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* SongFic: Fearless Trick by [=FuryHearted=] Productions. (Fearless from Spirit Untamed and The Trick by AJR)
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* SongFic: Fearless Trick ''Fearless Trick'' by [=FuryHearted=] Productions. (Fearless (''Fearless'' from Spirit Untamed and ''The Trick'' by AJR) While this song is just a mashup and a central theme to the story, other songs and covers were also used such as Bryan Adams' ''Get Off of My Back'' (From ''Spirit: Stallion of the Cimmaron''), The Trick by AJR)Proclaimers' ''On My Way'' (from ''Shrek''), and Becky G's ''You Belong'' (from ''Spirit Untamed'').
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Since the town of Wallington Falls have no horses due to its low popularity, Tulio and Miguel uses kids, such as the [=PALs=], as a way to entertain the people by foot races. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Since the town of Wallington Falls have no horses due to its low popularity, Tulio and Miguel uses kids, such as the [=PALs=], as a way to entertain the people by foot races. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby. They may have differences but they sometimes fight each other during race time.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Since the town of Wallington Falls have no horses due to it's low popularity, Tulio and Miguel uses kids, such as the PALs, as a way to entertain the people by foot races. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Since the town of Wallington Falls have no horses due to it's its low popularity, Tulio and Miguel uses kids, such as the PALs, [=PALs=], as a way to entertain the people by foot races. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The kids of Wallington Falls. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The kids Since the town of Wallington Falls.Falls have no horses due to it's low popularity, Tulio and Miguel uses kids, such as the PALs, as a way to entertain the people by foot races. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* RagtagBunchofMisfits: The kids of Wallington Falls. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* RagtagBunchofMisfits: RagtagBunchOfMisfits: The kids of Wallington Falls. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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** Various [=DreamWorks=] directors and creators.
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** WesternAnimation/TheBossBaby characters: Francis E. Francis and Edwin Armstrong.
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** WesternAnimation/TheBossBaby ''WesternAnimation/TheBossBaby'' characters: Francis E. Francis and Edwin Armstrong.
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* BadassCrew: The kids of Wallington Falls. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abomainable, Tip from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* RagtagBunchofMisfits: The kids of Wallington Falls. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abominable, Tip Tucci from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* {{Neologism}}: The new word "subspection" is used.
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** Fast & Furious Spy Racers.
** ''Jurassic World Camp Cretaceous''.
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** Fast ''Fast & Furious Spy Racers.
Racers'': Echo, Tony.
** ''Jurassic World CampCretaceous''.Cretaceous'': Darius, Kenji, Sammy, Yasmina, Brooklynn and Ben.
** ''Jurassic World Camp
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Lucky Spirit is set within the world of ''WesternAnimation/SpiritUntamed'' and reworks it into an ambitious take based on an idea from a concept of ''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Turbo}}''. Loosely based on the characters from the films, the story follows Lucky Prescott on her journey to find her dream and enter a world with her friends and a fast snail she keeps named Turbo, all while taming the spirit of the mustang within herself and hopes to use her gift for good use in the greatest horse race in the frontier.
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Lucky Spirit is set within the world of ''WesternAnimation/SpiritUntamed'' and reworks it into an ambitious take based on an idea ideas from a concept of ''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Turbo}}''. Loosely based on the characters from the films, the story follows Lucky Prescott on her journey to find her dream and enter a world with her friends and a fast snail she keeps named Turbo, all while taming the spirit of the mustang within herself and hopes to use her gift for good use in the greatest horse race in the frontier.
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* ShoutOut: The town of Wallington Falls is named after ''Spirit Riding Free'' creator Aury Wallington, and another series she worked on:''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls''.
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* ShoutOut: The town of Wallington Falls is named after ''Spirit Riding Free'' creator Aury Wallington, and another series she worked on:''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls''.on: ''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls''.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]], though not to the horses due to how faithful her horse was to the OG Spirit.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]], animals, though not to the horses due to how faithful her horse was to the OG Spirit.
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* ShoutOut: The town of Wallington Falls is named after ''Spirit Riding Free'' creator Aury Wallington, and another series she worked on:''WesternAnimation/Gravity Falls''.
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* ShoutOut: The town of Wallington Falls is named after ''Spirit Riding Free'' creator Aury Wallington, and another series she worked on:''WesternAnimation/Gravity Falls''.on:''WesternAnimation/GravityFalls''.
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* AnimalTalk: While Turbo and the snail crew can talk most in the story, the horses, including Perry the Bilby, remain speechless. When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she [[SpeaksFluentAnimal is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]] but not to the horses due to how faithful it was to the OG Spirit.
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* AnimalTalk: While Turbo and the snail crew can talk most in the story, the horses, including Perry the Bilby, remain speechless. When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she [[SpeaksFluentAnimal is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]] but not to the horses due to how faithful it was to the OG Spirit.
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* SpeaksFluentAnimal: When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]], though not to the horses due to how faithful her horse was to the OG Spirit.
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* AnimalTalk: While some animals can talk, such as Turbo the snail, the horses in this world remain speechless, only making horse sounds that the humans don't understand. When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she [[SpeaksFluentAnimal is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]] but not to the horses due to being faithful to the OG Spirit.
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* AnimalTalk: While some animals can talk, such as Turbo and the snail, snail crew can talk most in the horses in this world story, the horses, including Perry the Bilby, remain speechless, only making horse sounds that the humans don't understand. speechless. When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she [[SpeaksFluentAnimal is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]] but not to the horses due to being how faithful it was to the OG Spirit.
