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* MagnumOpusDissonance: Luczynski considers [[FirstInstallmentWins Phase 1]] to be the only good arc of the entire story due to how much it adheres to his personal vision for the story and believes Phases 2 and 3 to be an open and shut case of SeasonalRot. Nathanoraptor and the readers, on the other hand, view Phase 1 as a weak start to the story and consider Phases 2 and 3 to be [[GrowingTheBeard the point where the story really managed to take off and reach its full potential]].

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* MagnumOpusDissonance: Luczynski considers [[FirstInstallmentWins Phase 1]] to be the only good arc of the entire story due to how much it adheres to his personal vision for the story and believes Phases 2 and 3 to be an open and shut case OpenAndShutCase of SeasonalRot. Nathanoraptor and the readers, on the other hand, view Phase 1 as a weak start to the story and consider Phases 2 and 3 to be [[GrowingTheBeard the point where the story really managed to take off and reach its full potential]].
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* CreativeDifferences: Multiple examples sprouted up between Nathanoraptor and Luczynski over the course of their partnership. See CreatorBacklash and WhatCouldHaveBeen below for further details.

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* HeAlsoDid: Nathanoraptor is one of the writers for the Fanfic/PrehistoricParkExtinctionWorld mythos, and was working on writing ''The Ultimate Wildlife Sanctuary'' concurrently with this story for a while.

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* HeAlsoDid: Nathanoraptor is one of the writers for the Fanfic/PrehistoricParkExtinctionWorld ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkExtinctionWorld'' mythos, and was working on writing ''The Ultimate Wildlife Sanctuary'' concurrently with this story for a while.while.
* HypotheticalCasting: Nathanoraptor has commented that he sees Creator/ScarlettJohansson as Linda Eberhart, Creator/IdrisElba as Kyle Taymor and Creator/DaisyRidley as Alice Denham. He's also quite partial to the idea of Creator/IvanaBaquero as Collete and Creator/NicolaPeltz as Yolanda. He has also found appeal in the idea of casting Creator/TomHolland as Leon Gilbertson and Tim Roth as Nikolai. He even managed to later agree to casting Creator/CharlieHeaton as Drew, Creator/HarryShumJr as Adrian, Creator/ThomasBrodieSangster as Jack, Creator/AlexPettyfer as Will, and Creator/WilTraval as Khatin.

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* AuthorAppeal: Cynthia's name, appearance, and personality were heavily influenced by this on Luczynski's end (understandable considering he's the one who created her). She was named after the Sinnoh region champion from ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' (whom Luczynski has explicitly admitted is an anime character that he's had a crush on in the past), her personality was remarkably similar to that of pre-CharacterDevelopment [[WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon Astrid Hofferson]], and she was a blonde fair skinned girl just like both of them.
** More of this on Luczynski's end also played heavily into multiple names he chose to give to some of the animals (or in the case of a few others, had wanted to give to animals, only for the plans to end up changed) coming from characters in ''Anime/AkameGaKill'' and ''Franchise/TheLionKing''.



** Despite never telling Luczysnki about it or likewise allowing it to be made explicit in the story, Nathanoraptor [[spoiler: still at times considers his original idea of Cynthia and Drew having dated (and undergone a particularly unpleasant breakup) prior to the both of them working at Prehistoric Earth to be canon to some degree or other]].

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** Despite never telling Luczysnki about it or likewise allowing it to be made explicit in the story, Nathanoraptor [[spoiler: still at times considers his original idea of Cynthia and Drew having dated (and undergone a particularly unpleasant breakup) prior to the both of them working at Prehistoric Earth to be canon to some degree or other]].other]].
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** For a good long while, Nathanoraptor didn't have an entirely high opinion of Cynthia as a result of Drew initially trying to push her into being a secondary main character alongside Drew at Jack's (and possibly Leon's) expense. [[spoiler: Quite notably, despite her later getting RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap, she has received no confirmation or guarantee of making the jump to ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'' alongside the rest of the park's 'main cast'.]]

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** For a good long while, Nathanoraptor didn't have an entirely high opinion of Cynthia as a result of Drew initially trying to push her into being a secondary main character alongside Drew at Jack's (and possibly Leon's) expense. [[spoiler: Quite notably, despite her later getting RescuedFromTheScrappyHeap, she has received no confirmation or guarantee of making had to wait several years before being confirmed to successfully make the jump to ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'' alongside the rest of the park's 'main cast'.cast' (who, in contrast, were all automatically accepted for this status right out of the gate).]]
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* ShrugOfGod: Nathanoraptor initially full heartedly accepted [=A-LionGleek's=] suggestion of Charlie Heaton as the HypotheticalCasting for Drew. However, when Nathanoraptor later decided that fellow ''Series/StrangerThings'' cast member Joe Keery would make a better choice of casting for Drew in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'', he notably stated that he didn't really care whether or not anyone chose to allow this same casting choice to apply for the character in Prehistoric Earth. He has similarly made no direct confirmation as to whether or not [[spoiler: Cynthia]] will make the jump to PPR alongside the other 11 'main cast' members.

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* ShrugOfGod: Nathanoraptor initially full heartedly accepted [=A-LionGleek's=] suggestion of Charlie Heaton as the HypotheticalCasting for Drew. However, when Nathanoraptor later decided that fellow ''Series/StrangerThings'' cast member Joe Keery would make a better choice of casting for Drew in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'', he notably stated that he didn't really care whether or not anyone chose to allow this same casting choice to apply for the character in Prehistoric Earth. He has similarly made no direct confirmation as to took at least a full year after the story's completion before making a proper decision on whether or not [[spoiler: Cynthia]] will would ulimately make the jump to PPR alongside the other 11 12 'main cast' members.
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** In relation to the above mentioned instances where Luczynski himself engaged in this trope, Nathanoraptor was both just as relieved as his cowriter that the originally planned sexual assault laden first meeting between Cynthia and Drew never made it into the final product, and has also come to thoroughly regret including Kyle's sarcastic "I've just had to round up a herd of giant reptiles. Black rage doesn't even begin to describe how I'm feeling at the moment," line in light of recent [[UsefulNotes/BlackLivesMatterMovement BlackLivesMatter]] related events. Not even his changing the line to being sarcastic when it was initially planned to be shouted was enough to prevent Nathanoraptor from regretting ever including the line at all. It is for similar reasons that he now also regrets having the neanderthals be fair skinned and relatively good natured and honorable while the cro-magnons were much darker skinned and seemingly antagonistic (especially when, in regards to the latter, he was trying to have them be more TrueNeutral figures rather than outright antagonists).

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** In relation to the above mentioned instances where Luczynski himself engaged in this trope, Nathanoraptor was both just as relieved as his cowriter that the originally planned sexual assault laden first meeting between Cynthia and Drew never made it into the final product, and has also come to thoroughly regret including Kyle's sarcastic "I've just had to round up a herd of giant reptiles. Black rage doesn't even begin to describe how I'm feeling at the moment," line in light of recent [[UsefulNotes/BlackLivesMatterMovement BlackLivesMatter]] UsefulNotes/{{Black Lives Matter|Movement}} related events. Not even his changing the line to being sarcastic when it was initially planned to be shouted was enough to prevent Nathanoraptor from regretting ever including the line at all. It is for similar reasons that he now also regrets having the neanderthals be fair skinned and relatively good natured and honorable while the cro-magnons were much darker skinned and seemingly antagonistic (especially when, in regards to the latter, he was trying to have them be more TrueNeutral figures rather than outright antagonists).



** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of Luczynski]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, Luczynski considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Luczynski also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't Drew and Cynthia due to how he allegedly viewed them as 'just side characters to Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, making the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks becoming too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and Drew in favor of the 'side characters' and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.

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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of Luczynski]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, Luczynski considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Luczynski also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't Drew and Cynthia due to how he allegedly viewed them as 'just side characters to Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, making the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks [[TheyCopiedItSoItSucks becoming too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and Drew in favor of the 'side characters' and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.



* WhatCouldHaveBeen: [[WhatCouldHaveBeen/PrehistoricEarth Has its own page]].

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** Another three-month and counting hiatus occurred between ''The Wavering Gulfs'' and ''Continent Of Blight''. [[JustifiedTrope Both authors have stated this is due to a desire to post all of the chapters for that arc at once.]] Eventually, the chapter was posted on February 22nd.

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** Another three-month and counting hiatus occurred between ''The Wavering Gulfs'' and ''Continent Of Blight''. [[JustifiedTrope Both authors have stated this is was due to a desire to post all of the chapters for that arc at once.]] Eventually, the chapter was posted on February 22nd.
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** Luczynski has spoken out how much he wasn't entirely pleased with what resulted from several incidents of creative differences in which he lost out to Nathanoraptor. In particular, he has expressed displeasure with how his adding in Will and Matt at all (let alone the moment they made their introduction) prevented him from including scenes and events that would have [[CharacterShilling supposedly]] allowed Cynthia's character to be developed better. He also wasn't pleased with how Nathanoraptor altered Spiny the dimetrodon, as Luczynski had been hoping for this story to be an opportunity to promote a separate fic. The fact that he'd also [[HoistByHisOwnPetard vetoed an idea]] from Nathanoraptor involving Spiny that could have easily allowed for more appearances from him despite Luczynski's initial plans for the character now being obviated probably couldn't have helped his mood at the time either. On a less bleak note though, despite it being a case of his own idea getting cut, [[EveryoneHasStandards he was just as relieved as Nathanoraptor was]] that his original plans for Drew to unwillingly [[MarshmallowHell get his head shoved between Cynthia's breasts]] ([[WithFriendsLikeThese and by Cynthia herself no less!]]) didn't make it in after both the beginning of the #MeToo movement and the revelation of Harvey Weinstein's history of sexual predation [[DistancedFromCurrentEvents came about the same year in which Cynthia was introduced in the story]].

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** Luczynski has spoken out how much he wasn't entirely pleased with what resulted from several incidents of creative differences in which he lost out to Nathanoraptor. In particular, he has expressed displeasure with how his adding in Will and Matt at all (let alone the moment they made their introduction) prevented him from including scenes and events that would have [[CharacterShilling supposedly]] allowed Cynthia's character to be developed better. He also wasn't pleased with how Nathanoraptor altered Spiny the dimetrodon, as Luczynski had been hoping for this story to be an opportunity to promote a separate fic. The fact that he'd also [[HoistByHisOwnPetard vetoed an idea]] from Nathanoraptor involving Spiny that could have easily allowed for more appearances from him despite Luczynski's initial plans for the character now being obviated probably couldn't have helped his mood at the time either. On a less bleak note though, despite it being a case of his own idea getting cut, [[EveryoneHasStandards he was just as relieved as Nathanoraptor was]] that his original plans for Drew to unwillingly [[MarshmallowHell get his head shoved between Cynthia's breasts]] ([[WithFriendsLikeThese and by Cynthia herself no less!]]) didn't make it in after both the beginning of the #MeToo #[=MeToo=] movement and the revelation of Harvey Weinstein's history of sexual predation [[DistancedFromCurrentEvents came about the same year in which Cynthia was introduced in the story]].
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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of Luczynski]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, Luczynski considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Luczynski also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't Drew and Cynthia due to how he allegedly viewed them as 'just side characters to Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, making the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks becoming too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.

