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** Just like the manga and anime, this is averted in the scene where Nami repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her.[[note]]Though it's less gorey here, with just two cuts that are only bleeding a little bit before Luffy stops her, while in the original, the stabbed herself many more times and blood was ''pouring'' down her shoulder.[[/note]]
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** Just like the manga and anime, this is averted in the scene where Nami repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her.[[note]]Though it's less gorey here, with just two cuts that are only bleeding a little bit before Luffy stops her, while in the original, the she stabbed herself many more times and blood was ''pouring'' down her shoulder.[[/note]]
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* SingleTear: Nami sheds a single tear a few seconds before she stabs her own tattoo with her dagger.
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* SingleTear: Upon realizing Arlong's betrayal, Nami sheds a single tear a few seconds before she stabs her own tattoo with her dagger.
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** Originally, Nami stole the ''Going Merry'' at the Baratie and Usopp, Zoro, Johnny, and Yosaku went after her, then the latter came back for Luffy and Sanji to tell them where Nami is going, so the crew spends most of the first half of the arc split up before meeting up once Luffy, Sanji, and Yosaku get to Conomi Islands. Zoro and Usopp both separately get captured briefly by the Arlong Pirates, and Nami has to try to protect her friends from them without blowing her cover. This whole subplot, and Johnny and Yosaku themselves, have been AdaptedOut; the whole Straw Hat crew except for her left Baratie together on the ''Merry'', and arrive at the island together as well.
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* DealWiithTheDevil: A young Nami makes one with Arlong: she offers to join his crew and draw maps for him after showing him one to prove how good they are, in exchange for being able to buy back Coco Village's freedom from the Fishman forever. Arlong names the price at 100 million berries, and Nami has finally scrounged it all up, only for Arlong to betray her by having Nezumi confiscate it.
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* DealWiithTheDevil: DealWithTheDevil: A young Nami makes one with Arlong: she offers to join his crew and draw maps for him after showing him one to prove how good they are, in exchange for being able to buy back Coco Village's freedom from the Fishman forever. Arlong names the price at 100 million berries, and Nami has finally scrounged it all up, only for Arlong to betray her by having Nezumi confiscate it.
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* DealWiithTheDevil: A young Nami makes one with Arlong: she offers to join his crew and draw maps for him after showing him one to prove how good they are, in exchange for being able to buy back Coco Village's freedom from the Fishman forever. Arlong names the price at 100 million berries, and Nami has finally scrounged it all up, only for Arlong to betray her by having Nezumi confiscate it.
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** Just like the manga and anime, this is averted in the scene where Nami repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her.
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** Just like the manga and anime, this is averted in the scene where Nami repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her.[[note]]Though it's less gorey here, with just two cuts that are only bleeding a little bit before Luffy stops her, while in the original, the stabbed herself many more times and blood was ''pouring'' down her shoulder.[[/note]]
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* SayingTooMuch: When Nezumi shows up to confiscate Nami's money, he comments on the exact amount--100 million Berries--even though he should have no way of knowing this as he'd only just seen the chest containing it. Nami thus realizes that Nezumi is acting on Arlong's orders.
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* IronicEcho: After Arlong gives Nezumi his double payment, the latter says he's smarter than people give him credit for, prompting Arlong to [[TranquilFury coolly]] ask if it's because he's a Fishman, leading to a long string of DiggingYourselfDeeper for the Marine captain. By the end, Nezumi feels he can only take most of the original amount, and Arlong then turns the Marine's phrase right back on him.
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* IronicEcho: IronicEcho:
** After Arlong gives Nezumi his double payment, the latter says he's smarter than people give him credit for, prompting Arlong to [[TranquilFury coolly]] ask if it's because he's a Fishman, leading to a long string of DiggingYourselfDeeper for the Marine captain. By the end, Nezumi feels he can only take most of the original amount, and Arlong then turns the Marine's phrase right back onhim.him.
** When Buggy won't shut up inside his bag, which Sanji is carrying, the latter tries to pawn him off to Usopp, who refuses by saying "New guy carries the clown head." Later, Buggy is intentionally annoying Usopp at Nojiko's home, trying to psych him out, and Sanji silences him by stuffing a tangerine in his mouth, stating "New guy shuts up the clown head."
