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* AbsurdlyBrightLight: Marty's glasses give off a bright shine while talking to Greg.
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* AbsurdlyBrightLight: Marty's glasses and teeth give off a bright shine while he's talking to Greg.
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* HurricaneOfExcuses: After running into Sour Cream by accident, Marty suddenly goes in a blathering rant about how busy show-business is which Greg and Steven talk over.
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* HurricaneOfExcuses: After running into Sour Cream by accident, Marty suddenly goes in a blathering rant about how busy show-business is is, which Greg and Steven talk over.
* OpportunisticBastard: Marty stopped by in Beach City to give Greg the $10 million royalty check, but when he found out Sour Cream was going to DJ at a concert, he decides to use it to promote Guacola
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* PetTheDog: As bad as Marty is, he does make a nice gesture to Steven for no real gain; Specifically, he makes him an official Roadie. The billboard he put up for Sour Cream's show also looks pretty great.
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* PetTheDog: As bad as Marty is, he does make a nice gesture to Steven for no real gain; Specifically, gain, specifically, he makes him an official Roadie. The billboard he put up for Sour Cream's show also looks pretty great.
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** More subtly, Yellowtale was watching the setup on the beach the whole time...
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** More subtly, Yellowtale Yellowtail was watching the setup on the beach the whole time...
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* BadToTheLastDrop: Guacola is a soda made from three avocados ''per can'' - from [[RuleOfFunny concentrate]]! It tastes awful, and has the looks and consistency of green slime. Ronaldo tries to use it like regular guacamole on chips, and it's still horrible.
** And his post on ''Keep Beach City Weird'' was sponsored, and it's said that it's made by a company called Gluggman Industrial Adhesives, and the part that makes the Guacola is currently being sued in ''17 different states''.
** And his post on ''Keep Beach City Weird'' was sponsored, and it's said that it's made by a company called Gluggman Industrial Adhesives, and the part that makes the Guacola is currently being sued in ''17 different states''.
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* BadToTheLastDrop: Guacola is a soda made from three avocados ''per can'' - -- from [[RuleOfFunny concentrate]]! It tastes awful, and has the looks and consistency of green slime. Ronaldo tries to use it like regular guacamole on chips, and it's still horrible.
** And hishorrible. In a sponsored post on ''Keep Beach City Weird'' was sponsored, and Weird'', it's said that it's made by a company called Gluggman Industrial Adhesives, and the part that makes the Guacola which is currently being sued in ''17 different states''.17 states in connection with the cola.
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* {{Squick}}: InUniverse, ''everyone'' (save Onion) hates Guacola - and even Onion is less enthusiastic about it than simply able to drink it.
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* {{Squick}}: InUniverse, ''everyone'' (save Onion) hates Guacola - Guacola, and even Onion is less enthusiastic about it than simply able to drink it.
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* CreatorCameo: Ian Jones-Quartey appears as one of the members of the audience at Sour Cream's concert. And then it's shown that he passed out from the Guacola.
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* CreatorCameo: Ian Jones-Quartey appears as one of the members of the audience at Sour Cream's concert. And then it's shown that he passed out from the Guacola. He later made a [[https://mobile.twitter.com/ianjq/status/755247156554981376 post]] stating he was alright.
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* BerserkButton: Marty seems to be Yellowtail's, as when Greg mentions that Sour Cream's concert getting turned into an advertisement for Guacola was Marty's idea, Yellowtail is furious.
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** Greg and Yellowtail, too. Yellowtail wants his children to have a stable career, while Greg believes personal happiness is more important than money.
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** Greg and Yellowtail, too. They're both loving fathers but Yellowtail wants his children to have a stable career, careers, while Greg believes personal happiness is more important than money.
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* InTheBlood: Sour Cream's interest in the music business, albeit in different aspects of it, is the ''only'' personality trait he shares with his father.
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* LikeFatherLikeSon: Sour Cream's interest in the music business, albeit in different aspects of it, is the ''only'' personality trait he shares with his father.
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* InSeriesNickname: Marty still calls Greg "Starchild". He calls Steven "Starchild Junior" and abbreviates Sour Cream's name to "SC".
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* InSeriesNickname: Marty still calls Greg "Starchild". He calls Steven "Starchild Junior" and abbreviates Sour Cream's name to "SC".
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* YouCalledMeXItMustBeSerious: Before leaving, when Marty gives Greg the money, he calls him "Universe" instead of his usual "Starchild."