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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of Luczynski]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, Luczynski considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Luczynski also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't Drew and Cynthia due to how he allegedly viewed them as 'just side characters to Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, making the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks becoming too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] characters' and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.
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* AuthorAppeal: Cynthia's name, appearance, and personality were heavily influenced by this on writer!Drew's end (understandable considering he's the one who created her). She was named after the Sinnoh region champion from ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' (whom writer!Drew has explicitly admitted is an anime character that he's had a crush on in the past), her personality was remarkably similar to that of pre-CharacterDevelopment [[WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon Astrid Hofferson]], and she was a blonde fair skinned girl just like both of them.
** More of this on writer!Drew's end also played heavily into multiple names he chose to give to some of the animals (or in the case of a few others, had wanted to give to animals, only for the plans to end up changed) coming from characters in ''Anime/AkameGaKill'' and ''Franchise/TheLionKing''.
* ContractualObligationProject: Nathanoraptor, shortly after the story ended, theorized that this might have been the case for his co-author Drew Luczynski. Despite initial reservations about posting the Walking With/Prehistoric Park mashup he'd imagined, he decided to do so after demand from readers who'd heard about the story. However, in early 2017, he started to increasingly lose interest in the story due to the fact that he'd had the opportunity to start writing his personal passion project (the separate fanfic Dinosaur King Retold) and felt held back by Prehistoric Earth, which he'd never really been interested in. That being said, he has expressed happiness with how the story turned out (to an extent), is willing to respect the opinions of those who like how it turned out, and is grateful to Nathanoraptor for keeping the story going.

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* AuthorAppeal: Cynthia's name, appearance, and personality were heavily influenced by this on writer!Drew's Luczynski's end (understandable considering he's the one who created her). She was named after the Sinnoh region champion from ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' (whom writer!Drew Luczynski has explicitly admitted is an anime character that he's had a crush on in the past), her personality was remarkably similar to that of pre-CharacterDevelopment [[WesternAnimation/HowToTrainYourDragon Astrid Hofferson]], and she was a blonde fair skinned girl just like both of them.
** More of this on writer!Drew's Luczynski's end also played heavily into multiple names he chose to give to some of the animals (or in the case of a few others, had wanted to give to animals, only for the plans to end up changed) coming from characters in ''Anime/AkameGaKill'' and ''Franchise/TheLionKing''.
* ContractualObligationProject: Nathanoraptor, shortly after the story ended, theorized that this might have been the case for his co-author Drew Luczynski. Despite initial reservations about posting the Walking With/Prehistoric Park mashup he'd imagined, he decided to do so after demand from readers who'd heard about the story. However, in early 2017, he started to increasingly lose interest in the story due to the fact that he'd had the opportunity to start writing his personal passion project (the separate fanfic Dinosaur King Retold) and felt held back by Prehistoric Earth, which he'd never really been interested in. That being said, he has expressed happiness with how the story turned out (to an extent), is willing to respect the opinions of those who like how it turned out, and is grateful to Nathanoraptor for keeping the story going.going at a point where he himself was willing to outright cancel the story entirely.



* CreativeDifferences: Multiple examples sprouted up between Nathanoraptor and Drew over the course of their partnership. See CreatorBacklash and WhatCouldHaveBeen below for further details.

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* CreativeDifferences: Multiple examples sprouted up between Nathanoraptor and Drew Luczynski over the course of their partnership. See CreatorBacklash and WhatCouldHaveBeen below for further details.



** Ultimately the two authors ended up on such divergent sides of where they wanted the story to go[[note]]with writer!Drew wanting it to focus more on exclusively the adventures in the past and difficulty in caring for the animals similarly to an Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' show and also focusing primarily on PE!Drew (and later Cynthia as well) then on any of the 'side characters' and Nathanoraptor wanting it to be more of a character driven drama with elements of Drew's vision that had more of an ensemble style focus on the cast and also simultaneously deconstructed and satirized various conventions of Prehistoric Park fanfiction stories[[/note]] that Drew eventually StoppedCaring and [[CreatorsApathy let Nathanoraptor do most of the heavy lifting]].

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** Ultimately the two authors ended up on such divergent sides of where they wanted the story to go[[note]]with writer!Drew Luczynski wanting it to focus more on exclusively the adventures in the past and difficulty in caring for the animals similarly to an Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' show and also focusing primarily on PE!Drew Drew (and later Cynthia as well) then on any of the 'side characters' and Nathanoraptor wanting it to be more of a character driven drama with elements of Drew's Luczynski's vision that had more of an ensemble style focus on the cast and also simultaneously deconstructed and satirized various conventions of Prehistoric Park fanfiction stories[[/note]] that Drew eventually StoppedCaring and [[CreatorsApathy let Nathanoraptor do most of the heavy lifting]].



** Writer!Drew has spoken out how much he wasn't entirely pleased with what resulted from several incidents of creative differences in which he lost out to Nathanoraptor. In particular, he has expressed displeasure with how his adding in Will and Matt at all (let alone the moment they made their introduction) prevented him from including scenes and events that would have [[CharacterShilling supposedly]] allowed Cynthia's character to be developed better. He also wasn't pleased with how Nathanoraptor altered Spiny the dimetrodon, as writer!Drew had been hoping for this story to be an opportunity to promote a separate fic. The fact that he'd also [[HoistByHisOwnPetard vetoed an idea]] from Nathanoraptor involving Spiny that could have easily allowed for more appearances from him despite writer!Drew's initial plans for the character now being obviated probably couldn't have helped his mood at the time either. On a less bleak note though, despite it being his own idea, [[EveryoneHasStandards he was just as relieved as Nathanoraptor was]] that his original plans for PE!Drew to unwillingly [[MarshmallowHell get his head shoved between Cynthia's breasts]] ([[WithFriendsLikeThese and by Cynthia herself no less!]]) didn't make it in after both the beginning of the #MeToo movement and the revelation of Harvey Weinstein's history of sexual predation [[DistancedFromCurrentEvents came about the same year in which Cynthia was introduced in the story]].
** For his part, Nathanoraptor himself has stated that he is not a big fan of Cynthia. However, despite what some say, he doesn't hate the character; his annoyance was with writer!Drew trying to push her as the #2 main character of the story at the expense of other characters that Nathanoraptor planned to be important pieces of the ensemble but were considered 'just side characters' by writer!Drew. And on the subject of Spiny the dimetrodon, he has also admitted to really disliking the version of Spiny, Lubbock, and Howler's misadventure that appeared in the final product due to writer!Drew vetoing the version Nathanoraptor himself had wanted (and considered to be much better) without explanation.
** Furthermore, Nathanoraptor has also since admitted that Cynthia's introduction was one of multiple factors that have caused him to since largely consider the final episodes of Phase 1 (starting with Cynthia's introductory episode) and the earliest episodes of phase 2 to be his least favorite chapters (with ''The New Rulers'' and ''Life and Death Promised'' in particular being tied for his absolute least favorite chapters in the entire story of all time). As he himself explains, the introduction of Cynthia was, in his eyes, merely the straw that broke the camel's back and only [[FromBadToWorse exacerbated]] problems he was already having with the chapters due to [[RandomEventsPlot a lack of a clear underlying arc to these chapters' events]] due to the animals being rescued in those missions [[CripplingOverspecialization being either aquatic]] or [[ContrivedCoincidence largely confined to within a fairly short distance from each other]], [[SerendipityWritesThePlot being forced by resulting necessity]] to rely on the character interactions and set up of some of their later important arcs in place of the missing underlying arc for the sake of transitions, and [[CreativeDifferences disagreements with Drew over how best to handle Jack (and also, to a more minor extent, Leon), among other characters.]]
** For even further explanation on just why Cynthia's introduction proved so detrimental to the story in Nathanoraptor's eyes, he hadn't necessarily been opposed to the introduction of a brand new character. However, much to his regret, Drew ended up forcing Cynthia into the narrative at a time when the dynamic between all the other already existing and introduced prominent characters still hadn't yet been fully defined and set in stone. And as a result, with the existing dynamic between the already introduced prominent characters still in flux at the time of Cynthia's introduction, and some of the characters having very jarringly been done dirty by writer!Drew long before Cynthia's introduction, the dynamic was only sent in further disarray after Cynthia was introduced and subsequently immediately forced by writer!Drew into a prominent role to the point of being shoved down the readers' throats and into their faces against their wishes and trying to do even more of the planned prominent characters dirty for the sake of propping up Cynthia to the point it started to seem like Cynthia and PE!Drew were the only characters writer!Drew remotely gave a damn about.
** To make matters worse, as described below, writer!Drew also tried to pull all the stops to allow Cynthia and PE!Drew (his personal favorites) to be made basically the sole main stars of the story. To this end, he went so far as to attempt to downplay Alice, Leon, and Jack's prominence and make them irrelevant to the story by having some of their established traits be assimilated by Cynthia (who writer!Drew tried to give both the intended hot-headed and impulsive nature of Jack and PE!Drew as well as Alice's intended role as the confident and assertive woman on the team who'd have been competent enough to even sometimes get the boys out of trouble) and PE!Drew (whom writer!Drew attempted to have assimilate Leon's resident animal expert status). And furthermore, with Cynthia seemingly starting to have the reckless, abrasive, and thrill-seeking personality that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned to be given to PE!Drew, it soon also became clear that writer!Drew was now seemingly trying to undermine Nathanoraptor by having PE!Drew be a straight Nigel Marvin type of character when the character was originally supposed to be a deconstruction/parody of such characters (to the point of his own arc being explicitly planned to be his eventually learning that his reckless tendencies so common in most such characters are ''not'' ok).
** And as if Nathanoraptor hadn't already been given plenty of reason to [[CreatorsPest dislike Cynthia]], he also really hated how her pairing up with Drew turned out. As mentioned above, he had initially been willing to give the character a chance, and had even gone so far as to plan to have her dynamic with PE!Drew be something of a BelligerentSexualTension style pairing. Unfortunately, when the writing for her character ended up out of his hands and entirely writer!Drew's responsibility, the end result proved in Nathanoraptor's eyes to be a very stale and cringeworthy sham of a romance with no proper buildup or development occurring prior to the hookup (which he himself wanted to have occur much later in the story than it did, only to be overruled by writer!Drew), and only the most stereotypical and cringeworthy 'flirty banter' present to serve as the most flimsy of foundations, that he ended up hating to the point that he was thinking '[[StrangledByTheRedString Oh my god, she's supposed to be Drew's love interest!? They have ZERO chemistry!]]' even while only reading the versions of ''The New Rulers'' that writer!Drew had sent to him for editing, refining, and final approval.

