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The story starts with Fic!Lincoln excited at school, but cautious of his locker due to a "certain someone" which Ronnie Anne thinks is probably her (and Lisa agrees). He looks at and smells his locker to see if it's booby-trapped, and when some words are misspelled, Lisa takes out her new invention: an AI that corrects spelling and grammar.
Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a spring-loaded boxing glove and flies into the girls' locker room. A teacher sees him, so he gets detention. At lunch, Fic!Clyde tries to cheer Fic!Lincoln up but a boy calls him a peeping tom (and Lisa tells us the history of the phrase "peeping tom") and he gets hot soup down his pants. Then, the boys tease him with the "K-I-S-S-I-N-G" rhyme and he retorts with the "lick the bathroom floor" line he said in "Save the Date".
This offends Fic!Ronnie Anne again, and Fic!Lincoln goes home to find Fic!Lori crying. Fic!Lincoln apparently doesn't know that Fic!Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Anne are related, so Fic!Lori explains, and says that Fic!Bobby broke up with her for making Fic!Ronnie Anne cry again, so they will have a double date at Jean Juan's, just like in "Save the Date". By this time, Lincoln and Lisa are getting a bit bored of this as it seems like a reenactment of something that actually happened.
Lisa fast-forwards the story to where things start to become different from the episode, and it picks up at the restaurant, with Fic!Lincoln rolling his eyes at Fic!Bobby and then he and Fic!Ronnie Anne start arguing over whose fault it was. Fic!Lori gets angry at Fic!Lincoln, so he yells at her. Then, he explained to Fic!Ronnie Anne why he insulted her... or possibly why he kissed her.
The fanfic Santiagos leave with Fic!Bobby angry at Fic!Ronnie Anne for her pranks, while Fic!Lori goes to console Fic!Lincoln. The real Ronnie Anne is starting to get offended. Fic!Lori and a sulky Fic!Lincoln go home. The other sisters want to cheer him up, but Fic!Lori tells them to leave him alone.
The next morning, Fic!Lori convinces Fic!Lincoln to let her give him a ride to school, but he's mad and insults her in Vanzilla. They both apologise for their actions, and Fic!Lincoln is dropped off at school. At school, Fic!Lincoln does not see any sign of Fic!Ronnie Anne and feels a little guilty, but he's mostly happy and enjoys the absence of pranks. Those boys from earlier begin to tease him, but Fic!Clyde tells him to ignore it. We get a moment from the real Loud sisters about the definition of "invaluable", then the AI claims it's tired despite not being able to be.
Fic!Lincoln reveals that he is holding a grudge about Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks, which the real Lincoln points out isn't true. Fic!Ronnie Anne begins to feel guilty and continues to not prank him over the next few days. He bumps into her and she reveals that she's not allowed to go near him, or she'll be grounded. The real Ronnie Anne gets so offended she walks up the stairs.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne have a meeting, where they apologise and talk about Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby's embarrassing moments. The real Lincoln comes downstairs with Ronnie Anne not angry anymore but looking a bit teary-eyed. Their fanfic counterparts reveal that their behaviour comes from a desire not to act all mushy like their oldest siblings, then they make a deal not to be mean. They kiss, making Lincoln's sisters, and the AI (whose name is revealed to be Grammy) coo.
The fanfic sisters are ready to take on the bully, but Fic!Lincoln reveals that they're cool now. They go inside for ice cream, or, as the story calls it, "frozen threats", and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne text.
Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a spring-loaded boxing glove and flies into the girls' locker room. A teacher sees him, so he gets detention. At lunch, Fic!Clyde tries to cheer Fic!Lincoln up but a boy calls him a peeping tom (and Lisa tells us the history of the phrase "peeping tom") and he gets hot soup down his pants. Then, the boys tease him with the "K-I-S-S-I-N-G" rhyme and he retorts with the "lick the bathroom floor" line he said in "Save the Date".
This offends Fic!Ronnie Anne again, and Fic!Lincoln goes home to find Fic!Lori crying. Fic!Lincoln apparently doesn't know that Fic!Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Anne are related, so Fic!Lori explains, and says that Fic!Bobby broke up with her for making Fic!Ronnie Anne cry again, so they will have a double date at Jean Juan's, just like in "Save the Date". By this time, Lincoln and Lisa are getting a bit bored of this as it seems like a reenactment of something that actually happened.
