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**Luna admitting that she doesn't think she can ever live with Lincoln, and wants to give up music forever.
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* Chapter 14: ''The Show Must Go On, Part 1''
** Ronnie Anne revealing that her and Bobby's mother died in a car accident two years ago. She didn't cry at all when it happened, but she finally gave in to her emotions weeks later when she saw a mother helping her child skate at the park.
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** Lola's lament to Luna at how Lana is always picked over her to spend time with among the other sisters. Because of this, she considers Lincoln to be the one to always count on to hang out, so his decision to only ask Lana to help with something was the breaking point which nearly drove her to tears. Luna proceeds to join her tea party, but not before telling her what she is doing wrong. As for Lana...
*** Lincoln, while not directly stating his incoming death, manages to leave something behind for Lana. It's even more painful when you realize, [[spoiler:Lana doesn't know]] and even points out just how odd Lincoln is behaving.

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** Lola's lament to Luna at how Lana is always picked over her to spend time with among the other sisters. Because of this, she considers Lincoln to be the one to always count on to hang out, so his decision to only ask Lana to help with something was the breaking point which nearly drove her to tears. Luna proceeds to join her tea party, but not before telling her what she is doing wrong. As for Lana...
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*** Speaking of Lana, Lincoln, while not directly stating his incoming death, manages to leave something behind for Lana. her. It's even more painful when you realize, [[spoiler:Lana [[spoiler:she doesn't know]] and even points out just how odd Lincoln is behaving.

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** Lincoln, while not directly stating his incoming death, manages to leave something behind for Lana. It's even more painful when you realize, [[spoiler:Lana doesn't know]] and even points out just how odd Lincoln is behaving.

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** Lola's lament to Luna at how Lana is always picked over her to spend time with among the other sisters. Because of this, she considers Lincoln to be the one to always count on to hang out, so his decision to only ask Lana to help with something was the breaking point which nearly drove her to tears. Luna proceeds to join her tea party, but not before telling her what she is doing wrong. As for Lana...
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Lincoln, while not directly stating his incoming death, manages to leave something behind for Lana. It's even more painful when you realize, [[spoiler:Lana doesn't know]] and even points out just how odd Lincoln is behaving.

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** Lincoln, while not directly stating his incoming death, manages to leave something behind for Lana. It's even more painful when you realize, [[spoiler: Lana doesn't know]] and even points out just how odd Lincoln is behaving.
** Luna breaking down, [[spoiler: to the point that she ends up [[INeedAFreakingDrink accepting a drink]].]]

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** Lincoln, while not directly stating his incoming death, manages to leave something behind for Lana. It's even more painful when you realize, [[spoiler: Lana [[spoiler:Lana doesn't know]] and even points out just how odd Lincoln is behaving.
** Luna breaking down, [[spoiler: to [[spoiler:to the point that she ends up [[INeedAFreakingDrink accepting drinking beer]] and decides to have sex with a drink]].]]teen named Matt (which, before you freak out, is only ever mentioned)]].
** After Lori exclaims that Luna only ever cares about rock n' roll, Luna [[spoiler:deliberately destroys her prized guitar, Chloe]].
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* Chapter 13: ''Unplugged''
** Lincoln, while not directly stating his incoming death, manages to leave something behind for Lana. It's even more painful when you realize, [[spoiler: Lana doesn't know]] and even points out just how odd Lincoln is behaving.
** Luna breaking down, [[spoiler: to the point that she ends up [[INeedAFreakingDrink accepting a drink]].]]
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** [[http://www.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-de-un-LoudC-630460908 This fan-cover]] for the Spanish version.

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** [[http://www.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-de-un-LoudC-630460908 This fan-cover]] for the Spanish version.version.
** [[http://eagc7.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-for-a-Loud-Lincoln-is-Dying-653587674 The older Loud sisters grieve for their brother.]]
** [[http://eagc7.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-for-a-Loud-I-Killed-You-655318012 I killed you...]]
** [[http://eagc7.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-for-a-Loud-Sad-Clown-655480944 Sad clown.]]
** [[http://img.booru.org/tlb//images/18/86164b967b38f6ebf8ab0904307917bc54652f62.png Lori hugging her brother]]
** [[http://img.booru.org/tlb//images/12/717c5affa946b2d8c14d200fdf265fc518c3260c.jpg Lynn crying as she tries to get her brother to wake up.]]
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** One of the followers of the Spanish version of the story is a young man who is suffering from the same condition as Lincoln.

