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** In general, the original plan for the fic was to just harm all Starfleet members, even including rape. If the author did follow through with that and didn't focus on developing everybody, plus his love for canon and the potential for the Starfleet members, the fic would be far worse and more hated than now.
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Cleanup.
About disliking working with the characters in the work, not out-of-work characters that they change in their work to be more bashable.
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* CreatorsPest: Legendbringer went on record to state that he didn't redeem Rhymey because of his brainwashing of Fluttershy in the source material. The amount of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech The Reason You Suck Speeches]] the character gets in the fic, as well as [[HumiliationConga Chapter 16 being dedicated to punishing Rhymey]], makes it clear how he feels about the character.
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** Due to the negative response garnered by the graphic sexual content in the early chapters, the author eventually rewrote the beginning of the story to remove most of it, and the later chapters cut it entirely, focusing solely on the story and action.
** In general, the original plan for the fic was to just harm all Starfleet members, even including rape. If the author did follow through with that and didn't focus on developing everybody, plus his love for canon and the potential for the Starfleet members, the fic would be far worse and more hated than now.
** Due to the negative response garnered by the graphic sexual content in the early chapters, the author eventually rewrote the beginning of the story to remove most of it, and the later chapters cut it entirely, focusing solely on the story and action.
** In general, the original plan for the fic was to just harm all Starfleet members, even including rape. If the author did follow through with that and didn't focus on developing everybody, plus his love for canon and the potential for the Starfleet members, the fic would be far worse and more hated than now.
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** The author originally intended to [[KillEmAll kill all members of Starfleet]] before deciding to give certain members CharacterDevelopment.
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** The author originally intended to [[KillEmAll kill all members of Starfleet]] Starfleet before deciding to give certain members CharacterDevelopment.
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* CreatorsPest: Legendbringer went on record to state that he didn't redeem Rhymey because of his brainwashing of Fluttershy in the source material. The amount of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech The Reason You Suck Speeches]] the character gets in the fic, as well as [[HumiliationConga Chapter 16 being dedicated to constantly punishing Rhymey]], makes it clear how he feels about the character.
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* CreatorsPest: Legendbringer went on record to state that he didn't redeem Rhymey because of his brainwashing of Fluttershy in the source material. The amount of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech The Reason You Suck Speeches]] the character gets in the fic, as well as [[HumiliationConga Chapter 16 being dedicated to constantly punishing Rhymey]], makes it clear how he feels about the character.
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* CreatorsPest: Legendbringer went on record to state that he didn't redeem Rhymey because of his brainwashing of Fluttershy in the source material. The amount of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech The Reason You Suck Speeches]] he gets in the fic, as well as [[HumiliationConga Chapter 16 being dedicated to Rhymey bashing]], makes it clear how he feels about the character.
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* CreatorsPest: Legendbringer went on record to state that he didn't redeem Rhymey because of his brainwashing of Fluttershy in the source material. The amount of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech The Reason You Suck Speeches]] he the character gets in the fic, as well as [[HumiliationConga Chapter 16 being dedicated to Rhymey bashing]], constantly punishing Rhymey]], makes it clear how he feels about the character.
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* CreatorsPest: Legendbringer went on record to state that he didn't redeem Rhymey because of his brainwashing of Fluttershy in the source material. The amount of [[TheReasonYouSuckSpeech The Reason You Suck Speeches]] he gets in the fic, as well as [[HumiliationConga Chapter 16 being dedicated to Rhymey bashing]], makes it clear how he feels about the character.
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** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy it impossible to pull off, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
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** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy it was impossible to pull off, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
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** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy made him completely irredeemable in his eyes, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
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** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy made him completely irredeemable in his eyes, it impossible to pull off, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
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** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy made it impossible to pull off without UnfortunateImplications, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
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** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy made it impossible to pull off without UnfortunateImplications, him completely irredeemable in his eyes, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
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* HypotheticalCasting: Creator/{{Legendbringer}} has made a [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/787045/voice-acting-blog blog]] detailing what voice actors he would choose for which Starfleet character and comparing them to Creator/DakariKingMykan’s choice of casting.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The author originally intended to [[KillEmAll kill all members of Starfleet]] before deciding to given certain members CharacterDevelopment.
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* WhatCouldHaveBeen: WhatCouldHaveBeen:
** The author originally intended to [[KillEmAll kill all members of Starfleet]] before deciding togiven give certain members CharacterDevelopment.
** The author originally intended to [[KillEmAll kill all members of Starfleet]] before deciding to
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* ActorAllusion: Human!Applejack notes that Sunset sounds like Twilight singing.
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** [[spoiler:This is actually used as {{Foreshadowing}} when Gray Son is introduced, Sunset and Madilyn think he has a nice butt, and later it is revealed that Gray Son is actually [[ComicBook/{{Nightwing}} Dick Grayson]] who is infamous for having [[FemaleGaze a well-detailed rear end]] whenever he appears in comic books.]]
