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Freddy and his 3 friends [[ComicRelief Bonnie,]] [[DeadpanSnarker Foxy,]] and [[TheChick Chica]] are all just hanging out at the restaurant when they realize they're under surveillance. They grow curious as to who's watching them and head to the security room[[spoiler:, eager to greet him with friendly smiles.]] They finally confront Michael Schmidt, protagonist of the first game. Bonnie tries to [[spoiler:say hello, but]] Mike is terrified, [[UncannyValley and for good reason]]. After Freddy chops a hole in the door with an ax, he opens it and attempts to befriend him once more...only to find out he [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere got out of dodge]]. And so, they split up to find them, [[spoiler:only for them all to be killed by Mike via shovel until Freddy remained.]] At this point, Freddy seems to be fed up with Mike, and attempts to fight him...only for [[Series/SavedByTheBell 6:00 AM to roll around]] and they settle down to explain the situation. Freddy [[spoiler:doesn't seem to care that he only thought he was a sentient bear, but was really a possessed animatronic, just as long as he gets to entertain the kids.]] Then they step into the back room, where it's revealed that Freddy thinks Mike is a [[OhCrap naked endoskeleton]], and sees fit to [[CruelAndUnusualDeath put him in a Fazbear suit.]]
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Freddy and his 3 friends [[ComicRelief Bonnie,]] [[DeadpanSnarker Foxy,]] and [[TheChick Chica]] are all just hanging out at the restaurant when they realize they're under surveillance. They grow curious as to who's watching them and head to the security room[[spoiler:, room, [[spoiler:,] eager to greet him with friendly smiles.]] They finally confront Michael Schmidt, protagonist of the first game. Bonnie tries to [[spoiler:say hello, but]] Mike is terrified, [[UncannyValley and for good reason]]. After Freddy chops a hole in the door with an ax, he opens it and attempts to befriend him once more...only to find out he [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere got out of dodge]]. And so, they split up to find them, [[spoiler:only for them all to be killed by Mike via shovel until Freddy remained.]] At this point, Freddy seems to be fed up with Mike, and attempts to fight him...only for [[Series/SavedByTheBell 6:00 AM to roll around]] and they settle down to explain the situation. Freddy [[spoiler:doesn't seem to care that he only thought he was a sentient bear, but was really a possessed animatronic, just as long as he gets to entertain the kids.]] Then they step into the back room, where it's revealed that Freddy thinks Mike is a [[OhCrap naked endoskeleton]], and sees fit to [[CruelAndUnusualDeath put him in a Fazbear suit.]]
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* MookHorrorShow: Mike comes off as a slasher villain to the animatronics as he hunts them down one by one and and bashes their heads in.
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* {{Expy}}: Bonnie is very clearly a parody of WesternAnimation/{{Goofy}}.
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* DesignatedVillain: Mike Schmidt is treated as an antagonist, but you can understand his fear.
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* GoshDangItToHeck: Compared to Max's other cartoons, there is NO foul language in this.
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* AccessoryWearingCartoonAnimal: In addition to a new animation style, Max also gives Freddy and his friends new accessories
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** Chica gets her apron as well as a chef's hat [[spoiler: and pizza boobs]].
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An...interesting take on the premise of ''VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys'' by Hotdiggetydemon. You may find the video [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uIUbLF5cJrU here.]]
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An...interesting take on the premise of ''VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys'' by Hotdiggetydemon. [[Creator/MaxGilardi Hotdiggetydemon.]] You may find the video [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uIUbLF5cJrU here.]]
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Freddy and his 3 friends [[ComicRelief Bonnie,]] [[DeadpanSnarker Foxy,]] and [[TheChick Chica]] are all just hanging out at the restaurant when they realize they're under surveillance. They grow curious as to who's watching them and head to the security room[[spoiler:, eager to greet him with friendly smiles.]] They finally confront Michael Schmidt, protagonist of the first game. Bonnie tries to [[spoiler:say hello, but]] Mike is terrified, [[UncannyValley and for good reason]]. After Freddy chops a hole in the door with an ax, he opens it and attempts to befriend him once more...only to find out he [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere got out of dodge]]. And so, they split up to find them, [[spoiler:only for them all to be killed by Mike via shovel until Freddy remained.]] At this point, Freddy seems to be fed up with Mike, and attempts to fight him...only for [[SavedByTheBell 6:00 AM to roll around]] and they settle down to explain the situation. Freddy [[spoiler:doesn't seem to care that he only thought he was a sentient bear, but was really a possessed animatronic, just as long as he gets to entertain the kids.]] Then they step into the back room, where it's revealed that Freddy thinks Mike is a [[OhCrap naked endoskeleton]], and sees fit to [[CruelAndUnusualDeath put him in a Fazbear suit.]]
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Freddy and his 3 friends [[ComicRelief Bonnie,]] [[DeadpanSnarker Foxy,]] and [[TheChick Chica]] are all just hanging out at the restaurant when they realize they're under surveillance. They grow curious as to who's watching them and head to the security room[[spoiler:, eager to greet him with friendly smiles.]] They finally confront Michael Schmidt, protagonist of the first game. Bonnie tries to [[spoiler:say hello, but]] Mike is terrified, [[UncannyValley and for good reason]]. After Freddy chops a hole in the door with an ax, he opens it and attempts to befriend him once more...only to find out he [[ScrewThisImOuttaHere got out of dodge]]. And so, they split up to find them, [[spoiler:only for them all to be killed by Mike via shovel until Freddy remained.]] At this point, Freddy seems to be fed up with Mike, and attempts to fight him...only for [[SavedByTheBell [[Series/SavedByTheBell 6:00 AM to roll around]] and they settle down to explain the situation. Freddy [[spoiler:doesn't seem to care that he only thought he was a sentient bear, but was really a possessed animatronic, just as long as he gets to entertain the kids.]] Then they step into the back room, where it's revealed that Freddy thinks Mike is a [[OhCrap naked endoskeleton]], and sees fit to [[CruelAndUnusualDeath put him in a Fazbear suit.]]
