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** Lynn Sr. admitting to Lincoln that he fears he failed as a father, since he couldn’t give Lincoln the life he deserves, and finally giving in to the grief of losing his only son.
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Given the premise of the story, it should come as no surprise that there are quite some TearJerker moments in it.
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** Rita barely keeping herself from crying after taking a picture of her kids all having fun in the living room, with Lincoln going after her to tell her that everything is going to be okay.
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** Rita barely keeping herself from crying after taking a picture of her kids all having fun in the living room, with Lincoln going after her to tell her that everything is going to be okay.
** The lunch scene has a strong sense of melancholy, with the sisters all apologizing to Lincoln for their mistreatment of him and Lincoln trying hard not to let them be blamed for anything.
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'''BEWARE OF SPOILERS'''
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* What hope there was left for Lisa to find a cure for Lincoln is gone when her last experiment results in all her test mice dying. Then Lincoln has enough, and convinces her to quit her futile attempts, and instead spend time with him while she still can.
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* What hope there was left for Lisa to find a cure for Lincoln is gone when her last experiment results in all her test mice dying. Then Lincoln has enough, and convinces her to quit her futile attempts, and instead spend time with him while she still can.
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* Meta/related
** The Spanish version of the story has at least two followers with conditions similar to Lincoln's (a 20-year-old man with lung cancer and a woman with an unspecified ailment).
** The Spanish version of the story has at least two followers with conditions similar to Lincoln's (a 20-year-old man with lung cancer and a woman with an unspecified ailment).