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* ScheduleSlip: Not even 15 comics in and the author slipped a month worth of updates.
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* HappilyAdopted: All children in Lumi's village are given to the elders for family assignment. Parenthood is a privilege, not a right. Though the [[AllThereInTheManual Info page]] states that the majority of Yersai villages are not based off "TheGiver".
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* HappilyAdopted: All children in Lumi's village are given to the elders for family assignment. Parenthood is a privilege, not a right. Though the [[AllThereInTheManual Info page]] states that the majority of Yersai villages are not based off "TheGiver"."Literature/TheGiver".
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Eyes Of Gold has been renamed to Supernatural Gold Eyes because the trope is for characters with supernatural origins that have gold eyes. It\'s not for anyone who just happens to have them. So, anything that doesn\'t fit the definition or Zero Context Examples will be removed. If the example fits, please put it back with more context.
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* EyesOfGold: Keith
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* CareerKillers: Keith, Lloyd, and the guys who're trying to kill Lumi.
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* ProfessionalKiller: Keith, Lloyd, and the guys who're trying to kill Lumi.
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* HappilyAdopted: All Yersain children are given to the elders for family assignment. Parenthood is a privilege, not a right.
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* HappilyAdopted: All Yersain children in Lumi's village are given to the elders for family assignment. Parenthood is a privilege, not a right. Though the [[AllThereInTheManual Info page]] states that the majority of Yersai villages are not based off "TheGiver".
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* LongestPrologueEver: Averted. The author intended for the prologue to be much, much longer, but he skipped most of it to get to the actual story.
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* ProlongedPrologue: Averted. The author intended for the prologue to be much, much longer, but he skipped most of it to get to the actual story.
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* FlashbackNightmare: Lumi has one.
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* InnocentAliens: The Yersai.
