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* RealityEnsues:
** If you go up against several crooks who have highly advanced alien weaponry with just a ski mask and a baseball bat while being on your own, you're gonna get your ass kicked.
** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats (alien or otherwise), you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
** If you go up against several crooks who have highly advanced alien weaponry with just a ski mask and a baseball bat while being on your own, you're gonna get your ass kicked.
** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats (alien or otherwise), you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
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* TooDumbToLive:
** If you go up against several crooks who have highly advanced alien weaponry with just a ski mask and a baseball bat while being on your own, you're gonna get your ass kicked.
** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats (alien or otherwise), you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
** If you go up against several crooks who have highly advanced alien weaponry with just a ski mask and a baseball bat while being on your own, you're gonna get your ass kicked.
** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats (alien or otherwise), you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
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ties or not, though her brief comments suggest her mother is frequently absent.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager, greatly confusing Maggie (who thinks Alex is hitting on her) and further greatly confusing Alex (who assures Maggie she is ''[[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial not]]'' hitting on her).
%%* AmbiguouslyEvil: It doesn't become clear at the end of the episode whether Lena is aware of her mother's activities or not, though her brief comments suggest her mother is frequently absent.
%%* AmbiguouslyEvil: It doesn't become clear at the end of the episode whether Lena is aware of her mother's activities or not, though her brief comments suggest her mother is frequently absent.
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%%* AmbiguouslyEvil: It doesn't become clear at the end of the episode whether Lena is aware of her mother's activities
ties or not, though her brief comments suggest her mother is frequently absent.
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Alex turns out to be lesbian, so this seems more appropriate.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager, greatly confusing Maggie (who thinks Alex is hitting on her) and further greatly confusing Alex (who assures Maggie she is ''[[MistakenForGay not]]'' [[MistakenForGay hitting on her]]).
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager, greatly confusing Maggie (who thinks Alex is hitting on her) and further greatly confusing Alex (who assures Maggie she is ''[[MistakenForGay ''[[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial not]]'' [[MistakenForGay hitting on her]]).her).
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager, greatly confusing Maggie (who thinks Alex is hitting on her) and further greatly confusing Alex (who assures Maggie she is ''[[MistakenForGay not]]'' [[MistakenForGay hitting on her]]
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager, greatly confusing Maggie (who thinks Alex is hitting on her) and further greatly confusing Alex (who assures Maggie she is ''[[MistakenForGay not]]'' [[MistakenForGay hitting on her]]her]]).
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager.teenager, greatly confusing Maggie (who thinks Alex is hitting on her) and further greatly confusing Alex (who assures Maggie she is ''[[MistakenForGay not]]'' [[MistakenForGay hitting on her]]
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** Winn immediately sees through James's nonsensical excuse after he is beaten up while playing vigilante. It helps that he has video of James at the scene.
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** Winn immediately sees through James's nonsensical excuse after he is beaten up while playing vigilante. It helps that he has video of James unmasking at the scene.
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* BrutalHonesty: When Alex awkwardly tries to ask Maggie out (just for a fun girls' night, she claims), the latter immediately confronts Alex with the fact that she is obviously gay.
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* BrutalHonesty: When Alex awkwardly tries to ask Maggie out (just for a fun girls' night, she claims), the latter immediately confronts points out that Alex with is behaving like other gay women she's known who were still in the fact that she is obviously gay.closet.
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* ClosetKey: Maggie has Alex questioning her sexuality.
* CoitusInterruptus: Kara walks in on Mon-El and Miss Tessmacher boning.
* CoitusInterruptus: Kara walks in on Mon-El and Miss Tessmacher boning.
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* ClosetKey: When Alex is talking to Winn about how she's worried for Maggie after her breakup, Winn observes that she's not interested in Maggie "that" way, causing Alex to mull that over silently. This, combined with Maggie's reaction to what Alex ''thought'' was an invitation to hang out has Alex questioning her sexuality.