Lisa fast-forwards the story to where things start to become different from the episode, and it picks up at the restaurant, with Fic!Lincoln rolling his eyes at Fic!Bobby and then he and Fic!Ronnie Anne start arguing over whose fault it was. Fic!Lori gets angry at Fic!Lincoln, so he yells at her. Then, he explained to Fic!Ronnie Anne why he insulted her... or possibly why he kissed her.
The fanfic Santiagos leave with Fic!Bobby angry at Fic!Ronnie Anne for her pranks, while Fic!Lori goes to console Fic!Lincoln. The real Ronnie Anne is starting to get offended. Fic!Lori and a sulky Fic!Lincoln go home. The other sisters want to cheer him up, but Fic!Lori tells them to leave him alone.
The next morning, Fic!Lori convinces Fic!Lincoln to let her give him a ride to school, but he's mad and insults her in Vanzilla. They both apologise for their actions, and Fic!Lincoln is dropped off at school. At school, Fic!Lincoln does not see any sign of Fic!Ronnie Anne and feels a little guilty, but he's mostly happy and enjoys the absence of pranks. Those boys from earlier begin to tease him, but Fic!Clyde tells him to ignore it. We get a moment from the real Loud sisters about the definition of "invaluable", then the AI claims it's tired despite not being able to be.
Fic!Lincoln reveals that he is holding a grudge about Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks, which the real Lincoln points out isn't true. Fic!Ronnie Anne begins to feel guilty and continues to not prank him over the next few days. He bumps into her and she reveals that she's not allowed to go near him, or she'll be grounded. The real Ronnie Anne gets so offended she walks up the stairs.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne have a meeting, where they apologise and talk about Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby's embarrassing moments. The real Lincoln comes downstairs with Ronnie Anne not angry anymore but looking a bit teary-eyed. Their fanfic counterparts reveal that their behaviour comes from a desire not to act all mushy like their oldest siblings, then they make a deal not to be mean. They kiss, making Lincoln's sisters, and the AI (whose name is revealed to be Grammy) coo.
The fanfic sisters are ready to take on the bully, but Fic!Lincoln reveals that they're cool now. They go inside for ice cream, or, as the story calls it, "frozen threats", and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne text.
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The story starts with Fic!Lincoln Lincoln excited at school, but cautious of his locker due to a "certain someone" which Ronnie Anne thinks is probably her (and Lisa agrees). He looks at and smells his locker to see if it's booby-trapped, and when some words are misspelled, Lisa takes out her new invention: an AI that corrects spelling and grammar.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln gets punched with a spring-loaded boxing glove and flies into the girls' locker room. A teacher sees him, so he gets detention. At lunch, Fic!Clyde fanfic Clyde tries to cheer Fic!Lincoln Lincoln up but a boy calls him a peeping tom (and the real Lisa tells us the history of the phrase "peeping tom") and he gets hot soup down his pants. Then, the boys tease him with the "K-I-S-S-I-N-G" rhyme and he retorts with the "lick the bathroom floor" line he said in "Save the Date".
This offendsFic!Ronnie fanfic Ronnie Anne again, and Fic!Lincoln Lincoln goes home to find Fic!Lori Lori crying. Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln apparently doesn't know that Fic!Bobby Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne are related, so Fic!Lori Lori explains, and says that Fic!Bobby Bobby broke up with her for making Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne cry again, so they will have a double date at Jean Juan's, just like in "Save the Date". By this time, Lincoln and Lisa are getting a bit bored of this as it seems like a reenactment of something that actually happened.
Lisa fast-forwards the story to where things start to become different from the episode, and it picks up at the restaurant, withFic!Lincoln Lincoln rolling his eyes at Fic!Bobby Bobby and then he and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne start arguing over whose fault it was. Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori gets angry at Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, so he yells at her. Then, he explained explains to Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne why he insulted her... or possibly why he kissed her.
