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-->'''Clockblocker:''' You kicked their asses with butterflies.\\
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->'''Clockblocker:''' You kicked their asses with butterflies.\\
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-->--'''''Clockblocker''' being the best hero.''
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-->--'''''Clockblocker''' being the best hero.''''
[[hardline]]
->''"We know what you're about," Glenn said. He touched his keyboard, then typed out what I presumed was a password. A second passed, "Look."''\\
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''He spun his monitor around.''\\
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''It was me, entering the PRT office in Brockton Bay. A video feed from a surveillance camera.''\\
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''It was me, crawling through a window. That would be from the night I retaliated against Tagg. Odd, seeing how the bugs moved in coordination with me. When I turned my head in the video, the orientation of every bug in the swarm changed in the same moment.''\\
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''All around me, PRT employees were howling in pain, their cries silenced by the lack of an audio feed. Either the camera hadn't picked it up, or Glenn had muted it. They thrashed. One reached for me, for the '''me''' on the screen, and I could see how I moved out of the way without even glancing at him. The swarm concealed me at the same time, briefly obscuring the Skitter in the video from both the man on the ground and the security camera. When it parted, she had shifted two or three feet to the left. A simple step to one side in the half-second she couldn't be seen, but it misled the eyes.''\\
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''And I couldn't remember doing it. I'd never consciously added the trick to my repertoire.''\\
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''"If you told me that girl was a member of the Slaughterhouse Nine," Glenn said, "I wouldn't have batted an eyelash."''
-->''Glenn Chambers explains why they're putting restrictions on Weaver in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/05/30/drone-23-3/ Drone 23.3]]''
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->''"We know what you're about," Glenn said. He touched his keyboard, then typed out what I presumed was a password. A second passed, "Look."''\\
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''He spun his monitor around.''\\
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''It was me, entering the PRT office in Brockton Bay. A video feed from a surveillance camera.''\\
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''It was me, crawling through a window. That would be from the night I retaliated against Tagg. Odd, seeing how the bugs moved in coordination with me. When I turned my head in the video, the orientation of every bug in the swarm changed in the same moment.''\\
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''All around me, PRT employees were howling in pain, their cries silenced by the lack of an audio feed. Either the camera hadn't picked it up, or Glenn had muted it. They thrashed. One reached for me, for the '''me''' on the screen, and I could see how I moved out of the way without even glancing at him. The swarm concealed me at the same time, briefly obscuring the Skitter in the video from both the man on the ground and the security camera. When it parted, she had shifted two or three feet to the left. A simple step to one side in the half-second she couldn't be seen, but it misled the eyes.''\\
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''And I couldn't remember doing it. I'd never consciously added the trick to my repertoire.''\\
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''"If you told me that girl was a member of the Slaughterhouse Nine," Glenn said, "I wouldn't have batted an eyelash."''
-->''Glenn Chambers explains why they're putting restrictions on Weaver in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/05/30/drone-23-3/ Drone 23.3]]''
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-->--'''''Wildbow''' responding to fans after a serious cliffhanger.''
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-->--'''''Wildbow''' responding to fans after a serious cliffhanger.''
-->'''Clockblocker:''' You kicked their asses with butterflies.\\
'''Weaver:''' I cheated. The butterflies are superficial, decorative.\\
'''Clockblocker:''' No, no, no. If anyone asks, you kicked their asses with butterflies.
-->--'''''Clockblocker''' being the best hero.''
-->'''Clockblocker:''' You kicked their asses with butterflies.\\
'''Weaver:''' I cheated. The butterflies are superficial, decorative.\\
'''Clockblocker:''' No, no, no. If anyone asks, you kicked their asses with butterflies.
-->--'''''Clockblocker''' being the best hero.''
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-> "Meh, I could take her."
--> RunningGag in the comments section, about the initial reaction of every one of Skitter's enemies. Ever.
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--> RunningGag in the comments section, about the initial reaction of every one of Skitter's enemies. Ever.
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-->--'''''Taylor''', commenting on [[TheDreaded using her reputation]] in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/04/02/chrysalis-20-5/ Chrysalis 20.5]]''
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-->--'''''Taylor''', commenting on [[TheDreaded using her reputation]] in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/04/02/chrysalis-20-5/ Chrysalis 20.5]]''5]]''
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->'''Innomine:''' Hey Wildbow, what are our chances of getting a non-interlude chapter on saturday?
->'''Wildbow:''' Interlude Sat, maybe Tues too
->'''Wildbow:''' Just because I need a break from the main story
->'''saintsant:''' You're a bad person, Wildbow.
->'''Wildbow:''' and your tears of frustration sustain me.
-->--'''''Wildbow''' responding to fans after a serious cliffhanger.''
