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* ShapeshifterShowoffSession: Late in the story, Erimem belatedly realizes that the Doctor is actually Jarra To in disguise, prompting Jarra to turn back and rant at length about how the Time Lords [[SealedEvilInACan imprisoned her]] in an infinite loop to stop her from damaging any more timelines - transforming into various figures from across the Axis as she explains how futile her life became. Not long afterwards, Jarra grows so frustrated with Erimem's SilentTreatment that she resorts to repeatedly shapeshifting into Erimem just so she can hold both sides of her [[JustBetweenYouAndMe expository villain monologue]] until the real Erimem [[BigShutUp screams at Jarra to shut up]].
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--> '''The Jester''': "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS1E1AnUnearthlyChild Susan]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E4TheHighlanders Polly]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS5E7TheWheelInSpace Zoe]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS7E1SpearheadFromSpace Liz]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS10E5TheGreenDeath Jo]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS11E1TheTimeWarrior Sarah-Jane]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E4TheFaceOfEvil Leela]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS16E1TheRibosOperation Romana]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS18E6TheKeeperOfTraken Nyssa]] and that's just out of the top of my head!"
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--> '''The Jester''': Jester:''' "[[Recap/DoctorWhoS1E1AnUnearthlyChild Susan]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS4E4TheHighlanders Polly]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS5E7TheWheelInSpace Zoe]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS7E1SpearheadFromSpace Liz]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS10E5TheGreenDeath Jo]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS11E1TheTimeWarrior Sarah-Jane]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E4TheFaceOfEvil Leela]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS16E1TheRibosOperation Romana]], [[Recap/DoctorWhoS18E6TheKeeperOfTraken Nyssa]] and that's just out of the top of my head!"
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* [[DescriptionPorn Description Gorn]]: The last Time Lord the Jester met gets described in oozing pus, and being covered in roaches.
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* BluffTheImpostor: Erimem asks the Doctor to bring her back to Chicago. The Doctor having been replaced by the Jester, he doesn't blink and is unaware that this is not where she's from. He does, unfortunately, [[GenreSavvy immediately realise from her reaction that she's just bluffed him.]]
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The Axis has been overtaken by a MonsterClown who calls himself "The Jester". Its Overseer has been murdered, and giant beasts from mythology all over time and space have been set loose in its CircusOfFear. Peri (of course) sneaks out for a look and rescues a guy from a divergent timeline who fell through a time portal and is rather confused about the whole thing. Erimem is saddled with the Jester pretending to be the Doctor, quickly figures out what's happening, and is GenreSavvy smart enough to contact the real Doctor and start sorting things out. In the end, it turns out that the Time Lords had already been to the Axis to investigate, and one of them was murdered by the Jester (and had his memories stolen in the process). The Jester plans to steal the Doctor's TARDIS and open up other timelines to each other, but the Doctor stops him, with the help of a HeroicSacrifice by their new friend.
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