The fanfic Santiagos leave withFic!Bobby Bobby angry at Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne for her pranks, while Fic!Lori fanfic Lori goes to console Fic!Lincoln.Lincoln. The real Ronnie Anne is starting to get offended. Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori and a sulky Fic!Lincoln Lincoln go home. The other sisters want to cheer him up, but Fic!Lori Lori tells them to leave him alone.
The next morning,Fic!Lori fanfic Lori convinces Fic!Lincoln Lincoln to let her give him a ride to school, but he's mad and insults her in Vanzilla. They both apologise for their actions, and Fic!Lincoln Lincoln is dropped off at school. At school, Fic!Lincoln Lincoln does not see any sign of Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne and feels a little guilty, but he's mostly happy and enjoys the absence of pranks. Those boys from earlier begin to tease him, but Fic!Clyde Clyde tells him to ignore it. We get a moment from the real Loud sisters about the definition of "invaluable", then the AI claims it's tired despite not being able to be.
Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln reveals that he is holding a grudge about Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne's pranks, which the real Lincoln points out isn't true. Fic!Ronnie Fanfic Ronnie Anne begins to feel guilty and continues to not prank him over the next few days. He bumps into her and she reveals that she's not allowed to go near him, or she'll be grounded. The real Ronnie Anne gets so offended she walks up the stairs.
Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne Ronnie Anne's fanfic counterparts have a meeting, where they apologise and talk about Fic!Lori Lori and Fic!Bobby's Bobby's embarrassing moments. The real Lincoln comes downstairs with Ronnie Anne not angry anymore but looking a bit teary-eyed. Their fanfic counterparts reveal that their behaviour comes from a desire not to act all mushy like their oldest siblings, then they make a deal not to be mean. They kiss, making Lincoln's sisters, and the AI (whose name is revealed to be Grammy) coo.
The fanfic sisters are ready to take on the bully, butFic!Lincoln Lincoln reveals that they're cool now. They go inside for ice cream, or, as the story calls it, "frozen threats", and Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne text.
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The fanfic Santiagos leave with
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* AccidentalPervert: The girls in the locker room assume Fic!Lincoln went there on purpose and get mad at him (even though, as Lori points out, he flew through the air rather than walking in).
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* AccidentalPervert: The girls in the locker room assume Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln went there on purpose and get mad at him (even though, as Lori points out, he flew through the air rather than walking in).
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** Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks are more dangerous than the real Ronnie Anne's, involving a boxing glove and scalding hot soup.
** Fic!Clyde laughs at Fic!Lincoln when the latter gets hot soup down his pants.
** Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lori pretty meanly while angry, and then later he reveals that he's holding a grudge for Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Fic!Luan's pranks are said to be less mean than the real Luan's.
* AffectionHatingKid: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are a bit funny about romance because they don't want to act all soppy like Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby.
** Fic!Clyde laughs at Fic!Lincoln when the latter gets hot soup down his pants.
** Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lori pretty meanly while angry, and then later he reveals that he's holding a grudge for Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy: Fic!Luan's pranks are said to be less mean than the real Luan's.
* AffectionHatingKid: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are a bit funny about romance because they don't want to act all soppy like Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby.
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** Fic!Ronnie Fanfic Ronnie Anne's pranks are more dangerous than the real Ronnie Anne's, involving a boxing glove and scalding hot soup.
**Fic!Clyde Fanfic Clyde laughs at Fic!Lincoln Lincoln when the latter gets hot soup down his pants.
**Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln insults Fic!Lori Lori pretty meanly while angry, and then later he reveals that he's holding a grudge for Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne's pranks.
* AdaptationalNiceGuy:Fic!Luan's Fanfic Luan's pranks are said to be less mean than the real Luan's.
* AffectionHatingKid:Fic!Lincoln Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne Ronnie Anne's fanfic selves are a bit funny about romance because they don't want to act all soppy like Fic!Lori Lori and Fic!Bobby.Bobby.
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* CopycatMockery: Fic!Ronnie Anne mocks Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby by pretending to take selfies.
* DeathGlare: During their argument, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne give each other "death stares".
* DirtyKid: Discussed when the boys think Fic!Lincoln is a peeping tom and one of them says that it's advanced for his age.
* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Fic!Lori eats chocolate ice cream while crying (and the narration even implies that the only time she eats chocolate ice cream is while crying).