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** Writer!Drew Luczynski has spoken out how much he wasn't entirely pleased with what resulted from several incidents of creative differences in which he lost out to Nathanoraptor. In particular, he has expressed displeasure with how his adding in Will and Matt at all (let alone the moment they made their introduction) prevented him from including scenes and events that would have [[CharacterShilling supposedly]] allowed Cynthia's character to be developed better. He also wasn't pleased with how Nathanoraptor altered Spiny the dimetrodon, as writer!Drew Luczynski had been hoping for this story to be an opportunity to promote a separate fic. The fact that he'd also [[HoistByHisOwnPetard vetoed an idea]] from Nathanoraptor involving Spiny that could have easily allowed for more appearances from him despite writer!Drew's Luczynski's initial plans for the character now being obviated probably couldn't have helped his mood at the time either. On a less bleak note though, despite it being a case of his own idea, idea getting cut, [[EveryoneHasStandards he was just as relieved as Nathanoraptor was]] that his original plans for PE!Drew Drew to unwillingly [[MarshmallowHell get his head shoved between Cynthia's breasts]] ([[WithFriendsLikeThese and by Cynthia herself no less!]]) didn't make it in after both the beginning of the #MeToo movement and the revelation of Harvey Weinstein's history of sexual predation [[DistancedFromCurrentEvents came about the same year in which Cynthia was introduced in the story]].
** For his part, Nathanoraptor himself has stated that he is not a big fan of Cynthia. However, despite what some say, he doesn't hate the character; his annoyance was with writer!Drew Luczynski trying to push her as the #2 main character of the story at the expense of other characters that Nathanoraptor planned to be important pieces of the ensemble but were reportedly considered 'just side characters' by writer!Drew. Luczynski. And on the subject of Spiny the dimetrodon, he has also admitted to really disliking the version of Spiny, Lubbock, and Howler's misadventure that appeared in the final product due to writer!Drew Luczynski vetoing the version Nathanoraptor himself had wanted (and considered to be much better) without explanation.
** Furthermore, Nathanoraptor has also since admitted that Cynthia's introduction was one of multiple factors that have caused him to since largely consider the final episodes of Phase 1 (starting with Cynthia's introductory episode) and the earliest episodes of phase 2 to be his least favorite chapters (with ''The New Rulers'' and ''Life and Death Promised'' in particular being tied for his absolute least favorite chapters in the entire story of all time). As he himself explains, the introduction of Cynthia was, in his eyes, merely the straw that broke the camel's back and only [[FromBadToWorse exacerbated]] problems he was already having with the chapters due to [[RandomEventsPlot a lack of a clear underlying arc to these chapters' events]] due to the animals being rescued in those missions [[CripplingOverspecialization being either aquatic]] or [[ContrivedCoincidence largely confined to within a fairly short distance from each other]], [[SerendipityWritesThePlot being forced by resulting necessity]] to rely on the character interactions and set up of some of their later important arcs in place of the missing underlying arc for the sake of transitions, and [[CreativeDifferences disagreements with Drew Luczynski over how best to handle Jack (and also, to a more minor extent, Leon), among other characters.]]
** For even further explanation on just why Cynthia's introduction proved so detrimental to the story in Nathanoraptor's eyes, he hadn't necessarily been opposed to the introduction of a brand new character. However, much to his regret, Drew Luczynski ended up forcing Cynthia into the narrative at a time when the dynamic between all the other already existing and introduced prominent characters still hadn't yet been fully defined and set in stone. And as a result, with the existing dynamic between the already introduced prominent characters still in flux at the time of Cynthia's introduction, and some of the characters having very jarringly been done dirty by writer!Drew Luczynski long before Cynthia's introduction, the dynamic was only sent in further disarray after Cynthia was introduced and subsequently immediately forced by writer!Drew Luczynski into a prominent role to the point of being shoved down the readers' throats and into their faces against their wishes and trying to do even more of the planned prominent characters dirty for the sake of propping up Cynthia to the point it started to seem like Cynthia and PE!Drew Drew were the only characters writer!Drew Luczynski remotely gave a damn about.
** To make matters worse, as described below, writer!Drew Luczynski also tried to pull all the stops to allow Cynthia and PE!Drew Drew (his personal favorites) to be made basically the sole main stars of the story. To this end, he went so far as to attempt to downplay Alice, Leon, and Jack's prominence and make them irrelevant to the story by having some of their established traits be assimilated by Cynthia (who writer!Drew Luczynski tried to give both the intended hot-headed and impulsive nature of Jack and PE!Drew Drew as well as Alice's intended role as the confident and assertive woman on the team who'd have been competent enough to even sometimes get the boys out of trouble) and PE!Drew (whom writer!Drew Luczynski attempted to have assimilate Leon's resident animal expert status). And furthermore, with Cynthia seemingly starting to have the reckless, abrasive, and thrill-seeking personality that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned to be given to PE!Drew, Drew, it soon also became clear that writer!Drew Luczynski was now seemingly trying to undermine Nathanoraptor by having PE!Drew Drew be a straight Nigel Marvin type of character when the character was originally supposed to be a deconstruction/parody of such characters (to the point of his own arc being explicitly planned to be his eventually learning that his reckless tendencies so common in most such characters are ''not'' ok).
** And as if Nathanoraptor hadn't already been given plenty of reason to [[CreatorsPest dislike Cynthia]], he also really hated how her pairing up with Drew turned out. As mentioned above, he had initially been willing to give the character a chance, and had even gone so far as to plan to have her dynamic with PE!Drew Drew be something of a BelligerentSexualTension style pairing. Unfortunately, when the writing for her character ended up out of his hands and entirely writer!Drew's Luczynski's responsibility, the end result proved in Nathanoraptor's eyes to be a very stale and cringeworthy sham of a romance with no proper buildup or development occurring prior to the hookup (which he himself wanted to have occur much later in the story than it did, only to be overruled by writer!Drew), Luczynski), and only the most stereotypical and cringeworthy 'flirty banter' present to serve as the most flimsy of foundations, that he ended up hating to the point that he was thinking '[[StrangledByTheRedString Oh my god, she's supposed to be Drew's love interest!? They have ZERO chemistry!]]' even while only reading the versions of ''The New Rulers'' that writer!Drew Luczynski had sent to him for editing, refining, and final approval.



** Nathanoraptor has also admitted that he really didn't like how Drew handled Alice, Linda, and Colette in the chapters that unfolded before Cynthia's introduction. Alice's characterization in ''New Beginnings'' as an incredibly nervous young woman during her earliest significant scenes in the story made him cringe due to how she was supposed to have already had plenty of prior experience with various dangerous modern-day animals, not to mention the fact that this characterization jarringly clashed with his planned characterization of her as an unflappable and levelheaded figure that she ended up thankfully having throughout the entire remainder of the story. In regards to Linda, Nathanoraptor took umbrage to how writer!Drew left her blatantly LockedOutOfTheLoop on crucial information [[note]] specifically, just what sort of animals were supposed to be coming back to the park over the course of the missions [[/note]] during ''Devils of the Deep'' and unwittingly made her seem incompetent at her own job as chief veterinarian [[note]] specifically, she ended up needing Drew's assistance to figure out a solution to a problem that she logically should have been smart enough to figure out how to take care of herself. And if it hadn't been for Nathanoraptor managing to notice in time to intervene, writer!Drew also very nearly had Khatin do a routine checkup on Squishy the anomalocaris despite such an activity being Linda's own job to do as chief veterinarian (though in all fairness, this particular element has since been admitted to have been an honest mistake on writer!Drew's part due to him having had trouble remembering all the characters and their positions at the time and had legitimately ended up accidentally thinking that Khatin was one of the vets) [[/note]]. And as for Colette, Nathanoraptor was understandably not amused when, in what appeared to be ''blatant disregard'' for Colette's planned characterization he'd explicitly told writer!Drew about, writer!Drew chose to try to write her in ways that would frame her as a stereotypical one dimensional AlphaBitch instead of the ActionGirl JerkWithAHeartOfGold she was intended to be. Likewise, Nathanoraptor has expressed regret that Colette ended up also being criminally underutilized as a result of the additional problems that arose after Cynthia's introduction.
** In relation to the above mentioned instances where writer!Drew himself engaged in this trope, Nathanoraptor was both just as relieved as Drew that the originally planned sexual assault laden first meeting between Cynthia and Drew never made it into the final product, and has also come to thoroughly regret including Kyle's sarcastic "I've just had to round up a herd of giant reptiles. Black rage doesn't even begin to describe how I'm feeling at the moment," line in light of recent BlackLivesMatter related events. Not even his changing the line to being sarcastic when it was initially planned to be shouted was enough to prevent Nathanoraptor from regretting ever including the line at all. It is for similar reasons that he now also regrets having the neanderthals be fair skinned and relatively good natured and honorable while the cro-magnons were much darker skinned and seemingly antagonistic (especially when, in regards to the latter, he was trying to have them be more TrueNeutral figures rather than outright antagonists).
** Nathanoraptor has also expressed regret for his reasons behind choosing not to go through with (or even tell writer!Drew about) an idea he had regarding a potential past history between PE!Drew and Cynthia. Nathanoraptor had originally considered having the two be ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriend from a relationship they'd both had together prior to their working at Prehistoric Earth that had ended when one of them broke the other's heart. Nathanoraptor eventually chose at the time not to go through with the idea because he felt it would be too much of a coincidence. However, he has since realized that he was nitpicking too much, noting in particular that the readers would have gone with it perfectly fine without questioning it too much, and that sometimes the story has to come first (regardless of how overly convenient some elements might be in context).
** As stated above, Nathanoraptor considers ''The New Rulers'' and ''Life and Death Promised'' to be his least favorite chapters of all time. In the case of the former, it's because of how Cynthia's introduction caused too many subsequent problems as well as exacerbated problems that were already present prior to her introduction. And in the case of the latter, it's a mixture of the 'episode's' structure not quite working all that well in his eyes, some of the jokes (one of which he himself wrote) being rather embarrassing attempts at comedy, the meta subplot about the park staff 'discussing future plotlines' feeling more irritating than humorous, the entire thing proving a rather unsatisfactory resolution to Leon and Jack's arc together involving their past antagonism and later ending up working to get out of suspension from active rescue mission work, and the staff meeting (despite including a few funny lines) not really adding anything to the story apart from a few details that readers would have potentially already guessed and a single plot point that ended up getting anticlimactically resolved at the very end of the 'episode'. He was also not a big fan of the plot point of Leon sneaking through the portal to accompany PE!Drew and Jack on unauthorized leave.

