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* RulesLawyer: Having discovered the Death Note can't make someone convey information they wouldn't know themselves, Light instead gets victims to convey information they wouldn't know themselves encoded into generic messages.
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* RulesLawyer: Having discovered the Death Note can't make someone convey information they wouldn't know themselves, Light instead gets manages to encode a secret message by having multiple victims to convey information they wouldn't know themselves encoded into write generic messages.suicide notes, that when the first letter of every sentence across multiple victims are put together, read "L, do you know Shinigami love apples?"
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Penber tells Light that he's under orders to investigate a case. Therefore, Light must promise not to tell the police force about all this, especially his own father. Light agrees to keep this a secret. As soon as he leaves, Light thinks it's all according to plan.
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After getting off the hijacked bus, Penber tells Light that he's under orders to investigate a case. Therefore, Light must promise not to tell the police force about all this, especially his own father. Light agrees to keep this a secret. As soon as he leaves, Light thinks it's all according to plan.
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At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L. The following week, he is in the subway to test out an experiment: if he writes down the cause of death first before the name is written down, it will happen. As soon as Penber enters, he cnfronts him without showing his face and gets him to write down the names of all 12 FBI agents who are investigating the Kira case under L. While in the middle of this, Penber feels that he's heard Light's voice before. He walks away from the train, then he suddenly collapses from a heart attack. No one in the station seems to notice. Looking back at the train, he sees Light watching him from inside before dying.
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At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L. The following week, he is in the subway to test out an experiment: if he writes down the cause of death first before the name is written down, it will happen. As soon as Penber enters, he cnfronts Light confronts him without showing his face and gets him to write down the names of all 12 FBI agents who are investigating the Kira case under L. While in the middle of this, Penber feels that he's heard Light's voice before. He walks away from the train, then he suddenly collapses from a heart attack. No one in the station seems to notice. Looking back at the train, he sees Light watching him from inside before dying.
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Penber tells Light that he's under orders to investigate a case. Therefore, he promises him not to tell the police force about all this, especially his own father. Light agrees to keep this a secret. As soon as he left, he thinks it's all according to plan.
As soon as Penber gets home from work, his fiancée has suspicions on her own about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, having reminded her many times she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case]]. He reminds her that's the promise she made when they arrive in Japan so that he can meet her parents. She apologizes for this force of habit, but Penber apologizes as well, and says to just forget about this argument.
At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L. On the following week, he is in the subway to test out an experiment: if he writes down the cause of death first before the name is written down, it will happen. As soon as Penber enters, he gets him to write down the names of 12 FBI agents who are investigating the Kira case under L. While in the middle of this, Penber seems to get suspicious of Light's voice. He walks away from the train, then he suddenly gets a heart attack. No one in the station seems to notice that. Looking back at the train, he realizes Light is in the train before dying.
As soon as Penber gets home from work, his fiancée has suspicions on her own about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, having reminded her many times she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case]]. He reminds her that's the promise she made when they arrive in Japan so that he can meet her parents. She apologizes for this force of habit, but Penber apologizes as well, and says to just forget about this argument.
At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L. On the following week, he is in the subway to test out an experiment: if he writes down the cause of death first before the name is written down, it will happen. As soon as Penber enters, he gets him to write down the names of 12 FBI agents who are investigating the Kira case under L. While in the middle of this, Penber seems to get suspicious of Light's voice. He walks away from the train, then he suddenly gets a heart attack. No one in the station seems to notice that. Looking back at the train, he realizes Light is in the train before dying.
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Penber tells Light that he's under orders to investigate a case. Therefore, he promises him Light must promise not to tell the police force about all this, especially his own father. Light agrees to keep this a secret. As soon as he left, he leaves, Light thinks it's all according to plan.
As soon as Penber gets home from work, his fiancée has suspicionson of her own about the highjacking bus hijacking incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, having reminded reminding her many times that she's not a an FBI agent anymore so and [[StayInTheKitchen don't shouldn't get involve involved in the Kira case]]. He reminds her that's the promise she made when they arrive arrived in Japan so that he can meet her parents. She apologizes for this force of habit, but Penber apologizes as well, and says to just forget about this the argument.
At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L.On the The following week, he is in the subway to test out an experiment: if he writes down the cause of death first before the name is written down, it will happen. As soon as Penber enters, he cnfronts him without showing his face and gets him to write down the names of all 12 FBI agents who are investigating the Kira case under L. While in the middle of this, Penber seems to get suspicious of feels that he's heard Light's voice. voice before. He walks away from the train, then he suddenly gets collapses from a heart attack. No one in the station seems to notice that. notice. Looking back at the train, he realizes sees Light is in the train watching him from inside before dying.dying.
