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Cloning Blues renamed to Clone Angst as per TRS, specifically about angst from a character discovering that they're a clone.
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* CloningBlues: If you resleeve too many times into sleeves you have never used before, you go crazy. Part of Kovacs' Envoy training lets him avert this. The Meths exclusively use clones to prevent it, allowing them to resleeve indefinitely, because they're just being sleeved into the same body each time.
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* SleepingWithTheBosssWife: Kovacs is seduced by his trillionaire retainer Laurens Bancroft's wife Miriam and they have sex. [[spoiler:This creates tension in his relationship to Bancroft later in the series.]]
* SomebodyElsesProblem: The fisherman cites this when [[DueToTheDead his son tries to retrieve the body]] they saw plummet into the water. His comment about being arresting implies they were fishing in the reservoir illegally.
* SomebodyElsesProblem: The fisherman cites this when [[DueToTheDead his son tries to retrieve the body]] they saw plummet into the water. His comment about being arresting implies they were fishing in the reservoir illegally.
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* SleepingWithTheBosssWife: Kovacs is seduced by his trillionaire retainer Laurens Bancroft's wife Miriam and they have sex. [[spoiler:This creates tension in his relationship to Bancroft later in the series.]]
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: The fisherman cites this when [[DueToTheDead his son tries to retrieve the body]] they saw plummet into the water. His comment about beingarresting arrested if they reported it implies they were they're fishing in the reservoir illegally.
* SomebodyElsesProblem: The fisherman cites this when [[DueToTheDead his son tries to retrieve the body]] they saw plummet into the water. His comment about being
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* UnConfession: Ortega appears to be confessing her crimes to a priest. However the police station has been built inside a former church and she's just confessing to an disused confession booth.
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* UnConfession: Ortega appears to be confessing her crimes to a priest. However the police station has been was built inside a former church and she's just confessing talking to an a disused confession booth.booth being used as a storage cupboard.
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* CombatClairvoyance: Kovacs can tell from Vernon's body language that he's about to rush him.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: Poe gets Kovacs more appropriate clothing for someone being employed by a trillionaire.
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* BadassInANiceSuit: BadassInANiceSuit + BadassLongcoat: Poe gets Kovacs more appropriate clothing for someone being employed by a trillionaire.
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* ShoutOut: Poe is watching ''Film/IWakeUpScreaming'' when Kovacs enters the hotel.
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"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better.\\
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"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better.\\"\\
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape."\\
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology "\\
"Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape."\\
"Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape."\\
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape." \\
"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better.\\
"The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better.\\
"The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape." \\
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"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better.\\
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"The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better.
"The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack.
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* FantasticRacism: The other members of his AI union regard Poe as a freak because of his fascination and respect for humans, whilst they regard themselves as superior to the humanity that created them.
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* UnConfession: Ortega appears to be confessing her crimes to a priest. However the police station has been built inside a former church and she's just confessing to an disused confession booth.
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape. I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better. The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
-->-- '''Takeshi Kovacs''', OpeningNarration
-->-- '''Takeshi Kovacs''', OpeningNarration
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape. I " \\
"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better. The \\
"The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
-->-- '''Takeshi Kovacs''',OpeningNarration
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"I knew I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better.
"The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
-->-- '''Takeshi Kovacs''',
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** The thug who attacks Kovacs outside the brothel says he shouldn't have come back, even though Kovacs has never been there before.
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** The thug who attacks Kovacs outside the brothel says he shouldn't have come back, even though [[HaveWeMetYet Kovacs has never been there before.before]].
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He saw the clues to its location in the VR of Lizzie.
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* ContrivedCoincidence: While walking down the street, Kovacs just happens to stumble upon the brothel where Elizabeth Elliot worked. In fairness he did go looking for it.
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* MenCantKeepHouse: Vernon has a cluttered bachelor pad because his wife is on ice for the next thirty years; Kovacs complains his milk is well past its use-by-date. Ortega's pad is a lot neater, but her mum comes round to [[EmptyFridgeEmptyLife fill the fridge because it's empty.]]
