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* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: It's implied that [[spoiler:Bonnie murdered her husband on the day after their wedding because she only needed him to conceive a child.]]
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The fourth story of FanWorks/GravityFallsRule63.
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The fourth story of FanWorks/GravityFallsRule63.
''FanFic/GravityFallsRule63''.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: At one point, Jennifer compares herself to Princess Luna and Marcus to a male version of Princess Celestia. [[spoiler:Jennifer initially befriended Marcus as part of Bonnie's plan, but by the end, she decides she truly wants Marcus to be her friend.]] [[hottip:*:In the first two episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, Princess Luna was evil until the Elements of Harmony (Honesty, Laughter, Generosity, Kindness, Loyalty, and Magic) reformed her and she was happily reunited with Princess Celestia.]]
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: At one point, Jennifer compares herself to Princess Luna and Marcus to a male version of Princess Celestia. [[spoiler:Jennifer initially befriended Marcus as part of Bonnie's plan, but by the end, she decides she truly wants Marcus to be her friend.]] [[hottip:*:In ]][[note]]In the first two episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, Princess Luna was evil until the Elements of Harmony (Honesty, Laughter, Generosity, Kindness, Loyalty, and Magic) reformed her and she was happily reunited with Princess Celestia.]]Celestia[[/note]]
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* ShoutOut: There are a ton of references to MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic.WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic.
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-->'''Jennifer''': Marcus, when I'm up here lookin' down at all them little people, I feel like I'm [[spoiler:Princess Luna]]. I guess that makes you [[spoiler:Princess Celestia if she was a guy]].
-->'''Jennifer''': Marcus, when I'm up here lookin' down at all them little people, I feel like I'm [[spoiler:Princess Luna]]. I guess that makes you [[spoiler:Princess Celestia if she was a guy]].
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* {{Foreshadowing}}:
-->'''Jennifer''': Marcus, when I'm up here lookin' down at all them little people, I feel like I'm [[spoiler:Princess Luna]]. I guess that makes you [[spoiler:Princess Celestia if{{Foreshadowing}}: At one point, Jennifer compares herself to Princess Luna and Marcus to a male version of Princess Celestia. [[spoiler:Jennifer initially befriended Marcus as part of Bonnie's plan, but by the end, she decides she truly wants Marcus to be her friend.]] [[hottip:*:In the first two episodes of MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic, Princess Luna was evil until the Elements of Harmony (Honesty, Laughter, Generosity, Kindness, Loyalty, and Magic) reformed her and she was a guy]].happily reunited with Princess Celestia.]]
-->'''Jennifer''': Marcus, when I'm up here lookin' down at all them little people, I feel like I'm [[spoiler:Princess Luna]]. I guess that makes you [[spoiler:Princess Celestia if
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** Jennifer compares herself to Princess Luna and Marcus to a male version of Princess Celestia. [[spoiler:Doubles as {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
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** Jennifer compares herself to Princess Luna and Marcus to a male version of Princess Celestia. [[spoiler:Doubles as {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
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-->'''Jennifer''': Marcus, when I'm up here lookin' down at all them little people, I feel like I'm [[spoiler:Princess Luna]]. I guess that makes you [[spoiler:Princess Celestia if she was a guy]].
-->'''Jennifer''': Marcus, when I'm up here lookin' down at all them little people, I feel like I'm [[spoiler:Princess Luna]]. I guess that makes you [[spoiler:Princess Celestia if she was a guy]].
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* SitcomArchNemesis: Apparently, Jennifer was formally Silvia's "mortal enemy".
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* SitcomArchNemesis: Apparently, Prior to this story, Jennifer was formally Silvia's "mortal enemy".enemy". This is no longer the case since Silvia has become business partners with Bonnie and is perfectly fine with Marcus' friendship with Jennifer.
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An alleged psychic named Jennifer Gleeful has come to town and Salls, Dana, and Marcus go to see her show against Silvia's wishes. The psychic turns out to be a little kid who fails to demonstrate any actual powers in her show, leaving Dana unimpressed. Jennifer and Marcus start hanging out, and soon they become Pony pals due to their same interest in all things Pony related. Meanwhile, Silvia becomes friends with Jennifer's widowed mother Bonnie. Later, Jennifer tells Dana she isn't evil and she's just a harmless psychic. Dana "Pinkie Promises" Jennifer she won't tell anyone about this, especially Marcus.
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An alleged psychic named Jennifer Gleeful has come to town is introduced and Salls, Dana, and Marcus go to see her show against Silvia's wishes. The psychic turns out to be a little kid who fails to demonstrate any actual powers in her show, leaving Dana unimpressed. Jennifer and Marcus start hanging out, and soon they become Pony pals due to their same interest in all things Pony related. Meanwhile, Silvia becomes friends with Jennifer's widowed mother Bonnie. Later, Jennifer tells Dana she isn't evil and she's just a harmless psychic. Dana "Pinkie Promises" Jennifer she won't tell anyone about this, especially Marcus.
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** At one point, Marcus and Jennifer do a "Brohoof".
** At the restaurant, Jennifer and Marcus discuss the events of A Canterlot Wedding.
*** Marcus also mentions the Cutie Mark Crusaders in the discussion.
** Jennifer makes Dana take a Pinkie Promise.
** At the restaurant, Jennifer and Marcus discuss the events of A Canterlot Wedding.
*** Marcus also mentions the Cutie Mark Crusaders in the discussion.
** Jennifer makes Dana take a Pinkie Promise.
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* ShoutOut: There are a ton of references to MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic.
** Jennifer sports a Derpy pin on her outfit.
*** Later, she and Marcus agree that Derpy got a lot of hate after her first speaking role.
** Marcus tells Dana he made a toy ring out of a tortoise figure, naming it Tank the Tortoise.
** Marcus and Jennifer's "Pegasus binoculars" are light blue, referring to the character Rainbow Dash.
** Jennifer compares herself to Princess Luna and Marcus to a male version of Princess Celestia. [[spoiler:Doubles as {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
** Jennifer sports a Derpy pin on her outfit.
*** Later, she and Marcus agree that Derpy got a lot of hate after her first speaking role.
** Marcus tells Dana he made a toy ring out of a tortoise figure, naming it Tank the Tortoise.
** Marcus and Jennifer's "Pegasus binoculars" are light blue, referring to the character Rainbow Dash.
** Jennifer compares herself to Princess Luna and Marcus to a male version of Princess Celestia. [[spoiler:Doubles as {{Foreshadowing}}.]]
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!!Tropes present in this story:
* ContinuityNod: Marcus is wearing the Fluttershy medallion that someone suggested he wear in the previous chapter.
* GettingCrapPastTheRadar: It's implied that [[spoiler:Bonnie murdered her husband on the day after their wedding because she only needed him to conceive a child.]]
* NoodleIncident: Silvia apparently went on vacation in Colombia at some point.
* NotSoPhonyPsychic: Jennifer uses obvious tricks in her shows, but actually does have telekinetic powers. [[spoiler:But it was all a trick thanks to invisible wires.]]
* SitcomArchNemesis: Apparently, Jennifer was formally Silvia's "mortal enemy".
* WhamEpisode: [[spoiler:Bonnie has the second volume of the journal that Dana found.]]
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Dana and Marcus discover there's a new psychic in town named Jennifer Gleeful. But when Marcus becomes friends with Jennifer, Dana starts to assume something's up with her, especially after Silvia forms a partnership with Jennifer's widowed mother, Bonnie.