The President of the United States calls off the US's investigation in Japan after learning of the FBI deaths. Back at the police headquarters, L decides to have a face-to-face meeting with whichever officers are willing to trust him enough to continue to work with him. Chief Soichiro and a handful of others go to the hotel where L is staying.
As soon as Penber gets home from work, his fiancée has suspicions
At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L.
The President of the United States calls off the US's investigation in Japan after learning of the FBI deaths. Back at the police headquarters, L decides to have a face-to-face meeting with whichever officers are willing to trust him enough to continue to work with him. Chief Soichiro and a handful of others go to the hotel where L is staying.
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* CriminalMindGames: "L, did you know Shinigami love apples" Subverted in that really he just sent it to trick and irritate L.
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* CriminalMindGames: "L, did do you know Shinigami love apples" Subverted in that really he just sent it to trick and irritate L.
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* IHaveYourWife: Subverted, he's doesn't have any hostage at the point.
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* IHaveYourWife: Subverted, he's doesn't Light was bluffing and didn't have any hostage at the that point.
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* RulesLawyer: Having discovered the Death Note can't make someone convey information they wouldn't know themselves, Light instead gets victims to convey information they wouldn't know themselves encoded into generic messages.
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* [[spoiler:DroppedABridgeOnHim]]
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* [[spoiler:DroppedABridgeOnHim]]DroppedABridgeOnHim: Take a wild guess.
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-->'''Penber''': Look, darling, I know you [[RetiredBadass used to be one of the best agents in the FBI]], but now you're my fiancée. We talked about this. You're not an agent anymore, [[SomebodyElsesProblem so just leave it alone]].
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-->'''Penber''': Look, darling, I know you [[RetiredBadass used to be one of the best agents in the FBI]], but now you're my fiancée. We talked about this. You're not an agent anymore, [[SomebodyElsesProblem [[BystanderSyndrome so just leave it alone]].
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* BystanderSyndrome:
** Raye Penber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.
** Early on, this is his opinion on his fiancée getting suspicious on the bus jacking incident.
** Raye Penber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.
** Early on, this is his opinion on his fiancée getting suspicious on the bus jacking incident.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Raye Penber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.
** Early on, this is his opinion on his fiancée getting suspicious on the bus jacking incident.
** Early on, this is his opinion on his fiancée getting suspicious on the bus jacking incident.
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As soon as Penber gets home from work, his fiancée has suspicions on her own about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, having reminded her many times she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case]]. He reminds her the promise she made when they arrive in Japan so that he can meet her parents. She apologizes for this force of habit, but Penber apologizes as well, and says to just forget about this argument.
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As soon as Penber gets home from work, his fiancée has suspicions on her own about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, having reminded her many times she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case]]. He reminds her that's the promise she made when they arrive in Japan so that he can meet her parents. She apologizes for this force of habit, but Penber apologizes as well, and says to just forget about this argument.
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Penber tells Light that he's under orders to investigate a case. Therefore, he promises him not to tell the police force about all this, especially his own father. Light agrees to keep this a secret. As soon as he left, he thinks it's all according.
As soon as Penber gets home from his apartment, his fiancée started to get suspicious about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, telling her she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case]]. She apologizes for making this move, but Penber apologizes as well.
As soon as Penber gets home from his apartment, his fiancée started to get suspicious about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, telling her she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case]]. She apologizes for making this move, but Penber apologizes as well.
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Penber tells Light that he's under orders to investigate a case. Therefore, he promises him not to tell the police force about all this, especially his own father. Light agrees to keep this a secret. As soon as he left, he thinks it's all according.
according to plan.
As soon as Penber gets home fromhis apartment, work, his fiancée started to get suspicious has suspicions on her own about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, telling having reminded her many times she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case]]. He reminds her the promise she made when they arrive in Japan so that he can meet her parents. She apologizes for making this move, force of habit, but Penber apologizes as well.
well, and says to just forget about this argument.
As soon as Penber gets home from
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Raye Peber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Raye Peber Penber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.help.
** Early on, this is his opinion on his fiancée getting suspicious on the bus jacking incident.
** Early on, this is his opinion on his fiancée getting suspicious on the bus jacking incident.
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* InTheHood: The way Light is dressed up he's either ready to kill FBI agents or play ''Franchise/AssassinsCreed''.