[[hardline]]
->'''Innomine:''' Hey Wildbow, what are our chances of getting a non-interlude chapter on saturday?
->'''Wildbow:''' Interlude Sat, maybe Tues too
->'''Wildbow:''' Just because I need a break from the main story
->'''saintsant:''' You're a bad person, Wildbow.
->'''Wildbow:''' and your tears of frustration sustain me.
-->--'''''Wildbow''' responding to fans after a serious cliffhanger.''
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-->--''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Scapegoat]] sums up the whole FromBadToWorse angle''[[note]]Also, when AwesomenessByAnalysis ''is'' your superpower, LethalHarmlessPowers goes on a whole different level[[/note]]
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-->--''Discussion on [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/21/chrysalis-20-1/#comment-14162 Chrysalis 20.1]]''
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-->--''Discussion on [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/21/chrysalis-20-1/#comment-14162 Chrysalis 20.1]]''1]]''
->''Weeks or months ago, I might have had a hard time wearing that confidence the way [[spoiler:Jack]] did. The '''history''', the long sequence of events and conflicts where we’d come out ahead in our respective teams, it could just as easily be a burden, the accumulated weight of the various precedents we’d set, but we’d made it into our armor, something to make our enemies hesitate at a critical juncture.''
-->--'''''Taylor''', commenting on [[TheDreaded using her reputation]] in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/04/02/chrysalis-20-5/ Chrysalis 20.5]]''
->''Weeks or months ago, I might have had a hard time wearing that confidence the way [[spoiler:Jack]] did. The '''history''', the long sequence of events and conflicts where we’d come out ahead in our respective teams, it could just as easily be a burden, the accumulated weight of the various precedents we’d set, but we’d made it into our armor, something to make our enemies hesitate at a critical juncture.''
-->--'''''Taylor''', commenting on [[TheDreaded using her reputation]] in [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/04/02/chrysalis-20-5/ Chrysalis 20.5]]''
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-->--Discussion on [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/21/chrysalis-20-1/#comment-14162 Chrysalis 20.1]].
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I’d really like to dispute that. I really would =/
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I’d really like to dispute that. I really would =/=/
-->--Discussion on [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/21/chrysalis-20-1/#comment-14162 Chrysalis 20.1]].
-->--Discussion on [[http://parahumans.wordpress.com/2013/03/21/chrysalis-20-1/#comment-14162 Chrysalis 20.1]].
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-->--''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Scapegoat]] sums up the whole FromBadToWorse angle''[[note]]Also, when AwesomenessByAnalysis ''is'' your superpower, LethalHarmlessPowers goes on a whole different level[[/note]]
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-->--''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Scapegoat]] sums up the whole FromBadToWorse angle''[[note]]Also, when AwesomenessByAnalysis ''is'' your superpower, LethalHarmlessPowers goes on a whole different level[[/note]]level[[/note]]
->'''Psycho Gecko:''' Principled people in Worm? That IS suspicious.
->'''throwaawy:''' >>Principled people in Worm? That IS suspicious.\\
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no it's...(o.o)\\
...it's (>.>a)\\
...........(-_-);\\
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I’d really like to dispute that. I really would =/
->'''Psycho Gecko:''' Principled people in Worm? That IS suspicious.
->'''throwaawy:''' >>Principled people in Worm? That IS suspicious.\\
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no it's...(o.o)\\
...it's (>.>a)\\
...........(-_-);\\
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I’d really like to dispute that. I really would =/
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grammar
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-->--'''''mc2rpg''' in the comments section''[[note]]She does sums up quite nicely how WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief works for most people reading Worm[[/note]]
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-->--'''''mc2rpg''' in the comments section''[[note]]She does sums sum up quite nicely how WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief works for most people reading Worm[[/note]]
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Sums, not sumps. Just kept wanting to fix that typo.
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-->--''Sierra sumps up [[HorrifyingHero the other]] [[BadPowersGoodPeople half]].''
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-->--''Sierra sumps sums up [[HorrifyingHero the other]] [[BadPowersGoodPeople half]].''
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[[hardline]]
->'''Scapegoat''': I was perfectly happy, Being able to tell myself that hey, the news is blowing things out of proportion. There’s no way Brockton Bay is as scary as they’re making it out to me. Dragon suits get sent in and are promptly forced out, but really, the mayor‘s telling Washington it’s safe enough. The media got something wrong, or they’re making little problems sound bigger than they are. See the piles of dead bodies where this girl spat out clones. Okay. I can live with that. An unusual power and strong parahuman. Could be an exaggeration. See the destruction, the ruined buildings and the streets that still haven’t drained a hundred percent. More or less what I expected from the news. The girl with the mutant dogs? Bug girl? Still manageable. But she opens her mouth, [points at Tattletale] and pop goes my bubble of happy self-delusion.