** After Arlong gives Nezumi his double payment, the latter says he's smarter than people give him credit for, prompting Arlong to [[TranquilFury coolly]] ask if it's because he's a Fishman, leading to a long string of DiggingYourselfDeeper for the Marine captain. By the end, Nezumi feels he can only take most of the original amount, and Arlong then turns the Marine's phrase right back on
** When Buggy won't shut up inside his bag, which Sanji is carrying, the latter tries to pawn him off to Usopp, who refuses by saying "New guy carries the clown head." Later, Buggy is intentionally annoying Usopp at Nojiko's home, trying to psych him out, and Sanji silences him by stuffing a tangerine in his mouth, stating "New guy shuts up the clown head."
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* ArmorPiercingResponse: After hearing Nami's and Nojiko's backstory from the latter, Luffy and Zoro have a conversation about it, with Zoro still inclined to leave Nami be and pointing out that she explicitly told them to leave. Luffy points out, "So did you," referring to Zoro originally rebuffing him when asked to join his crew.
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* HeroicBSOD: Like in the original manga, all Nami can do is slump to the ground in shock seconds after realizing Arlong has betrayed her.
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* InternalReveal: Coby reveals to Helmeppo that Garp is Luffy's grandfather in the episode.
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* IronicEcho: After Arlong gives Nezumi his double payment, the latter says he's smarter than people give him credit for, prompting Arlong to [[TranquilFury coolly]] ask if it's because he's a Fishman, leading to a long string of DiggerYourselfDeeper for the Marine captain. By the end, Nezumi feels he can only take most of the original amount, and Arlong then turns the Marine's phrase right back on him.
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* IronicEcho: After Arlong gives Nezumi his double payment, the latter says he's smarter than people give him credit for, prompting Arlong to [[TranquilFury coolly]] ask if it's because he's a Fishman, leading to a long string of DiggerYourselfDeeper DiggingYourselfDeeper for the Marine captain. By the end, Nezumi feels he can only take most of the original amount, and Arlong then turns the Marine's phrase right back on him.
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* IronicEcho: After Arlong gives Nezumi his double payment, the latter says he's smarter than people give him credit for, prompting Arlong to [[TranquilFury coolly]] ask if it's because he's a Fishman, leading to a long string of DiggerYourselfDeeper for the Marine captain. By the end, Nezumi feels he can only take most of the original amount, and Arlong then turns the Marine's phrase right back on him.
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* SingleTear: Nami sheds a single tear a few seconds before she stabs her own tattoo with her dagger.
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* YouAreNotAlone: After Nezumi steals her plunder, Nami realizes in horror the village will be targeted by Arlong in further retribution. She races to save it, only to collapse in despair and starts stabbing her tattoo. It is at this moment Luffy shows up, stops her from harming herself, and promises to help her simply because she is his friend. The other Strawhats have been silently watching and without hesitation comply with Luffy's order to move out and attack Arlong for actions.
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* YouAreNotAlone: After Nezumi steals her plunder, Nami realizes in horror the village will be targeted by Arlong in further retribution. She races to save it, only to collapse in despair and starts stabbing her tattoo. It is at this moment Luffy shows up, stops her from harming herself, and promises to help her simply because she is his friend. The other Strawhats Straw Hats have been silently watching and without hesitation comply with Luffy's order to move out and attack Arlong for these actions.
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* TheCoatsAreOff: Or rather, ''The Hat Comes off''. Luffy [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness takes off his precious straw hat]] to console Nami after her breakdown at the hands of Arlong while promising her that Arlong ''will'' go down for what he did.
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* TheCoatsAreOff: Or rather, ''The Hat Comes off''. Luffy [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness takes off his precious straw hat]] to console Nami after her breakdown at the hands of Arlong while promising her that Arlong ''will'' go down for what he did.
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Gloves is about a person not holding back their power in a fight.
* TheCoatsAreOff: Or rather, ''The Hat Comes off''. Luffy [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness takes off his precious straw hat]] to console Nami after her breakdown at the hands of Arlong while promising her that Arlong ''will'' go down for what he did.