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** [[spoiler:Or not, depending on the ending.]]
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** [[spoiler:Or not, depending on how you interpret the ending.]]
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* AdaptationalHeroism: Freddy and his friends.
** [[spoiler:Or not, depending on the ending.]]
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* DeathByAdaptation: [[spoiler:Mike doesn't fair too well in this version, presumably.]]
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** Averted as according to WordOfGod, Chica literally ''has pizzas for breasts.''
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* NothingIsScarier: The very end of the short takes a turn from the funny to the unsettling. [[spoiler: Is Mike really an endoskeleton? Is Freddy seeing him as an endoskeleton just as he sees himself as a friendly cartoon bear? There are no answers.]]
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* NothingIsScarier: The very end of the short [[MoodWhiplash takes a turn from the funny to the unsettling. unsettling.]] [[spoiler: Is Mike really an endoskeleton? Is Freddy seeing him as an endoskeleton just as he sees himself as a friendly cartoon bear? There are no answers.]]
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''[[{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}} PONY.MOV]]'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic here than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of ''[[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV]]'''s and ''[[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out]]'''s.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''[[{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}} PONY.MOV]]'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic here than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of ''[[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV]]'''s MOV's]] and ''[[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out]]'''s.Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''[[{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}} PONY.MOV]]'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic here than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''[[{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}} PONY.MOV]]'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic here than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} ''[[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] MOV]]'''s and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} ''[[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].Out]]'''s.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''[[{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}} PONY.MOV]]'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''[[{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}} PONY.MOV]]'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic here than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}}'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}}'' ''[[{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}} PONY.MOV]]'' series and ''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}}'' series and ''[[{{https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k}} Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}}'' series and ''[[{{https://www.''[[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k}} com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic than in the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''{{WebAnimation/PONY.MOV}}'' series and '{{https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k Luigi's Day Out}}'. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic than in those videos.
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* LighterAndSofter: Compared to Max Gilardi's other animations, such as the ''{{WebAnimation/PONY.MOV}}'' ''{{WebAnimation/PonyDotMov}}'' series and '{{https://www.''[[{{https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k com/watch?v=4Ma3wcaYV8k}} Luigi's Day Out}}'. Out]]''. For one thing, the characters are much more sympathetic than in those videos.the aforementioned videos. This is somewhat ironic considering that the video's [[{{VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys}} source material]] is darker than that of [[{{WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic}} PONY.MOV's]] and [[{{Franchise/SuperMarioBros}} Luigi's Day Out's]].
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* AccessoryWearingCartoonAnimal: Freddy wears his signature hat and bowtie but also a waistcoat
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* BattleCry: [[spoiler:Freddy]] initiates one when confronting [[spoiler:Mike personally.]]
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* AmericanAccents: The Bonnie, Chica, and Freddy are all given southern accents.
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An...interesting take on the premise of FiveNightsAtFreddys by a ''VideoGame/FiveNightsAtFreddys'' by Hotdiggetydemon. You may find the video [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uIUbLF5cJrU here.]]
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* JumpScare: [[spoiler:Surprisingly [[SubvertedTrope subverted.]] Strange considering the animation's source material. Foxy tries to ward off Mike by screaming in his face, but that was more for self-defense. Freddy's true animatronic form is revealed when lightning crashes near the end, but hints like that have been dropped all over.]]
* LosingYourHead: [[spoiler:Bonnie.]]
* LosingYourHead: [[spoiler:Bonnie.]]
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* [[spoiler:IJustWantToHaveFriends: The whole reason why the crew went after Mike.]]
* NonMammalMammaries: Chica, which is what sets the viewers off in [[BrokenBase whichever direction]].
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* NonMammalMammaries: Chica, which is whatsets can set the viewers off in [[BrokenBase whichever direction]].
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* NothingPersonal: Freddy says something along the lines of this when he puts Mike into one of his replacement suits.
* ShovelStrike: How Mike [[spoiler:knocks out 3 of the animatronics.]]
* ShovelStrike: How Mike [[spoiler:knocks out 3 of the animatronics.]]
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* NothingPersonal: Freddy says something along the lines of this when he puts Mike into one of his replacement suits.
that endoskeletons (or what they perceive to be such) are required to be put in Fazbear suits as per policy.
* ShovelStrike: How Mike[[spoiler:knocks out [[spoiler:dismantles 3 of the animatronics.]]]]
* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Foxy's eyepatch when he removes Chica's bib.
--> '''Foxy:''' Weh-heh-hell, ahoy matey.
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* SomethingElseAlsoRises: Foxy's eyepatch when he removes Chica's bib.
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* UncannyValley: While we as viewers see the characters as...actual characters instead of the monstrosities we otherwise know them as, Mike doesn't get that privilege. We sometimes get a taste of what he's seeing through shadows, lightning, a mirror, and even through his eyes.
* WarCry: [[spoiler:Freddy]] initiates one when confronting [[spoiler:Mike.]]
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* NothingIsScarier: The very end of the short takes a turn from the funny to the unsettling. [[spoiler: Is Mike really an endoskeleton? Is Freddy seeing him as an endoskeleton just as he sees himself as a friendly cartoon bear? There are no answers.]]