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* InTheHood: The way Light is dressed up he's either ready to kill FBI agents or play ''Franchise/AssassinsCreed''. ''Franchise/AssassinsCreed''.
* NoNameGiven: Penber's fiancée until episode 7.
* NoNameGiven: Penber's fiancée until episode 7.
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* StayInTheKitchen: Penber to his fiancée.
-->'''Penber''': Look, darling, I know you [[RetiredBadass used to be one of the best agents in the FBI]], but now you're my fiancée. We talked about this. You're not an agent anymore, [[SomebodyElsesProblem so just leave it alone]].
-->'''Penber''': Look, darling, I know you [[RetiredBadass used to be one of the best agents in the FBI]], but now you're my fiancée. We talked about this. You're not an agent anymore, [[SomebodyElsesProblem so just leave it alone]].
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As soon as Penber gets home from his apartment, his fiancée started to get suspicious about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, telling her she's not a FBI agent anymore so don't get involve in the Kira case. She apologizes for making this move, but Penber apologizes as well.
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As soon as Penber gets home from his apartment, his fiancée started to get suspicious about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, telling her she's not a FBI agent anymore so [[StayInTheKitchen don't get involve in the Kira case.case]]. She apologizes for making this move, but Penber apologizes as well.
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* EvilGloating: "Farewell, Raye Penber."
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* EvilGloating: "Farewell, Raye Penber." "
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* GigglingVillain: Light.
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* GigglingVillain: Light.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Raye Peber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Raye Peber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: Raye Peber dies in a crowded subway station. Nobody spares him a glance let alone stops to help.
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* ConspicuousTrenchcoat: Raye Penber wears one.
* CriminalMindGames: "L, did you know Shinigami love apples" Subverted in that really he just sent it to trick and irritate L.
* CriminalMindGames: "L, did you know Shinigami love apples" Subverted in that really he just sent it to trick and irritate L.
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* EvilGloating: "Farewell, Raye Penber."
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* InTheHood: The way Light is dressed up he's either ready to kill FBI agents or play ''Franchise/AssassinsCreed''.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem:
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Penber tells Light that he's under orders to investigate a case. Therefore, he promises him not to tell the police force about all this, especially his own father. Light agrees to keep this a secret. As soon as he left, he thinks it's all according.
As soon as Penber gets home from his apartment, his fiancée started to get suspicious about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, telling her she's not a FBI agent anymore so don't get involve in the Kira case. She apologizes for making this move, but Penber apologizes as well.
At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L. On the following week, he is in the subway to test out an experiment: if he writes down the cause of death first before the name is written down, it will happen. As soon as Penber enters, he gets him to write down the names of 12 FBI agents who are investigating the Kira case under L. While in the middle of this, Penber seems to get suspicious of Light's voice. He walks away from the train, then he suddenly gets a heart attack. No one in the station seems to notice that. Looking back at the train, he realizes Light is in the train before dying.
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!!This episodes provides examples of:
* DeathBySecretIdentity
* [[spoiler:DroppedABridgeOnHim]]
* FalseReassurance: Light reassures Penber he will let him go as soon as he's done. Wrong.
* IHaveYourWife: Subverted, he's doesn't have any hostage at the point.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Killing the FBI agents is the starting point.
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As soon as Penber gets home from his apartment, his fiancée started to get suspicious about the highjacking bus incident. Realizing what she's thinking, he brushes this off, telling her she's not a FBI agent anymore so don't get involve in the Kira case. She apologizes for making this move, but Penber apologizes as well.
At night, Light has decided to spare Penber for the week and sends another message to L. On the following week, he is in the subway to test out an experiment: if he writes down the cause of death first before the name is written down, it will happen. As soon as Penber enters, he gets him to write down the names of 12 FBI agents who are investigating the Kira case under L. While in the middle of this, Penber seems to get suspicious of Light's voice. He walks away from the train, then he suddenly gets a heart attack. No one in the station seems to notice that. Looking back at the train, he realizes Light is in the train before dying.
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!!This episodes provides examples of:
* DeathBySecretIdentity
* [[spoiler:DroppedABridgeOnHim]]
* FalseReassurance: Light reassures Penber he will let him go as soon as he's done. Wrong.
* IHaveYourWife: Subverted, he's doesn't have any hostage at the point.
* JumpingOffTheSlipperySlope: Killing the FBI agents is the starting point.
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