* CoitusInterruptus: Kara walks in on Mon-El and Miss Tessmacherboning.as they're about to have sex.
* CoitusInterruptus: Kara walks in on Mon-El and Miss Tessmacher
* DiggingYourselfDeeper: Mon-El initially doesn't see anything wrong with letting Eve handle all his work, since he remembers how things were on his homeworld.
-->'''Mon-El:''' She wanted to please me. On Daxam, when a woman wishes to please a man --
-->'''Kara:''' Just -- wherever you're going with that, just -- just ''don't''.
-->'''Mon-El:''' She wanted to please me. On Daxam, when a woman wishes to please a man --
-->'''Kara:''' Just -- wherever you're going with that, just -- just ''don't''.
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* MundaneUtility: Kara uses her HeatVision to give Mon-El a haircut.
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* MundaneUtility: Kara uses her HeatVision to give Mon-El a haircut.haircut, which is typically how Clark cuts his own hair and shaves in the comics.
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** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats, you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
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** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats, threats (alien or otherwise), you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
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* ShootingSuperman: Subverted. When one of the bank robbers points an ordinary gun at Supergirl, she's quick to point out how useless it is. Cue the other guy shooting her with an alien plasma cannon.
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* ShootingSuperman: Subverted. When one of the bank robbers points an ordinary gun at Supergirl, she's quick to point out how useless it is. Cue the other guy shooting her with an alien plasma cannon.
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Removed for inaccuracies. Mon-El's moments of ignorance towards earth culture in this episode do not actually imply him as sexist even if he is one. If you disagree with this then start a discussion about it and wait for responses before making any changes! (You don't have to wait forever, just within reason.)
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* DeliberateValuesDissonance: A lot of attention is given to how sexist Mon-El is purely because that is how he was raised on Daxam.
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* InnocentBigot: Mon-El shows a pretty sexist side. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance But that's just what he learned on his home planet.]]
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* OhMyGods: Kara mutters a brief "Thank Rao" after explaining to Mon-El that Earth isn't like Daxam, especially with regards to his [[InnocentBigot casual sexism]].
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* OhMyGods: Kara mutters a brief "Thank Rao" after explaining to Mon-El that Earth isn't like Daxam, especially with regards to his [[InnocentBigot casual sexism]].Daxam.
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Cadmus is back, and this time, their fear-mongering propaganda involves arming crooks with alien tech guns terrorizing National City. Meanwhile, Lena invited both Kara and Supergirl to her fundraising party.
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Cadmus is back, and this time, their fear-mongering propaganda involves arming crooks with alien tech guns terrorizing to terrorize National City. Meanwhile, Lena invited invites both Kara and Supergirl to her fundraising party.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally,]] but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager.
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally,]] normally]], but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager.
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* BeamOWar: Kara does this a few times against the alien guns. She isn't able to overpower them, and is overpowered herself a couple times when she either stops trying or the others join in.
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* BeamOWar: Kara does this a few times with HeatVision against the alien guns. She isn't able to overpower them, and is overpowered herself a couple times when she either stops trying or the others join in.
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* BrutalHonesty: When Alex awkwardly tries to ask Maggie out, the latter immediately confronts Alex with the fact that she is obviously gay.
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* BrutalHonesty: When Alex awkwardly tries to ask Maggie out, out (just for a fun girls' night, she claims), the latter immediately confronts Alex with the fact that she is obviously gay.
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* CelebrityParadox: Mon-El references ''Series/GreysAnatomy'' when justifying why he thought it was okay to have sex in the workplace. Chyler Leigh, who plays Alex, was a series regular on ''Grey's'' for several seasons. However, since Mon-El never actually name-drops the show, instead referring to it as a "TV show about doctors", he could have been talking about an InUniverse equivalent.
