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* NiceJobFixingItVillain: Ronon initially refuses to be rescued because of the deal the Wraith cut with the villagers. When he learns the villagers were slaughtered anyway, it just makes him that much more determined to kill the General.
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: The villagers think they can buy their freedom by trading Ronon to the Wraith. It doesn't work.
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* RewardedAsATraitorDeserves: The villagers think they can buy their freedom by trading Ronon to the Wraith. It doesn't work.They're wiped out anyway.
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* StopOrIShootMyself: Ronon manages to barter the liberation of Sheppard and Teyla by threatening to slit his own throat. The villagers gives in, as they know the Wraiths want him alive.
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* StopOrIShootMyself: Ronon manages to barter the liberation of Sheppard and Teyla by threatening to slit his own throat. The villagers gives give in, as they know the Wraiths Wraith want him alive.
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* TrackingDevice: Ronon has a Wraith subspace tracking device implanted anew. That's how his friend locate him on Sateda. The Wraith hunters have a device on their wrists to detect the tracking signal.
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* TrackingDevice: Ronon has a Wraith subspace tracking device implanted anew. That's how his friend friends locate him on Sateda. The Wraith hunters have a device on their wrists to detect the tracking signal.
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* LeaveHimToMeLeaveHimToMe: Ronon makes it very clear to Sheppard that he's not going to leave until he's killed the General, [[ItsPersonal who wiped out his entire people and the woman he loved]]. He also warns Sheppard that he's going to kill him if he intervenes. Subverted when it turns out to be a CurbStompBattle in the General's favor until Beckett fires a drone at the General to end it. Ronon hugs Beckett in gratitude afterwards.
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* UnflinchingWalk: Ronon does this after casually tossing a grenade over his shoulder in the Satedan tunnels.
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Subverted.
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: Subverted.Inverted.
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* PreMortomOneLiner: Ronon to the Wraith General, just before Beckett fires a drone at him.
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* PreMortomOneLiner: PreMortemOneLiner: Ronon to the Wraith General, just before Beckett fires a drone at him.
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* GunshipRescue: Courtesty of [=McKay=] and Beckett in a Puddle Jumper.
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* OneManArmy: Ronon versus dozens of Wraith hunters.
* PreMortomOneLiner: Ronon to the Wraith General, just before Beckett fires a drone at him.
--> '''Ronon:''' I win!
* PreMortomOneLiner: Ronon to the Wraith General, just before Beckett fires a drone at him.
--> '''Ronon:''' I win!
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* TrueCompanions: Ronon is willing to offer up his life to the villagers (knowing they'll send him back to the Wraith) in exchange for his teammates' freedom. Later, in a private moment aboard the ''Daedalus'', Sheppard tells Teyla that he would do the same thing for any of them, if it ever came to that.
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* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: Ronon vs. the Wraith General. Of course, he proceeds to get his ass handed to him and is actually (and unexpetedly) relieved when Beckett saves his life.
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* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself: Ronon vs. the Wraith General. Of course, he proceeds to get his ass handed to him and is actually (and unexpetedly) unexpectedly) relieved when Beckett saves his life.
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* TheMostDangerousGame
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* InflationaryDialogue: Sheppard. He, Teyla, and Ronon kill a strike force of 25 Wraith. Sheppard initially claims to have killed six of them, but when he learns that Teyla killed eight he quickly ups his claim to nine. By the end of the episode...
-->'''Sheppard:''' It's nothing, really. I only killed eleven... twelve Wraith.
-->'''Sheppard:''' It's nothing, really. I only killed eleven... twelve Wraith.
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* ImprovisedWeapon: Before he's able to find a stockpile of weapons to fight the Wraith with, Ronon begins his assault by making a knife out of a shard of metal and a pot handle.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: Sheppard's "pain in the ass" joke.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' Oh, how much time did you spend thinking that up?\\
'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' Oh, how much time did you spend thinking that up?\\
'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
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* LamePunReaction: Sheppard's "pain in the ass" joke.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' Oh, how much time did you spend thinking that up?\\
'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' Oh, how much time did you spend thinking that up?\\
'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
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* ConflictBall: Sheppard boldly calls Caldwell out on not valuing the non-Terran members of the team! Which he has shown no evidence of ever in fact doing! OH NO!!!
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* ConflictBall: Sheppard boldly calls Caldwell out on not valuing for his reluctance to rescue Ronon, since it sounds like he [[SomebodyElsesProblem doesn't care]] about the non-Terran members of or non-US military personnel on Atlantis. Whether Caldwell actually thinks so is [[AlternateCharacterInterpretation left ambiguous]], as he never actually ''says'' as much, he doesn't exactly deny Sheppard's accusation either.
** JerkassHasAPoint: As Caldwell points out, it's a very high-risk to reward scenario. Sheppard wants him to take on a Wraith Hive and risk theteam! Which he has shown no evidence hundreds of ever in fact doing! OH NO!!!lives aboard the ''Daedalus'' just to rescue ''one'' man, who might ''not'' even be the Runner present on Sateda.
** JerkassHasAPoint: As Caldwell points out, it's a very high-risk to reward scenario. Sheppard wants him to take on a Wraith Hive and risk the
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* GogglesDoNothing: The first Wraith to come after Ronon is wearing nifty shades for some reason. Subverted when he removes them just as he enters a building, showing that his eyes glow in the dark. Apparently, hunters have eyes modified for InnateNightVision, and the googles protect their eyes in bright light.
