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* SecretCharacter: Explore the Kero fin mountain enough times and you might unlock the shrines for Wind Spirits and Kero Fin herself. Another random event might allow you to build a shrine for local hill spirit called Tarard Riel. Unlocking any of these requires a fair bit of luck however.
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* SecretCharacter: Explore the Kero fin Fin mountain enough times and you might unlock the shrines for Wind Spirits and Kero Fin herself. Another random event might allow you to build a shrine for local hill spirit called Tarard Riel. Unlocking any of these requires a fair bit of luck however.
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Fixed capitalization and added commas between "however".
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** Played straight however In the endgame of the long game, where you get a large amount of story events and if you fail even one you can't get the best ending. If you built your king/queen well you don't have much to worry about, but even then RNG is in play and can still screw you over for no real reason. The game's manual even [[InvokedTrope encourages]] save scumming to get this part of the game done.
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** Played straight however In straight, however, in the endgame of the long game, where you get a large amount of story events and if you fail even one you can't get the best ending. If you built your king/queen well you don't have much to worry about, but even then RNG is in play and can still screw you over for no real reason. The game's manual even [[InvokedTrope encourages]] save scumming to get this part of the game done.
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Fixed typos: "is strongly-discouragedL a key element" -> "is strongly discouraged, as a key element"
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** Otherwise, this is strongly-discouragedL a key element of success in heroquesting is following the script as closely as possible. Deviate and at best, your champion will simply fail in their endeavor and be booted out of the realm of the Gods, with the quest being labeled a failure. At ''worst'', your champion can wind up throwing off the narrative so much that they wind up lost and wandering in the Gods' domains, which will likely end with their death, or [[FateWorseThanDeath something much worse.]] Obviously, this is also considered a failure. Even in the rare cases where ditching the script manages to work out, your clan will have ''serious'' trepidation over what your effective-rewriting of the myths actually foretells.
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** Otherwise, this is strongly-discouragedL strongly discouraged, as a key element of success in heroquesting is following the script as closely as possible. Deviate and at best, your champion will simply fail in their endeavor and be booted out of the realm of the Gods, with the quest being labeled a failure. At ''worst'', your champion can wind up throwing off the narrative so much that they wind up lost and wandering in the Gods' domains, which will likely end with their death, or [[FateWorseThanDeath something much worse.]] Obviously, this is also considered a failure. Even in the rare cases where ditching the script manages to work out, your clan will have ''serious'' trepidation over what your effective-rewriting of the myths actually foretells.
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Fixed typo: "simply kill Daka" -> "simply kill Daga" (accidentally included this in the edit reason for the previous edit without actually making the change)
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** In the Orlanth and Aroka heroquest, it's possible to simply kill Daka instead of taking the canonical route. This counts as a victory, but your clan will be seriously weirded out.
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** In the Orlanth and Aroka heroquest, it's possible to simply kill Daka Daga instead of taking the canonical route. This counts as a victory, but your clan will be seriously weirded out.
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Fixed typos: "Orlantha and Aroka heroquest" -> "Orlanth and Aroka heroquest", "simply kill Daka" -> "simply kill Daga"
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** In the Orlantha and Aroka heroquest, it's possible to simply kill Daka instead of taking the canonical route. This counts as a victory, but your clan will be seriously weirded out.
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** In the Orlantha Orlanth and Aroka heroquest, it's possible to simply kill Daka instead of taking the canonical route. This counts as a victory, but your clan will be seriously weirded out.
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Fixed duplicate "have": "you have often have a chance" -> "you often have a chance"
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* HonorBeforeReason: Many Orlanthi live and die by this axiom. Luckily, you have often have a chance to [[TakingAThirdOption take a reasonable and honorable third option]] when they bring their problems before the Ring.
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* HonorBeforeReason: Many Orlanthi live and die by this axiom. Luckily, you have often have a chance to [[TakingAThirdOption take a reasonable and honorable third option]] when they bring their problems before the Ring.
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Fixed verb tense: "while the chaos creature eat your clan children" -> "while the chaos creature eats your clan children"
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* HeadInTheSandManagement: A chaos attack event gives you a choice to simply wait until the creature passes your tula rather than attacking it, except that no matter how many times you choose that option the monster would never leave. Instead, the flavor text will mention how you keep waiting while the chaos creature eat your clan children one-by-one until you finally attack it.
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* HeadInTheSandManagement: A chaos attack event gives you a choice to simply wait until the creature passes your tula rather than attacking it, except that no matter how many times you choose that option the monster would never leave. Instead, the flavor text will mention how you keep waiting while the chaos creature eat eats your clan children one-by-one until you finally attack it.