* DeathGlare: During their argument, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne give each other "death stares".
* DirtyKid: Discussed when the boys think Fic!Lincoln is a peeping tom and one of them says that it's advanced for his age.
* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Fic!Lori eats chocolate ice cream while crying (and the narration even implies that the only time she eats chocolate ice cream is while crying).
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* CopycatMockery: Fic!Ronnie Fanfic Ronnie Anne mocks Fic!Lori Lori and Fic!Bobby Bobby by pretending to take selfies.
* DeathGlare: During their argument,Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Ronnie Anne give each other "death stares".
* DirtyKid: Discussed when the boys thinkFic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln is a peeping tom and one of them says that it's advanced for his age.
* HeartbreakAndIceCream:Fic!Lori Fanfic Lori eats chocolate ice cream while crying (and the narration even implies that the only time she eats chocolate ice cream is while crying).
* DeathGlare: During their argument,
* DirtyKid: Discussed when the boys think
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* KissingInATree: Fic!Lincoln's male classmates tease him by chanting, "Ronnie Anne and Lincoln sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G."
* MadeOfIron: Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a boxing glove. Ronnie Anne says it would've broken the nose of the real Lincoln, but Fic!Lincoln only gets thrown across the room.
* MadeOfIron: Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a boxing glove. Ronnie Anne says it would've broken the nose of the real Lincoln, but Fic!Lincoln only gets thrown across the room.
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* KissingInATree: Fic!Lincoln's Fanfic Lincoln's male classmates tease him by chanting, "Ronnie Anne and Lincoln sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G."
* MadeOfIron:Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln gets punched with a boxing glove. The real Ronnie Anne says it would've broken the nose of the real Lincoln, but Fic!Lincoln fanfic Lincoln only gets thrown across the room.
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* PainToTheAss: Fic!Lincoln gets hot soup down his pants.
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* PainToTheAss: Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln gets hot soup down his pants.
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* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln sulks with a stoic expression.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Ronnie Anne claims that if she lays a finger on Fic!Lincoln, she will be grounded.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Ronnie Anne claims that if she lays a finger on Fic!Lincoln, she will be grounded.
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* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln Fanfic Lincoln sulks with a stoic expression.
* YouAreGrounded:Fic!Ronnie Fanfic Ronnie Anne claims that if she lays a finger on Fic!Lincoln, Lincoln, she will be grounded.
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* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Fic!Luan's pranks are said to be less mean than the real Luan's.
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* AdaptationalNiceGirl: AdaptationalNiceGuy: Fic!Luan's pranks are said to be less mean than the real Luan's.
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Lincoln and Lisa have brought Ronnie Anne again, along with Lori and Lana, and there are Thanksgiving decorations lying around. They will be reading ''A Second Chance''.
The story starts with Fic!Lincoln excited at school, but cautious of his locker due to a "certain someone" which Ronnie Anne thinks is probably her (and Lisa agrees). He looks at and smells his locker to see if it's booby-trapped, and when some words are misspelled, Lisa takes out her new invention: an AI that corrects spelling and grammar.
Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a spring-loaded boxing glove and flies into the girls' locker room. A teacher sees him, so he gets detention. At lunch, Fic!Clyde tries to cheer Fic!Lincoln up but a boy calls him a peeping tom (and Lisa tells us the history of the phrase "peeping tom") and he gets hot soup down his pants. Then, the boys tease him with the "K-I-S-S-I-N-G" rhyme and he retorts with the "lick the bathroom floor" line he said in "Save the Date".
This offends Fic!Ronnie Anne again, and Fic!Lincoln goes home to find Fic!Lori crying. Fic!Lincoln apparently doesn't know that Fic!Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Anne are related, so Fic!Lori explains, and says that Fic!Bobby broke up with her for making Fic!Ronnie Anne cry again, so they will have a double date at Jean Juan's, just like in "Save the Date". By this time, Lincoln and Lisa are getting a bit bored of this as it seems like a reenactment of something that actually happened.
Lisa fast-forwards the story to where things start to become different from the episode, and it picks up at the restaurant, with Fic!Lincoln rolling his eyes at Fic!Bobby and then he and Fic!Ronnie Anne start arguing over whose fault it was. Fic!Lori gets angry at Fic!Lincoln, so he yells at her. Then, he explained to Fic!Ronnie Anne why he insulted her... or possibly why he kissed her.