->'''Tecton''': You want to tear a hole in reality?
->'''Tattletale''': [[WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong I do]].
-->--''[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin Scapegoat]] sums up the whole FromBadToWorse angle''[[note]]Also, when AwesomenessByAnalysis ''is'' your superpower, LethalHarmlessPowers goes on a whole different level[[/note]]
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trying to capture the spirit of Worm\'s community as best as I can
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-->--''A sample from the comments section: Full of normal people. [[note]]Incidentally, it's a DeadBabyComedy taken a wee bit too literally[[/note]]''
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-->--''A sample from the comments section: Full of normal people. [[note]]Incidentally, it's a DeadBabyComedy taken a wee bit too literally[[/note]]''literally[[/note]]''
[[hardline]]
->''To be fair, almost none of the capes should be able to exist. Just because the endbringers are able to tell reality to fuck off a little bit harder doesn’t justify persecuting them!''
-->--'''''mc2rpg''' in the comments section''[[note]]She does sums up quite nicely how WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief works for most people reading Worm[[/note]]
[[hardline]]
->''To be fair, almost none of the capes should be able to exist. Just because the endbringers are able to tell reality to fuck off a little bit harder doesn’t justify persecuting them!''
-->--'''''mc2rpg''' in the comments section''[[note]]She does sums up quite nicely how WillingSuspensionOfDisbelief works for most people reading Worm[[/note]]
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->(''After [[CompleteMonster The Nine]] have attacked the '''nursery''' of an hospital.'')
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->(''After [[CompleteMonster The Nine]] Nine have attacked the '''nursery''' of an hospital.'')
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->'''[[BlackComedy [=PsychoGeko=]]]''': Now, now, let’s not jump to conclusions here. We don’t know for a fact that this wasn’t a case of self defense. Those babies might have been asking for it. One of them might have smuggled a Walther PPK in its diaper to cap an unsuspecting nurse, and then Jack Slash saw it and decided to act heroically. Or Siberian figured it was as good a time as any to try eating a baby. Hell, if you she downed the diaper too then you might as well sell that video off for another Jackass movie. Maybe they’ll put it just after the part where someone blows a horse.
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->'''[[BlackComedy [=PsychoGeko=]]]''': [=PsychoGecko=]]]''': Now, now, let’s not jump to conclusions here. We don’t know for a fact that this wasn’t a case of self defense. Those babies might have been asking for it. One of them might have smuggled a Walther PPK in its diaper to cap an unsuspecting nurse, and then Jack Slash saw it and decided to act heroically. Or Siberian figured it was as good a time as any to try eating a baby. Hell, if you she downed the diaper too then you might as well sell that video off for another Jackass movie. Maybe they’ll put it just after the part where someone blows a horse.
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->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': Slept like a dead baby.
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->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': Must need [the materials to build] more spiders.
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->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': I bet [[ToServeMan Siberian]] likes veal.
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really finished now. also PG cannot spell \"heroically\" :D
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->'''[[BlackComedy [=PsychoGeko=]]]''': "Now, now, let’s not jump to conclusions here. We don’t know for a fact that this wasn’t a case of self defense. Those babies might have been asking for it. One of them might have smuggled a Walther PPK in its diaper to cap an unsuspecting nurse, and then Jack Slash saw it and decided to act heroicly. Or Siberian figured it was as good a time as any to try eating a baby. Hell, if you she downed the diaper too then you might as well sell that video off for another Jackass movie. Maybe they’ll put it just after the part where someone blows a horse."
->'''[[StraightMan tieshaunn]]''': "thanks for all those wonderful pictures in my head. better be careful the next time you go to sleep…"
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "Slept like a dead baby."
->'''[[TemptingFate [=TheAnt=]]]''': "It was implied that they took a few alive, at least to me. Knowing [[HumanResources Bonesaw]], that is not a good thing."
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "Must need [the materials to build] more spiders"
->'''tieshaunn''': "DAMMIT, WHY WON’T YOU STOP!?"
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "I bet [[ToServeMan Siberian]] likes veal."
->'''[[StraightMan tieshaunn]]''': "thanks for all those wonderful pictures in my head. better be careful the next time you go to sleep…"
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "Slept like a dead baby."
->'''[[TemptingFate [=TheAnt=]]]''': "It was implied that they took a few alive, at least to me. Knowing [[HumanResources Bonesaw]], that is not a good thing."
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "Must need [the materials to build] more spiders"
->'''tieshaunn''': "DAMMIT, WHY WON’T YOU STOP!?"
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "I bet [[ToServeMan Siberian]] likes veal."
