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** Though arguably the sadness of the moment is [[{{Narm}} diminished by the fact that a Phil Collins song is played over it]].
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** The original version of this scene skips the song, allowing us to hear Kenai's story from start to finish. The way his voice steadily cracks, all the while [[spoiler:Koda is slowly putting the pieces together...it's utterly gutwrenching.]]
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YOm7kg_3mYE The original version version]] of this scene skips the song, allowing us to hear Kenai's story from start to finish. The way his voice steadily cracks, all the while [[spoiler:Koda is slowly putting the pieces together...it's utterly gutwrenching.]]
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--> [[spoiler:'''Koda:''' I don't like this story.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Kenai:''' Your mother isn't coming.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Koda:''' I don't like this story.]]
--> [[spoiler:'''Kenai:''' Your mother isn't coming.]]
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--> [[spoiler:'''Koda:''' I
'''Koda:''' [[spoiler:I don't like this story.
--> [[spoiler:'''Kenai:''' Your
'''Kenai:''' [[spoiler:Your mother isn't coming.]]
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---> [[spoiler: '''Koda:''' *slowly backing away* "[[LittleNo No...No!"]]]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Kenai:''' "I ''swear'' I didn't know!"]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Koda:''' *slowly backing away* "[[LittleNo No...No!"]]]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Kenai:''' "I ''swear'' I didn't know!"]]
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---> [[spoiler: '''Kenai:''' "I [[spoiler:I didn't know--"]]
---> [[spoiler:know--]]\\
'''Koda:'''*slowly [[spoiler:(''slowly backing away* "[[LittleNo away'') [[LittleNo No...No!"]]]]
---> [[spoiler:No!]]]]\\
'''Kenai:'''"I [[spoiler:I ''swear'' I didn't know!"]]know!]]
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'''Kenai:'''
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* What about the scene where Kenai is forced to fight his brother to try and protect Koda and they're trying to kill each other and they're brothers...? That really gets me...
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* What about the scene where Kenai is forced to fight his brother to try and protect Koda and they're trying to kill each other and they're brothers...? That really gets me...?
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** [[spoiler: The way Koda is so cheerful and affectionate with Kenai, and Kenai averts his gaze, rebuffs Koda's hug, and sets him aside, in a you're-giving-me-way-too-much-credit sort of way.]]
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** [[spoiler: The way Koda is so cheerful and affectionate with Kenai, and Kenai averts his gaze, rebuffs Koda's hug, and sets him aside, in a you're-giving-me-way-too-much-credit you're-giving-me-''way''-too-much-credit sort of way.]]
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** [[spoiler: The way Koda is so cheerful and affectionate with Kenai, and Kenai averts his gaze, rebuffs Koda's hug, and sets him aside, in a you're-giving-me-way-too-much-credit sort of way.]]
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** Especially worse is when Denahi arrives on the scene [[spoiler:just moments after Kenai's transformation and sees Kenai's torn clothing and believes his own little brother is dead.]]
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** Especially worse is when Denahi arrives on the scene [[spoiler:just moments after Kenai's transformation and sees Kenai's torn clothing and believes his own little brother is dead.]]
** For that matter, the look on Sitka's face right before he breaks the glacier and plunges both himself and the bear into the lake below. The bear survives. [[spoiler: He doesn't.]]
** For that matter, the look on Sitka's face right before he breaks the glacier and plunges both himself and the bear into the lake below. The bear survives. [[spoiler: He doesn't.]]
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* In the sequel, Kenai hides Koda to try and draw away a hunter. You can see the horror on Koda's face becuase that's probably exactly the last thing he remembers his mom doing [[spoiler: before she died fighting Kenai.]]
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* In the sequel, Kenai hides Koda to try and draw away a hunter. You can see the horror on Koda's face becuase because that's probably exactly the last thing he remembers his mom doing [[spoiler: before she died fighting Kenai.]]
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---> [[spoiler: '''Koda:''' *slowly backing away* [["LittleNo No...No!"]]]]
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---> [[spoiler: '''Koda:''' *slowly backing away* [["LittleNo "[[LittleNo No...No!"]]]]
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*** And, if it were possible, the dialogue is actually ''worse'' than the final version of the scene.
---> [[spoiler: '''Kenai:''' "I didn't know--"]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Koda:''' *slowly backing away* [["LittleNo No...No!"]]]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Kenai:''' "I ''swear'' I didn't know!"]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Kenai:''' "I didn't know--"]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Koda:''' *slowly backing away* [["LittleNo No...No!"]]]]
---> [[spoiler: '''Kenai:''' "I ''swear'' I didn't know!"]]
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--> [[spoiler:'''Koda:''' I don't like this story."]]
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--> [[spoiler:'''Koda:''' I don't like this story."]]]]
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--> '''Kenai:''' Koda, I did something very wrong.