The fanfic Santiagos leave with Fic!Bobby angry at Fic!Ronnie Anne for her pranks, while Fic!Lori goes to console Fic!Lincoln. The real Ronnie Anne is starting to get offended. Fic!Lori and a sulky Fic!Lincoln go home. The other sisters want to cheer him up, but Fic!Lori tells them to leave him alone.
The next morning, Fic!Lori convinces Fic!Lincoln to let her give him a ride to school, but he's mad and insults her in Vanzilla. They both apologise for their actions, and Fic!Lincoln is dropped off at school. At school, Fic!Lincoln does not see any sign of Fic!Ronnie Anne and feels a little guilty, but he's mostly happy and enjoys the absence of pranks. Those boys from earlier begin to tease him, but Fic!Clyde tells him to ignore it. We get a moment from the real Loud sisters about the definition of "invaluable", then the AI claims it's tired despite not being able to be.
Fic!Lincoln reveals that he is holding a grudge about Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks, which the real Lincoln points out isn't true. Fic!Ronnie Anne begins to feel guilty and continues to not prank him over the next few days. He bumps into her and she reveals that she's not allowed to go near him, or she'll be grounded. The real Ronnie Anne gets so offended she walks up the stairs.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne have a meeting, where they apologise and talk about Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby's embarrassing moments. The real Lincoln comes downstairs with Ronnie Anne not angry anymore but looking a bit teary-eyed. Their fanfic counterparts reveal that their behaviour comes from a desire not to act all mushy like their oldest siblings, then they make a deal not to be mean. They kiss, making Lincoln's sisters, and the AI (whose name is revealed to be Grammy) coo.
The fanfic sisters are ready to take on the bully, but Fic!Lincoln reveals that they're cool now. They go inside for ice cream, or, as the story calls it, "frozen threats", and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne text.
With the story over, Lincoln and Ronnie Anne hug and Lisa turns Grammy off.
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* AccidentalPervert: The girls in the locker room assume Fic!Lincoln went there on purpose and get mad at him (even though, as Lori points out, he flew through the air rather than walking in).
* AdaptationalJerkass:
** Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks are more dangerous than the real Ronnie Anne's, involving a boxing glove and scalding hot soup.
** Fic!Clyde laughs at Fic!Lincoln when the latter gets hot soup down his pants.
** Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lori pretty meanly while angry, and then later he reveals that he's holding a grudge for Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks.
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Fic!Luan's pranks are said to be less mean than the real Luan's.
* AffectionHatingKid: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are a bit funny about romance because they don't want to act all soppy like Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby.
* ContinuityNod:
** Ronnie Anne remembers visiting Lincoln on April Fool's Day, which happened in "April Fools Rules".
** Ronnie Anne remembers Lincoln offending her in "Save the Date".
** Ronnie Anne defends herself for slugging Lincoln because he kissed her, which wasn't his idea. This happened in "Heavy Meddle".
* CopycatMockery: Fic!Ronnie Anne mocks Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby by pretending to take selfies.
* DeathGlare: During their argument, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne give each other "death stares".
* DirtyKid: Discussed when the boys think Fic!Lincoln is a peeping tom and one of them says that it's advanced for his age.
* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Fic!Lori eats chocolate ice cream while crying (and the narration even implies that the only time she eats chocolate ice cream is while crying).
* IKissYourFoot: Discussed when Lana says that Lincoln should kiss Ronnie Anne's feet for giving him free garbage.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: The AI says that it's an artificial intelligence, not a miracle worker.
* KissingInATree: Fic!Lincoln's male classmates tease him by chanting, "Ronnie Anne and Lincoln sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G."
* MadeOfIron: Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a boxing glove. Ronnie Anne says it would've broken the nose of the real Lincoln, but Fic!Lincoln only gets thrown across the room.
* NakedPeopleAreFunny: InUniverse, Lana snickers at the idea of Lady Godiva riding through town naked.
* NotSoInnocentWhistle: Lori, Lana, and Lisa start whistling when Ronnie Anne asks whose idea it was to have Lincoln kiss her.