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->'''[[BlackComedy [=PsychoGeko=]]]''': "Now, Now, now, let’s not jump to conclusions here. We don’t know for a fact that this wasn’t a case of self defense. Those babies might have been asking for it. One of them might have smuggled a Walther PPK in its diaper to cap an unsuspecting nurse, and then Jack Slash saw it and decided to act heroicly.heroically. Or Siberian figured it was as good a time as any to try eating a baby. Hell, if you she downed the diaper too then you might as well sell that video off for another Jackass movie. Maybe they’ll put it just after the part where someone blows a horse."
horse.
->'''[[StraightMantieshaunn]]''': "thanks Tieshaunn]]''': Thanks for all those wonderful pictures in my head. better be careful the next time you go to sleep…"
sleep…
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''':"Slept Slept like a dead baby."
baby.
->'''[[TemptingFate [=TheAnt=]]]''':"It It was implied that they took a few alive, at least to me. Knowing [[HumanResources Bonesaw]], that is not a good thing."
thing.
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''':"Must Must need [the materials to build] more spiders"
->'''tieshaunn''': "DAMMIT,spiders.
->'''Tieshaunn''': DAMMIT, WHY WON’T YOUSTOP!?"
STOP!?
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''':"I I bet [[ToServeMan Siberian]] likes veal."
->'''[[StraightMan
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''':
->'''[[TemptingFate [=TheAnt=]]]''':
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''':
->'''tieshaunn''': "DAMMIT,
->'''Tieshaunn''': DAMMIT, WHY WON’T YOU
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''':
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consistency. and with this it looks like I\'ve finished cleaning it up :)
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-->-- One in a series of information sheets being distributed by Taylor's dad about supervillains in Brockton Bay.
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-->--[[NominalHero Shadow Stalker]] on [[ClassicalAntiHero Skitter]]
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-->--Battery sums up half of [[HeroWithBadPublicity Skitter's]] [[DudeWheresMyRespect problems]].
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-->--Sierra sumps up [[HorrifyingHero the other]] [[BadPowersGoodPeople half]].
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->''Battery surveyed the crowd again. “What’s your agenda?”
->“Do I have to have one?”
->“Yes. Your kind always has an agenda.”
->“Maybe I’m unique.”
->“No, knowing what you tried to pull with pretending to be a villain? Or pretending to be a hero that’s pretending to be a villain? You’re more likely to have some scheme at play than anyone else.”''
->“Do I have to have one?”
->“Yes. Your kind always has an agenda.”
->“Maybe I’m unique.”
->“No, knowing what you tried to pull with pretending to be a villain? Or pretending to be a hero that’s pretending to be a villain? You’re more likely to have some scheme at play than anyone else.”''
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->“Do
->'''Skitter''': Do I have to have
->“Yes.
->'''Battery''': Yes. Your kind always has an
->“Maybe
->'''Skitter''': Maybe I’m
->“No,
->'''Battery''': No, knowing what you tried to pull with pretending to be a villain? Or pretending to be a hero that’s pretending to be a villain? You’re more likely to have some scheme at play than anyone
-->--Battery sums up half of [[HeroWithBadPublicity Skitter's]] [[DudeWheresMyRespect problems]].
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->''"A figure stood behind Yan. Her costume was barely recognizable – She wore a short cape of tattered black cloth over her body armor, a skintight black suit beneath that, and there were folds of black cloth draped around her legs like a dress or a robe. The entire fabric seemed to ripple and move. It took Sierra a second to realize it was crawling with a carpet of insects.''
->''The disconcerting part was the girl’s face, or lack thereof. Her expression was masked behind a shifting mass of bugs that moved in and out of her hairline. Sierra couldn’t even tell where the bugs ended and the scalp began, as the small black bodies crawled into and onto the black curls. There was a hint of something like glass where Skitter’s eyes were, but the bugs ventured far enough over her eyelids and around the frames that nothing was visible in the way of goggles, glasses or skin."''
->''The disconcerting part was the girl’s face, or lack thereof. Her expression was masked behind a shifting mass of bugs that moved in and out of her hairline. Sierra couldn’t even tell where the bugs ended and the scalp began, as the small black bodies crawled into and onto the black curls. There was a hint of something like glass where Skitter’s eyes were, but the bugs ventured far enough over her eyelids and around the frames that nothing was visible in the way of goggles, glasses or skin."''
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->''The disconcerting part was the girl’s face, or lack thereof. Her expression was masked behind a shifting mass of bugs that moved in and out of her hairline. Sierra couldn’t even tell where the bugs ended and the scalp began, as the small black bodies crawled into and onto the black curls. There was a hint of something like glass where Skitter’s eyes were, but the bugs ventured far enough over her eyelids and around the frames that nothing was visible in the way of goggles, glasses or skin.
-->--Sierra sumps up [[HorrifyingHero the other]] [[BadPowersGoodPeople half]].