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** Nathanoraptor has also admitted that he really didn't like how Drew Luczynski handled Alice, Linda, and Colette in the chapters that unfolded before Cynthia's introduction. Alice's characterization in ''New Beginnings'' as an incredibly nervous young woman during her earliest significant scenes in the story made him cringe due to how she was supposed to have already had plenty of prior experience with various dangerous modern-day animals, not to mention the fact that this characterization jarringly clashed with his planned characterization of her as an unflappable and levelheaded figure that she ended up thankfully having throughout the entire remainder of the story. In regards to Linda, Nathanoraptor took umbrage to how writer!Drew Luczynski left her blatantly LockedOutOfTheLoop on crucial information [[note]] specifically, just what sort of animals were supposed to be coming back to the park over the course of the missions [[/note]] during ''Devils of the Deep'' and unwittingly made her seem incompetent at her own job as chief veterinarian [[note]] specifically, she ended up needing Drew's assistance to figure out a solution to a problem that she logically should have been smart enough to figure out how to take care of herself. And if it hadn't been for Nathanoraptor managing to notice in time to intervene, writer!Drew Luczynski also very nearly had Khatin do a routine checkup on Squishy the anomalocaris despite such an activity being Linda's own job to do as chief veterinarian (though in all fairness, this particular element has since been admitted to have been an honest mistake on writer!Drew's Luczynski's part due to him having had trouble remembering all the characters and their positions at the time and had legitimately ended up accidentally thinking that Khatin was one of the vets) [[/note]]. And as for Colette, Nathanoraptor was understandably not amused when, in what appeared to be ''blatant disregard'' for Colette's planned characterization he'd explicitly told writer!Drew Luczynski about, writer!Drew Luczynski chose to try to write her in ways that would frame her as a stereotypical one dimensional AlphaBitch instead of the ActionGirl JerkWithAHeartOfGold she was intended to be. Likewise, Nathanoraptor has expressed regret that Colette ended up also being criminally underutilized as a result of the additional problems that arose after Cynthia's introduction.
** In relation to the above mentioned instances where writer!Drew Luczynski himself engaged in this trope, Nathanoraptor was both just as relieved as Drew his cowriter that the originally planned sexual assault laden first meeting between Cynthia and Drew never made it into the final product, and has also come to thoroughly regret including Kyle's sarcastic "I've just had to round up a herd of giant reptiles. Black rage doesn't even begin to describe how I'm feeling at the moment," line in light of recent BlackLivesMatter [[UsefulNotes/BlackLivesMatterMovement BlackLivesMatter]] related events. Not even his changing the line to being sarcastic when it was initially planned to be shouted was enough to prevent Nathanoraptor from regretting ever including the line at all. It is for similar reasons that he now also regrets having the neanderthals be fair skinned and relatively good natured and honorable while the cro-magnons were much darker skinned and seemingly antagonistic (especially when, in regards to the latter, he was trying to have them be more TrueNeutral figures rather than outright antagonists).
** Nathanoraptor has also expressed regret for his reasons behind choosing not to go through with (or even tell writer!Drew Luczynski about) an idea he had regarding a potential past history between PE!Drew Drew and Cynthia. Nathanoraptor had originally considered having the two be ex-boyfriend and ex-girlfriend from a relationship they'd both had together prior to their working at Prehistoric Earth that had ended when one of them broke the other's heart. Nathanoraptor eventually chose at the time not to go through with the idea because he felt it would be too much of a coincidence. However, he has since realized that he was nitpicking too much, noting in particular that the readers would have gone with it perfectly fine without questioning it too much, and that sometimes the story has to come first (regardless of how overly convenient some elements might be in context).
** As stated above, Nathanoraptor considers ''The New Rulers'' and ''Life and Death Promised'' to be his least favorite chapters of all time. In the case of the former, it's because of how Cynthia's introduction caused too many subsequent problems as well as exacerbated problems that were already present prior to her introduction. And in the case of the latter, it's a mixture of the 'episode's' structure not quite working all that well in his eyes, some of the jokes (one of which he himself wrote) being rather embarrassing attempts at comedy, the meta subplot about the park staff 'discussing future plotlines' feeling more irritating than humorous, the entire thing proving a rather unsatisfactory resolution to Leon and Jack's arc together involving their past antagonism and later ending up working to get out of suspension from active rescue mission work, and the staff meeting (despite including a few funny lines) not really adding anything to the story apart from a few details that readers would have potentially already guessed and a single plot point that ended up getting anticlimactically resolved at the very end of the 'episode'. He was also not a big fan of the plot point of Leon sneaking through the portal to accompany PE!Drew Drew and Jack on unauthorized leave.



** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of writer!Drew]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, writer!Drew considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Writer!Drew also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't PE!Drew and Cynthia due to how he personally viewed them as 'just side characters to PE!Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving PE!Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of PE!Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on PE!Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, making the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks becoming too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and PE!Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.
** In relation to what writer!Drew has recently stated in the retrospective, Nathanoraptor has gone on to address what his former co-writer has said. And while he defends his decision to have Sharptooth become an antihero instead of remain an antagonist as well as be more like a confused and antisocial GrumpyOldMan animal (since he felt that writer!Drew's plans would have made Sharptooth seem too anthropomorphic and out of place compared to all the other more realistic animals), the smuggling operation's existence in the story (since it was intended to represent the 'bad side' of a symbolic clash between the good and bad aspects of human nature in general rather than a straight ShoutOut to ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom''), and the way ''Nightmare Labyrinthine'' ended up unfolding (since his intention was for it to be a homage to ''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}'' and Creator/RayHarryhausen style kaiju movies, not a straight up ripoff of ''Film/JurassicWorld''), and also admits that writer!Drew may have been a bit harsher than necessary, there are a few things that he's admitted that writer!Drew made good points on and that he himself would have done differently if he were to rewrite the entire story all over again:
*** While he does defend his removing Thanatos from PE!Drew's animal partner roster due to still believing that letting him remain there would have made PE!Drew seem too much like TheAce, he does admit that the concept of animal partners for the staff wasn't utilized and explored to its full potential and that he hopes to do this idea better when its revisited in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined''.
*** While he reiterates that a planned scene that writer!Drew vetoed would have allowed for the progression of the idea of [[GentleGiantSauropod Lightning the argentinosaurus]] [[LargeAndInCharge becoming the leader]] of all the herbivores living in Mesozoic Safaris, Nathanoraptor also admits that, in hindsight, there was a lot of potential story fodder in the 'compatibility issues suffered by all the herbivores living together in the park despite not doing so in their home timelines' plotline that was left criminally unexplored, should have had more done with it, and that he himself miscalculated just how much of a portion of the story the conspiracy plot line would end up taking at the time.
*** He admits that it probably would have worked out better if he'd told writer!Drew about the idea of Cynthia being PE!Drew's ex girlfriend from before they both started working for Prehistoric Earth instead of just dismissing it, as this would have potentially allowed for more interesting story opportunities involving her and a better dynamic between her and the other characters. And in the process, he reiterates that he never hated the character.
*** He admits that writer!Drew's idea of Martha suffering from PTSD did seem like a good idea, but felt that there was nothing he could really do with the idea due to how close to the finale Martha's rescue occurred within the story itself. He nonetheless hopes to maybe incorporate this idea in some fashion in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined''. He also very much wishes that he could have at least been told by writer!Drew at some point about writer!Drew's idea of a smilodon named Simba being amongst the roster and ending up gruesomely killing another rescued smilodon.

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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of writer!Drew]]. Luczynski]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, writer!Drew Luczynski considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Writer!Drew Luczynski also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't PE!Drew Drew and Cynthia due to how he personally allegedly viewed them as 'just side characters to PE!Drew's Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving PE!Drew Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of PE!Drew]] Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on PE!Drew).Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, making the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks becoming too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and PE!Drew Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.
** In relation to what writer!Drew has recently Luczynski stated in the retrospective, Nathanoraptor has gone on to address what his former co-writer has said. And while he defends his decision to have Sharptooth become an antihero instead of remain an antagonist as well as be more like a confused and antisocial GrumpyOldMan animal (since he felt that writer!Drew's Luczynski's plans would have made Sharptooth seem too anthropomorphic and out of place compared to all the other more realistic animals), the smuggling operation's existence in the story (since it was intended to represent the 'bad side' of a symbolic clash between the good and bad aspects of human nature in general rather than a straight ShoutOut to ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom''), and the way ''Nightmare Labyrinthine'' ended up unfolding (since his intention was for it to be a homage to ''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}'' and Creator/RayHarryhausen style kaiju movies, not a straight up ripoff of ''Film/JurassicWorld''), and also admits that writer!Drew Luczynski may have been a bit harsher than necessary, there are a few things that he's admitted that writer!Drew his former co-writer made good points on and that he himself would have done differently if he were to rewrite the entire story all over again:
*** While he does defend his removing Thanatos from PE!Drew's Drew's animal partner roster due to still believing that letting him remain there would have made PE!Drew Drew seem too much like TheAce, he does admit that the concept of animal partners for the staff wasn't utilized and explored to its full potential and that he hopes to do this idea better when its revisited in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined''.
*** While he reiterates that a planned scene that writer!Drew Luczynski himself vetoed would have allowed for the progression of the idea of [[GentleGiantSauropod Lightning the argentinosaurus]] [[LargeAndInCharge becoming the leader]] of all the herbivores living in Mesozoic Safaris, Nathanoraptor also admits that, in hindsight, there was a lot of potential story fodder in the 'compatibility issues suffered by all the herbivores living together in the park despite not doing so in their home timelines' plotline that was left criminally unexplored, should have had more done with it, and that he himself miscalculated just how much of a portion of the story the conspiracy plot line would end up taking at the time.
*** He admits that it probably would have worked out better if he'd told writer!Drew Luczynski about the idea of Cynthia being PE!Drew's Drew's ex girlfriend from before they both started working for Prehistoric Earth instead of just dismissing it, as this would have potentially allowed for more interesting story opportunities involving her and a better dynamic between her and the other characters. And in the process, he reiterates that he never hated the character.
*** He admits that writer!Drew's Luczynski's idea of Martha suffering from PTSD did seem like a good idea, but felt that there was nothing he could really do with the idea due to how close to the finale Martha's rescue occurred within the story itself. He nonetheless hopes to maybe incorporate this idea in some fashion in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined''. He also very much wishes that he could have at least been told by writer!Drew Luczysnki at some point (before the story was already finished) about writer!Drew's the idea Luczynski had of a smilodon named Simba being amongst the roster and ending up gruesomely killing another rescued smilodon.