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-->'''Nezumi''': A hundred million berries? How did you come by that?
-->'''Nami''': [[INeverSaidItWasPoison How did you know it was...]] Arlong put you up to this, didn't he?
-->'''Nami''': [[INeverSaidItWasPoison How did you know it was...]] Arlong put you up to this, didn't he?
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-->'''Nezumi''': A hundred million berries? How did you come by that?
-->'''Nami''':that?\\
'''Nami''': [[INeverSaidItWasPoison How did you know it was...]] Arlong put you up to this, didn't he?
-->'''Nami''':
'''Nami''': [[INeverSaidItWasPoison How did you know it was...]] Arlong put you up to this, didn't he?
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* TheGlovesComeOff: Or rather, ''The Hat Comes off''. Luffy [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness takes off his precious straw hat]] to console Nami after her breakdown at the hands of Arlong while promising her that Arlong ''will'' go down for what he did.
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* TheGlovesComeOff: Or rather, ''The Hat Comes off''. Luffy [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness takes off his precious straw hat]] to console Nami after her breakdown at the hands of Arlong while promising her that Arlong ''will'' go down for what he did.
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* YouAreNotAlone: After Nezumi steals her plunder, Nami realizes in horror the village will be targeted by Arlong in further retribution. She races to save it, only to collapse in despair and starts stabbing her tattoo. It is at this moment Luffy shows up, stops her from harming herself, and promises to help her simply because she is his friend. The other Strawhats have been silently watching and without hesitation comply with Luffy's order to move out and attack Arlong for actions.
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** Belle Mere's death, as it cuts away before the gunshot.[[note]]In the manga, she's shot in the head. In the anime, she's shot in the chest, presumably through the heart. Here, there's no real focus on aim, only that she's shot dead.[[/note]]
** But just like the manga and anime, this is averted in the scene where Nami repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her.
** But just like the manga and anime, this is averted in the scene where Nami repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her.
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** Belle Mere's death, as it death cuts away before the gunshot.gunshot this time around.[[note]]In the manga, she's shot in the head. In the anime, she's shot in the chest, presumably through the heart. Here, there's no real focus on aim, only that she's shot dead.[[/note]]
**But just Just like the manga and anime, this is averted in the scene where Nami repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her.
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* MythologyGag: Sanji tosses his trademark "moss head" insult at Zoro.
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* MythologyGag: MythologyGag:
** Sanji tosses his trademark "moss head" insult atZoro.Zoro.
** In Nami's flashback, Arlong flips a village house upside down. In the manga and anime, Momoo flipped the Gosa Village's buildings since the villagers couldn't pay their monthly tribute to Arlong.
** Sanji tosses his trademark "moss head" insult at
** In Nami's flashback, Arlong flips a village house upside down. In the manga and anime, Momoo flipped the Gosa Village's buildings since the villagers couldn't pay their monthly tribute to Arlong.
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** Genzo and the Coco Village citizens panic when they realize Arlong and his gang are going to enter the village.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: In the manga, after killing Belle Mere, Nami was forcibly taken by Arlong and his crew after they found her maps, with him dangling the prospect of buying back the village over her the whole time. Here, Nami willingly goes to him to make the offer directly, with the condition of giving her the chance to buy back the village.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: AdaptationalContextChange:
** In the manga, after killing Belle Mere, Nami was forcibly taken by Arlong and his crew after they found her maps, with him dangling the prospect of buying back the village over her the whole time. Here, Nami willingly goes to him to make the offer directly, with the condition of giving her the chance to buy back thevillage.village.
** In the original story, Nami quickly told Nojiko the truth about her joining the Arlong Pirates, and Nojiko told Genzo and the other villagers in turn, which led to them being {{Secret Secret Keeper}}s, pretending to hate her to make it easier for her to ditch the village if she so chose. Here, she doesn't tell a soul, leading to Nojiko and the villagers being fooled to the point of genuinely hating Nami until the truth comes out.