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cleanup/consistency, relevant potholes
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->''"Whatever else Shadow Stalker might think of the bug girl, how the girl was creepy, a freak, she had to admit Skitter had demonstrated enough viciousness to date that she could almost respect the girl as a fellow predator."''
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-->--[[NominalHero Shadow Stalker]] on [[ClassicalAntiHero Skitter]]
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->''"Running forward, he swung the club at the swarm like he was trying to hit a home run. The head was scattered, dashed to pieces, and he laughed again. ''
->''Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming."''
->''Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming."''
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->''Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming.
-->--''A mook attacking one of Skitter's [[TheWormThatWalks bug clones]]''
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->''"“Motherfucker.” Even without intending to do it, I used my swarm to carry my voice. His head craned around, as if to look at the swarming bugs who had just, for all intents and purposes, spoken. Eventually his ‘face’ turned back to me. ''
->''“I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
-->--''Taylor, in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''
->''“I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
-->--''Taylor, in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''
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->''“I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.
-->--''Taylor,
-->--'''''Skitter''', in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''
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->''I almost laughed, and some of my humor must have translated in a mental direction to my bugs, because they started making a noise that wasn’t speech. I stopped them. It wouldn’t have sounded much like laughter anyways. ”All of the above? None of the above? Does it matter? Some of us wear the villain label with pride, because they want to rebel against the norms, because it’s a harder, more rewarding road to travel, or because being a ‘hero’ often means so very little. But few people really want to see themselves as being bad or evil, whatever label they wear. I’ve done things I regret, I’ve done things I’m proud of, and I’ve walked the roads in between. The sliding scale is a fantasy. There’s no simple answers.“ "''
-->--''Taylor's response to a hero who asks her where she sees herself in terms of the sliding scale of good and evil, heroes and villains.”''
-->--''Taylor's response to a hero who asks her where she sees herself in terms of the sliding scale of good and evil, heroes and villains.”''
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->''I almost laughed, and some of my humor must have translated in a mental direction to my bugs, because they started making a noise that wasn’t speech. I stopped them. It wouldn’t have sounded much like laughter anyways. ”All of the above? None of the above? Does it matter? Some of us wear the villain label with pride, because they want to rebel against the norms, because it’s a harder, more rewarding road to travel, or because being a ‘hero’ often means so very little. But few people really want to see themselves as being bad or evil, whatever label they wear. I’ve done things I regret, I’ve done things I’m proud of, and I’ve walked the roads in between. The sliding scale is a fantasy. There’s no simple answers.“ "''
-->--''Taylor's''
-->--'''''Skitter's''' response to a hero who asks her where she sees herself in terms of the sliding scale of good and evil, heroes and villains.”''
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-->--''Taylor's
-->--'''''Skitter's''' response to a hero who asks her where she sees herself in terms of the sliding scale of good and evil, heroes and villains.
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->''"You gonna fight me?” He called out.
->“I’m a good guy,” I said.
->Stepping closer to me, he tilted his head, “You don’t look like one.”''
-->--''Taylor's first meeting with Armsmaster”''
->“I’m a good guy,” I said.
->Stepping closer to me, he tilted his head, “You don’t look like one.”''
-->--''Taylor's first meeting with Armsmaster”''
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->“I’m
->'''[[DarkIsNotEvil Skitter]]''': I’m a good
->Stepping closer to me, he tilted his head, “You
->'''Armsmaster''': You don’t [[FreakyFashionMildMind look like
-->--''Taylor's
-->--''Skitter's first meeting with
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->''"Doing the wrong things for the right reasons."''
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-->--''Worm's tagline''
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->''" I panicked, freaked out. My mind went someplace else, and it found the bugs there. Not that I knew what they were, at that point. I didn’t have a sense of proportion, and with all the info my power was giving me then, my brain didn’t know how to process it all. As far as I knew, all around me, in the walls of the school, in the corners, and crawling around the filthy interior of the locker, there were thousands of these twitchy, alien, distorted things that were each shoving every tiny detail about their bodies and their fucked up biology into my head."''
->''I sighed, “It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off. "''
-->--''Taylor's trigger event''
->''I sighed, “It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off. "''
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->''I sighed, “It’s
->''It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off.
-->--'''''Taylor''' explains her own trigger event''
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->''"Don't underestimate me."''
-->--'''Skitter''', ''Right before she carves out the eyes of a villain that has fought off entire teams of heroes.''
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-->--'''Skitter''', ''Right before she carves out the eyes of a villain that has fought off entire teams of heroes.
-->--'''''Skitter''', Right before she carves out the eyes of a villain that has fought off entire teams of heroes.''
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->(''After [[CompleteMonster The Nine]] have attacked the '''nursery''' of an hospital.'')