*** Nathanoraptor also agrees that the romance aspects of the story did take up a lot more focus of the story than they probably should have been allowed; particularly since they did admittedly somewhat end up coming at the expense of developing both the conspiracy as well as some of the character arcs that didn't involve romance (such as PE!Drew's PTSD from his brief marooning in the post KT-event Cretaceous landscape). However, he also makes it clear that, if he were to do the entire story all over again, he wouldn't remove them. Rather, he would try to balance them out more evenly with the other aspects of the story.

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*** Nathanoraptor also agrees that the romance aspects of the story did take up a lot more focus of the story than they probably should have been allowed; particularly since they did admittedly somewhat end up coming at the expense of developing both the conspiracy as well as some of the character arcs that didn't involve romance (such as PE!Drew's Drew's PTSD from his brief marooning in the post KT-event Cretaceous landscape). However, he also makes it clear that, if he were to do the entire story all over again, he wouldn't remove them. Rather, he would try to balance them out more evenly with the other aspects of the story.



* CreatorsApathy: As Drew Luczynski himself stated in the following comments he made in the review section once the epilogue was posted and the story was complete:

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* CreatorsApathy: As Drew Luczynski himself stated in the following comments he made in the review section once the epilogue was posted and the story was complete:



** Writer!Drew had this opinion about Leon, admitting to uncertainty as to why; and he also later clarified that he didn't actually hate Leon - simply he was angry at how the readership [[EnsembleDarkHorse became obsessed with the character]]. Some have speculated that Drew's disgruntlement with Leon was why Cynthia was introduced. While he enjoyed writing for Jack, writer!Drew was uneasy in the character's ability to carry a story on his own (and also Leon's) and had to be convinced by Nathanoraptor to give him a bigger role in Phase Two. He also later admitted that he really didn't appreciate how Jack and Leon both became an EnsembleDarkHorse in the eyes of the readers at the expense of PE!Drew.
** Writer!Drew also had great difficulty at the time figuring out how to adequately balance out an ensemble cast as well as in figuring out to properly write female characters, eventually drastically improving on both fronts over the course of writing his later work ''Dinosaur King Retold''. Nathanoraptor has revealed that Drew would often have difficulty keeping track of the characters - for example, on two separate occasions, he had Khatin doing a check-up on an injured animal because he had legitimately thought that Khatin was one of the vets. The fact that writer!Drew has also since been revealed to have largely viewed the intended ensemble cast as 'merely side characters to Cynthia and PE!Drew's story' doesn't help.

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** Writer!Drew Luczynski had this opinion about Leon, admitting to uncertainty as to why; and though he also later clarified that he didn't actually hate Leon - simply he was merely angry at how the readership [[EnsembleDarkHorse became obsessed with the character]]. Some have speculated that Drew's Luczynski's disgruntlement with Leon was why Cynthia was introduced. introduced; a speculation that later ended up confirmed to be true. While he enjoyed writing for Jack, writer!Drew Luczynski was also uneasy in the character's ability to carry a story on his own (and also Leon's) and had to be convinced by Nathanoraptor to give him a bigger role in Phase Two. He also later admitted that he really didn't appreciate how Jack and Leon both became an EnsembleDarkHorse in the eyes of the readers at the expense of PE!Drew.
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** Writer!Drew Furthermore, Luczynski also had great difficulty at the time in figuring out how to adequately balance out an ensemble cast as well as in figuring out to properly write female characters, eventually drastically improving on both fronts over the course of writing his later work ''Dinosaur King Retold''. Nathanoraptor has revealed that Drew Luczynski would often have difficulty keeping track of the characters - for example, on two separate occasions, he had Khatin doing a check-up on an injured animal because he had legitimately thought that Khatin was one of the vets. The fact that writer!Drew Luczynski has also since been revealed to have reportedly largely viewed the intended ensemble cast as 'merely side characters to Cynthia and PE!Drew's Drew's story' doesn't help.



* MagnumOpusDissonance: Writer!Drew considers [[FirstInstallmentWins Phase 1]] to be the only good arc of the entire story due to how much it adheres to his personal vision for the story and believes Phases 2 and 3 to be an open and shut case of SeasonalRot. Nathanoraptor and the readers, on the other hand, view Phase 1 as a weak start to the story and consider Phases 2 and 3 to be [[GrowingTheBeard the point where the story really managed to take off and reach its full potential]].

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* MagnumOpusDissonance: Writer!Drew Luczynski considers [[FirstInstallmentWins Phase 1]] to be the only good arc of the entire story due to how much it adheres to his personal vision for the story and believes Phases 2 and 3 to be an open and shut case of SeasonalRot. Nathanoraptor and the readers, on the other hand, view Phase 1 as a weak start to the story and consider Phases 2 and 3 to be [[GrowingTheBeard the point where the story really managed to take off and reach its full potential]].



** In 2020, Nathanoraptor (with occasional input from writer!Drew) started releasing a 'retrospective' on the story in the days leading up to the day in which the very first chapter of the story was posted; all for the sake of the fic's 4th anniversary.
* OldShame: Due to just how much the story derailed from his original vision, plus how much the fans/readers seemed to have a much higher preference for Nathanoraptor's plans for the story instead of his own, writer!Drew has since expressed a desire to get his own part in the 4th anniversary retrospective finished and his feelings on what happened behind the scenes vented as swiftly as possible so that he can move on, get immediately back to work on Dinosaur King Retold, and forget ever being involved with this story at all. He's even mentioned plans to perhaps someday do a complete rewrite of the story in the way he himself originally wanted it to be due to just how much he's come to hate the version that ended up coming into existence (and liked by seemingly everyone ''but'' him) instead.

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** In 2020, Nathanoraptor (with occasional input from writer!Drew) Luczynski) started releasing a 'retrospective' on the story in the days leading up to the day in which the very first chapter of the story was posted; all for the sake of the fic's 4th anniversary.
* OldShame: Due to just how much the story derailed from his original vision, plus how much the fans/readers seemed to have a much higher preference for Nathanoraptor's plans for the story instead of his own, writer!Drew Luczynski has since expressed a desire to get his own part in the 4th anniversary retrospective finished and his feelings on what happened behind the scenes vented as swiftly as possible so that he can move on, get immediately back to work on Dinosaur King Retold, and forget ever being involved with this story at all. He's even mentioned plans to perhaps someday do a complete rewrite of the story in the way he himself originally wanted it to be due to just how much he's come to hate the version that ended up coming into existence (and liked by seemingly everyone ''but'' him) instead.



** As also previously mentioned, there was a rather long hiatus between some of the chapters of ''Age of Giants'' due to rampant creative differences ensuing between Drew and Nathanoraptor behind the scenes.

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** As also previously mentioned, there was a rather long hiatus between some of the chapters of ''Age of Giants'' due to rampant creative differences ensuing between Drew Luczynski and Nathanoraptor behind the scenes.



* ShrugOfGod: Nathanoraptor initially full heartedly accepted A-LionGleek's suggestion of Charlie Heaton as the HypotheticalCasting for Drew. However, when Nathanoraptor later decided that fellow ''Series/StrangerThings'' cast member Joe Keery would make a better choice of casting for Drew in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'', he notably stated that he didn't really care whether or not anyone chose to allow this same casting choice to apply for the character in Prehistoric Earth. He has similarly made no direct confirmation as to whether or not [[spoiler: Cynthia]] will make the jump to PPR alongside the other 11 'main cast' members.
* SpecialThanks: In his author's notes in the review section after the story was finally finished, Nathanoraptor gave this to fellow fanfic writer/consistent reviewer [=A-LionGleek=] (who was one of two people especially enthusiastic about the idea who'd helped convince Drew into allowing the story to start becoming a reality in the first place, and had even been responsible for creating some of the characters...[[PromotedFanboy and later ended up getting chosen]] to take Drew's place as Nathanoraptor's cowriter for subsequent reboot ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'' after Drew chose to respectfully decline the offer to reprise the position), then avid Prehistoric Park fanfic reader/reviewer Avian (for being the second of the readers alongside [=A-LionGleek=] who'd helped convince Drew into allowing the story to come into existence in the first place), fanfic authors [=DaDog=] and [=MortalKombat247=] (the two main authors of the Fanfic/PrehistoricParkExtinctionWorld mythos, which had proven a key source of inspiration for the story), and to Drew Luczynski himself for both being his co-writer and for coming up with the idea that would provide the basis for the story in the first place. And of course, he also made sure to thank all who'd read and reviewed the story over the course of its creation.
* ThrowItIn: PE!Drew's 'gatecrasher' remark in ''Passport to Hell'' was a random line that just happened to pop up in Nathanoraptor's head while he was doing writing for the chapters, at which point he chose to add it in simply because he felt it was too good of a line from PE!Drew to pass up for inclusion. Cynthia's SitcomArchNemesis dynamic with Jack was likewise unplanned, but still left in the story when Nathanoraptor realized how well it could work.

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* ShrugOfGod: Nathanoraptor initially full heartedly accepted A-LionGleek's [=A-LionGleek's=] suggestion of Charlie Heaton as the HypotheticalCasting for Drew. However, when Nathanoraptor later decided that fellow ''Series/StrangerThings'' cast member Joe Keery would make a better choice of casting for Drew in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'', he notably stated that he didn't really care whether or not anyone chose to allow this same casting choice to apply for the character in Prehistoric Earth. He has similarly made no direct confirmation as to whether or not [[spoiler: Cynthia]] will make the jump to PPR alongside the other 11 'main cast' members.
* SpecialThanks: In his author's notes in the review section after the story was finally finished, Nathanoraptor gave this to fellow fanfic writer/consistent reviewer [=A-LionGleek=] (who was one of two people especially enthusiastic about the idea who'd helped convince Drew into allowing the story to start becoming a reality in the first place, and had even been responsible for creating some of the characters...[[PromotedFanboy and later ended up getting chosen]] to take Drew's Luczynski's place as Nathanoraptor's cowriter for subsequent reboot ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'' after Drew Luczynski chose to respectfully decline the offer to reprise the position), then avid Prehistoric Park fanfic reader/reviewer Avian (for being the second of the readers alongside [=A-LionGleek=] who'd helped convince Drew Luczynski into allowing the story to come into existence in the first place), fanfic authors [=DaDog=] and [=MortalKombat247=] (the two main authors of the Fanfic/PrehistoricParkExtinctionWorld mythos, which had proven a key source of inspiration for the story), and to Drew Luczynski himself for both being his co-writer and for coming up with the idea that would provide the basis for the story in the first place. And of course, he also made sure to thank all who'd read and reviewed the story over the course of its creation.
* ThrowItIn: PE!Drew's Drew's 'gatecrasher' remark in ''Passport to Hell'' was a random line that just happened to pop up in Nathanoraptor's head while he was doing writing for the chapters, at which point he chose to add it in simply because he felt it was too good of a line from PE!Drew Drew to pass up for inclusion. Cynthia's SitcomArchNemesis dynamic with Jack was likewise unplanned, but still left in the story when Nathanoraptor realized how well it could work.