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** And his post on ''Keep Beach City Weird'' was sponsored, and it's said that it's made by a company called Gluggman Industrial Adhesives, and the part that makes the Guacola is currently being sued in ''17 different states''.
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* AbsenteeActor: None of the other Crystal Gems appear in this episode.
* AbsurdlyBrightLight: Marty's glasses give off a bright shine when talking to Greg.
* AbsurdlyBrightLight: Marty's glasses give off a bright shine when talking to Greg.
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* BadToTheLastDrop: Guacola is a soda made from three avocados ''per can'' - from [[RuleOfFunny concentrate]]! It tastes awful and has the looks and consistency of green slime. Ronaldo tries to use it like regular guacamole on nachos and it's still horrible.
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* BadToTheLastDrop: Guacola is a soda made from three avocados ''per can'' - from [[RuleOfFunny concentrate]]! It tastes awful awful, and has the looks and consistency of green slime. Ronaldo tries to use it like regular guacamole on nachos chips, and it's still horrible.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: Onion and maybe Marty are the ''only ones'' who likes Guacola.
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* BizarreTasteInFood: Onion and maybe ''maybe'' Marty are the ''only ones'' who likes Guacola.
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** Steven brings up numerous details from "Story for Steven", like how big of a jerk Marty was to his dad and how horrible his manager skills were when it came to promoting Greg's concert.
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** Steven brings up numerous details from "Story for Steven", like how big of a jerk Marty was to his dad dad, and how horrible his manager skills were when it came to promoting Greg's concert.
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* CreatorCameo: Ian Jones-Quartey appears as one of the members of the audience at Sour Cream's concert.
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* CreatorCameo: Ian Jones-Quartey appears as one of the members of the audience at Sour Cream's concert. And then it's shown that he passed out from the Guacola.
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** Greg and Yellowtail too. Yellowtail wants his children to have a stable career, while Greg believes personal happiness is more important than money.
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** Greg and Yellowtail Yellowtail, too. Yellowtail wants his children to have a stable career, while Greg believes personal happiness is more important than money.
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* IAmNotMyFather: Yellowtail wants Sour Cream to be a fisherman like him, while Sour Cream wants to be a DJ. They argue over it while Steven's packing Sour Cream's equipment to the warehouse.
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* IAmNotMyFather: Yellowtail wants Sour Cream to be a fisherman like him, while Sour Cream wants to be a DJ. They argue over it while Steven's packing Sour Cream's equipment to the warehouse.equipment.
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* InSeriesNickname: Marty still calls Greg "Star Child". He calls Steven "Star Child Junior" and abbreviates Sour Cream's name to "SC".
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* InSeriesNickname: Marty still calls Greg "Star Child". "Starchild". He calls Steven "Star Child "Starchild Junior" and abbreviates Sour Cream's name to "SC".
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* PetTheDog: As bad as Marty is, he does make a nice gesture to Steven for no real gain. Specifically, he makes him an official Roadie. The billboard he put up for Sour Cream's show also looks pretty great.
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* PetTheDog: As bad as Marty is, he does make a nice gesture to Steven for no real gain. gain; Specifically, he makes him an official Roadie. The billboard he put up for Sour Cream's show also looks pretty great.
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* AbsenteeActor: None of the other Crystal Gems appear in this episode.
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* BlahBlahBlah: Subverted. Sour Cream seems to disparagingly mimic Yellowtail's gibberish while complaining to Steven about him, but when calling out Marty, he slips into the same "language".
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* CoolShades: Marty has a pair with red lenses and yellow arms, to complete his rocker look.
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* AbsurdlyBrightLight: Marty's glasses give off a bright shine when talking to Greg.
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* EarlyBirdCameo: In "Onion Friend", there's a photo of Amethyst mockingly posing as Marty, older (balder) than he appeared in "Story for Steven".
* FelonyMisdemeanor: Steven is outraged that Guacola is made from concentrate.
* FelonyMisdemeanor: Steven is outraged that Guacola is made from concentrate.
* InSeriesNickname: Marty still calls Greg "Star Child". He calls Steven "Star Child Junior" and abbreviates Sour Cream's name to "SC".
* LiteralMinded: Steven doing a mic check: "This mic looks great!"
* NiceShoes: Marty sports a pair of [[MercurysWings winged]] golden sneakers. They're the first thing viewers see when he steps out of the bus.