* PainToTheAss: Fic!Lincoln gets hot soup down his pants.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The frozen treats are referred to as frozen "threats".
* RunningGagged: Lisa invents a grammar-and-spelling-correcting AI, putting an end to the running gag of her being a GrammarNazi.
* SharedFamilyQuirks: Apparently, Bobby pranked his crushes when he was eleven too.
* ShoutOut: Ronnie Anne critiques the fanfic's referring to her as "a certain someone" by saying, "Who am I, Voldemort?". Voldemort is the main villain in ''Literature/HarryPotter'', whose name people are afraid to say.
* ThanksgivingEpisode: This episode takes place on or around Thanksgiving, hence the decorations and Ronnie Anne visiting.
* ToiletHumour:
** Lana chuckles at the idea of needing skin grafts on your butt.
** When Lana says that she'd like a sloppy joe down her pants as it's free food, Lincoln says that he would not eat food that's been near his butt. Lana says, "Why not? That's where it's gonna end up, anyway."
* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln sulks with a stoic expression.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Ronnie Anne claims that if she lays a finger on Fic!Lincoln, she will be grounded.
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The story starts with Fic!Lincoln excited at school, but cautious of his locker due to a "certain someone" which Ronnie Anne thinks is probably her (and Lisa agrees). He looks at and smells his locker to see if it's booby-trapped, and when some words are misspelled, Lisa takes out her new invention: an AI that corrects spelling and grammar.
Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a spring-loaded boxing glove and flies into the girls' locker room. A teacher sees him, so he gets detention. At lunch, Fic!Clyde tries to cheer Fic!Lincoln up but a boy calls him a peeping tom (and Lisa tells us the history of the phrase "peeping tom") and he gets hot soup down his pants. Then, the boys tease him with the "K-I-S-S-I-N-G" rhyme and he retorts with the "lick the bathroom floor" line he said in "Save the Date".
This offends Fic!Ronnie Anne again, and Fic!Lincoln goes home to find Fic!Lori crying. Fic!Lincoln apparently doesn't know that Fic!Bobby and Fic!Ronnie Anne are related, so Fic!Lori explains, and says that Fic!Bobby broke up with her for making Fic!Ronnie Anne cry again, so they will have a double date at Jean Juan's, just like in "Save the Date". By this time, Lincoln and Lisa are getting a bit bored of this as it seems like a reenactment of something that actually happened.
Lisa fast-forwards the story to where things start to become different from the episode, and it picks up at the restaurant, with Fic!Lincoln rolling his eyes at Fic!Bobby and then he and Fic!Ronnie Anne start arguing over whose fault it was. Fic!Lori gets angry at Fic!Lincoln, so he yells at her. Then, he explained to Fic!Ronnie Anne why he insulted her... or possibly why he kissed her.
The fanfic Santiagos leave with Fic!Bobby angry at Fic!Ronnie Anne for her pranks, while Fic!Lori goes to console Fic!Lincoln. The real Ronnie Anne is starting to get offended. Fic!Lori and a sulky Fic!Lincoln go home. The other sisters want to cheer him up, but Fic!Lori tells them to leave him alone.
The next morning, Fic!Lori convinces Fic!Lincoln to let her give him a ride to school, but he's mad and insults her in Vanzilla. They both apologise for their actions, and Fic!Lincoln is dropped off at school. At school, Fic!Lincoln does not see any sign of Fic!Ronnie Anne and feels a little guilty, but he's mostly happy and enjoys the absence of pranks. Those boys from earlier begin to tease him, but Fic!Clyde tells him to ignore it. We get a moment from the real Loud sisters about the definition of "invaluable", then the AI claims it's tired despite not being able to be.
Fic!Lincoln reveals that he is holding a grudge about Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks, which the real Lincoln points out isn't true. Fic!Ronnie Anne begins to feel guilty and continues to not prank him over the next few days. He bumps into her and she reveals that she's not allowed to go near him, or she'll be grounded. The real Ronnie Anne gets so offended she walks up the stairs.
Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne have a meeting, where they apologise and talk about Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby's embarrassing moments. The real Lincoln comes downstairs with Ronnie Anne not angry anymore but looking a bit teary-eyed. Their fanfic counterparts reveal that their behaviour comes from a desire not to act all mushy like their oldest siblings, then they make a deal not to be mean. They kiss, making Lincoln's sisters, and the AI (whose name is revealed to be Grammy) coo.
The fanfic sisters are ready to take on the bully, but Fic!Lincoln reveals that they're cool now. They go inside for ice cream, or, as the story calls it, "frozen threats", and Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne text.
With the story over, Lincoln and Ronnie Anne hug and Lisa turns Grammy off.
!! This episode provides examples of
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* AccidentalPervert: The girls in the locker room assume Fic!Lincoln went there on purpose and get mad at him (even though, as Lori points out, he flew through the air rather than walking in).
* AdaptationalJerkass:
** Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks are more dangerous than the real Ronnie Anne's, involving a boxing glove and scalding hot soup.
** Fic!Clyde laughs at Fic!Lincoln when the latter gets hot soup down his pants.
** Fic!Lincoln insults Fic!Lori pretty meanly while angry, and then later he reveals that he's holding a grudge for Fic!Ronnie Anne's pranks.
* AdaptationalNiceGirl: Fic!Luan's pranks are said to be less mean than the real Luan's.
* AffectionHatingKid: Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne are a bit funny about romance because they don't want to act all soppy like Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby.
* ContinuityNod:
** Ronnie Anne remembers visiting Lincoln on April Fool's Day, which happened in "April Fools Rules".
** Ronnie Anne remembers Lincoln offending her in "Save the Date".
** Ronnie Anne defends herself for slugging Lincoln because he kissed her, which wasn't his idea. This happened in "Heavy Meddle".
* CopycatMockery: Fic!Ronnie Anne mocks Fic!Lori and Fic!Bobby by pretending to take selfies.
* DeathGlare: During their argument, Fic!Lincoln and Fic!Ronnie Anne give each other "death stares".
* DirtyKid: Discussed when the boys think Fic!Lincoln is a peeping tom and one of them says that it's advanced for his age.
* HeartbreakAndIceCream: Fic!Lori eats chocolate ice cream while crying (and the narration even implies that the only time she eats chocolate ice cream is while crying).
* IKissYourFoot: Discussed when Lana says that Lincoln should kiss Ronnie Anne's feet for giving him free garbage.
* ImADoctorNotAPlaceholder: The AI says that it's an artificial intelligence, not a miracle worker.
* KissingInATree: Fic!Lincoln's male classmates tease him by chanting, "Ronnie Anne and Lincoln sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G."
* MadeOfIron: Fic!Lincoln gets punched with a boxing glove. Ronnie Anne says it would've broken the nose of the real Lincoln, but Fic!Lincoln only gets thrown across the room.
* NakedPeopleAreFunny: InUniverse, Lana snickers at the idea of Lady Godiva riding through town naked.
* NotSoInnocentWhistle: Lori, Lana, and Lisa start whistling when Ronnie Anne asks whose idea it was to have Lincoln kiss her.
* PainToTheAss: Fic!Lincoln gets hot soup down his pants.
* RougeAnglesOfSatin: The frozen treats are referred to as frozen "threats".
* RunningGagged: Lisa invents a grammar-and-spelling-correcting AI, putting an end to the running gag of her being a GrammarNazi.
* SharedFamilyQuirks: Apparently, Bobby pranked his crushes when he was eleven too.
* ShoutOut: Ronnie Anne critiques the fanfic's referring to her as "a certain someone" by saying, "Who am I, Voldemort?". Voldemort is the main villain in ''Literature/HarryPotter'', whose name people are afraid to say.
* ThanksgivingEpisode: This episode takes place on or around Thanksgiving, hence the decorations and Ronnie Anne visiting.
* ToiletHumour:
** Lana chuckles at the idea of needing skin grafts on your butt.
** When Lana says that she'd like a sloppy joe down her pants as it's free food, Lincoln says that he would not eat food that's been near his butt. Lana says, "Why not? That's where it's gonna end up, anyway."
* TranquilFury: Fic!Lincoln sulks with a stoic expression.
* YouAreGrounded: Fic!Ronnie Anne claims that if she lays a finger on Fic!Lincoln, she will be grounded.
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