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* BerserkButton: The new member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves dislikes being called newbie.
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* BerserkButton: The new member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves dislikes being called newbie."newbie".
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* HumanHammerThrow: This is one of the techniques that Adelgund uses on Muko. She spins her around and then throws her to the mat.
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* HumanHammerThrow: This is one of the techniques that Adelgund uses on Muko. She spins her Muko around and then throws her to the mat.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Muko managed to learn a few wrestling techniques from Cookie during the week leading to the Masato match. This includes a drop kick, a clothesline, and a cross body pin.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Muko managed to learn a few wrestling techniques from Cookie during the week leading up to the Masato match. This includes a drop kick, a clothesline, and a cross body pin.
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Respectfully: Just use the character names. Don't try to get all fancy-like. Also, not The Un Reveal.
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The Masato Match starts with Muko fighting Adelgund on her own. The bunny is scared out of her mind as the Masato Champion easily dominates her. Despite this, Muko is unwilling to lose her first match, and she uses the techniques Cookie taught her to hold her own.
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The Masato Match starts with Muko fighting Adelgund on her own. The bunny She's is scared out of her mind as the Masato Champion Adelgund easily dominates her. Despite this, Muko is unwilling to lose her first match, and she uses the techniques Cookie taught her to hold her own.
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* TheUnreveal: Cookie taught Muko a cross body pin, but Adelgund tags Peki in before Muko has the chance to use it.
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The Masato Match starts with Muko fighting Adelgund on her own. The bunny is scared out of her mind as the Masato Champion easily dominates her. Despite this, Muko is unwilling to lose on her first match as match, and she uses the techniques Cookie taught her to hold her own.
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The Masato Match starts with Muko fighting Adelgund on her own. The bunny is scared out of her mind as the Masato Champion easily dominates her. Despite this, Muko is unwilling to lose on her first match as she uses the techniques Cookie taught her to hold her own.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Muko managed to learn a few wrestling techniques from Cookie during the week leading to the Masato match. This includes a drop kick, a clothesline, and a cross body pin.
* TheUnreveal: Cookie taught Muko a cross body pin, but Adelgund tags Peki in before Muko has the chance to use it.
* TheUnreveal: Cookie taught Muko a cross body pin, but Adelgund tags Peki in before Muko has the chance to use it.
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* MsExposition: One of the older members of the Exe-Cutie-Ves explains the meaning of overselling (making it obvious to the audience that you're faking being hit or affected by your opponent's techniques) to the new one.
* SuperHearing: Thanks to her long ears, Muko notices that Adelgund didn't hurt her with her Dog Drop and that the sound she heard was Adelgund slapping the mat really hard with her arm.
* SuperHearing: Thanks to her long ears, Muko notices that Adelgund didn't hurt her with her Dog Drop and that the sound she heard was Adelgund slapping the mat really hard with her arm.
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* BerserkButton: The new member of the Exe-Cutie-Ves dislikes being called newbie.
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* HumanHammerThrow: This is one of the techniques that Adelgund uses on Muko. She spins her around and then throws her to the mat.
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* HoistHeroOverHead: Adelgund's Dog Drop has her pick up Muko over her head and slam her to the ground. PlayedWith as Adelgund is a {{Face}} who happens to fight Muko rather than a villain.
* KickTheDog: Despite seeing that Muko wasn't having fun fighting Adelgund, Nyarai did not tag her in, letting her suffer for a bit just to watch her suffer. Cookie even notices mentally that what Nyarai did was unnecessary.
* KickTheDog: Despite seeing that Muko wasn't having fun fighting Adelgund, Nyarai did not tag her in, letting her suffer for a bit just to watch her suffer. Cookie even notices mentally that what Nyarai did was unnecessary.
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! Chapter 12: Selling
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* BoringYetPractical: Cookie calls the drop kick and the clothesline boring techniques because of how basic they are. However, she considers them useful because they're easy to learn and still get the job done.
* CallingYourAttacks: Adelgund has a few personal moves and she likes to shout out their names when performing them.
* DivingKick: Muko learned a drop kick from Cookie during the week between their first meeting and the match.
* TakeThatKiss: Adelgund gives Muko a peck in the cheek after pinning her to the mat. Muko breaks out of her hold and kicks her in the face out of sheer horror.
* TheatricsOfPain: Besides being a good wrestler, Adelgund knows how to entertain. She can make power moves look realistic without hurting Muko. She can also take Muko's blows while still maintaining enough realism to deceive the audience into thinking Muko is strong.
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* BoringYetPractical: Cookie calls the drop kick and the clothesline boring techniques because of how basic they are. However, she considers them useful because they're easy to learn and still get the job done.
* CallingYourAttacks: Adelgund has a few personal moves and she likes to shout out their names when performing them.
* DivingKick: Muko learned a drop kick from Cookie during the week between their first meeting and the match.
* TakeThatKiss: Adelgund gives Muko a peck in the cheek after pinning her to the mat. Muko breaks out of her hold and kicks her in the face out of sheer horror.
* TheatricsOfPain: Besides being a good wrestler, Adelgund knows how to entertain. She can make power moves look realistic without hurting Muko. She can also take Muko's blows while still maintaining enough realism to deceive the audience into thinking Muko is strong.
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