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* AnimalTalk: While some animals can talk, such as Turbo the snail, the horses in this world remain speechless, only making horse sounds that the humans don't understand. When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she [[SpeaksFluentAnimal is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]] but not to the horses due to being faithful to the OG Spirit.
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* WantonCrueltyToTheCommonComma: Now and then, an ellipsis will have a comma next to it.
--->'''Lucky:''' Hola,... glad some of you horses are safe, huh?
--->'''Lucky:''' Hola,... glad some of you horses are safe, huh?
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Ever wonder what happens when you mash all [=DreamWorks=] stories in one take? Lucky Spirit does that with a huge cast and turns it into a world beyond [=DreamWorks=] Animation to make something different.
Lucky Spirit sets within the world of ''WesternAnimation/SpiritUntamed'' and reworks it into an ambitious take based on an idea from a concept of ''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Turbo}}''. Loosely based on the characters from the films, the story follows Lucky Prescott on her journey to find her dream and enter a world with her friends and a fast snail she keeps named Turbo, all while taming the spirit of the mustang within herself and hopes to use her gift for good use in the greatest horse race in the frontier.
Lucky Spirit sets within the world of ''WesternAnimation/SpiritUntamed'' and reworks it into an ambitious take based on an idea from a concept of ''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Turbo}}''. Loosely based on the characters from the films, the story follows Lucky Prescott on her journey to find her dream and enter a world with her friends and a fast snail she keeps named Turbo, all while taming the spirit of the mustang within herself and hopes to use her gift for good use in the greatest horse race in the frontier.
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Ever wonder what happens when you mash all [=DreamWorks=] stories in one take? Lucky Spirit ''Lucky Spirit'' does that with a huge cast cast, and turns it into a world beyond [=DreamWorks=] Animation to make create something different.
Lucky Spiritsets is set within the world of ''WesternAnimation/SpiritUntamed'' and reworks it into an ambitious take based on an idea from a concept of ''WesternAnimation/BrotherBear'' and ''WesternAnimation/{{Turbo}}''. Loosely based on the characters from the films, the story follows Lucky Prescott on her journey to find her dream and enter a world with her friends and a fast snail she keeps named Turbo, all while taming the spirit of the mustang within herself and hopes to use her gift for good use in the greatest horse race in the frontier.
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** Jurassic World Camp Cretaceous.
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** Jurassic ''Jurassic World Camp Cretaceous.Cretaceous''.
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** Megamind characters: Roxanne Ritchi.
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** Megamind ''WesternAnimation/{{Megamind}}'' characters: Roxanne Ritchi.
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* MagicGenetics: The soul of Spirit Jr. is able to infuse with Lucky's DNA and give her horse-like powers by being absorbed into her system.
* ShoutOut: The town known as Wallington Falls is named after Spirit Riding Free creator Aury Wallington who worked on Gravity Falls hence the namesake.
* ShoutOut: The town known as Wallington Falls is named after Spirit Riding Free creator Aury Wallington who worked on Gravity Falls hence the namesake.
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* MagicGenetics: The soul of Spirit Jr. is able to infuse fuse with Lucky's DNA and give her horse-like powers by being absorbed into her system.
* {{Neologism}}: The new word "subspection" is used.
* PresentTenseNarrative: The story frequently switches between the present tense and the past tense, sometimes in the same sentence. Here's one example:
--->She tries to speak again but,...she neighed again and covered her mouth once more.
* ShoutOut: The townknown as of Wallington Falls is named after Spirit ''Spirit Riding Free Free'' creator Aury Wallington who Wallington, and another series she worked on Gravity Falls hence the namesake.on:''WesternAnimation/Gravity Falls''.
* {{Neologism}}: The new word "subspection" is used.
* PresentTenseNarrative: The story frequently switches between the present tense and the past tense, sometimes in the same sentence. Here's one example:
--->She tries to speak again but,...she neighed again and covered her mouth once more.
* ShoutOut: The town
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* SuperSpeed: Lucky's horse gift and Turbo's born gift.
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* SuperSpeed: Lucky's horse gift and Turbo's born gift.gift.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: At one point, when Lucky is chased by a lion, the narration says that she's "giving the lion the chase", although that would mean that she was the one chasing the lion.
* YouKeepUsingThatWord: At one point, when Lucky is chased by a lion, the narration says that she's "giving the lion the chase", although that would mean that she was the one chasing the lion.
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* NearlyNormalAnimal: While some animals can talk, such as Turbo the snail, the horses in this world remain speechless, only making horse sounds that the humans don't understand. When Lucky has her horse's spirit in her, she [[SpeaksFluentAnimal is the only character who is able to speak to some animals]] but not to the horses due to being faithful to the OG Spirit.
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* SongFic: Fearless Trick by [=FuryHearted=] Productions.
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* SongFic: Fearless Trick by [=FuryHearted=] Productions. (Fearless from Spirit Untamed and The Trick by AJR)
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* BornUnlucky: Lucky is an unlucky girl who shouldn't ride a horse in Palomino Bluffs and has been on a luck streak since she was born.
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* BadassCrew: The kids of Wallington Falls. Yi, Jin and Peng from Abomainable, Tip from Home, Dawn Betterman from The Croods: A New Age, and Tim Templeton from The Boss Baby.
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* ShoutOut: The town known as Wallington Falls is named after Spirit Riding Free creator Aury Wallington who worked on Gravity Falls hence the namesake.
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** Characters from [=DreamWorks=] Animation Television
*** Fast & Furious Spy Racers.
*** Jurassic World Camp Cretaceous.
*** Fast & Furious Spy Racers.
*** Jurassic World Camp Cretaceous.
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** Characters from [=DreamWorks=] Animation Television
***Fast & Furious Spy Racers.
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