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* AssholeVictim: Peter's [[CurbStompBattle brutal beating]] of [[spoiler:Devon]] was received this way by readers. Readers initially cheered since he had it coming, but it didn't take long for it to turn to squick and [[{{Woobie}} sympathy.]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Peter's [[CurbStompBattle brutal beating]] of [[spoiler:Devon]] was received this way by readers. Readers initially cheered since he had it coming, but it didn't take long for it to turn to squick and [[{{Woobie}} sympathy.]]
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: Averted with Alexander, who is an exchange student from Prague and a StrangeSyntaxSpeaker, and Christo, who is from Spain and speaks perfect English.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: ''No one'' in this comic is blameless. The only exceptions would be [[BastardBoyfriend Devon]] and [[PhantomThief Alexander]], who the story portrays as straight up antagonists.
* GreyAndGreyMorality: ''No one'' in this comic is blameless. The only exceptions would be [[BastardBoyfriend Devon]] and [[PhantomThief Alexander]], who the story portrays as straight up antagonists.
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* GratuitousForeignLanguage: Averted {{Averted}} with Alexander, who is an exchange student from Prague and a StrangeSyntaxSpeaker, and Christo, who is from Spain and speaks perfect English.
*GreyAndGreyMorality: ''No one'' BlackAndGrayMorality: There's no character in this comic is blameless. The only exceptions would be [[BastardBoyfriend Devon]] the webcomic without some skeletons in the closet, vices, or nasty flaws. However, DomesticAbuser Devon and [[PhantomThief Alexander]], who PhantomThief Alexander are much more antagonistic and morally black than the story portrays as straight up antagonists.rest.
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''[[http://picturesofyou.smackjeeves.com/ Pictures Of You]]'' is a Webcomic written and drawn by Gibson Twist.
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* YaoiGuys: Patrick and Alexander. [[spoiler:Until the latter robs the former.]]
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* FiveManBand: With Andy as TheHero, Christo as TheLancer, Patrick as TheSmartGuy, Peter as TheBigGuy and Wiley as TheChick. Also a music band (except for Christo)
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--> "[[ScoobyDoo Scooby dooby doo]], I see you, smoking marijuana! You're not foolin' me, so share with me, some of that crazy ganja!
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* [[spoiler: WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: Devon does this after he [[DomesticAbuser hits]] Melanie, saying that it's Peter and company's fault he got so angry at her, as well as her own fault for hanging out with them/having a life outside of her boyfriend.]]
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* [[spoiler: WhyDidYouMakeMeHitYou: Devon [[spoiler:Devon does this after he [[DomesticAbuser [[DomesticAbuse hits]] Melanie, saying that it's Peter and company's fault he got so angry at her, as well as her own fault for hanging out with them/having a life outside of her boyfriend.]]
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* CerebusSyndrome: It starts out light and comedic (that is, if you ignore the Prologue) but everything seems to point toward a rather dramatic ending. In this case though, it is planned.
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* CerebusSyndrome: It starts out light and comedic (that is, if you ignore the Prologue) but everything seems to point toward a rather dramatic ending. In this case case, though, it is planned.
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: ''No one'' in this comic is blameless.
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* GreyAndGreyMorality: ''No one'' in this comic is blameless. The only exceptions would be [[BastardBoyfriend Devon]] and [[PhantomThief Alexander]], who the story portrays as straight up antagonists.
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* FillerStrips: Done after every book, in form of guest artists drawing short scenes about the characters to bridge the hiatus.
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* FillerStrips: Done after every book, in the form of guest artists drawing short scenes about the characters to bridge the hiatus.
* FromBadToWorse: [[spoiler:If things weren't disintegrating before, they certainly do after Wiley's suicide]].
** [[spoiler:The incident that was the final nail in the coffin for the group, it was Wiley killing himself]].
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* SanitySlippage: Hinted at during the band's first tour, but comes as kind of a WhamMoment when Wiley shows up for a photo shoot and begins screaming random stuff into the mic. Confirmed when Michelle reads his diary.
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* SanitySlippage: Hinted at during the band's first tour, but comes as kind of a WhamMoment when Wiley shows up for a photo shoot and begins screaming random stuff into the mic. Confirmed when Michelle reads his diary. [[spoiler:It ends with the poor guy jumping off a bridge.]]
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* YaoiGuys: Patrick and Alexander.
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* YaoiGuys: Patrick and Alexander. [[spoiler:Until the latter robs the former.]]
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It tells the tale of farmboy Peter Morris who starts college life and forms a close circle of friends. While he adapts to life in the city, the group struggles with love life, money and the occassional barfight.