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** [[spoiler:This is actually used as {{Foreshadowing}} when Gray Grey Son is introduced, Sunset and Madilyn think he has a nice butt, and later it is revealed that Gray Grey Son is actually [[ComicBook/{{Nightwing}} Dick Grayson]] who is infamous for having [[FemaleGaze a well-detailed rear end]] whenever he appears in comic books.]]
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* MemeAcknowledgment: [[Fanfic/PowerRangersGuardiansOfGaia Madilyn]] acknowledges that Sunset's hair does resemble bacon.
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* MemeAcknowledgment: MemeAcknowledgment:
** [[Fanfic/PowerRangersGuardiansOfGaia Madilyn]] acknowledges that Sunset's hair does resemblebacon.bacon.
** [[spoiler:This is actually used as {{Foreshadowing}} when Gray Son is introduced, Sunset and Madilyn think he has a nice butt, and later it is revealed that Gray Son is actually [[ComicBook/{{Nightwing}} Dick Grayson]] who is infamous for having [[FemaleGaze a well-detailed rear end]] whenever he appears in comic books.]]
** [[Fanfic/PowerRangersGuardiansOfGaia Madilyn]] acknowledges that Sunset's hair does resemble
** [[spoiler:This is actually used as {{Foreshadowing}} when Gray Son is introduced, Sunset and Madilyn think he has a nice butt, and later it is revealed that Gray Son is actually [[ComicBook/{{Nightwing}} Dick Grayson]] who is infamous for having [[FemaleGaze a well-detailed rear end]] whenever he appears in comic books.]]
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* HypotheticalCasting: Creator/{{Legendbringer}} has made a [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/787045/voice-acting-blog blog]] detailing what voice actors he would choose for which Starfleet character and comparing them to Creator/DakariKingMykan’s choice of casting.
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* HypotheticalCasting: Creator/{{Legendbringer}} has made a [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/787045/voice-acting-blog blog]] detailing what voice actors he would choose for which Starfleet character and comparing them to DakariKingMykan’s Creator/DakariKingMykan’s choice of casting.
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* HypotheticalCasting: LegendBringer Creator/{{Legendbringer}} has made a [[https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/787045/voice-acting-blog blog]] detailing what voice actors he would choose for which Starfleet character and comparing them to DakariKingMykan’s choice of casting.
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!!Trivia for ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'':
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!!Trivia for ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'':
''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'':
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* MutuallyFictional: ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in this story. Likewise, ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in that story.
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* MutuallyFictional: ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in this story. Likewise, ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' ''Fanfic/FallOfStarfleetRebirthOfFriendship'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in that story.
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!!Trivia for ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'':
* ActorAllusion: Human!Applejack notes that Sunset sounds like Twilight singing.
* FandomNod: It is stated that Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves is the mother of Sparkler/Amethyst Star and Ditzy Doo.
* MemeAcknowledgment: [[Fanfic/PowerRangersGuardiansOfGaia Madilyn]] acknowledges that Sunset's hair does resemble bacon.
* MutuallyFictional: ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in this story. Likewise, ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in that story.
* RealitySubtext:
** The InUniverse criticisms of Starfleet sound exactly like the criticisms of Mykan's ''Starfleet Magic''.
** [[spoiler:In ''Starfleet Magic'', Dementia is a PaletteSwap of Starla Shine. In ''Fall of Starfleet'', Dementia is [[LukeIAmYourFather Starla's mother.]]]]
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The author originally intended to [[KillEmAll kill all members of Starfleet]] before deciding to given certain members CharacterDevelopment.
** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy made it impossible to pull off without UnfortunateImplications, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
* ActorAllusion: Human!Applejack notes that Sunset sounds like Twilight singing.
* FandomNod: It is stated that Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves is the mother of Sparkler/Amethyst Star and Ditzy Doo.
* MemeAcknowledgment: [[Fanfic/PowerRangersGuardiansOfGaia Madilyn]] acknowledges that Sunset's hair does resemble bacon.
* MutuallyFictional: ''Fanfic/MyBravePonyStarfleetNemesis'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in this story. Likewise, ''Fanfic/MykanTributeFallOfStarfleetRiseOfHarmony'' is an InUniverse work of fiction in that story.
* RealitySubtext:
** The InUniverse criticisms of Starfleet sound exactly like the criticisms of Mykan's ''Starfleet Magic''.
** [[spoiler:In ''Starfleet Magic'', Dementia is a PaletteSwap of Starla Shine. In ''Fall of Starfleet'', Dementia is [[LukeIAmYourFather Starla's mother.]]]]
* WhatCouldHaveBeen: The author originally intended to [[KillEmAll kill all members of Starfleet]] before deciding to given certain members CharacterDevelopment.
** Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his DomesticAbuse of Fluttershy made it impossible to pull off without UnfortunateImplications, and so decided to give him the full AdaptationalVillainy treatment.
