Due to the negative response garnered by the graphic sexual content in the early chapters, the author eventually rewrote the beginning of the story to remove most of it, and the later chapters cut it entirely, focusing solely on the story and action.
Fandom Nod: It is stated that Ditzy Doo/Derpy Hooves is the mother of Sparkler/Amethyst Star and Ditzy Doo.
Madilyn acknowledges that Sunset's hair does resemble bacon.
This is actually used as Foreshadowing when Grey Son is introduced, Sunset and Madilyn think he has a nice butt, and later it is revealed that Grey Son is actually Dick Grayson who is infamous for having a well-detailed rear end whenever he appears in comic books.
The author originally intended to kill all members of Starfleet before deciding to give certain members Character Development.
Rhymey was originally intended to be made more sympathetic, as with his compatriots. However, the author felt that his Domestic Abuse of Fluttershy was impossible to pull off, and so decided to give him the full Adaptational Villainy treatment.