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* MenCantKeepHouse: Vernon has a cluttered bachelor pad because his wife is on ice for the next thirty years; Kovacs complains his milk is well past its use-by-date. Ortega's pad is a lot neater, but much of her stuff is still packed, implying it's not her place, and mum comes round to [[EmptyFridgeEmptyLife fill the fridge because it's empty.]]
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* MenCantKeepHouse: Vernon has a cluttered bachelor pad because his wife is on ice for the next thirty years; Kovacs complains his milk is well past its use-by-date. Ortega's pad is a lot neater, but her mum comes round to [[EmptyFridgeEmptyLife fill the fridge because it's empty.]]
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape. I knew a shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better. The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
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->''"Peace is an illusion. No matter how tranquil the world seems...peace doesn't last long. Peace is a struggle against our very nature. A skin we stretch over the bone, muscle, and sinew of our own innate savagery. The instinct to violence curls inside us like a parasite, waiting for its to feed on our rage and multiply until it bursts out of us. War is the only thing we really understand. Technology advances, but humans don't. We're smart monkeys, and what we want is always the same. Food, shelter, sex, and in all its forms...escape. I knew a I shouldn't go, 'cause when the victors rewrite history, it's just another kind of war. Waged after the battlefield killing is done...to murder the memory of the defeated. But it was a chance to see her again, not as a dream or a hallucination. I thought it would give me a moment of peace. I should have known better. The moments of peace that we find sometimes...they aren't anything but warfare, thinly disguised. And sometimes surrender can be as savage as any attack. "''
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: The father and son pair who go fishing in the opening and witness a body plummeting into the water decide to leave the body for the police to find, citing this reasoning.
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* SomebodyElsesProblem: The father and fisherman cites this when [[DueToTheDead his son pair who go tries to retrieve the body]] they saw plummet into the water. His comment about being arresting implies they were fishing in the opening and witness a body plummeting into the water decide to leave the body for the police to find, citing this reasoning.reservoir illegally.
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* YouGotSpunk: Laurens doesn't like being questioned by Kovacs and threatens to have him put back on ice, but is impressed when Kovacs refuses to back down in the face of this threat.
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* CoitusEnsues: Miriam Bancroft doesn't have to try very hard to seduce Kovacs thanks to the [=Merge9=] secreted by her artificial body, which makes her a LivingAphrodisiac. It also helps that Kovacs hasn't had a chance to [[YouNeedToGetLaid dispose of those pent-up hormones]].
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* SleepingWithTheBosssWife: Kovacs is seduced by his trillionaire retainer Laurens Bancroft's wife Miriam and CoitusEnsues. [[spoiler:This creates tension in his relationship to Bancroft later in the series.]]
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* SleepingWithTheBosssWife: Kovacs is seduced by his trillionaire retainer Laurens Bancroft's wife Miriam and CoitusEnsues.they have sex. [[spoiler:This creates tension in his relationship to Bancroft later in the series.]]
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* PinocchioSyndrome: Poe reveals his greatest aspiration is the study of humanity. His fellow AIs find it weird and disturbing.
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* InjuredLimbEpisode: InvulnerableKnuckles don't actually exists for unarmored humans, and your hands will bleed even if properly bandaged if you hit a punching bag too hard too many times. Ortega finds this out the hard way.
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* RealityEnsues: InvulnerableKnuckles don't actually exists for unarmored humans, and your hands will bleed even if properly bandaged if you hit a punching bag too hard too many times. Ortega finds this out the hard way.
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* ZeroPercentApprovalRating: Laurens Bancroft receives thousands of threats every year that Kovacs has to sort through. Of course Bancroft can afford to ignore them.
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* HatedByAll: Laurens Bancroft receives thousands of threats every year that Kovacs has to sort through. Of course Bancroft can afford to ignore them.
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** Samir tells this to Ortega when they're sparing, who responds by kicking his ass.
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** Samir tells this to Ortega when they're sparing, who responds by kicking his ass. Given that she confesses to having lustful thoughts, it's clear he hit a nerve.