* WordOfGod: Both Nathanoraptor and Drew leave trivia segments in the reviews, which both clarify why they wrote certain things the way they did and WhatCouldHaveBeen:

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* WordOfGod: Both Nathanoraptor and Drew Luczysnki leave trivia segments in the reviews, which both clarify why they wrote certain things the way they did and WhatCouldHaveBeen:



** The villains' plan unfolded as follows: After the incident with the brontoscorpio swarm caused the Novum board to increase their involvement with the project, von Grimm decided to attempt to make a move on acquiring the portal for himself due to believing that he could put it to much better use compared to what Theodore was currently having it be used for, and would have sent Duncan in to work at the park as TheMole while also having the jury rigged inferior version of the portal created and given to Frank and the smuggling operation so that they could started in advance, and had Frank and the smuggling operation set up their lair in a hidden area on the northern most section of the Prehistoric Earth island. From there, the subsequent animal escapes and containment failures were engineered into occurring by Duncan for the sake of testing for what was planned to be the plot that would have allowed for the obtaining of the prime portal. These same incidents started increasing in frequency after word came about that Leon was training the allosaurs as a security force. And when von Grimm realized how much of a problem this development could be for his plans, he told Duncan to get to work on causing a mass breakout big enough to keep the allosaurs as well as all the human staff occupied long enough for him to sneak into where the prime portal was being kept and make off with it over the course of the chaos. Unfortunately, when they told Frank about this plan, he ended up going overboard to the point that the resulting mass breakout was big enough to lead to the veterinary facility being put on lockdown. And as a result, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Frank ended up causing Duncan to be unable to access the prime portal's location due to being either unable to get into the veterinary facility in the event the portal was there, or trapped inside the veterinary facility in the event that it wasn't]]. After the mass breakout failed to achieve the desired results, and Steve Woodward started to search for potential leads on all the mysterious events going on at the park, he ordered for Frank to continue using the inferior version of the portal to continue getting more 'goods' to smuggle and not make any more attempts at obtaining the prime portal for a while in order to allow them the chance of avoiding drawing too much further attention to themselves. Only after they finally figured out a proper new plan did von Grimm allow for one last attempt at acquiring the prime portal. And in said plan, six months after the mass breakout, Duncan and the black-ops team that ended up getting hired and sent in to help ended up failing and getting eaten, causing von Grimm to decide to cut his losses and try to have all the stuff that had already been collected by the smuggling operation to be shipped off the island to potential buyers before the park staff could catch up to them and stop them.

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** The villains' plan unfolded as follows: After the incident with the brontoscorpio swarm caused the Novum board to increase their involvement with the project, von Grimm decided to attempt to make a move on acquiring the portal for himself due to believing that he could put it to much better use compared to what Theodore was currently having it be used for, and would have then sent Duncan in to work at the park as TheMole while also having the jury rigged inferior version of the portal created and given to Frank and the smuggling operation so that they could get started in advance, and had while also having Frank and the smuggling operation set up their lair in a hidden area on the northern most section of the Prehistoric Earth island. From there, the subsequent animal escapes and containment failures were engineered into occurring by Duncan for the sake of testing for what was planned to be the plot that would have allowed for the obtaining of the prime portal. These same incidents started increasing in frequency after word came about that Leon was training the allosaurs as a security force. And when von Grimm realized how much of a problem this development could be for his plans, he told Duncan to get to work on causing a mass breakout big enough to keep the allosaurs as well as all the human staff occupied long enough for him to sneak into where the prime portal was being kept and make off with it over the course of the chaos. Unfortunately, when they told Frank about this plan, he ended up going overboard to the point that the resulting mass breakout was big enough to lead to the veterinary facility being put on lockdown. And as a result, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Frank ended up causing Duncan to be unable to access the prime portal's location due to being either unable to get into the veterinary facility in the event the portal was there, or trapped inside the veterinary facility in the event that it wasn't]]. After the mass breakout failed to achieve the desired results, and Steve Woodward started to search for potential leads on all the mysterious events going on at the park, he von Grimm ordered for Frank to continue using the inferior version of the portal to continue getting more 'goods' to smuggle and not make any more attempts at obtaining the prime portal for a while in order to allow them the chance of avoiding drawing too much further attention to themselves. Only after they finally figured out a proper new plan did von Grimm allow for one last attempt at acquiring the prime portal. And in said plan, six months after the mass breakout, Duncan and the black-ops team that ended up getting hired and sent in to help ended up failing and getting eaten, causing von Grimm to decide to cut his losses and try to have all the stuff that had already been collected by the smuggling operation to be shipped off the island to potential buyers before the park staff could catch up to them and stop them.



** Despite never telling writer!Drew about it or likewise allowing it to be made explicit in the story, Nathanoraptor [[spoiler: still at times considers his original idea of Cynthia and Drew having dated (and undergone a particularly unpleasant breakup) prior to the both of them working at Prehistoric Earth to be canon to some degree or other]].

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** Despite never telling writer!Drew Luczysnki about it or likewise allowing it to be made explicit in the story, Nathanoraptor [[spoiler: still at times considers his original idea of Cynthia and Drew having dated (and undergone a particularly unpleasant breakup) prior to the both of them working at Prehistoric Earth to be canon to some degree or other]].

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* ContractualObligationProject: Nathanoraptor, shortly after the story ended, theorised that this might have been the case for his co-author Drew Luczynski. Despite initial reservations about posting the Walking With/Prehistoric Park mashup he'd imagined, he decided to do so after demand from readers who'd heard about the story. However, in early 2017, he started to increasingly lose interest in the story due to the fact that he'd had the opportunity to start writing his personal passion project (the separate fanfic Dinosaur King Retold) and felt held back by Prehistoric Earth, which he'd never really been interested in. That being said, he has expressed happiness with how the story turned out (to an extent), is willing to respect the opinions of those who like how it turned out, and is grateful to Nathanoraptor for keeping the story going.

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** More of this on writer!Drew's end also played heavily into multiple names he chose to give to some of the animals (or in the case of a few others, had wanted to give to animals, only for the plans to end up changed) coming from characters in ''Anime/AkameGaKill'' and ''Franchise/TheLionKing''.
* ContractualObligationProject: Nathanoraptor, shortly after the story ended, theorised theorized that this might have been the case for his co-author Drew Luczynski. Despite initial reservations about posting the Walking With/Prehistoric Park mashup he'd imagined, he decided to do so after demand from readers who'd heard about the story. However, in early 2017, he started to increasingly lose interest in the story due to the fact that he'd had the opportunity to start writing his personal passion project (the separate fanfic Dinosaur King Retold) and felt held back by Prehistoric Earth, which he'd never really been interested in. That being said, he has expressed happiness with how the story turned out (to an extent), is willing to respect the opinions of those who like how it turned out, and is grateful to Nathanoraptor for keeping the story going.



** Nathanoraptor has also admitted that he really didn't like how Drew handled Alice, Linda, and Colette in the chapters that unfolded before Cynthia's introduction. Alice's characterization in ''New Beginnings'' as an incredibly nervous young woman during her earliest significant scenes in the story made him cringe due to how she was supposed to have already had plenty of prior experience with various dangerous modern-day animals, not to mention the fact that this characterization jarringly clashed with his planned characterization of her as an unflappable and levelheaded figure that she ended up thankfully having throughout the entire remainder of the story. In regards to Linda, Nathanoraptor took umbrage to how writer!Drew left her blatantly LockedOutOfTheLoop on crucial information [[note]] specifically, just what sort of animals were supposed to be coming back to the park over the course of the missions [[/note]] during ''Devils of the Deep'' and unwittingly made her seem incompetent at her own job as chief veterinarian [[note]] specifically, she ended up needing Drew's assistance to figure out a solution to a problem that she logically should have been smart enough to figure out how to take care of herself. And if it hadn't been for Nathanoraptor managing to notice in time to intervene, writer!Drew also very nearly had Khatin do a routine checkup on Squishy the anomalocaris despite such an activity being Linda's own job to do as chief veterinarian (something that Drew [[CriticalResearchFailure really ought to have known]] considering his expressed knowledge of and interest in zoos and any shows and stories that involve as much) [[/note]]. And as for Colette, Nathanoraptor was understandably not amused when, in what appeared to be ''blatant disregard'' for Colette's planned characterization he'd explicitly told writer!Drew about, writer!Drew chose to try to write her in ways that would frame her as a stereotypical one dimensional AlphaBitch instead of the ActionGirl JerkWithAHeartOfGold she was intended to be. Likewise, Nathanoraptor has expressed regret that Colette ended up also being criminally underutilized as a result of the additional problems that arose after Cynthia's introduction.

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** Nathanoraptor has also admitted that he really didn't like how Drew handled Alice, Linda, and Colette in the chapters that unfolded before Cynthia's introduction. Alice's characterization in ''New Beginnings'' as an incredibly nervous young woman during her earliest significant scenes in the story made him cringe due to how she was supposed to have already had plenty of prior experience with various dangerous modern-day animals, not to mention the fact that this characterization jarringly clashed with his planned characterization of her as an unflappable and levelheaded figure that she ended up thankfully having throughout the entire remainder of the story. In regards to Linda, Nathanoraptor took umbrage to how writer!Drew left her blatantly LockedOutOfTheLoop on crucial information [[note]] specifically, just what sort of animals were supposed to be coming back to the park over the course of the missions [[/note]] during ''Devils of the Deep'' and unwittingly made her seem incompetent at her own job as chief veterinarian [[note]] specifically, she ended up needing Drew's assistance to figure out a solution to a problem that she logically should have been smart enough to figure out how to take care of herself. And if it hadn't been for Nathanoraptor managing to notice in time to intervene, writer!Drew also very nearly had Khatin do a routine checkup on Squishy the anomalocaris despite such an activity being Linda's own job to do as chief veterinarian (something that Drew [[CriticalResearchFailure really ought (though in all fairness, this particular element has since been admitted to have known]] considering his expressed knowledge of been an honest mistake on writer!Drew's part due to him having had trouble remembering all the characters and interest in zoos their positions at the time and any shows and stories had legitimately ended up accidentally thinking that involve as much) Khatin was one of the vets) [[/note]]. And as for Colette, Nathanoraptor was understandably not amused when, in what appeared to be ''blatant disregard'' for Colette's planned characterization he'd explicitly told writer!Drew about, writer!Drew chose to try to write her in ways that would frame her as a stereotypical one dimensional AlphaBitch instead of the ActionGirl JerkWithAHeartOfGold she was intended to be. Likewise, Nathanoraptor has expressed regret that Colette ended up also being criminally underutilized as a result of the additional problems that arose after Cynthia's introduction.
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* SpecialThanks: In his author's notes in the review section after the story was finally finished, Nathanoraptor gave this to fellow fanfic writer/consistent reviewer A-LionGleek (who was one of two people especially enthusiastic about the idea who'd helped convince Drew into allowing the story to start becoming a reality in the first place, and had even been responsible for creating some of the characters...[[PromotedFanboy and later ended up getting chosen]] to take Drew's place as Nathanoraptor's cowriter for subsequent reboot ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'' after Drew chose to respectfully decline the offer to reprise the position), then avid Prehistoric Park fanfic reader/reviewer Avian (for being the second of the readers alongside A-LionGleek who'd helped convince Drew into allowing the story to come into existence in the first place), fanfic authors DaDog and MortalKombat247 (the two main authors of the Fanfic/PrehistoricParkExtinctionWorld mythos, which had proven a key source of inspiration for the story), and to Drew Luczynski himself for both being his co-writer and for coming up with the idea that would provide the basis for the story in the first place. And of course, he also made sure to thank all who'd read and reviewed the story over the course of its creation.

