds: Mary Lee Walsh. Even after In her FinalBattle Slaweel reveals FreudianExcuse (having having never been loved herself) is revealed herself, leading Chris to her adversary, she still beats her into a state of paralysis.sympathize with her.
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* NonhumansLackAttributes: Subverted. Although some scenes portray the title character (and others) as featureless, the author goes out of his way in issue #8 to explain the anatomical details that conceal their genitalia and nipples.
* NonIndicativeName: The Chaotic Combo does not produce chaos on a regular basis. Magi-chan is a psychic, not a mage. Bionic is not a cyborg, an android, or a robot. Collosal-chan is no bigger than Chris-Chan. Super Chris-chan Sonichu is just Chris-chan Sonichu with some wing hairclips on. We still have no idea what Merried Senior Comic is supposed to even mean.
* NonIndicativeName: The Chaotic Combo does not produce chaos on a regular basis. Magi-chan is a psychic, not a mage. Bionic is not a cyborg, an android, or a robot. Collosal-chan is no bigger than Chris-Chan. Super Chris-chan Sonichu is just Chris-chan Sonichu with some wing hairclips on. We still have no idea what Merried Senior Comic is supposed to even mean.
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* NonhumansLackAttributes: NonHumansLackAttributes: Subverted. Although some scenes portray the title character (and others) as featureless, the author goes out of his way in issue #8 to explain the anatomical details that conceal their genitalia and nipples.
* NonIndicativeName: The Chaotic Combo does not produce chaos on a regular basis. Magi-chan is a psychic, not a mage. Bionic is not a cyborg, an android, or a robot.Collosal-chan Collosal Chan is no bigger than Chris-Chan. Super Chris-chan Sonichu is just Chris-chan Sonichu with some wing hairclips on. We still have no idea what Merried Senior Seinor Comic is supposed to even mean.mean.
* NonIndicativeName: The Chaotic Combo does not produce chaos on a regular basis. Magi-chan is a psychic, not a mage. Bionic is not a cyborg, an android, or a robot.
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* OffModel: Despite being one of the few cases where there isn’t a uniform model to begin with, seeing the characters randomly change size or even shape in the same page is very disorienting.