** In the manga, after killing Belle Mere, Nami was forcibly taken by Arlong and his crew after they found her maps, with him dangling the prospect of buying back the village over her the whole time. Here, Nami willingly goes to him to make the offer directly, with the condition of giving her the chance to buy back the
** In the original story, Nami quickly told Nojiko the truth about her joining the Arlong Pirates, and Nojiko told Genzo and the other villagers in turn, which led to them being {{Secret Secret Keeper}}s, pretending to hate her to make it easier for her to ditch the village if she so chose. Here, she doesn't tell a soul, leading to Nojiko and the villagers being fooled to the point of genuinely hating Nami until the truth comes out.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Belle Mere's death, as it cuts away before the gunshot.[[note]]In the manga, she's shot in the head. In the anime, she's shot in the chest, presumably through the heart. Here, there's no real focus on aim, only that she's shot dead.[[/note]]
* GoryIndiscretionShot: But just like the manga and anime, we see Nami slash up her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her. She doesn't resist his help as long as in the anime, however.
* GoryIndiscretionShot: But just like the manga and anime, we see Nami slash up her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her. She doesn't resist his help as long as in the anime, however.
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** Belle Mere's death, as it cuts away before the gunshot.[[note]]In the manga, she's shot in the head. In the anime, she's shot in the chest, presumably through the heart. Here, there's no real focus on aim, only that she's shot dead.[[/note]]
* GoryIndiscretionShot: ** But just like the manga and anime, we see this is averted in the scene where Nami slash up repeatedly stabs her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her. She doesn't resist his help as long as in the anime, however.her.
** Belle Mere's death, as it cuts away before the gunshot.[[note]]In the manga, she's shot in the head. In the anime, she's shot in the chest, presumably through the heart. Here, there's no real focus on aim, only that she's shot dead.[[/note]]
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* GoryIndiscretionShot: But just like the manga and anime, we see Nami slash up her own arm where her Arlong tattoo is before Luffy grabs her wrist and stops her. She doesn't resist his help as long as in the anime, however.
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* GoryDiscretionShot: Belle Mere's death, as it cuts away before the gunshot.[[note]]In the manga, she's shot in the head. In the anime, she's shot in the chest, presumably through the heart. Here, there's no real focus on aim, only that she's shot dead.[[/note]]
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* ExplainExplainOhCrap: Nezumi finds Nami and Nojiko with the stolen money.
-->'''Nezumi''': A hundred million berries? How did you come by that?
-->'''Nami''': [[INeverSaidItWasPoison How did you know it was...]] Arlong put you up to this, didn't he?
-->'''Nezumi''': A hundred million berries? How did you come by that?
-->'''Nami''': [[INeverSaidItWasPoison How did you know it was...]] Arlong put you up to this, didn't he?
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* AllForNothing: Nami gave up her freedom, her life, the respect of her sister, became an outcast for her town, betrayed her friends, put up with years of Arlong's abuse, all as part of a long game to get the money to buy the town's freedom...and in one moment, it's all taken away as a crooked captain steals the money and she realizes Arlong was never going to honor the deal.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: In the manga, after killing Belle Mere, Nami was forcibly taken by Arlong and his crew after they found her maps. Here, Nami willingly goes to him to make the offer directly.
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* AdaptationalContextChange: In the manga, after killing Belle Mere, Nami was forcibly taken by Arlong and his crew after they found her maps. maps, with him dangling the prospect of buying back the village over her the whole time. Here, Nami willingly goes to him to make the offer directly.directly, with the condition of giving her the chance to buy back the village.
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* ShovelStrike: After discovering Nami has been taking the cache of berries out of Belle Mere's grave, Nojiko grabs her shovel and tries hitting her.
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* ShovelStrike: After discovering Nami has been taking the cache of berries out of Belle Mere's grave, and not fully understanding the situation, Nojiko grabs her shovel and tries hitting her.
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* NonDubbedGrunts: Nami's BigNo when her money gets confiscated is left undubbed in both the Latin American and European Spanish dubs.
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* NonDubbedGrunts: Nami's BigNo when Nezumi confiscates her money gets confiscated is left undubbed in both the Latin American and European Spanish dubs.