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Removed commas that shouldn't have been there.
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* GuideDangIt: It'll take a lot of experimenting to figure out how to play the first few times unless you have help. The remaster tried to fix this by giving the player a tutorial the first time they play; it does help but there are still a few things like, battle tactics and what ring member stats assist in, that aren't elaborated on.
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* GuideDangIt: It'll take a lot of experimenting to figure out how to play the first few times unless you have help. The remaster tried to fix this by giving the player a tutorial the first time they play; it does help but there are still a few things like, like battle tactics and what ring member stats assist in, in that aren't elaborated on.
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** When a thief is caught trying to take your tribal regalia, you can see an older man pointing at the thief likely yelling something like "That's what you get you sneak!".
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** When a thief is caught trying to take your tribal regalia, you can see an older man pointing at the thief likely yelling something like "That's what you get get, you sneak!".
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Fixed typo: "Should your king/queen finished" -> "Should your king/queen have finished"
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* DevelopersForesight: Should your king/queen finished the crown test but died before the marriage, the epilogue will note this too.
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* DevelopersForesight: Should your king/queen have finished the crown test but died before the marriage, the epilogue will note this too.
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Removed duplicate "your": "best your even your elite combat leaders" -> "best even your elite combat leaders"
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** The Ducks prove themselves time and again as noble warriors who can best your even your elite combat leaders, but even when they earnestly seek alliance, lampooning their efforts is a perfectly valid option.
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** The Ducks prove themselves time and again as noble warriors who can best your even your elite combat leaders, but even when they earnestly seek alliance, lampooning their efforts is a perfectly valid option.
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I've never seen an enemy clan be "destroyed" by raiding, nor does it seem that luck is a factor. If you keep successfully raiding a clan, they relocate. This lets them still participate in the story, but you can only raid neighbors.
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* MyRulesAreNotYourRules: If your clan runs out of people, it's GameOver. If you raid an enemy clan to death, they'll just hire more weaponthanes to defend against you; an enemy clan's destruction is at best a LuckBasedMission and you'll rarely actually manage to take out an enemy clan no matter how hard you beat them into submission.
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* MyRulesAreNotYourRules: If your clan runs out of too low on people, it's GameOver. If you raid an enemy clan to death, repeatedly, they'll just first hire more weaponthanes to defend against you; an you. If you nonetheless continue to successfully raid the same enemy clan's destruction is at best a LuckBasedMission clan, they will eventually pack up and you'll rarely actually manage relocate across the map to take out an enemy clan no matter how hard you beat them into submission.a place too distant for raiding.
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* MyRulesAreNotYourRules: If your clan runs out of people, it's GameOver. If you raid an enemy clan to death, they'll just hire more weaponthanes to defend against you; an enemy clan's destruction is at best a LuckBasedMission and you'll rarely actually manage to take out an enemy clan no matter how hard you beat them into submission.
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* OffTheRails: In the Orlantha and Aroka heroquest, it's possible to simply kill Daka instead of taking the canonical route. This counts as a victory, but your clan will be seriously weirded out.
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* OffTheRails: OffTheRails:
** In the Orlantha and Aroka heroquest, it's possible to simply kill Daka instead of taking the canonical route. This counts as a victory, but your clan will be seriously weirded out.
** In the Orlantha and Aroka heroquest, it's possible to simply kill Daka instead of taking the canonical route. This counts as a victory, but your clan will be seriously weirded out.
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Tropeslashing. Mix And Match is also a disambig now.
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* GenreRoulette / MixAndMatch: a blend of a resource-management SimulationGame and a {{Gamebook}}, with some RPG elements. The game's main designer pitched it as a "storytelling strategy game".
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* GenreRoulette / MixAndMatch: GenreRoulette: a blend of a resource-management SimulationGame and a {{Gamebook}}, with some RPG elements. The game's main designer pitched it as a "storytelling strategy game".
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Per the Administrivia.Sinkhole article, joke fulfillment links are discouraged.
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** There are also the Broos, creatures of Chaos best described as beastmen [[FaceFullOfAlienWingWong with the reproductive cycle of a Xenomorph]]. If they start showing up in decent numbers (or Urox forbid, spawn from your own cattle), [[CaptainObvious it's safe to say you have a Chaos problem on your hands]].
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** There are also the Broos, creatures of Chaos best described as beastmen [[FaceFullOfAlienWingWong with the reproductive cycle of a Xenomorph]]. If they start showing up in decent numbers (or Urox forbid, spawn from your own cattle), [[CaptainObvious it's safe to say you have a Chaos problem on your hands]].hands.