->'''[[BlackComedy [=PsychoGeko=]]]''': "Now, now, let’s not jump to conclusions here. We don’t know for a fact that this wasn’t a case of self defense. Those babies might have been asking for it. One of them might have smuggled a Walther PPK in its diaper to cap an unsuspecting nurse, and then Jack Slash saw it and decided to act heroicly. Or Siberian figured it was as good a time as any to try eating a baby. Hell, if you she downed the diaper too then you might as well sell that video off for another Jackass movie. Maybe they’ll put it just after the part where someone blows a horse."
->'''[[StraightMan tieshaunn]]''': "thanks for all those wonderful pictures in my head. better be careful the next time you go to sleep…"
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "Slept like a dead baby."
->'''[[TemptingFate [=TheAnt=]]]''': "It was implied that they took a few alive, at least to me. Knowing [[HumanResources Bonesaw]], that is not a good thing."
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "Must need [the materials to build] more spiders"
->'''tieshaunn''': "DAMMIT, WHY WON’T YOU STOP!?"
->'''[=PsychoGeko=]''': "I bet [[ToServeMan Siberian]] likes veal."
-->--''A sample from the comments section: Full of normal people. [[note]]Incidentally, it's a DeadBabyComedy taken a wee bit too literally[[/note]]''
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->''“Call it off or I shoot!”''
->''“Shoot and you die,” Skitter’s voice was distorted, not really resembling a sound from human lips. The beetle seemed to offer a deep buzz to accompany the ‘oo’ sounds. ”It won’t be pretty. Brown recluse venom makes your muscles necrotize. That means it decays while you’re still alive. It takes days, but the only real cure is taking a knife to the area around the bite. That might be okay if you have one bite, carve out a half-pound of flesh, let the wound drain, stitch it up. But what if you have three or four bites? Or ten?”''
->''“You’re bullshitting me,” Yan spat the words.''
->''Skitter ignored her. ”It’s excruciatingly painful. Nothing you experienced during your initiation into the ABB even compares, I can guarantee it. You’re rotting alive, your flesh turning black as it liquefies. So maybe you shoot me. Maybe you even kill me, though I doubt it. Either way, whether I walk away from here alive or not, you get bitten. They’re already on you. All three of you.”''
->''“Shoot and you die,” Skitter’s voice was distorted, not really resembling a sound from human lips. The beetle seemed to offer a deep buzz to accompany the ‘oo’ sounds. ”It won’t be pretty. Brown recluse venom makes your muscles necrotize. That means it decays while you’re still alive. It takes days, but the only real cure is taking a knife to the area around the bite. That might be okay if you have one bite, carve out a half-pound of flesh, let the wound drain, stitch it up. But what if you have three or four bites? Or ten?”''
->''“You’re bullshitting me,” Yan spat the words.''
->''Skitter ignored her. ”It’s excruciatingly painful. Nothing you experienced during your initiation into the ABB even compares, I can guarantee it. You’re rotting alive, your flesh turning black as it liquefies. So maybe you shoot me. Maybe you even kill me, though I doubt it. Either way, whether I walk away from here alive or not, you get bitten. They’re already on you. All three of you.”''
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->''“Shoot and you die,” Skitter’s voice was distorted, not really resembling a sound from human lips. The beetle seemed to offer a deep buzz to accompany the ‘oo’ sounds. ”It won’t be pretty. Brown recluse venom makes your muscles necrotize. That means it decays while you’re still alive. It takes days, but the only real cure is taking a knife to the area around the bite. That might be okay if you have one bite, carve out a half-pound of flesh, let the wound drain, stitch it up. But what if you have three or four bites? Or ten?”''
->''“You’re bullshitting me,” Yan spat the words.''
->''Skitter ignored her. ”It’s excruciatingly painful. Nothing you experienced during your initiation into the ABB even compares, I can guarantee it. You’re rotting alive, your flesh turning black as it liquefies. So maybe you shoot me. Maybe you even kill me, though I doubt it. Either way, whether I walk away from here alive or not, you get bitten. They’re already on you. All three of you.”''
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->''“Lung underestimated her, too,” she told him, looking at me.
->Armsmaster turned to look, as well.''
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->''“And then Skitter waltzes in and… it’s like, she slithers right past your defenses.”
->“How’s that?”
->“I can’t even put it into words. You run into her, and you can’t even look straight at her without feeling your skin crawl. Like when someone’s got something wrong with their eye and your own eye starts watering… only with her it’s because of the bugs.”''
->“How’s that?”
->“I can’t even put it into words. You run into her, and you can’t even look straight at her without feeling your skin crawl. Like when someone’s got something wrong with their eye and your own eye starts watering… only with her it’s because of the bugs.”''
