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* Ax's backstory is a barrage of these. A ''massive'' divergence from canon, in believing that the Animorphs' guerrilla actions will ultimately be useless, he gives the GeneralRipper Andalites what they want when they arrive. [[spoiler:This ends up putting Earth in serious risk of being [[EarthShatteringKaboom annihilated as collateral damage to kill all of the Yeerk on it]], and Merlin does ''[[{{Understatement}} not]]'' takes this well, giving him the powers to single-handedly fight against the entire Yeerk fleet, but making it ''very'' clear that this is Ax's punishment for his sin. And after he performs such an action? He has to fight '''the Andalites''', because the BodyHorror result of Merlin's curse has turned Ax into one of their "undesirables" and they are ''not'' willing to accept such a victory if that means having to cause (even a very minor) change on their society.]]
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* Ax's backstory is a barrage of these. A ''massive'' divergence from canon, in believing that the Animorphs' guerrilla actions will ultimately be useless, he gives the GeneralRipper Andalites what they want when they arrive. [[spoiler:This ends up putting Earth in serious risk of being [[EarthShatteringKaboom annihilated as collateral damage to kill all of the Yeerk on it]], and it]]. The Merlin does of his universe does ''[[{{Understatement}} not]]'' takes take this well, giving him and gives Ax the powers to single-handedly fight against the entire Yeerk fleet, but making fleet. But Merlin also makes it ''very'' clear that this is Ax's punishment for his sin. sin by leaving him unable to return to his own Andalite form. And after he Ax performs such defeats the Yeerk invasion force? He is rendered an action? He has to fight '''the Andalites''', exile because the BodyHorror result of Merlin's curse has turned Ax into one of their "undesirables" and they are ''not'' willing to accept such a victory if that means having to cause (even a very minor) change on their society.]]society. And as if all of that wasn't bad enough, Ax then has to fight the '''the Andalites''', because of a corrupt portion of their government has decided to start [[WarForFunAndProfit another war,]] this time with Earth!]]
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* Ax's backstory is a barrage of these. A ''massive'' divergence from canon, in believing that the Animorphs' guerrilla actions will ultimately be useless, he gives the GeneralRipper Andalites what they want when they arrive. [[spoiler:This ends up putting Earth in serious risk of being [[EarthShatteringKaboom annihilated as collateral damage to kill all of the Yeerk on it]], and Merlin does ''[[{{Understatement}} not]]'' takes this well, giving him the powers to single-handedly fight against the entire Yeerk fleet, but making it ''very'' clear that this is Ax's punishment for his sin. And after he performs such an action? He has to fight '''the Andalites''', because the BodyHorror result of Merlin's curse has turned Ax into one of their "undesirables" and they are ''not'' willing to accept such a victory if that means having to cause (even a very minor) change on their society.]]
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* The Champions and Stingray Industries are also struggling to recover. Over half of the Stingray Security Services people were wiped out as a result of CHIMERA, and roughly half of the Champions branches are shut down because they don't have enough people to run them. It really drives home just how many people died during Fanfic/CorelineOperationEndgame.
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* The Champions and Stingray Industries are also struggling to recover. Over half of the Stingray Security Services people were wiped out as a result of CHIMERA, and roughly half of the Champions branches are shut down because they don't have enough people to run them. It really drives home just how many people died during Fanfic/CorelineOperationEndgame.Fanfic/CorelineOperationEndgame.
* Ax's backstory is a barrage of these.
* Ax's backstory is a barrage of these.
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-->'''Tony''': ''Too much luxury! That's the line we've been getting this entire time! It was somehow a sin for me and everybody else to want for our friends and teammates to have the absolute best! That the Avengers didn't somehow deserve the best when they came back home from putting their lives and sanity on the line, over and over again! That they were somehow soft and weak because they got stressed or tired or fed up or even burnt out over being roasted by alts of Jameson and his ilk or being pelted with produce because they somehow didn't do enough on top of everything else they had put up with while saving the entire world! And that the mes and everybody else wanted every Avenger to know that, yes, what they did was appreciated! That they were our friends and compatriots and we wanted the best for them! That we didn't want them burning out or running themselves into the ground! And that we were wrong to do that when they should've been hard and strong and just toughed everything out all by themselves!''
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-->'''Tony''': ''Too much luxury! That's the line we've been getting this entire time! It was somehow a sin for me and everybody else to want for our friends and teammates to have the absolute best! That the Avengers didn't somehow deserve the best when they came back home from putting their lives and sanity on the line, over and over again! That they were somehow soft and weak because they got stressed or tired or fed up or even burnt out over being roasted by alts of Jameson and his ilk or being pelted with produce because they somehow didn't do enough on top of everything else they had put up with while saving the entire world! And that the mes and everybody else wanted every Avenger to know that, yes, what they did was appreciated! That they were our friends and compatriots and we wanted the best for them! That we didn't want them burning out or running themselves into the ground! And that we were wrong to do that when they should've been hard and strong and just toughed everything out all by themselves!''themselves!''
* The Champions and Stingray Industries are also struggling to recover. Over half of the Stingray Security Services people were wiped out as a result of CHIMERA, and roughly half of the Champions branches are shut down because they don't have enough people to run them. It really drives home just how many people died during Fanfic/CorelineOperationEndgame.
* The Champions and Stingray Industries are also struggling to recover. Over half of the Stingray Security Services people were wiped out as a result of CHIMERA, and roughly half of the Champions branches are shut down because they don't have enough people to run them. It really drives home just how many people died during Fanfic/CorelineOperationEndgame.
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* The bad state of things the Avengers are in qualifies. Everybody is angry and upset over so many Avengers being captured and their homes being destroyed. One Tony Stark alt is particularly upset about how so many people think that the Avengers' bases were far too luxurious, all because he and other alts of him only wanted the best for them.
-->'''Tony''': ''Too much luxury! That's the line we've been getting this entire time! It was somehow a sin for me and everybody else to want for our friends and teammates to have the absolute best! That the Avengers didn't somehow deserve the best when they came back home from putting their lives and sanity on the line, over and over again! That they were somehow soft and weak because they got stressed or tired or fed up or even burnt out over being roasted by alts of Jameson and his ilk or being pelted with produce because they somehow didn't do enough on top of everything else they had put up with while saving the entire world! And that the mes and everybody else wanted every Avenger to know that, yes, what they did was appreciated! That they were our friends and compatriots and we wanted the best for them! That we didn't want them burning out or running themselves into the ground! And that we were wrong to do that when they should've been hard and strong and just toughed everything out all by themselves!''
-->'''Tony''': ''Too much luxury! That's the line we've been getting this entire time! It was somehow a sin for me and everybody else to want for our friends and teammates to have the absolute best! That the Avengers didn't somehow deserve the best when they came back home from putting their lives and sanity on the line, over and over again! That they were somehow soft and weak because they got stressed or tired or fed up or even burnt out over being roasted by alts of Jameson and his ilk or being pelted with produce because they somehow didn't do enough on top of everything else they had put up with while saving the entire world! And that the mes and everybody else wanted every Avenger to know that, yes, what they did was appreciated! That they were our friends and compatriots and we wanted the best for them! That we didn't want them burning out or running themselves into the ground! And that we were wrong to do that when they should've been hard and strong and just toughed everything out all by themselves!''
