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* Bluestar in ''A Dangerous Path''.
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* [[spoiler:Whitestorm's death]] at the end of ''The Darkest Hour'' turns many readers into a blubbering pile of snotty goo.
* Hell, [[spoiler:''Darkstripe]]'s'' death scene. Sure, he was a traitorous piece of scum that poisoned a kit, but him dying on the ground, saying that "It's all black... There's nothing left..." was just.... Sad. Then, of course, [[spoiler:Graystripe ruins it by saying, "Well, that's one less traitor in the forest."]]
* [[spoiler:Yellowfang]]. Especially when [[spoiler:she tells Fireheart that she wishes he was her son, instead of Brokentail.]]
* [[Tropers/KingSonnDeeoDoo This Troper]] teared up at the line Cloudtail (who'd pretty much been quite the {{Jerkass}} at times) said to Brightpaw [[spoiler:telling her she was still beautiful to him, after she'd been viciously mauled by the dogs, and had been horrically scarred, losing an eye and an ear]].
* Hell, [[spoiler:''Darkstripe]]'s'' death scene. Sure, he was a traitorous piece of scum that poisoned a kit, but him dying on the ground, saying that "It's all black... There's nothing left..." was just.... Sad. Then, of course, [[spoiler:Graystripe ruins it by saying, "Well, that's one less traitor in the forest."]]
* [[spoiler:Yellowfang]]. Especially when [[spoiler:she tells Fireheart that she wishes he was her son, instead of Brokentail.]]
* [[Tropers/KingSonnDeeoDoo This Troper]] teared up at the line Cloudtail (who'd pretty much been quite the {{Jerkass}} at times) said to Brightpaw [[spoiler:telling her she was still beautiful to him, after she'd been viciously mauled by the dogs, and had been horrically scarred, losing an eye and an ear]].
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* [[spoiler:Whitestorm's death]] Whitestorm's death at the end of ''The Darkest Hour'' turns many readers into a blubbering pile of snotty goo.
*Hell, [[spoiler:''Darkstripe]]'s'' Darkstripe's death scene. Sure, he He was a traitorous piece of scum that poisoned a kit, but him dying on the ground, saying that "It's all black... There's nothing left..." was is just.... Sad. sad. Then, of course, [[spoiler:Graystripe Graystripe ruins it by saying, "Well, that's one less traitor in the forest."]]
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*[[spoiler:Yellowfang]]. Yellowfang. Especially when [[spoiler:she she tells Fireheart that she wishes he was her son, instead of Brokentail.]]
Brokentail.
*[[Tropers/KingSonnDeeoDoo This Troper]] teared up at the line Cloudtail (who'd pretty much (who has been quite the {{Jerkass}} at times) said to telling Brightpaw [[spoiler:telling her she was is still beautiful to him, after she'd she's been viciously mauled by the dogs, and had has been horrically horrifically scarred, losing an eye and an ear]].ear.
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* ''Forest of Secrets'': [[spoiler:Silverstream]]'s death. Despite my emotional breakdown, I somehow managed to keep reading... Up until the end where [[spoiler:Graystripe leaves [=ThunderClan=]]], at which point I broke down crying for about ten or fifteen minutes.
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* ''Forest of Secrets'': [[spoiler:Silverstream]]'s death. Despite my emotional breakdown, I somehow managed to keep reading... Up until the Secrets'':
** Silverstream's death.
** The end where[[spoiler:Graystripe Graystripe leaves [=ThunderClan=]]], at which point I broke down crying for about ten or fifteen minutes.[=ThunderClan=].
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* [[spoiler: Stonefur's]] death. [[HeroicSacrifice Aw,]] [[DoomedMoralVictor hell]].
* Snowkit, a tiny deaf kitten, was carried away by a hawk, all the while crying for help, with no hope of being rescued. This troper cries every time.
** When I got to this page in the book (it was from the library), I found that it was stained with tears. That's when I started crying, too.
* Snowkit, a tiny deaf kitten, was carried away by a hawk, all the while crying for help, with no hope of being rescued. This troper cries every time.
** When I got to this page in the book (it was from the library), I found that it was stained with tears. That's when I started crying, too.
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* [[spoiler: Stonefur's]] death. [[HeroicSacrifice Aw,]] [[DoomedMoralVictor hell]].
Stonefur's death.
* Snowkit, a tiny deaf kitten,was being carried away by a hawk, all the while crying for help, with no hope of being rescued. This troper cries every time.
** When I got to this page in the book (it was from the library), I found that it was stained with tears. That's when I started crying, too.rescued.
* Snowkit, a tiny deaf kitten,
** When I got to this page in the book (it was from the library), I found that it was stained with tears. That's when I started crying, too.
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* [[spoiler:Runningwind's]] death. Yeah, he wasn't a major character, but I liked him and suddenly BAM he's dead. Also [[spoiler:Lionheart]].
* For [[{{@/AgentDragonhunter}} this troper]], [[spoiler: Brightheart's mauling and name-change]]. She was so innocent and sweet!
* [[spoiler: Silverstream and Graystripe's subplot]]. Just... just [[spoiler: Silverstream and Graystripe]], when you get down to it.
* [[spoiler: Bluestar]] in ''A Dangerous Path''.
* For [[{{@/AgentDragonhunter}} this troper]], [[spoiler: Brightheart's mauling and name-change]]. She was so innocent and sweet!
* [[spoiler: Silverstream and Graystripe's subplot]]. Just... just [[spoiler: Silverstream and Graystripe]], when you get down to it.
* [[spoiler: Bluestar]] in ''A Dangerous Path''.
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* [[spoiler:Runningwind's]] death. Yeah, he wasn't a major character, but I liked him and suddenly BAM he's dead. Also [[spoiler:Lionheart]].
Runningwind's death.
*For [[{{@/AgentDragonhunter}} this troper]], [[spoiler: Lionheart's death.
* Brightheart's mauling andname-change]].name-change. She was so innocent and sweet!
*[[spoiler: Silverstream and Graystripe's subplot]]. Just... just [[spoiler: Silverstream and Graystripe]], when you get down to it.
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** Also, Fireheart has felt really guilty about not convincing Bluestar enough to make Brightpaw and Swiftpaw warriors. So when Cloudtail blames him for not convincing Bluestar, he can only nod and agree, saying, "I know, Cloudtail. I know."