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It tells the tale of farmboy Peter Morris who starts college life and forms a close circle of friends. While he adapts to life in the city, the group struggles with love life, money and the occassional occasional barfight.
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* ArtEvolution: While the Art was good from the beginning, the comic turned from black&white to full colour with the beginning of Book Three. And even more notable, when the first draft of the comic was posted.
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Done beautifully with [[spoiler: Chisto and Michelle]]
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Done beautifully with [[spoiler: Chisto and Michelle]]
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* ArtEvolution: While the Art art was good from the beginning, the comic turned from black&white black & white to full colour color with the beginning of Book Three. And even more notable, notably, when the first draft of the comic was posted.
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Done beautifully with[[spoiler: Chisto [[spoiler:Chisto and Michelle]]
* AwLookTheyReallyDoLoveEachOther: Done beautifully with
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* CerebusSyndrome: It starts out light and comedic (That is, if you ignore the Prologue) but everything seems to point towarts a rather dramatic ending. In this case though, it is planned.
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* CerebusSyndrome: It starts out light and comedic (That (that is, if you ignore the Prologue) but everything seems to point towarts toward a rather dramatic ending. In this case though, it is planned.
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* ExtremeDoormat: Melanie acts like this toward Devon, which Michelle eventually [[http://picturesofyou.smackjeeves.com/comics/753712/3-ii-02-tattoo-you-9/ calls her out on it.]]
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* ExtremeDoormat: Melanie acts like this toward Devon, which and Michelle eventually [[http://picturesofyou.smackjeeves.com/comics/753712/3-ii-02-tattoo-you-9/ calls her out on it.]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Peter's [[CurbStompBattle brutal beating]] of [[spoiler: Devon]] was received this way by readers. Readers initially cheered since he had it coming, but it didn't take long for it to turn to squick and [[{{Woobie}} sympathy.]]
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* KickTheSonOfABitch: Peter's [[CurbStompBattle brutal beating]] of [[spoiler: Devon]] [[spoiler:Devon]] was received this way by readers. Readers initially cheered since he had it coming, but it didn't take long for it to turn to squick and [[{{Woobie}} sympathy.]]
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Peter unleashes on of these on [[spoiler: Devon after he finds out he beat the crap out of Melanie.]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Peter hasn't been the same]] ever since.
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* NoHoldsBarredBeatdown: Peter unleashes on one of these on [[spoiler: Devon [[spoiler:Devon after he finds out he beat the crap out of Melanie.]] [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Peter hasn't been the same]] ever since.
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* OhCrap: Peter's reaction when he learns that the woman he slept with [[spoiler: is married]]. This later happens again when Peter, Andy, and Mulligan discover that [[spoiler: Michelle works as a stripper at the club they went to]], and Peter, along with Michelle, suffer this when they find out that Mulligan told Christo before she had a chance to do so herself.
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* OhCrap: Peter's reaction when he learns that the woman he slept with [[spoiler: is [[spoiler:is married]]. This later happens again when Peter, Andy, and Mulligan discover that [[spoiler: Michelle [[spoiler:Michelle works as a stripper at the club they went to]], and Peter, along with Michelle, suffer this when they find out that Mulligan told Christo before she had a chance to do so herself.
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** A few early strips include {{Aesop}}ish diatribes, in narration or [[AuthorTract by characters]] about Patrick's experience being gay, or how Sam changed Peter's perceptions, etc. They wear away as the out of universe real world social climate continued to adjust, and as Twist's writing prowess grew.
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** A few early strips include {{Aesop}}ish diatribes, in narration or [[AuthorTract by characters]] about Patrick's experience being gay, or how Sam changed Peter's perceptions, etc. They wear away as the out of universe out-of-universe real world social climate continued to adjust, and as Twist's writing prowess grew.
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** Reading Gibson Twist's tales about college life can be as entertaining as the comic itself. Also even more {{Foreshadowing}}
* TheReveal: After a lot of foreshadowing, it's finally revealed that [[spoiler: Michelle is a stripper and gets found out by Peter, Andy, and Mulligan.]]
* TheReveal: After a lot of foreshadowing, it's finally revealed that [[spoiler: Michelle is a stripper and gets found out by Peter, Andy, and Mulligan.]]
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** Reading Gibson Twist's tales about college life can be as entertaining as the comic itself. Also even more {{Foreshadowing}}
{{Foreshadowing}}.