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* PetTheDog: As bad as Marty is, he does make a nice gesture to Steven for no real gain. Specifically, he makes him an official Roadie.
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* PetTheDog: As bad as Marty is, he does make a nice gesture to Steven for no real gain. Specifically, he makes him an official Roadie. The billboard he put up for Sour Cream's show also looks pretty great.
* {{Portmanteau}}: Guacamole + Cola = Guacola.
* {{Portmanteau}}: Guacamole + Cola = Guacola.
* SellOut: Marty shamelessly sponsors the nasty Guacola, saying it's something he "needs".
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* ShoutOut: When Marty sees Sour Cream's DJ equipment, he says, "What is this, a concert for ants?", a reference to the title character from ''Film/{{Zoolander}}'' saying, "What is this, a center for ants?" when he sees a scale model of a building.
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* ShoutOut: When Marty sees Sour Cream's DJ equipment, venue, he says, "What is this, a concert for ants?", a reference to the title character from ''Film/{{Zoolander}}'' saying, "What is this, a center for ants?" when he sees a scale model of a building.
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* TwinkleSmile: Marty has a smug grin that sparkles. The glare from his teeth and clothing makes Steven shield his eyes.
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* PetTheDog: As bad as Marty is, he does make a nice gesture to Steven for no real gain. Specifically, he makes him an official Roadie.
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* {{Foil}}: Greg and Marty are pretty much complete opposites of one another, right down to one being BigFun and the other being LeanAndMean.
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* {{Foil}}: {{Foil}}:
** Greg and Marty are pretty much complete opposites of one another, right down to one being BigFun and the other beingLeanAndMean.LeanAndMean.
** Greg and Yellowtail too. Yellowtail wants his children to have a stable career, while Greg believes personal happiness is more important than money.
** Greg and Marty are pretty much complete opposites of one another, right down to one being BigFun and the other being
** Greg and Yellowtail too. Yellowtail wants his children to have a stable career, while Greg believes personal happiness is more important than money.
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* RagsToRiches: Marty owed Greg royalty backpay for one of his songs to the tune of ''$10,000,000.''
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* InTheBlood: Sour Cream's interest in the music business, albeit in different aspects of it, is the ''only'' personality trait he shares with his father.
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* ShoutOut: When Marty sees Sour Cream's DJ equipment, he says, "What is this, a concert for ants?", a reference to the title character from ''{{Film}}/{{Zoolander}}'' saying, "What is this, a center for ants?" when he sees a scale model of a building.
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* ShoutOut: When Marty sees Sour Cream's DJ equipment, he says, "What is this, a concert for ants?", a reference to the title character from ''{{Film}}/{{Zoolander}}'' ''Film/{{Zoolander}}'' saying, "What is this, a center for ants?" when he sees a scale model of a building.
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* CreatorCameo: Ian Jones-Quartey appears as one of the members of the audience at Sour Cream's concert.
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* ShoutOut: When Marty sees Sour Cream's DJ equipment, he says, "What is this, a concert for ants?", a reference to the title character from ''{{Film}}/{{Zoolander}}'' saying, "What is this, a center for ants?" when he sees a scale model of a building.
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* TheBusCameBack: Marty returns to Beach City when we'd last seen him leaving years ago in "Story for Steven"--apparently the last time he was around was more than nine years ago.
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Marty never claimed he CAME to Beach City for Sour Cream, the lie was that he stayed to "make up for lost time".
* HurricaneOfExcuses: After running into Sour Cream by accident, Marty suddenly goes in a blathering rant about how busy show-business is which Greg and Steven talk over.
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Marty insists he "needs" the publicity from pushing Guacola and that Sour Cream should be happy he was getting him in on it.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Marty wasn't even ''trying'' to make up for lost time with Sour Cream, he was just taking an opportunity to make money from the publicity. He was only even in town to give Greg a check because he was "legally obligated" to, and would've left without a second thought had he not run into his son by chance. (That said, he was apparently prepared to give Greg the check in a much friendlier mood the first time.)
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Marty wasn't even ''trying'' to make up for lost time with Sour Cream, he was just taking an opportunity to make money from the publicity. He was only even in town to give Greg a check because he was "legally obligated" to, and would've left without a second thought had he not run into his son by chance. (That said, he was apparently prepared to give Greg the check in a much friendlier mood the first time.)