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* GogglesDoNothing: The first Wraith to come after Ronon is wearing nifty shades for some reason. Subverted when he removes them just as he enters a building, showing that his eyes glow in the dark. Apparently, hunters have eyes modified for InnateNightVision, and the googles goggles protect their eyes in bright light.
* IChooseToStay: In the flashback, Melena refuses to evacuate Sateda to help the sick and injured. [[spoiler: Seconds later, she's killed in an explosion]].
* InsultOfEndearment: [=McKay=] claim that "Caveman" is his AffectionateNickname for Ronon... behind his back. Beckett's not entirely convinced.
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* NoOneGetsLeftBehindTheLostLenore: Ronon's fiancee, Melena.
* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Sheppard's entire motive for rescuing Ronon.
* NoOneGetsLeftBehind: Sheppard's entire motive for rescuing Ronon.
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* ConflictBall: Sheppard boldly calls Caldwell out on not valuing the non-human members of the team! Which he has shown no evidence of ever in fact doing! OH NO!!!
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* GogglesDoNothing: The first Wraith to come after Ronon is wearing nifty shades for some reason. At first it looks like they let him detect the tracking signal, but no, he's got a device on his wrist for that.
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* GogglesDoNothing: The first Wraith to come after Ronon is wearing nifty shades for some reason. At first it looks like they let him detect Subverted when he removes them just as he enters a building, showing that his eyes glow in the tracking signal, but no, he's got a device on his wrist dark. Apparently, hunters have eyes modified for that. InnateNightVision, and the googles protect their eyes in bright light.
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* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: subverted
-->'''Beckett:''' ''(grabbing a gun)'' I'm going to help them.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' What, are you crazy? You're a doctor!
-->'''Beckett:''' What does that have to do with it?
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: subverted
-->'''Beckett:''' ''(grabbing a gun)'' I'm going to help them.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' What, are you crazy? You're a doctor!
-->'''Beckett:''' What does that have to do with it?
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-->'''[=McKay=]:'''
'''[=McKay=]:''' What, are you crazy? You're a
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'''Beckett:''' What does that have to do with
* InnateNightVision: The Wraith hunters can see in the dark.
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-->'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
-->'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
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-->'''[=McKay=]:''' Oh, how much time did you spend thinking that up?
-->'''Sheppard:'''up?\\
'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
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'''Sheppard:''' More than I'd care to admit...
* PostVictoryCollapse: At the end of the episode, Ronon collapses just as Dr. Beckett offer him a tranquillizer before removing the Wraith tracker. No surprise, since he received a severe beating from the Wraith general. Any lesser man would be dead.
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-->'''Beckett:''' You have an arrow, Rodney, in your gluteus maximus!
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(on morphine)'' Gluteus maximus... Gluuuteus maaaximus... Oh my god! That's my ass isn't it?
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-->'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(on morphine)'' Gluteus maximus... Gluuuteus maaaximus... Oh my god! That's my ass isn't it?
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-->'''Beckett:''' You have an arrow, Rodney, in your gluteus maximus!
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(on morphine)''maximus!\\
'''[=McKay=]:''' (''on morphine'') Gluteus maximus... Gluuuteus maaaximus... Oh my god! That's my ass isn't it?
*StopOrIShootMyselfStopOrIShootMyself: Ronon manages to barter the liberation of Sheppard and Teyla by threatening to slit his own throat. The villagers gives in, as they know the Wraiths want him alive.
* SuperStrength: The Wraith general can toss Ronon like a rag doll.
-->'''[=McKay=]:''' ''(on morphine)''
'''[=McKay=]:''' (''on morphine'') Gluteus maximus... Gluuuteus maaaximus... Oh my god! That's my ass isn't it?
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* WhoIsDriving: Turns out it was [=McKay=] - Sheppard makes him return to the pilot's seat when he figures it out.
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* TrackingDevice: Ronon has a Wraith subspace tracking device implanted anew. That's how his friend locate him on Sateda. The Wraith hunters have a device on their wrists to detect the tracking signal.
* WhoIsDriving: Turns out it was [=McKay=]- -- Sheppard makes him return to the pilot's seat when he figures it out.out.
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* WhoIsDriving: Turns out it was [=McKay=]
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* DeadLittleSister: Well, dead wife. Part of the reason Ronon hates the Wraith so much.
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* DeadLittleSister: Well, dead wife. Part of the reason Ronon hates the Wraith so much.
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Ronon is taken back to a Wraith hive ship and implanted with a Runner tracking device. The Wraith General laughs at him and then releases him in the ruins of his home planet of Sateda (after disabling the Stargate somehow). The rest of the team has happily inferred that this might be the case, and manage to calibrate the long-range scanners to detect Runners. There are seven; they guess that Ronon is the one on Sateda and give no thought to possibly rescuing the other six. It's too dangerous for the Daedalus to mount a direct rescue, but they can get close enough to send in a cloaked puddlejumper. Beckett comes along to remove the tracking device, should an opportunit arise.
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Ronon is taken back to a Wraith hive ship and implanted with a Runner tracking device. The Wraith General laughs at him and then releases him in the ruins of his home planet of Sateda (after disabling the Stargate somehow). The rest of the team has happily inferred that this might be the case, and manage to calibrate the long-range scanners to detect Runners. There are seven; they guess that Ronon is the one on Sateda and give no thought to possibly rescuing the other six. It's too dangerous for the Daedalus to mount a direct rescue, but they can get close enough to send in a cloaked puddlejumper. Beckett comes along to remove the tracking device, should an opportunit opportunity arise.