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** One of the followers of the The Spanish version of the story is a young has at least two followers with conditions similar to Lincoln's (a 20-year-old man who is suffering from the same condition as Lincoln.with lung cancer and a woman with an unspecified ailment).
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** Lincoln coming to the realization that Lily won't remember him when she gets older due to her still being a baby.

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* Chapter 12: ''Nobody's fault''.
** Lynn’s growing realization that, despite her BigSisterInstinct and always defending Lincoln, she cannot save him this time. And her growing feeling that it is all her fault and she deserves to be punished for it, even going so far so tell Lincoln that he should hate her.
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* Chapter 11: ''The best medicine''
** This chapter reveals a lot about Luan, and it's not pretty. Beneath all the puns and jokes, she is a SadClown who is considered a freak at school, has no friends, and overall considers herself to be a worthless loser. On top of that, watching old videos of Lincoln makes her realize she doesn't have any recordings of HER having fun with Lincoln, since she is always the one doing the filming, but never joins in on any of the activities.
** Rita breaking down in tears every 20 minutes while trying to help Lincoln write a book.
** [[spoiler: Lincoln seeing that Lisa is actually synthesizing some sort of enzymes and very briefly hopes she succeeded in findin a cure, before telling himself that would be too good to be true and there is no hope for him.]]
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** [[http://www.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-de-un-LoudC-630460908 This deviant art]] for the Spanish version.

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** [[http://www.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-de-un-LoudC-630460908 This deviant art]] fan-cover]] for the Spanish version.

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** A Meta example: one of the followers of the Spanish version of the story is a young man who is suffering from the same condition as Lincoln.



** Continuing from chapter 9, the whole misunderstanding between Ronnie Anne and Lincoln. First Clyde tries to get her to talk to Lincoln again, but she angrily rebuffs him, and when Lincoln himself seeks her out, she actually hits him. It gets so bad that Bobby is eventually forced to tell her about Lincoln's condition since she clearly isn’t going to let Lincoln explain himself.

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** Continuing from chapter 9, the whole misunderstanding between Ronnie Anne and Lincoln. First Clyde tries to get her to talk to Lincoln again, but she angrily rebuffs him, and when Lincoln himself seeks her out, she actually hits him. It gets so bad that Bobby is eventually forced to tell her about Lincoln's condition since she clearly isn’t going to let Lincoln explain himself.himself.
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** One of the followers of the Spanish version of the story is a young man who is suffering from the same condition as Lincoln.
** [[http://www.deviantart.com/art/Requiem-de-un-LoudC-630460908 This deviant art]] for the Spanish version.
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* Chapter 10: Operation Farewell
** The breakfast Lincoln made for his whole family as the first step in his plan getting ruined by Luna and Lynn.
** Continuing from chapter 9, the whole misunderstanding between Ronnie Anne and Lincoln. First Clyde tries to get her to talk to Lincoln again, but she angrily rebuffs him, and when Lincoln himself seeks her out, she actually hits him. It gets so bad that Bobby is eventually forced to tell her about Lincolns condition since she clearly isn’t going to let Lincoln explain himself.

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* Chapter 10: Operation Farewell
''Operation Farewell''
** The breakfast Lincoln made for his whole family as the first step in his plan getting bucket list gets ruined by Luna and Lynn.Lynn when they say that they don't want to go to school and would rather stay with Lincoln.
** Continuing from chapter 9, the whole misunderstanding between Ronnie Anne and Lincoln. First Clyde tries to get her to talk to Lincoln again, but she angrily rebuffs him, and when Lincoln himself seeks her out, she actually hits him. It gets so bad that Bobby is eventually forced to tell her about Lincolns Lincoln's condition since she clearly isn’t going to let Lincoln explain himself.
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** A Meta example: one of the followers of the Spanish version of the story is a young man who is suffering from the same condition as Lincoln.



** Adrien, a boy whom Lincoln befriended in chapter 5, [[spoiler: finally succumbs to leukemia after having to deal with it for about a year and a half]]. Lincoln knew it was going to happen so he isn't ''entirely'' devastated by it, but his mother, though she tries not to show much emotion towards Lincoln, appears to have taken it pretty hard (especially since she acknowledges that she was the reason why Adrien never had any friends due to the both of them moving all the time).