* TheReveal: After a lot of foreshadowing, it's finally revealed that[[spoiler: Michelle [[spoiler:Michelle is a stripper and gets found out by Peter, Andy, and Mulligan.]]
* TheReveal: After a lot of foreshadowing, it's finally revealed that
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* StepfordSmiler: Melanie, concerning her relationship with Devon. That is, until [[spoiler: she breaks up with him after he brutally beats her]].
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* StepfordSmiler: Melanie, concerning her relationship with Devon. That is, until [[spoiler: she [[spoiler:she breaks up with him after he brutally beats her]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Oh so much! Peter, as the narrator, constantly hints that the group will fall apart.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Oh so much! Dripping with it. Peter, as the narrator, constantly hints that the group will fall apart. apart.
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* InSeriesNickname: Peter gets known as Slugger early on after taking out a heckler with one punch. This also ends up informing the name of the band: One Inch Punch.
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* InSeriesNickname: Peter gets known as Slugger early on after taking out a heckler with one punch. This also ends up informing It informs the name of the band: band, too: One Inch Punch.
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* TheRant: Reading Gibson Twist's tales about college life can be as entertaining as the comic itself. Also even more {{Foreshadowing}}
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* TheRant: OutOfFocus: Lauren begins to see plot lines more isolated from the larger ensemble, and less screen time, around when Melanie [[spoiler: gets out of her abusive relationship]] and starts hanging around a lot more in Book Three.
* TheRant:
** A few early strips include {{Aesop}}ish diatribes, in narration or [[AuthorTract by characters]] about Patrick's experience being gay, or how Sam changed Peter's perceptions, etc. They wear away as the out of universe real world social climate continued to adjust, and as Twist's writing prowess grew.
** Patrick used to write snarky letters to the government.
** Reading Gibson Twist's tales about college life can be as entertaining as the comic itself. Also even more {{Foreshadowing}}
* TheRant:
** A few early strips include {{Aesop}}ish diatribes, in narration or [[AuthorTract by characters]] about Patrick's experience being gay, or how Sam changed Peter's perceptions, etc. They wear away as the out of universe real world social climate continued to adjust, and as Twist's writing prowess grew.
** Patrick used to write snarky letters to the government.
** Reading Gibson Twist's tales about college life can be as entertaining as the comic itself. Also even more {{Foreshadowing}}
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* InSeriesNickname: Peter gets known as Slugger early on after taking out a heckler with one punch. This also ends up informing the name of the band: One Inch Punch.
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* SanitySlippage: Hinted at during the band's first tour, but comes as kind of a WhamMoment when Wiley shows up for a photo shoot and begins screaming random stuff into the mic. Confirmed when Michelle reads his diary.
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* OddCouple: Stoic Patrick and ladie's man Andy
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* OddCouple: Stoic Patrick and ladie's ladies' man Andy
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* CrushFilter: Peter's first sight of Kara leads him directly to envisioning them waltzing together in formal wear.
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* BerserkButton: Peter pushes Mulligan's when he calls a gentleman's club a "nudie bar." [[http://picturesofyou.smackjeeves.com/comics/802013/3-ii-04-dancing-queen-3/ Those girls are dancers.]]
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* {{Casanova}} Andy.
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* {{Casanova}} TheCasanova: Andy.
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* ArtEvolution: While the Art was good from the beginning, the comic turned from black&white to full colour with the beginning of Book Three.
** And even more notable, when the first draft of the comic was posted...
** And even more notable, when the first draft of the comic was posted...
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* MoralEventHorizon: Devon crossed it with [[spoiler: hitting Melanie]]
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* TheStoner: Pretty much all the guys in the main cast, although they are far from being [[{{Buttmonkey}} Buttmonkeys]]
* TheWoobie: Melanie. On the very rare occasion, Patrick.
* TheWoobie: Melanie. On the very rare occasion, Patrick.
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* TheStoner: Pretty much all the guys in the main cast, although they are far from being [[{{Buttmonkey}} Buttmonkeys]]
* TheWoobie: Melanie. On the very rare occasion, Patrick.Buttmonkeys]].
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* SassyBlackWoman: Kara
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* SassyBlackWoman: KaraKara.
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* SlapSlapKiss: Sums up most of Christo's and Michelle's relationship
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* SlapSlapKiss: Sums up most of Christo's and Michelle's relationshiprelationship.
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* StraightGay: [[spoiler: Patrick]]
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* StraightGay: [[spoiler: Patrick]]Patrick]].
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* YaoiGuys: Patrick and Alexander
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* YaoiGuys: Patrick and AlexanderAlexander.