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* CelebrityParadox: Mon-El references ''Series/GreysAnatomy'' when justifying why he thought it was okay to have sex in the workplace. Chyler Leigh, who plays Alex, was a series regular on ''Grey's'' for several seasons. However, since Mon-El never actually name-drops the show, instead referring to it as a "TV show about doctors", doctors," he could have been talking about an InUniverse equivalent.
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* InnocentBigot: Mon-El shows a pretty sexist side. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance But that's just what he learned on his home planet]].
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* InnocentBigot: Mon-El shows a pretty sexist side. [[DeliberateValuesDissonance But that's just what he learned on his home planet]].planet.]]
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* MythologyGag: Eve Teschmacher was Lex Luthor's curvaceous assistant in Film/SupermanTheMovie.
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* MythologyGag: Eve Teschmacher was Lex Luthor's curvaceous assistant in Film/SupermanTheMovie.''Film/SupermanTheMovie''.
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* OffScreenBreakUp: Maggie's girlfriend dumped her in-between episodes.
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* OffScreenBreakUp: OffScreenBreakup: Maggie's girlfriend dumped her in-between episodes.
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** Kara argues with Alex that Music/NSync is not weird music when discussing about personal hobbies and interests.
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** Kara argues with Alex that Music/NSync Music/{{NSYNC}} is not weird music when discussing about personal hobbies and interests.
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* MythologyGag: Eve Teschmacher was Lex Luthor's curvaceous assistant in Film/SupermanTheMovie.
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* Foreshadowing: The head of Cadmus tells Miner that she's doing what she's doing for the safety of "my son and my daughter," at the same time that she's warning him not to mess with the Luthor family. Since we know that the Luthor family includes a brother and sister, this drops a hint as to who she really is.
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* Foreshadowing: {{Foreshadowing}}: The head of Cadmus tells Miner that she's doing what she's doing for the safety of "my son and my daughter," at the same time that she's warning him not to mess with the Luthor family. Since we know that the Luthor family includes a brother and sister, this drops a hint as to who she really is.
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*Foreshadowing: The head of Cadmus tells Miner that she's doing what she's doing for the safety of "my son and my daughter," at the same time that she's warning him not to mess with the Luthor family. Since we know that the Luthor family includes a brother and sister, this drops a hint as to who she really is.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: Eve Tessmacher can't stop ogling over Mike/Mon-El. She's also this close to literally eating him up when the two of them are about to get kinky in the supply closet.
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* EatingTheEyeCandy: Eve Tessmacher can't stop ogling over Mike/Mon-El. She's also this close to literally eating him up when the two of them are about to get kinky in the supply closet.
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* ForgotICouldFly: No one brings up J'onn helping out when Kara and Supergirl have to both appear at Lena's party (in fact, he barely has any screen time in this episode).
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* ForgotICouldFly: ForgotAboutHisPowers: No one brings up J'onn helping out when Kara and Supergirl have to both appear at Lena's party (in fact, he barely has any screen time in this episode).
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* {{Adorkable}}: Alex [[TheStoic really isn't this normally,]] but around Maggie, she acts like a clueless and lovestruck teenager.
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* CelebrityParadox: Mon-El references ''Series/GreysAnatomy'' when justifying why he thought it was okay to have sex in the workplace. Chyler Leigh, who plays Alex, was a series regular on ''Grey's'' for several seasons. However, since Mon-El never actually name-drops the show, instead referring to it as a "TV show about doctors", he could have been talking about an InUniverse equivalent.
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* EnergyWeapon: One of the weapons Cadmus gives Miner's crew is a photon cannon. Winn notes that if it had been fully charged there's no telling what would have happened to Kara if it had been fully charged.
* FishOutOfWater: Mon-El's attempt to pass as human is comically inept, such as believing his Social Security number is his primary ID and having no idea how to operate a telephone. Fortunately for him, being attractive lets him rope Tessmacher into doing his work for him.