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** Adrien, a boy whom Lincoln befriended in chapter 5, [[spoiler: finally succumbs to leukemia after having to deal with it for about a year and a half]]. Lincoln knew it was going to happen so he isn't ''entirely'' devastated by it, but his mother, though she tries not to show much emotion towards Lincoln, appears to have taken it pretty hard (especially since she acknowledges that she was the reason why Adrien never had any friends due to the both of them moving all the time).time).
*Chapter 10: Operation Farewell
**The breakfast Lincoln made for his whole family as the first step in his plan getting ruined by Luna and Lynn.
** Continuing from chapter 9, the whole misunderstanding between Ronnie Anne and Lincoln. First Clyde tries to get her to talk to Lincoln again, but she angrily rebuffs him, and when Lincoln himself seeks her out, she actually hits him. It gets so bad that Bobby is eventually forced to tell her about Lincolns condition since she clearly isn’t going to let Lincoln explain himself.
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Chapter 3: "House of sadness"
* Lori comforts Luan and assuring her Lincoln will be okay, even those she telling herself that as well.
** Lincoln finally gives in to Doctor house and cries and also whats worse he'll never play with or see this sisters grow up.
*** When Doctor house gives his farwells to Lincoln, Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan and Lynn are devistaed when Lynn sr and Rita Loud tell them that Lincoln is terminaly ill and will die in a matter of weeks.
*** The chapter ends when Lincoln extends his arms to Lori (who's at his eye level) for a hug. She gives him a very tender and tearfull hug, Leni, Luna, Luan and Lynn also join the hug crying and so does Lincoln. As he shares a sading hug with them

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* Chapter 3: "House ''House of sadness"
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Lori comforts Luan and by assuring her that Lincoln will be okay, even those though she telling herself isn't exactly too sure of that as well.
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** Lincoln finally gives in to Doctor house House and cries and also whats cries. What's worse is that he'll never play with or see this sisters grow up.
*** ** When Doctor house gives his farwells farewells to Lincoln, Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan and Lynn are devistaed devastated when Lynn sr and Rita Loud their parents tell them that Lincoln is terminaly ill terminally ill, and will die in a matter of weeks.
*** ** The chapter ends when Lincoln extends his arms to Lori (who's at his eye level) for a hug. She gives him a very tender and tearfull hug, tearful hug. Leni, Luna, Luan and Lynn also join the hug crying and so does Lincoln. As Lincoln, as he shares a sading sad hug with them
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Chapter 3: "House of sadness"
*Lori comforts Luan and assuring her Lincoln will be okay, even those she telling herself that as well.
** Lincoln finally gives in to Doctor house and cries and also whats worse he'll never play with or see this sisters grow up.
*** When Doctor house gives his farwells to Lincoln, Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan and Lynn are devistaed when Lynn sr and Rita Loud tell them that Lincoln is terminaly ill and will die in a matter of weeks.
**** The chapter ends when Lincoln extends his arms to Lori (who's at his eye level) for a hug. She gives him a very tender and tearfull hug, Leni, Luna, Luan and Lynn also join the hug crying and so does Lincoln. As he shares a sading hug with them
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** The rest of sisters being deathly worried about Lincoln when he gets sent to the hospital.

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** The rest of sisters being deathly worried about Lincoln when he gets sent to the hospital.hospital, and they're all sitting in the waiting room for hours in complete silence.
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* Chapter 2: ''An Unnerving Wait''
** Lana having a brief but ''massive'' BreakTheCutie moment after seeing Lincoln unconscious with blood gushing out of his nose.
** The rest of sisters being deathly worried about Lincoln when he gets sent to the hospital.

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* Seeing how utterly devastated the Loud sisters are about the news of Lincoln’s oncoming death. Luna retreats into the garage, venting her sorrow and anger through music, Luan goes into full mime mode and refuses to speak, Lynn gets much more aggressive to the point that she starts hurting herself and actually becomes afraid to be near Lincoln, and Lori doesn't even know ''how'' to handle the situation. So far, Leni is the only one who remains her normal, optimistic self. What really makes it sad is that Lincoln finds these reactions from his sisters ''even worse'' than the fact that he is going to die.
* The reactions of Clyde and his dads to Lincoln’s condition.
* In chapter 8, Luan insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow at Lincoln when he accidentally walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] dislodges a brain tumor blocking one of his arteries, letting him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).
* The whole scene between Lincoln, Ronnie Anne, and Cristina in chapters 8 - 9. Lincoln has finally mustered up the courage to tell Ronnie Anne about his condition, and then Cristina interrupts their conversation at literally the worst moment possible, leading to Ronnie Anne jumping to the conclusion that Lincoln was about to break up with her and angrily storming off.
** From the same scene directly above, Cristina breaks down when she discovers the truth about Lincoln's condition. It turns down that she does, in fact, like Lincoln (a CallBack to "Making the Case") and is utterly devastated to know he's going to die soon.
* In chapter 9, Adrien, a boy whom Lincoln befriended in chapter 5, [[spoiler: finally succumbs to leukemia after having to deal with it for about a year and a half]]. Lincoln knew it was going to happen so he isn't ''entirely'' devastated by it, but his mother, though she tries not to show much emotion towards Lincoln, appears to have taken it pretty hard (especially since she acknowledges that she was the reason why Adrien never had any friends due to the both of them moving all the time).