--> '''Koda:''' I don't like this story."
--> '''Kenai:''' Your mother isn't coming.
--> '''Koda:''' I don't like this story."
--> '''Kenai:''' Your mother isn't coming.
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--> '''Kenai:''' [[spoiler:'''Kenai:''' Koda, I did something very wrong.
wrong.]]
-->'''Koda:''' [[spoiler:'''Koda:''' I don't like this story."
"]]
-->'''Kenai:''' [[spoiler:'''Kenai:''' Your mother isn't coming.]]
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--> ''"Your mother's not coming."''
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--> ''"Your mother's not '''Kenai:''' Koda, I did something very wrong.
--> '''Koda:''' I don't like this story."
--> '''Kenai:''' Your mother isn't coming."''
--> '''Koda:''' I don't like this story."
--> '''Kenai:''' Your mother isn't coming.
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* The disappointed and almost remorseful look on Sitka's face when he appears to Kenai [[spoiler: moments before the latter is transformed into a bear.]] Especially since Kenai ''just'' killed the bear he thought was responsible for Sitka's death.
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* The disappointed and almost remorseful look on Sitka's face when he appears to Kenai [[spoiler: moments before the latter is transformed into a bear.]] Especially since Kenai ''just'' killed the bear he thought was responsible for Sitka's death.death.
** Especially worse is when Denahi arrives on the scene [[spoiler:just moments after Kenai's transformation and sees Kenai's torn clothing and believes his own little brother is dead.]]
** Especially worse is when Denahi arrives on the scene [[spoiler:just moments after Kenai's transformation and sees Kenai's torn clothing and believes his own little brother is dead.]]
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* The shocked and sad look on Koda's face in the sequel after Kenai yells at him to stop scaring Nita with the salmon.
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* The shocked and sad look on Koda's face in the sequel after Kenai yells at him to stop scaring Nita with the salmon. Yes, Koda was going a little overboard, but the sad look on his face...aww.
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** The original version of this scene skips the song, allowing us to hear Kenai's story from start to finish. The way his voice steadily cracks, all the while [[spoiler:Koda is slowly puts the pieces together is just gutwrenching.]]
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** The original version of this scene skips the song, allowing us to hear Kenai's story from start to finish. The way his voice steadily cracks, all the while [[spoiler:Koda is slowly puts putting the pieces together is just together...it's utterly gutwrenching.]]
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** The original version of this scene skips the song, allowing us to hear Kenai's story from start to finish. The way his voice steadily cracks, all the while [[Koda is slowly puts the pieces together is just gutwrenching.]]
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** The original version of this scene skips the song, allowing us to hear Kenai's story from start to finish. The way his voice steadily cracks, all the while [[Koda [[spoiler:Koda is slowly puts the pieces together is just gutwrenching.]]
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* The "No Way Out" scene where Kenai has to tell Koda [[spoiler: that he killed his mother.]]
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* The "No Way Out" scene where Kenai has to tell Koda [[spoiler: that he killed his mother.]]]]
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* In the sequel, Kenai hides Koda to try and draw away a hunter. You can see the horror on Koda's face becuase that's probably exactly the last thing he remembers his mom doing [[spoiler: before she died fighting Kenai.]]
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* In the sequel, Kenai hides Koda to try and draw away a hunter. You can see the horror on Koda's face becuase that's probably exactly the last thing he remembers his mom doing [[spoiler: before she died fighting Kenai.]]]]
* The disappointed and almost remorseful look on Sitka's face when he appears to Kenai [[spoiler: moments before the latter is transformed into a bear.]] Especially since Kenai ''just'' killed the bear he thought was responsible for Sitka's death.
* The disappointed and almost remorseful look on Sitka's face when he appears to Kenai [[spoiler: moments before the latter is transformed into a bear.]] Especially since Kenai ''just'' killed the bear he thought was responsible for Sitka's death.
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* Sitka's funeral. All Kenai and Denahi could find of their brother was the [[NeverFoundTheBody torn piece of his parka and his eagle totem]] and it's burned right in front of them. The only things they have left of their big brother is burnt to ashes in front of their eyes and now their both all alone in the world. It's Tanana's line straight after which really seals it.
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* Sitka's funeral. All Kenai and Denahi could find of their brother was the [[NeverFoundTheBody torn piece of his parka and his eagle totem]] and it's burned right in front of them. The only things they have left of their big brother is burnt to ashes in front of their eyes and now their they're both all alone in the world. It's Tanana's line straight after which really seals it.
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* Sitka's funeral. All Kenai and Denahi could find of their brother was the [[NeverFoundTheBody torn piece of his parka and his eagle totem]] and it's burned right in front of them. The only things they have left of their big brother is burnt to ashes in front of their eyes and now their both all alone in the world. It's Tanana's line straight afterwhich really seals it.