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* SpecialThanks: In his author's notes in the review section after the story was finally finished, Nathanoraptor gave this to fellow fanfic writer/consistent reviewer A-LionGleek [=A-LionGleek=] (who was one of two people especially enthusiastic about the idea who'd helped convince Drew into allowing the story to start becoming a reality in the first place, and had even been responsible for creating some of the characters...[[PromotedFanboy and later ended up getting chosen]] to take Drew's place as Nathanoraptor's cowriter for subsequent reboot ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined'' after Drew chose to respectfully decline the offer to reprise the position), then avid Prehistoric Park fanfic reader/reviewer Avian (for being the second of the readers alongside A-LionGleek [=A-LionGleek=] who'd helped convince Drew into allowing the story to come into existence in the first place), fanfic authors DaDog [=DaDog=] and MortalKombat247 [=MortalKombat247=] (the two main authors of the Fanfic/PrehistoricParkExtinctionWorld mythos, which had proven a key source of inspiration for the story), and to Drew Luczynski himself for both being his co-writer and for coming up with the idea that would provide the basis for the story in the first place. And of course, he also made sure to thank all who'd read and reviewed the story over the course of its creation.



** As far as Nathanoraptor is concerned (and A-LionGleek agrees), Will and Alice [[spoiler: did become an OfficialCouple at the end of the story]].

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** As far as Nathanoraptor is concerned (and A-LionGleek [=A-LionGleek=] agrees), Will and Alice [[spoiler: did become an OfficialCouple at the end of the story]].
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** In relation to what writer!Drew has recently stated in the retrospective, Nathanoraptor has gone on to address what his former co-writer has said. And while he defends his decision to have Sharptooth become an antihero instead of remain an antagonist as well as be more like a confused and antisocial GrumpyOldMan animal (since he felt that writer!Drew's plans would have made Sharptooth seem too anthropomorphic and out of place compared to all the other more realistic animals), the smuggling operation's existence in the story (since it was intended to represent the 'bad side' of a symbolic clash between the good and bad aspects of human nature in general rather than a straight ShoutOut to ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom''), and the way ''Nightmare Labyrinthine'' ended up unfolding (since his intention was for it to be a homage to ''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}'' and Creator/RayHarryhausen style kaiju movies, not a straight up ripoff of ''Film/JurassicWorld''), there are a few things that he's admitted that writer!Drew made good points on and that he himself would have done differently if he were to rewrite the entire story all over again:

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** In relation to what writer!Drew has recently stated in the retrospective, Nathanoraptor has gone on to address what his former co-writer has said. And while he defends his decision to have Sharptooth become an antihero instead of remain an antagonist as well as be more like a confused and antisocial GrumpyOldMan animal (since he felt that writer!Drew's plans would have made Sharptooth seem too anthropomorphic and out of place compared to all the other more realistic animals), the smuggling operation's existence in the story (since it was intended to represent the 'bad side' of a symbolic clash between the good and bad aspects of human nature in general rather than a straight ShoutOut to ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom''), and the way ''Nightmare Labyrinthine'' ended up unfolding (since his intention was for it to be a homage to ''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}'' and Creator/RayHarryhausen style kaiju movies, not a straight up ripoff of ''Film/JurassicWorld''), and also admits that writer!Drew may have been a bit harsher than necessary, there are a few things that he's admitted that writer!Drew made good points on and that he himself would have done differently if he were to rewrite the entire story all over again:



* ThrowItIn: PE!Drew's 'gatecrasher' remark in ''Passport to Hell'' was a random line that just happened to pop up in Nathanoraptor's head while he was doing writing for the chapters, at which point he chose to add it in simply because he felt it was too good of a line from PE!Drew to pass up for inclusion.

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* ThrowItIn: PE!Drew's 'gatecrasher' remark in ''Passport to Hell'' was a random line that just happened to pop up in Nathanoraptor's head while he was doing writing for the chapters, at which point he chose to add it in simply because he felt it was too good of a line from PE!Drew to pass up for inclusion. Cynthia's SitcomArchNemesis dynamic with Jack was likewise unplanned, but still left in the story when Nathanoraptor realized how well it could work.



** Both writers agreed from the very beginning that prehistoric humans (with the exception of outright apes and like australopithecus and paranthropus) would not be brought back from the past to the future, as they felt that all Prehistoric Park fanfiction stories in which such beings ''were'' brought back to the park from the past (such as those in the Extinction World mythos) [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot never do enough to fully explore the idea]].

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** Both writers agreed from the very beginning that prehistoric humans (with the exception of outright apes and like australopithecus and paranthropus) would not be brought back from the past to the future, as they felt that all Prehistoric Park fanfiction stories in which such beings ''were'' brought back to the park from the past (such as those in the Extinction World mythos) [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot never do enough to fully explore the idea]].
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** The villains' plan unfolded as follows: After the incident with the brontoscorpio swarm caused the Novum board to increase their involvement with the project, von Grimm decided to attempt to make a move on acquiring the portal for himself due to believing that he could put it to much better use compared to what Theodore was currently having it be used for, and would have sent Duncan in to work at the park as TheMole while also having the jury rigged inferior version of the portal created and given to Frank and the smuggling operation so that they could started in advance, and had Frank and the smuggling operation set up their lair in a hidden area on the northern most section of the Prehistoric Earth island. From there, the subsequent animal escapes and containment failures were engineered into occurring by Duncan for the sake of testing for what was planned to be the plot that would have allowed for the obtaining of the prime portal. These same incidents started increasing in frequency after word came about that Leon was training the allosaurs as a security force. And when von Grimm [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy realized how much of a problem this development could be for his plans]], he told Duncan to get to work on causing a mass breakout big enough to keep the allosaurs as well as all the human staff occupied long enough for him to sneak into where the prime portal was being kept and make off with it over the course of the chaos. Unfortunately, when they told Frank about this plan, he ended up going overboard to the point that the resulting mass breakout was big enough to lead to the veterinary facility being put on lockdown. And as a result, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Frank ended up causing Duncan to be unable to access the prime portal's location due to being either unable to get into the veterinary facility in the event the portal was there, or trapped inside the veterinary facility in the event that it wasn't]]. After the mass breakout failed to achieve the desired results, and Steve Woodward started to search for potential leads on all the mysterious events going on at the park, he ordered for Frank to continue using the inferior version of the portal to continue getting more 'goods' to smuggle and not make any more attempts at obtaining the prime portal for a while in order to allow them the chance of avoiding drawing too much further attention to themselves. Only after they finally figured out a proper new plan did von Grimm allow for one last attempt at acquiring the prime portal. And in said plan, six months after the mass breakout, Duncan and the black-ops team that ended up getting hired and sent in to help ended up failing and getting eaten, causing von Grimm to decide to cut his losses and try to have all the stuff that had already been collected by the smuggling operation to be shipped off the island to potential buyers before the park staff could catch up to them and stop them.

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** The villains' plan unfolded as follows: After the incident with the brontoscorpio swarm caused the Novum board to increase their involvement with the project, von Grimm decided to attempt to make a move on acquiring the portal for himself due to believing that he could put it to much better use compared to what Theodore was currently having it be used for, and would have sent Duncan in to work at the park as TheMole while also having the jury rigged inferior version of the portal created and given to Frank and the smuggling operation so that they could started in advance, and had Frank and the smuggling operation set up their lair in a hidden area on the northern most section of the Prehistoric Earth island. From there, the subsequent animal escapes and containment failures were engineered into occurring by Duncan for the sake of testing for what was planned to be the plot that would have allowed for the obtaining of the prime portal. These same incidents started increasing in frequency after word came about that Leon was training the allosaurs as a security force. And when von Grimm [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy realized how much of a problem this development could be for his plans]], plans, he told Duncan to get to work on causing a mass breakout big enough to keep the allosaurs as well as all the human staff occupied long enough for him to sneak into where the prime portal was being kept and make off with it over the course of the chaos. Unfortunately, when they told Frank about this plan, he ended up going overboard to the point that the resulting mass breakout was big enough to lead to the veterinary facility being put on lockdown. And as a result, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Frank ended up causing Duncan to be unable to access the prime portal's location due to being either unable to get into the veterinary facility in the event the portal was there, or trapped inside the veterinary facility in the event that it wasn't]]. After the mass breakout failed to achieve the desired results, and Steve Woodward started to search for potential leads on all the mysterious events going on at the park, he ordered for Frank to continue using the inferior version of the portal to continue getting more 'goods' to smuggle and not make any more attempts at obtaining the prime portal for a while in order to allow them the chance of avoiding drawing too much further attention to themselves. Only after they finally figured out a proper new plan did von Grimm allow for one last attempt at acquiring the prime portal. And in said plan, six months after the mass breakout, Duncan and the black-ops team that ended up getting hired and sent in to help ended up failing and getting eaten, causing von Grimm to decide to cut his losses and try to have all the stuff that had already been collected by the smuggling operation to be shipped off the island to potential buyers before the park staff could catch up to them and stop them.
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** Both writers agreed from the very beginning that prehistoric humans (with the exception of outright apes and like australopithecus and paranthropus) would not be brought back from the past to the future, as they felt that all Prehistoric Park fanfiction stories in which such beings ''were'' brought back to the park from the past (such as those in the Extinction World mythos) [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot never do enough to fully explore the idea]].
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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of writer!Drew]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, writer!Drew considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Writer!Drew also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't PE!Drew and Cynthia due to how he personally viewed them as 'just side characters to PE!Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving PE!Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of PE!Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on PE!Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, made the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks became too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and PE!Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.

