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* ChristmasEpisode: The comic had a Christmas side story started in the 2022 holiday season, started [[https://www.deviantart.com/dsana/art/Hearth-s-Warming-Eve-Special-Page-01-941034957 here]]
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* MismatchedEyes: Lullaby has [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Heterochromia_iridum Heterochromia iridum]], and thus has one blue eye and one green eye.
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* ShutUpKirk: [[spoiler:When Tempest tries to end her relationship with Thistle, stating what she is seeing now is the real her, Thistle tries to assure her she has changed and tells her the crystal she is wearing is just influencing her. Tempest silences her with a brief kiss and tells her the crystal didn't make her do that, she is making her own choices.]]
* ShutUpKiss: [[spoiler:When Thistle tries to tell Tempest the crystal she is wearing is influencing her and isn't really her, Tempest walks forward and kisses her, silencing her, and stating it was her own choice to do so.]]
* ShutUpKiss: [[spoiler:When Thistle tries to tell Tempest the crystal she is wearing is influencing her and isn't really her, Tempest walks forward and kisses her, silencing her, and stating it was her own choice to do so.]]
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: Thistle told Tempest (while the latter is BrainwashedAndCrazy) that she wants Tempest to be happy as she really is, with or without her.
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* AncientArtifact: Thunderstone found by [[spoiler: Fireweed]] in the ancient [[spoiler: DragonHoard ]]
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* AncientArtifact: Thunderstone found by [[spoiler: Fireweed]] [[spoiler:Fireweed]] in the ancient [[spoiler: DragonHoard ]][[spoiler:DragonHoard]].
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone - Tempest upon realising she has traumatized Lullaby and is responsible for [[spoiler: Thistle's Papa - Winter Rye's death ]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone - MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Tempest upon realising she has traumatized Lullaby and is responsible for [[spoiler: Thistle's [[spoiler:Thistle's Papa - Winter Rye's death ]]death]].
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Even after an OfficialKiss takes place between [[spoiler:Tempest and Thistle]], the tension remains unresolved [[spoiler: until much later]]
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* WeatherDissonance: The weather is erratic and can change from blizzard to sunny day or storm thanks to the [[WeatherControlMachineThunderstone]] Thunderstone]].
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An ongoing FanWebcomic {{Fan Webcomic|s}} drawn and written by dSana, creator of ''Webcomic/TheShadowShard'', based off ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' and ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyTheMovie2017''.
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* WouldHurtAChild: Rust’s EstablishingCharacterMoment has him threaten to beat up Lullaby simply because he thought she was lying about being lost. And later, after Thistle [[spoiler:betrays Rust and throws a bottle of poison into his face]], he threatens Lullaby with a knife if she [[spoiler:doesn't bring him the antidote]].
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* WouldHurtAChild: Rust’s EstablishingCharacterMoment has him threaten to beat up Lullaby simply because he thought she was lying about being lost. And later, after Thistle [[spoiler:betrays Rust and throws a bottle of poison into his face]], he threatens Lullaby with a knife if she [[spoiler:doesn't bring him the antidote]].antidote]].
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Even after an OfficialKiss takes place between [[spoiler:Tempest and Thistle]], the tension remains unresolved [[spoiler: until nuch later]]
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* UnresolvedSexualTension: Even after an OfficialKiss takes place between [[spoiler:Tempest and Thistle]], the tension remains unresolved [[spoiler: until nuch much later]]
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* WeatherDissonance: weather is quickly changing thanks to the [[WeatherControlMachine Thunderstone]]
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* AncientArtifact: Thunderstone found by [[spoiler: Fireweed]] in the ancient [[spoiler: DragonHoard ]]
* BattleInTheRain - it starts to rain when Tempest faces vangeful [[spoiler:Fireweed]] in the battle.
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* ClipItsWings: One of Lullaby's wings was fractured and didn't heal properly. Rust Wing had[[spoiler: both of his wings crushed]] by Tempest in cold blood.
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* ClipItsWings: One of Lullaby's wings was fractured and didn't heal properly. Rust Wing had[[spoiler: both had [[spoiler:both of his wings crushed]] by Tempest in cold blood.
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* SexyDiscretionShot: [[spoiler:After Tempest and Thistle put Lulu to bed, the two of them go into another room and begin making out with each other, both heavily blushing. Once Tempest starts to kiss Thistle on the neck, only their outlines are shown, implying the two are doing more together.]]
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* HappilyAdopted: Lullaby Dusk gets pretty much adopted by Thistle and Tempest [[spoiler:and gradually starts to address them both as "mommy"]].
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* HappilyAdopted: Lullaby Dusk gets pretty much adopted by Thistle and Tempest [[spoiler:and gradually starts to address them both as "mommy"]]."mommy" and "mom"]].
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* ChildrenAreInnocent: Lullaby innocently states that [[spoiler:she thought Tempest and Thistle were going to get married, since they are living together now and she has seen the two of them kiss a lot]].
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* EyepatchOfPower: After Lullaby looked through some of Thistle's old picture books, she took a liking to pirates and had one of her eyes covered by gauze (though both of her eyes are uninjured).
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[[spoiler:-->'''Rusty''': Hahaha... I wonder if she grows up to be... just like YOU?]]
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* ForcefulKiss: [[spoiler:Thistle reveals her feelings for Tempest by surprising her with a kiss on the lips. Though surprised by this, Tempest quickly kisses her back, turning it into an OfficialKiss between them. Tempest still shoves Thistle away from her shortly after returning the kiss though, and tells her it won’t work between them.]]
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* FriendsWithBenefits: [[spoiler: Thistle and Tempest became this soon after reaching Thistle's cottage.]]
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* NoHoldsBarBeatdown: [[spoiler:Tempest lands one on Rust Wing after he kidnaps Lullaby.]]
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