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* Sitka's funeral. All Kenai and Denahi could find of their brother was the [[NeverFoundTheBody torn piece of his parka and his eagle totem]] and it's burned right in front of them. The only things they have left of their big brother is burnt to ashes in front of their eyes and now their both all alone in the world. It's Tanana's line straight afterwhich after which really seals it.
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--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brothers need your guidance."''
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--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brothers need your guidance."''"''
* In the sequel, Kenai hides Koda to try and draw away a hunter. You can see the horror on Koda's face becuase that's probably exactly the last thing he remembers his mom doing [[spoiler: before she died fighting Kenai.]]
* In the sequel, Kenai hides Koda to try and draw away a hunter. You can see the horror on Koda's face becuase that's probably exactly the last thing he remembers his mom doing [[spoiler: before she died fighting Kenai.]]
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--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brothers need your guidence."''
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--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brothers need your guidence.guidance."''
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--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brother's need your guidence."''
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--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brother's brothers need your guidence."''
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* The shocked and sad look on Koda's face in the sequel after Kenai yells at him to stop scaring Nita with the salmon.
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* The shocked and sad look on Koda's face in the sequel after Kenai yells at him to stop scaring Nita with the salmon.salmon.
* Sitka's funeral. All Kenai and Denahi could find of their brother was the [[NeverFoundTheBody torn piece of his parka and his eagle totem]] and it's burned right in front of them. The only things they have left of their big brother is burnt to ashes in front of their eyes and now their both all alone in the world. It's Tanana's line straight afterwhich really seals it.
--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brother's need your guidence."''
* Sitka's funeral. All Kenai and Denahi could find of their brother was the [[NeverFoundTheBody torn piece of his parka and his eagle totem]] and it's burned right in front of them. The only things they have left of their big brother is burnt to ashes in front of their eyes and now their both all alone in the world. It's Tanana's line straight afterwhich really seals it.
--> ''"You left too soon, Sitka. Your brother's need your guidence."''
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* [[spoiler: Koda responds with a LittleNo before he darts off in disbelief, climbing a tree and watching Kenai dissolve into a HeroicBSOD.]]
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* What about the scene where Kenai is forced to fight his brother to try and protect Koda and they're trying to kill each other and they're brothers...? That really gets me...
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* What about the scene where Kenai is forced to fight his brother to try and protect Koda and they're trying to kill each other and they're brothers...? That really gets me...me...
* The shocked and sad look on Koda's face in the sequel after Kenai yells at him to stop scaring Nita with the salmon.
* The shocked and sad look on Koda's face in the sequel after Kenai yells at him to stop scaring Nita with the salmon.
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* As [[spoiler:the three brothers are reuniting on the mountain, Koda is communing with the spirit of his deceased mother, a final farewell before she joins the Spirit Plains forever.]] One can only imagine what they're saying, but you can bet it's a tearjerker.
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* As [[spoiler:the three brothers are reuniting on the mountain, Koda is communing with the spirit of his deceased mother, a final farewell before she joins the Spirit Plains forever.]] One can only imagine what they're saying, but you can bet it's a tearjerker.tearjerker.
* The moment just a few scenes later between Rut and Tuke over what it meant to be a brother, right in front of Koda, who realizes despite the mistakes his brother made, he saved him several times, showing that he did love him and that he could change, just like the moose brothers.
* What about the scene where Kenai is forced to fight his brother to try and protect Koda and they're trying to kill each other and they're brothers...? That really gets me...
* The moment just a few scenes later between Rut and Tuke over what it meant to be a brother, right in front of Koda, who realizes despite the mistakes his brother made, he saved him several times, showing that he did love him and that he could change, just like the moose brothers.
* What about the scene where Kenai is forced to fight his brother to try and protect Koda and they're trying to kill each other and they're brothers...? That really gets me...
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* TearJerker: The "No Way Out" scene where Kenai has to tell Koda [[spoiler: that he killed his mother.]]
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* TearJerker: The "No Way Out" scene where Kenai has to tell Koda [[spoiler: that he killed his mother.]]
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--> ''"Your mother's not coming."''
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* As [[spoiler:the three brothers are reuniting on the mountain, Koda is communing with the spirit of his deceased mother, a final farewell before she joins the Spirit Plains forever.]] One can only imagine what they're saying, but you can bet it's a tearjerker.
--> ''"Your mother's not coming."''
* [[spoiler: Koda responds with a LittleNo before he darts off in disbelief, climbing a tree and watching Kenai dissolve into a HeroicBSOD.]]
* As [[spoiler:the three brothers are reuniting on the mountain, Koda is communing with the spirit of his deceased mother, a final farewell before she joins the Spirit Plains forever.]] One can only imagine what they're saying, but you can bet it's a tearjerker.