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Seeing how utterly devastated the Loud sisters are about the news of Lincoln’s oncoming death. Luna retreats into the garage, venting her sorrow and anger through music, Luan goes into full mime mode and refuses to speak, Lynn gets much more aggressive to the point that she starts hurting herself and actually becomes afraid to be near Lincoln, and Lori doesn't even know ''how'' to handle the situation. So far, Leni is the only one who remains her normal, optimistic self. What really makes it sad is that Lincoln finds these reactions from his sisters ''even worse'' than the fact that he is going to die.
* Chapter 7: ''The Weight on his Shoulders''
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The reactions of Clyde and his dads to Lincoln’s condition.
* In chapter 8, Chapter 8: ''Lincoln's Blue Period - Part 1''
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Luan insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow at Lincoln when he accidentally walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] dislodges a brain tumor blocking one of his arteries, letting him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).
* Chapter 9: ''Lincoln's Blue Period - Part 2''
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The whole scene between Lincoln, Ronnie Anne, and Cristina in chapters 8 - 9.Cristina. Lincoln has finally mustered up the courage to tell Ronnie Anne about his condition, and then Cristina interrupts their conversation at literally the worst moment possible, leading to Ronnie Anne jumping to the conclusion that Lincoln was about to break up with her and angrily storming off.
** *** From the same scene directly above, Cristina breaks down when she discovers the truth about Lincoln's condition. It turns down that she does, in fact, like Lincoln (a CallBack to "Making the Case") and is utterly devastated to know he's going to die soon.
* In chapter 9, ** Adrien, a boy whom Lincoln befriended in chapter 5, [[spoiler: finally succumbs to leukemia after having to deal with it for about a year and a half]]. Lincoln knew it was going to happen so he isn't ''entirely'' devastated by it, but his mother, though she tries not to show much emotion towards Lincoln, appears to have taken it pretty hard (especially since she acknowledges that she was the reason why Adrien never had any friends due to the both of them moving all the time).
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** From the same scene directly above, Cristina breaks down when she discovers the truth about Lincoln's condition. It turns down that she does, in fact, like Lincoln (a CallBack to "Making the Case") and is utterly devastated to know he's going to die soon.
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* In chapter 8, Luan insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow towards Lincoln when he accidentally walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] dislodges a brain tumor blocking one of his arteries, letting him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).

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* In chapter 8, Luan insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow towards at Lincoln when he accidentally walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] dislodges a brain tumor blocking one of his arteries, letting him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).
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* In chapter 8, Laun insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow towards Lincoln when he accidentally walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] dislodges a brain tumor blocking one of his arteries, letting him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).

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* In chapter 8, Laun Luan insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow towards Lincoln when he accidentally walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] dislodges a brain tumor blocking one of his arteries, letting him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).
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* Seeing how utterly devastated the Loud sisters are about the news of Lincoln’s oncoming death. Luna retreats into the garage, venting her sorrow and anger through music, Luan goes into full mime mode and refuses to speak, and Lynn both gets much more aggressive to the point that she starts hurting herself, and actually becomes afraid to be near Lincoln. What really makes it sad is that Lincoln finds these reactions from his sisters even worse than the fact that he is going to die.

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* Seeing how utterly devastated the Loud sisters are about the news of Lincoln’s oncoming death. Luna retreats into the garage, venting her sorrow and anger through music, Luan goes into full mime mode and refuses to speak, and Lynn both gets much more aggressive to the point that she starts hurting herself, herself and actually becomes afraid to be near Lincoln. Lincoln, and Lori doesn't even know ''how'' to handle the situation. So far, Leni is the only one who remains her normal, optimistic self. What really makes it sad is that Lincoln finds these reactions from his sisters even worse ''even worse'' than the fact that he is going to die.
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* In chapter 8, Laun insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow towards Lincoln when he walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] lets him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).