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->''"A figure stood behind Yan. Her costume was barely recognizable – She wore a short cape of tattered black cloth over her body armor, a skintight black suit beneath that, and there were folds of black cloth draped around her legs like a dress or a robe. The entire fabric seemed to ripple and move. It took Sierra a second to realize it was crawling with a carpet of insects.''
->''The disconcerting part was the girl’s face, or lack thereof. Her expression was masked behind a shifting mass of bugs that moved in and out of her hairline. Sierra couldn’t even tell where the bugs ended and the scalp began, as the small black bodies crawled into and onto the black curls. There was a hint of something like glass where Skitter’s eyes were, but the bugs ventured far enough over her eyelids and around the frames that nothing was visible in the way of goggles, glasses or skin."''
->''“Call it off or I shoot!”''
->''“Shoot and you die,” Skitter’s voice was distorted, not really resembling a sound from human lips. The beetle seemed to offer a deep buzz to accompany the ‘oo’ sounds. ”It won’t be pretty. Brown recluse venom makes your muscles necrotize. That means it decays while you’re still alive. It takes days, but the only real cure is taking a knife to the area around the bite. That might be okay if you have one bite, carve out a half-pound of flesh, let the wound drain, stitch it up. But what if you have three or four bites? Or ten?”''
->''“You’re bullshitting me,” Yan spat the words.''
->''Skitter ignored her. ”It’s excruciatingly painful. Nothing you experienced during your initiation into the ABB even compares, I can guarantee it. You’re rotting alive, your flesh turning black as it liquefies. So maybe you shoot me. Maybe you even kill me, though I doubt it. Either way, whether I walk away from here alive or not, you get bitten. They’re already on you. All three of you.”''
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-->-- One in a series of information sheets being distributed by Taylor's dad about supervillains in Brockton Bay.
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-->-- One in a series of information sheets being distributed by Taylor's dad about supervillains in Brockton Bay.Bay.
->''"You gonna fight me?” He called out.
->“I’m a good guy,” I said.
->Stepping closer to me, he tilted his head, “You don’t look like one.”''
-->--''Taylor's first meeting with Armsmaster”''
->''“Lung underestimated her, too,” she told him, looking at me.
->Armsmaster turned to look, as well.''
->''"Whatever else Shadow Stalker might think of the bug girl, how the girl was creepy, a freak, she had to admit Skitter had demonstrated enough viciousness to date that she could almost respect the girl as a fellow predator."''
->''“And then Skitter waltzes in and… it’s like, she slithers right past your defenses.”
->“How’s that?”
->“I can’t even put it into words. You run into her, and you can’t even look straight at her without feeling your skin crawl. Like when someone’s got something wrong with their eye and your own eye starts watering… only with her it’s because of the bugs.”''
->''Battery surveyed the crowd again. “What’s your agenda?”
->“Do I have to have one?”
->“Yes. Your kind always has an agenda.”
->“Maybe I’m unique.”
->“No, knowing what you tried to pull with pretending to be a villain? Or pretending to be a hero that’s pretending to be a villain? You’re more likely to have some scheme at play than anyone else.”''
->''"You gonna fight me?” He called out.
->“I’m a good guy,” I said.
->Stepping closer to me, he tilted his head, “You don’t look like one.”''
-->--''Taylor's first meeting with Armsmaster”''
->''“Lung underestimated her, too,” she told him, looking at me.
->Armsmaster turned to look, as well.''
->''"Whatever else Shadow Stalker might think of the bug girl, how the girl was creepy, a freak, she had to admit Skitter had demonstrated enough viciousness to date that she could almost respect the girl as a fellow predator."''
->''“And then Skitter waltzes in and… it’s like, she slithers right past your defenses.”
->“How’s that?”
->“I can’t even put it into words. You run into her, and you can’t even look straight at her without feeling your skin crawl. Like when someone’s got something wrong with their eye and your own eye starts watering… only with her it’s because of the bugs.”''
->''Battery surveyed the crowd again. “What’s your agenda?”
->“Do I have to have one?”
->“Yes. Your kind always has an agenda.”
->“Maybe I’m unique.”
->“No, knowing what you tried to pull with pretending to be a villain? Or pretending to be a hero that’s pretending to be a villain? You’re more likely to have some scheme at play than anyone else.”''
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->''I almost laughed, and some of my humor must have translated in a mental direction to my bugs, because they started making a noise that wasn’t speech. I stopped them. It wouldn’t have sounded much like laughter anyways. ”All of the above? None of the above? Does it matter? Some of us wear the villain label with pride, because they want to rebel against the norms, because it’s a harder, more rewarding road to travel, or because being a ‘hero’ often means so very little. But few people really want to see themselves as being bad or evil, whatever label they wear. I’ve done things I regret, I’ve done things I’m proud of, and I’ve walked the roads in between. The sliding scale is a fantasy. There’s no simple answers.“ "''
-->--''Taylor's response to a hero who asks her where she sees herself in terms of the sliding scale of good and evil, heroes and villains.”''