* FishOutOfWater: Mon-El's attempt to pass as human is comically inept, such as believing his Social Security number is his primary ID and having no idea how to operate a telephone. Fortunately for him, being attractive lets him rope Tessmacher into doing his work for him.
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* EnergyWeapon: One of the weapons Cadmus gives Miner's crew is a photon cannon. Winn notes that if it had been fully charged there's no telling what would have happened to Kara if it had been fully charged.
Kara.
* FishOutOfWater: Mon-El's attempt to pass as human is comically inept, such as believing his Social Security number is his primary ID and having no idea how to operate a telephone. Fortunately for him, being attractive lets him rope Miss Tessmacher into doing his work for him.
* FishOutOfWater: Mon-El's attempt to pass as human is comically inept, such as believing his Social Security number is his primary ID and having no idea how to operate a telephone. Fortunately for him, being attractive lets him rope Miss Tessmacher into doing his work for him.
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--->'''Kara:''' This is ''the definition'' of something looking like what it looks like.
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--->'''Kara:''' This is ''the definition'' of something looking like being what it looks like.like!
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* RealityEnsues: If you go up against several crooks who have highly advanced alien weaponry with just a ski mask and a baseball bat while being on your own, you're gonna get your ass kicked.
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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
** If you go up against several crooks who have highly advanced alien weaponry with just a ski mask and a baseball bat while being on your own, you're gonna get your asskicked.kicked.
** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats, you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
** If you go up against several crooks who have highly advanced alien weaponry with just a ski mask and a baseball bat while being on your own, you're gonna get your ass
** On the other hand, if as a group of random criminals you decide to go up against a wealthy family with a reputation for not tolerating threats, you can expect your heist to be prematurely interrupted.
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* CoitusInterruptus: Kara walks in on Mon-El boning Miss Tessmacher.
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* CoitusInterruptus: Kara walks in on Mon-El boning and Miss Tessmacher.Tessmacher boning.
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** Winn immediately sees through James' nonsensical excuse after he is beaten up while playing vigilante. It helps that he has video of James at the scene.
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** Winn immediately sees through James' James's nonsensical excuse after he is beaten up while playing vigilante. It helps that he has video of James at the scene.
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Cadmus is back, and this time, their fear mongering propaganda involves arming crooks with alien tech guns terrorizing National City. Meanwhile, Lena invited both Kara and Supergirl to her fundraising party.
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Cadmus is back, and this time, their fear mongering fear-mongering propaganda involves arming crooks with alien tech guns terrorizing National City. Meanwhile, Lena invited both Kara and Supergirl to her fundraising party.
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** Winn immediately sees through James' nonsensical excuse after he is beaten up while playing vigilante.
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** Winn immediately sees through James' nonsensical excuse after he is beaten up while playing vigilante. It helps that he has video of James at the scene.
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* ContinuityNod: Lena thanks Alex for saving her back when Corben was trying to kill her.
* ContinuityNod: Lena thanks Alex for saving her back when Corben was trying to kill her.
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* ShoutOut: Mon-El took the idea of sex being totally normal in the workplace from ''Series/GreysAnatomy''.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Mon-El took the idea of sex being totally normal in the workplace from ''Series/GreysAnatomy''.
** Mon-El took the idea of sex being totally normal in the workplace from ''Series/GreysAnatomy''.
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* WhamLine: Lena to the head of Cadmus: "So, what do you want[[DramaticPause ...]] ''Mom?''
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* WhamLine: Lena to the head of Cadmus: "So, what can I do you want[[DramaticPause ...for you[[DramaticPause ...]] ''Mom?''''Mom?''"
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* OhMyGods: Kara mutters a brief "Thank Rao" after explaining to Mon-El that Earth isn't like Daxam, especially with regards to his [[InnocentBigot casual sexism]].
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* OhMyGods: Kara mutters a brief "Thank Rao" after explaining to Mon-El that Earth isn't like Daxam, especially with regards to his [[InnocentBigot casual sexism]].