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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of writer!Drew]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, writer!Drew considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Writer!Drew also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't PE!Drew and Cynthia due to how he personally viewed them as 'just side characters to PE!Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving PE!Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of PE!Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on PE!Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, made making the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks became becoming too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and PE!Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.
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*** He admits that it probably would have worked out better if he'd told writer!Drew about the idea of Cynthia being PE!Drew's ex girlfriend from before they both started working for Prehistoric Earth, as this would have potentially allowed for more interesting story opportunities involving her and a better dynamic between her and the other characters. And in the process, he reiterates that he never hated the character.

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*** He admits that it probably would have worked out better if he'd told writer!Drew about the idea of Cynthia being PE!Drew's ex girlfriend from before they both started working for Prehistoric Earth, Earth instead of just dismissing it, as this would have potentially allowed for more interesting story opportunities involving her and a better dynamic between her and the other characters. And in the process, he reiterates that he never hated the character.

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*** If he were to redo the story, he would have allowed Drogon, Viserion, and Rhaegal to each have more distinct personalities instead of being seemingly interchangeable the way they were in the current final product.

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*** If he were to redo the story, Nathanoraptor says he would have allowed Drogon, Viserion, and Rhaegal to each have more distinct personalities instead of being seemingly interchangeable the way they were in the current final product.product.
*** Nathanoraptor also agrees that the romance aspects of the story did take up a lot more focus of the story than they probably should have been allowed; particularly since they did admittedly somewhat end up coming at the expense of developing both the conspiracy as well as some of the character arcs that didn't involve romance (such as PE!Drew's PTSD from his brief marooning in the post KT-event Cretaceous landscape). However, he also makes it clear that, if he were to do the entire story all over again, he wouldn't remove them. Rather, he would try to balance them out more evenly with the other aspects of the story.
*** He also says that, if he were to do the story all over again, he would have allowed a considerably larger number of other animals to get a decent amount of focus in Phase 3 alongside Raksha and Sharptooth.
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** In relation to what writer!Drew has recently stated in the retrospective, Nathanoraptor has gone on to address what his former co-writer has said. And while he defends his decision to have Sharptooth become an antihero instead of remain an antagonist as well as be more like a confused and antisocial GrumpyOldMan animal (since he felt that writer!Drew's plans would have made Sharptooth seem too anthropomorphic and out of place compared to all the other more realistic animals), the smuggling operation's existence in the story (since it was intended to represent the 'bad side' of a symbolic clash between the good and bad aspects of human nature in general rather than a straight ShoutOut to ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom''), and the way ''Nightmare Labyrinthine'' ended up unfolding (since his intention was for it to be a homage to ''Franchise/{{Godzilla}}'' and Creator/RayHarryhausen style kaiju movies, not a straight up ripoff of ''Film/JurassicWorld''), there are a few things that he's admitted that writer!Drew made good points on and that he himself would have done differently if he were to rewrite the entire story all over again:
*** While he does defend his removing Thanatos from PE!Drew's animal partner roster due to still believing that letting him remain there would have made PE!Drew seem too much like TheAce, he does admit that the concept of animal partners for the staff wasn't utilized and explored to its full potential and that he hopes to do this idea better when its revisited in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined''.
*** While he reiterates that a planned scene that writer!Drew vetoed would have allowed for the progression of the idea of [[GentleGiantSauropod Lightning the argentinosaurus]] [[LargeAndInCharge becoming the leader]] of all the herbivores living in Mesozoic Safaris, Nathanoraptor also admits that, in hindsight, there was a lot of potential story fodder in the 'compatibility issues suffered by all the herbivores living together in the park despite not doing so in their home timelines' plotline that was left criminally unexplored, should have had more done with it, and that he himself miscalculated just how much of a portion of the story the conspiracy plot line would end up taking at the time.
*** He admits that it probably would have worked out better if he'd told writer!Drew about the idea of Cynthia being PE!Drew's ex girlfriend from before they both started working for Prehistoric Earth, as this would have potentially allowed for more interesting story opportunities involving her and a better dynamic between her and the other characters. And in the process, he reiterates that he never hated the character.
*** He admits that writer!Drew's idea of Martha suffering from PTSD did seem like a good idea, but felt that there was nothing he could really do with the idea due to how close to the finale Martha's rescue occurred within the story itself. He nonetheless hopes to maybe incorporate this idea in some fashion in ''Fanfic/PrehistoricParkReimagined''. He also very much wishes that he could have at least been told by writer!Drew at some point about writer!Drew's idea of a smilodon named Simba being amongst the roster and ending up gruesomely killing another rescued smilodon.
*** If he were to redo the story, he would have allowed Drogon, Viserion, and Rhaegal to each have more distinct personalities instead of being seemingly interchangeable the way they were in the current final product.
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** The villains' plan unfolded as follows: After the incident with the brontoscorpio swarm caused the Novum board to increase their involvement with the project, von Grimm decided to attempt to make a move on acquiring the portal for himself due to believing that he could put it to much better use compared to what Theodore was currently having it be used for, and would have sent Duncan in to work at the park as TheMole while also having the jury rigged inferior version of the portal created and given to Frank and the smuggling operation so that they could started in advance, and had Frank and the smuggling operation set up their lair in a hidden area on the northern most section of the Prehistoric Earth island. From there, the subsequent animal escapes and containment failures were engineered into occurring by Duncan for the sake of testing for what was planned to be the plot that would have allowed for the obtaining of the prime portal. These same incidents started increasing in frequency after word came about that Leon was training the allosaurs as a security force. And when von Grimm [[DangerouslyGenreSavvy realized how much of a problem this development could be for his plans]], he told Duncan to get to work on causing a mass breakout big enough to keep the allosaurs as well as all the human staff occupied long enough for him to sneak into where the prime portal was being kept and make off with it over the course of the chaos. Unfortunately, when they told Frank about this plan, he ended up going overboard to the point that the resulting mass breakout was big enough to lead to the veterinary facility being put on lockdown. And as a result, [[NiceJobFixingItVillain Frank ended up causing Duncan to be unable to access the prime portal's location due to being either unable to get into the veterinary facility in the event the portal was there, or trapped inside the veterinary facility in the event that it wasn't]]. After the mass breakout failed to achieve the desired results, and Steve Woodward started to search for potential leads on all the mysterious events going on at the park, he ordered for Frank to continue using the inferior version of the portal to continue getting more 'goods' to smuggle and not make any more attempts at obtaining the prime portal for a while in order to allow them the chance of avoiding drawing too much further attention to themselves. Only after they finally figured out a proper new plan did von Grimm allow for one last attempt at acquiring the prime portal. And in said plan, six months after the mass breakout, Duncan and the black-ops team that ended up getting hired and sent in to help ended up failing and getting eaten, causing von Grimm to decide to cut his losses and try to have all the stuff that had already been collected by the smuggling operation to be shipped off the island to potential buyers before the park staff could catch up to them and stop them.
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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of writer!Drew]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, writer!Drew considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Writer!Drew also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't PE!Drew and Cynthia due to how he personally viewed them as 'just side characters to PE!Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving PE!Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of PE!Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on PE!Drew). And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and PE!Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]].

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** In contrast, a lot of the stuff that Nathanoraptor and the readers consider the best and worst parts of the story [[MagnumOpusDissonance appear to have their positions reversed in the eyes of writer!Drew]]. While Nathanoraptor dislikes the majority of Phase 1 and feels very pleased with Phases 2 and 3 for the reasons described above, writer!Drew considers Phase 1 to be the only good season of the entire story due to Phase 1 adhering the closest to his own personal vision for the story and feels that Phases 2 and 3 (the latter of which he himself had very limited, if any, direct involvement with) were where the story [[SeasonalRot only got worse and worse]] due to it becoming (in his eyes) more of a generic drama set in a zoo rather than the Animal Planet style 'behind-the-scenes-at-a-zoo' documentary he initially planned for it to be. Writer!Drew also came to seemingly be rather annoyed with all the planned prominent characters that weren't PE!Drew and Cynthia due to how he personally viewed them as 'just side characters to PE!Drew's story' instead of the ensemble of equal importance that Nathanoraptor had explicitly planned for them to be, and didn't like how they (in his eyes) [[SpotlightStealingSquad seemed to be getting all the focus given to them by Nathanoraptor]] [[DemotedToExtra and leaving PE!Drew reduced to being a background player in what was technically supposed to be his own story]]. Leon and Jack in particular were two of the 'side characters' that he became especially annoyed by due to their popularity amongst the readers [[EnsembleDarkHorse unexpectedly managing to thoroughly eclipse that of PE!Drew]] (to the point that it was theorized, and later blatantly admitted, that his introducing Cynthia was a deliberate attempt at forcing the spotlight back on PE!Drew). He also claimed to utterly despise how, in his eyes, the story ended up seemingly prioritizing 'pointless romances, [and] a dumbass mole plot' over actual development of the park, made the rescue and care of the animals look too easy, [[TheyCopiedItNowItSucks became too derivative of]] ''Film/JurassicWorld'' and ''Film/JurassicWorldFallenKingdom'', and [[TheyWastedAPerfectlyGoodPlot completely wasting the potential]] of the original ideas behind the plot of the villains related to the Novum Board. And finally, he came to also grow immensely disappointed in how Cynthia turned out to be in the final product once the story was over and [[NeverMyFault blame Nathanoraptor for everything wrong with the story]] due to how Nathanoraptor had, in his own words, kept forcing focus away from Cynthia and PE!Drew in favor of the [[YouKeepUsingThatWord 'side characters']] and denying the two 'main stars' the chance at proper CharacterDevelopment (among other problems) despite Nathanoraptor [[MyRealDaddy arguably having managed to save the story and make it truly enjoyable to the readers]].readers]]. He's even recently claimed that he's considering maybe someday attempting his own personal rewrite of the story so that he can attempt to 'do this concept the justice it deserved' and allow a version of it to exist the way he himself had wanted it to be.



* OldShame: Due to just how much the story derailed from his original vision, plus how much the fans/readers seemed to have a much higher preference for Nathanoraptor's plans for the story instead of his own, writer!Drew has since expressed a desire to get his own part in the 4th anniversary retrospective finished and his feelings on what happened behind the scenes vented as swiftly as possible so that he can move immediately back on to work on Dinosaur King Retold and forget ever being involved with this story at all.

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* OldShame: Due to just how much the story derailed from his original vision, plus how much the fans/readers seemed to have a much higher preference for Nathanoraptor's plans for the story instead of his own, writer!Drew has since expressed a desire to get his own part in the 4th anniversary retrospective finished and his feelings on what happened behind the scenes vented as swiftly as possible so that he can move on, get immediately back on to work on Dinosaur King Retold Retold, and forget ever being involved with this story at all.all. He's even mentioned plans to perhaps someday do a complete rewrite of the story in the way he himself originally wanted it to be due to just how much he's come to hate the version that ended up coming into existence (and liked by seemingly everyone ''but'' him) instead.

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