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'''Renegade:''' (''outloud'') Heroes... Whatever. (''in Godspeech'') Yep.
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'''Renegade:''' (''outloud'') ''[outloud]'' Heroes... Whatever. (''in Godspeech'') ''[in Godspeech]'' Yep.
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--> '''Paul:''' (''about Zeus looking for a new wife'') As a known serial adulterer with no devotees and few worshippers, what are his chances?
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--> '''Paul:''' (''about ''[about Zeus looking for a new wife'') wife]'' As a known serial adulterer with no devotees and few worshippers, what are his chances?
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---> '''Paul:''' (''internally'') Oh, ''snap''! Take that, Abraham!
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---> '''Paul:''' (''internally'') ''[internally]'' Oh, ''snap''! Take that, Abraham!
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---> '''Paul:''' (''internally'') ''Finite'' torment for sinners. Because anything else would be barbaric. Suck it, Jehovah.
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---> '''Paul:''' (''internally'') ''[internally]'' ''Finite'' torment for sinners. Because anything else would be barbaric. Suck it, Jehovah.
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* NasalTrauma: The Queen of Fable gets a broken nose after "Prince Pavlos" [[UseYourHead headbutts her]].
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* NasalTrauma: The Queen of Fable Fables gets a broken nose after "Prince Pavlos" [[UseYourHead headbutts her]].
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** Queen of Fable's attack on Paul is [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5892641 magic that affects his mind, but is distinct from telepathy]].
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** Queen of Fable's Fables' attack on Paul is [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5892641 magic that affects his mind, but is distinct from telepathy]].
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* AdultFear: The Renegade discusses the horror of early-stage Alzheimer's Disease, where you're still self-aware enough to realize how much you're losing. Just as well his new yellow ring is [[PsychoactivePowers strengthened by fear]].
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* MythologyGag: When thinking of a worse place he could be sent to than where he currently is (Siberia), Sergeant Pushkin jokingly thinks Detroit. This is a reference to the 80s, when a second team of the League was operating out of a warehouse in Detroit and was nicknamed Justice League Detroit [[FanNickname by the fans]].
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* MythologyGag: When thinking of a worse place he could be sent to than where he currently is (Siberia), Sergeant Pushkin jokingly thinks Detroit. This is a reference to the 80s, when a second team of the League was operating out of a warehouse in Detroit and was nicknamed Justice League Detroit [[FanNickname by the fans]].Detroit.
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** The Queen of Fables is [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5942263 probably strong enough]] to trigger the effect of the Sword of the Fallen.
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*** What this entails [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5941476 is]] [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5941501 explained]].
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** The Queen of Fables will be in Tartarus [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5941440 for as long as the people sending her there want her there]].
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* LeaningOnTheFourthWall: When Prince Pavlos asks Donna who the main character of the play is, she says:
--> "You're the main character, Paul."
--> "You're the main character, Paul."
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** The Renegade has only tested the Sword of Second and Third [[https://forums.sufficientvelocity.com/threads/with-this-ring-young-justice-si-thread-twelve.25032/post-5929954 on conventional materials]].