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* In chapter 8, Laun insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow towards Lincoln when he accidentally walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] lets dislodges a brain tumor blocking one of his arteries, letting him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).

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* In chapter 8, Laun insensitively yells, "Did you already forget what happened the last time you hit him?" to Lynn after she throws a pillow towards Lincoln when he walks in on her changing. This is a nod towards the first chapter, where Lynn hits Lincoln with a soccer ball that [[ContrivedCoincidence unknowingly]] lets him live longer. Considering that Lynn personally blames herself for Lincoln's current state, you can imagine how hard she took this. Even the other sisters were shocked by Luan's outburst (though they had every right to).
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* The whole scene between Lincoln, Ronnie Anne, and Cristina in chapters 8 - 9. Lincoln has finally mustered up the courage to tell Ronnie Anne about his condition, and then Cristina interrupts their conversation at literally the worst moment possible, leading to Ronnie Anne jumping to the conclusion that Lincoln was about to break up with her and angrily storming off.

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* The whole scene between Lincoln, Ronnie Anne, and Cristina in chapters 8 - 9. Lincoln has finally mustered up the courage to tell Ronnie Anne about his condition, and then Cristina interrupts their conversation at literally the worst moment possible, leading to Ronnie Anne jumping to the conclusion that Lincoln was about to break up with her and angrily storming off.off.
* In chapter 9, Adrien, a boy whom Lincoln befriended in chapter 5, [[spoiler: finally succumbs to leukemia after having to deal with it for about a year and a half]]. Lincoln knew it was going to happen so he isn't ''entirely'' devastated by it, but his mother, though she tries not to show much emotion towards Lincoln, appears to have taken it pretty hard (especially since she acknowledges that she was the reason why Adrien never had any friends due to the both of them moving all the time).
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* Seeing how utterly devastated the Loud sisters get about the news about Lincoln’s oncoming death. Luna retreats into the garage, venting her sorrow and anger through music, Luan goes into full mime mode and refuses to speak, and Lynn both gets much more aggressive and actually becomes afraid to be near Lincoln. What really makes it sad is that Lincoln considers these reactions from his sisters even worse than the fact that he is going to die.

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* Seeing how utterly devastated the Loud sisters get are about the news about of Lincoln’s oncoming death. Luna retreats into the garage, venting her sorrow and anger through music, Luan goes into full mime mode and refuses to speak, and Lynn both gets much more aggressive to the point that she starts hurting herself, and actually becomes afraid to be near Lincoln. What really makes it sad is that Lincoln considers finds these reactions from his sisters even worse than the fact that he is going to die.



* The whole scene between Lincoln, Ronnie Anne, and Cristina in chapters 8 - 9. Lincoln has finally mustered up the courage to tell Ronnie Anne about his condition, and then Cristiana interrupts their conversation at literally the worst moment possible, leading to Ronnie Anne jumping to the conclusion that Lincoln was about to break up with her and angrily storming off.

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* The whole scene between Lincoln, Ronnie Anne, and Cristina in chapters 8 - 9. Lincoln has finally mustered up the courage to tell Ronnie Anne about his condition, and then Cristiana Cristina interrupts their conversation at literally the worst moment possible, leading to Ronnie Anne jumping to the conclusion that Lincoln was about to break up with her and angrily storming off.
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Given the premise of the story, it should come as no surprise that there are quite some tearjerker moments in it. Some of the notable ones include:
*Seeing how utterly devastated the Loud sisters get about the news about Lincoln’s oncoming death. Luna retreats into the garage, venting her sorrow and anger through music, Luan goes into full mime mode and refuses to speak, and Lynn both gets much more aggressive and actually becomes afraid to be near Lincoln. What really makes it sad is that Lincoln considers these reactions from his sisters even worse than the fact that he is going to die.
*The reactions of Clyde and his dads to Lincoln’s condition.
*The whole scene between Lincoln, Ronnie Anne, and Cristina in chapters 8 - 9. Lincoln has finally mustered up the courage to tell Ronnie Anne about his condition, and then Cristiana interrupts their conversation at literally the worst moment possible, leading to Ronnie Anne jumping to the conclusion that Lincoln was about to break up with her and angrily storming off.

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