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* ItsAllAboutMe: Marty insists he "needs" the concert's publicity from for pushing Guacola and that Sour Cream should be happy he was getting him in on it.
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Marty wasn't even ''trying'' to make up for lost time with Sour Cream, he was just [[OpportunisticBastard taking an opportunity to make money from thepublicity. He was only even in town to give Greg a check because he was "legally obligated" to, and would've left without a second thought had he not run into his son by chance. (That said, he was apparently prepared to give Greg the check in a much friendlier mood the first time.)publicity]].
* JerkWithAHeartOfJerk: Marty wasn't even ''trying'' to make up for lost time with Sour Cream, he was just [[OpportunisticBastard taking an opportunity to make money from the
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** Sour Cream being Marty's son had been ''heavily'' implied earlier, but this is the first time Steven hears of it.
** Likewise, Marty's reaction confirms Steven's [[PintSizedPowerhouse unusual strength relative to his size]], which could have been explained as sight gags until this point.
** Sour Cream being Marty's son had been ''heavily'' implied earlier, but this is the first time Steven hears of it.
** Likewise, Marty's reaction confirms Steven's [[PintSizedPowerhouse unusual strength relative to his size]], which could have been explained as sight gags until this point.
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* InternalReveal:
**InternalReveal: Sour Cream being Marty's son had been ''heavily'' implied earlier, but this is the first time Steven hears of it.
** Likewise, Marty's reaction confirms Steven's [[PintSizedPowerhouse unusual strength relative to his size]], which could have been explained as sight gags until this point.it.
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** Likewise, Marty's reaction confirms Steven's [[PintSizedPowerhouse unusual strength relative to his size]], which could have been explained as sight gags until this point.
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* ParentsAsPeople: Yellowtail may not understand Sour Cream's wish to be a DJ, but he stills loves him, and helps put on the show in the end just because he knows it'll make him happy. (That it would also be a good chance for some petty oneupmanship, to prove he's the better dad, plainly never even occurs to him.)
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* ParentsAsPeople: Yellowtail may not understand Sour Cream's wish to be a DJ, but he stills loves him, and helps put on the show in the end just because he knows it'll make him happy. (That That it would also be a good chance for some petty oneupmanship, to prove he's the better dad, plainly never even occurs to him.)
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* ContinuityNod: Steven brings up numerous details from "Story for Steven", like how big of a jerk Marty was to his dad and how horrible his manager skills were when it came to promoting Greg's concert.
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** Steven brings up numerous details from "Story for Steven", like how big of a jerk Marty was to his dad and how horrible his manager skills were when it came to promoting Greg'sconcert.concert.
** Before Marty convinces him to change the venue, Sour Cream was going to play at the run-down warehouse he played at in "Alone Together".
** Steven brings up numerous details from "Story for Steven", like how big of a jerk Marty was to his dad and how horrible his manager skills were when it came to promoting Greg's
** Before Marty convinces him to change the venue, Sour Cream was going to play at the run-down warehouse he played at in "Alone Together".
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* InternalReveal: Sour Cream being Marty's son had been ''heavily'' implied earlier, but this is the first time Steven hears of it.
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** Sour Cream being Marty's son had been ''heavily'' implied earlier, but this is the first time Steven hears of it.
** Sour Cream being Marty's son had been ''heavily'' implied earlier, but this is the first time Steven hears of it.
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* ProperlyParanoid: Steven quickly tenses up when Marty shows up. With the fiasco that resulted from the Guacola and Marty manipulating his son for his own gain, he was right to worry.
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* ProperlyParanoid: ProperlyParanoid:
** Steven quickly tenses up when Marty shows up. With the fiasco that resulted from the Guacola and Marty manipulating his son for his own gain, he was right to worry.
** Steven quickly tenses up when Marty shows up. With the fiasco that resulted from the Guacola and Marty manipulating his son for his own gain, he was right to worry.
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** It's also a subtle Deconstruction. Sour Cream clearly couldn't tell how heavy the box of stuff Steven handed to him was, because of how easily Steven carried it. Suddenly bending like he has to when Steven passes it off is an easy way to injure yourself.
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* PapaWolf: Yellowtail is ''not'' happy to see Marty back in town.
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* PapaWolf: Yellowtail is ''not'' happy to see Marty back in town. He becomes visibly enraged when it becomes apparent that Marty has co-opted Sour Cream's DJ gig to shill nasty soda.