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* Payne blowing up the sweet little old lady Helen, just because she was scared out of her mind and tried to get off the bus.
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive, and Jack comforting her while sadly saying that Helen "was a nice lady who didn't deserve to get killed".
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive, and Jack comforting her while sadly saying that Helen "was a nice lady who didn't deserve to get killed".
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* Payne blowing up the sweet little old lady Helen, just Helen. Just because she was scared out of her mind and tried to get off the bus.
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to bealive, and alive. With Jack comforting her while sadly saying that Helen "was a nice lady who didn't deserve to get killed".
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to be
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* Payne blowing up the sweet little old lady Helen, just cause she was scared out of her mind.
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive.
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive.
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* Payne blowing up the sweet little old lady Helen, just cause because she was scared out of her mind.
mind and tried to get off the bus.
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to bealive.alive, and Jack comforting her while sadly saying that Helen "was a nice lady who didn't deserve to get killed".
** Annie's SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to be
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*A woman pushes a baby carriage out in front of the bus while Annie's driving and the bus smashes it. Annie's understandably distraught. It's only after this happens we see it contain cans and not an actual baby.
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* Jack’s [[OhCrap horrified reaction]] to seeing [[spoiler: Annie strapped to a bomb, having been lured away by Payne]]. [[spoiler: All she’s able to do in that moment is whisper a pitiful apology to Jack]].
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The character in question is an unnamed redshirt who died after seconds of screentime. Not sure if it's even meant to be sad...
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* Payne murdering the train driver right in front of Annie.
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* Payne [[spoiler:blowing up the sweet little old lady Helen,]] just cause she was scared out of her mind.
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* Payne [[spoiler:blowing blowing up the sweet little old lady Helen,]] Helen, just cause she was scared out of her mind.
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* [[spoiler:Harry's death]], many in the audience took it almost as bad as Jack did.
** The look on [[spoiler: Harry's]] face when he realizes the bomb in Payne's house is about to go off.
* The tense moment before the jump, where the passangers are visibly scared of dying. In particular, the criminal apologizing to Jack--"Hey, I didn't mean to shoot the guy"--, probably trying to atone before meeting his Maker.
** The look on [[spoiler: Harry's]] face when he realizes the bomb in Payne's house is about to go off.
* The tense moment before the jump, where the passangers are visibly scared of dying. In particular, the criminal apologizing to Jack--"Hey, I didn't mean to shoot the guy"--, probably trying to atone before meeting his Maker.
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* [[spoiler:Harry's death]], Harry's death, many in the audience took it almost as bad as Jack did.
** The look on[[spoiler: Harry's]] Harry's face when he realizes the bomb in Payne's house is about to go off.
* The tense moment before the jump, where thepassangers passengers are visibly scared of dying. In particular, the criminal apologizing to Jack--"Hey, I didn't mean to shoot the guy"--, probably trying to atone before meeting his Maker.
** The look on
* The tense moment before the jump, where the
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* The tense moment before the jump, where the passangers are visibly scared of dying. In particular, the criminal apologizing to Jack--"Hey, I didn't mean to shoot the guy"--, probably trying to atone before meeting his Maker.
* Having been safely evacuated, the other passengers can only watch helplessly as Jack and Annie speed away to an unknown fate, clearly worried about them.
* Having been safely evacuated, the other passengers can only watch helplessly as Jack and Annie speed away to an unknown fate, clearly worried about them.
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* Payne [[spoiler:blowing up the sweet little old lady,]] just cause she was scared out of her mind.
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* Payne [[spoiler:blowing up the sweet little old lady,]] lady Helen,]] just cause she was scared out of her mind.
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** The look on [[spoiler: Harry's]] face when he realizes the bomb in Payne's house is about to go off.
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** Annie's survivor's guilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive.
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** Annie's survivor's guilt SurvivorGuilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive.
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* The tense moment before the jump, where the passangers are visibly scared of dying.
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* The tense moment before the jump, where the passangers are visibly scared of dying.dying.
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* Payne [[spoiler:blowing up the sweet little old lady,]] just cause she was scared out of her mind.
** Annie's survivor's guilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive.
* Payne murdering the train driver right in front of Annie.
* [[spoiler:Harry's death]], many in the audience took it almost as bad as Jack did.
* The tense moment before the jump, where the passangers are visibly scared of dying.
** Annie's survivor's guilt afterwards, because she was glad to be alive.
* Payne murdering the train driver right in front of Annie.
* [[spoiler:Harry's death]], many in the audience took it almost as bad as Jack did.
* The tense moment before the jump, where the passangers are visibly scared of dying.
