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[[caption-width-right:300:"Do you have sssome sssugar we could borrow?"]]
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* NatureTinkling: Marco mentions to have done this while in the Forest of Certain Death.
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* DisneyDeath: Marco's parents seem to suffer this when Marco thinks a monster ate them, and he gets AdultFear when he can't find them in the hydra's stomach.
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* DisneyDeath: Marco's parents seem to suffer this when Marco thinks a monster ate them, and he gets AdultFear when he can't find them in the hydra's stomach.
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* CommonalityConnection: Star and her dad bond over their love for hunting monsters.
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* NotSoDifferent: Star and her dad bond over their love for hunting monsters.
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* DoesThisRemindYouOfAnything: The merchant with the CoatFullOfContraband is shown from behind when he first opens his coat--for a moment, it looks very much like he's flashing them. For bonus points, Mr. and Mrs. Diaz immediately start snapping pictures.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: The merchant with the CoatFullOfContraband is shown from behind when he first opens his coat--for a moment, it looks very much like he's flashing them. For bonus points, Mr. and Mrs. Diaz immediately start snapping pictures.
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* ParentalSexualitySquick: When Marco goes to give his gift to his parents, Mrs. Diaz is pawing at her husband's chest hair, and the two are humming and giggling to each other. Marco's visibly not happy to see this.
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* ConvectionSchmonvection: Marco's blanket is apparently fire- and heat-proof, as it protects both him and Star from the hydra's fire breath.
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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: The merchant with the CoatFullOfContraband is shown from behind when he first opens his coat--for a moment, it looks very much like he's flashing them. For bonus points, Mr. and Mrs. Diaz immediately start snapping pictures.
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* FailedASpotCheck: Star's parents somehow don't see the portal that Star accidentally conjures up while she tries to pass off the Dimensional Scissors as normal scissors.
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* FailedASpotCheck: Star's parents somehow don't see the portal that Star accidentally conjures up while she tries to pass off the Dimensional Scissors as normal scissors.
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* FailedASpotCheck: Star's parents somehow don't see the portal that Star accidentally conjures up while she tries to pass off the Dimensional Scissors as normal scissors.
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* InTheBlood: Monster hunting in the Butterfly family. Star and her dad bond over it after he chews her out for breaking the rules.
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* InTheBlood: Monster hunting runs in the Butterfly family. Star and her dad bond over it after he chews her out for breaking the rules.
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* SwallowedWhole: The hydra apparently doesn't digest its food well.
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* SwallowedWhole: The hydra apparently doesn't digest its food well.well or chew, as it has a number of unharmed peasants in its stomach.
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* TheDarknessGazesBack: There are ominous pairs of red eyes in every dark corner of the Forest of Certain Death.
