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* GroundhogDayLoop: One that exploits the rollback and persistent data mechanics of the UsefulNotes/RenPy game engine.
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* GroundhogDayLoop: One that exploits the rollback and persistent data mechanics of the UsefulNotes/RenPy MediaNotes/RenPy game engine.
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You play as [[MoeAnthropomorphism Time]] and befriend Space, only to encounter a mysterious force, [[BigBad Nil]], that attempts to separate her from you. You must use your ability to travel to different points in time (implemented through unconventional use of the UsefulNotes/RenPy game engine's mechanics) to try to save her.
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You play as [[MoeAnthropomorphism Time]] and befriend Space, only to encounter a mysterious force, [[BigBad Nil]], that attempts to separate her from you. You must use your ability to travel to different points in time (implemented through unconventional use of the UsefulNotes/RenPy MediaNotes/RenPy game engine's mechanics) to try to save her.
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''Her Tears Were My Light'' is a YuriGenre VisualNovel that Creator/NomnomNami made for [=NaNoRenO 2016=].
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''Her Tears Were My Light'' is a YuriGenre VisualNovel that made by Creator/NomnomNami made for [=NaNoRenO 2016=].
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web version available now
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The game can be purchased on itch.io [[https://nomnomnami.itch.io/her-tears-were-my-light here]].
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The game can be purchased played on itch.io [[https://nomnomnami.itch.io/her-tears-were-my-light here]].
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* TheBigDamnKiss: Time confesses her feelings and has one with [[spoiler: Space and/or Nil]], depending on which route you're on.
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* TheBigDamnKiss: Time confesses her feelings and has one with [[spoiler: Space [[spoiler:Space and/or Nil]], depending on which route you're on.
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* BossRemix: While not part of the game itself, the game's soundtrack includes battle theme remixes of [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U_wikE4sfj8 the title theme]], [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEza4Ijab-A Space's theme]], and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PCMImH4IyNw Nil's theme]].
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[[caption-width-right:315:Pictured: Space, [[ProneToTears doing what she does best]].]]
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The game is available for free and can be downloaded [[https://nomnomnami.itch.io/her-tears-were-my-light here]].
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The game is available for free and can be downloaded purchased on itch.io [[https://nomnomnami.itch.io/her-tears-were-my-light here]].
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* AbsoluteCleavage: Nil wears an open coat with no shirt underneath, leaving her chest and belly exposed. Given the game's cutesy art style, this is less {{Fanservice}}y than you'd expect.
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* NavelDeepNeckline: Nil wears an open coat with no shirt underneath, leaving her chest and belly exposed. Given the game's cutesy art style, this is less {{Fanservice}}y than you'd expect.
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* AbsoluteCleavage: Nil wears an open coat with no shirt underneath, leaving her chest and belly exposed. Given the game's cutesy art style, this is less {{Fanservice}}y than you'd expect.
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* AbsoluteCleavage: Nil wears an open coat with no shirt underneath, leaving her chest and belly exposed.
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* AmnesiacLover: Space is this towards Time, due to losing her memories whenever Time resets the timeline. [[spoiler:Time is also this towards Nil, due to Nil erasing Time's memory of their relationship.]]
* AmnesiacResonance: Time and Space cannot remember being together, yet they act as if they already know each other. [[spoiler:Time gets the same feeling when speaking with Nil.]]
* AmnesiacResonance: Time and Space cannot remember being together, yet they act as if they already know each other. [[spoiler:Time gets the same feeling when speaking with Nil.]]
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* CryCute: Space cries to create stars and make herself feel less lonely, which Time finds endearing but also troubling.
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: In the path where you [[spoiler:kiss Space, Nil will stop bothering you when she realizes her actions are making Time upset]].
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: In the path where you [[spoiler:kiss Space, Nil will stop bothering you when she realizes her actions are making Time upset]]. This causes Time to realize there is more to her than meets the eye.
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* PoorCommunicationKills: The cycle of Nil deleting Space and Time bringing her back doesn't stop until Nil takes a moment to explain her motives. The reason she doesn't speak up sooner is because [[spoiler:she secretly hopes that Time will remember her]].
* ProneToTears: Space cries to create stars and make herself feel less lonely, which Time finds endearing but also troubling.
* ProneToTears: Space cries to create stars and make herself feel less lonely, which Time finds endearing but also troubling.
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* IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy: In the path where you [[spoiler:kiss Space, Nil will stop bothering you when she realizes her actions are making Time upset]].