-->--''Taylor's response to a hero who asks her where she sees herself in terms of the sliding scale of good and evil, heroes and villains.”''
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->'Know where you are:
The area extending west of the ferry station north, including the factories and the remains of the Boardwalk, is believed to be under claim by the supervillain Skitter. Skitter is a member of the Undersiders, who are allied with the Travelers in an as-of-yet unnamed alliance. Skitter is an unpredictable young woman tending towards acts of apparent kindness to those she deems her subjects and bursts of sudden and extreme violence towards those she sees as her enemies. The city is not funding work in her territory, as Skitter is handling matters there.
Skitter controls insects and senses what they do. Anyone with allergies to stings or insect bites would be advised to leave this area. She offers food, shelter and care to anyone who agrees to work under her, but the Dockworkers Association cannot suggest that anyone accept her offers, as her ulterior motives are unknown.
The area extending west of the ferry station north, including the factories and the remains of the Boardwalk, is believed to be under claim by the supervillain Skitter. Skitter is a member of the Undersiders, who are allied with the Travelers in an as-of-yet unnamed alliance. Skitter is an unpredictable young woman tending towards acts of apparent kindness to those she deems her subjects and bursts of sudden and extreme violence towards those she sees as her enemies. The city is not funding work in her territory, as Skitter is handling matters there.
Skitter controls insects and senses what they do. Anyone with allergies to stings or insect bites would be advised to leave this area. She offers food, shelter and care to anyone who agrees to work under her, but the Dockworkers Association cannot suggest that anyone accept her offers, as her ulterior motives are unknown.
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The area extending west of the ferry station north, including the factories and the remains of the Boardwalk, is believed to be under claim by the supervillain Skitter. Skitter is a member of the Undersiders, who are allied with the Travelers in an as-of-yet unnamed alliance. Skitter is an unpredictable young woman tending towards acts of apparent kindness to those she deems her subjects and bursts of sudden and extreme violence towards those she sees as her enemies. The city is not funding work in her territory, as Skitter is handling mattersthere.
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Skitter controls insects and senses what they do. Anyone with allergies to stings or insect bites would be advised to leave this area. She offers food, shelter and care to anyone who agrees to work under her, but the Dockworkers Association cannot suggest that anyone accept her offers, as her ulterior motives areunknown.
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The area extending west of the ferry station north, including the factories and the remains of the Boardwalk, is believed to be under claim by the supervillain Skitter. Skitter is a member of the Undersiders, who are allied with the Travelers in an as-of-yet unnamed alliance. Skitter is an unpredictable young woman tending towards acts of apparent kindness to those she deems her subjects and bursts of sudden and extreme violence towards those she sees as her enemies. The city is not funding work in her territory, as Skitter is handling matters
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Skitter controls insects and senses what they do. Anyone with allergies to stings or insect bites would be advised to leave this area. She offers food, shelter and care to anyone who agrees to work under her, but the Dockworkers Association cannot suggest that anyone accept her offers, as her ulterior motives are
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-->--''Taylor, in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''
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-->--''Taylor, in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''''
->'Know where you are:
The area extending west of the ferry station north, including the factories and the remains of the Boardwalk, is believed to be under claim by the supervillain Skitter. Skitter is a member of the Undersiders, who are allied with the Travelers in an as-of-yet unnamed alliance. Skitter is an unpredictable young woman tending towards acts of apparent kindness to those she deems her subjects and bursts of sudden and extreme violence towards those she sees as her enemies. The city is not funding work in her territory, as Skitter is handling matters there.
Skitter controls insects and senses what they do. Anyone with allergies to stings or insect bites would be advised to leave this area. She offers food, shelter and care to anyone who agrees to work under her, but the Dockworkers Association cannot suggest that anyone accept her offers, as her ulterior motives are unknown.
This area is not currently the site of any ongoing disputes between capes. There is limited power in this area. There is limited cell service in this area. There is not water service in this area.'
-->-- One in a series of information sheets being distributed by Taylor's dad about supervillains in Brockton Bay.
->'Know where you are:
The area extending west of the ferry station north, including the factories and the remains of the Boardwalk, is believed to be under claim by the supervillain Skitter. Skitter is a member of the Undersiders, who are allied with the Travelers in an as-of-yet unnamed alliance. Skitter is an unpredictable young woman tending towards acts of apparent kindness to those she deems her subjects and bursts of sudden and extreme violence towards those she sees as her enemies. The city is not funding work in her territory, as Skitter is handling matters there.
Skitter controls insects and senses what they do. Anyone with allergies to stings or insect bites would be advised to leave this area. She offers food, shelter and care to anyone who agrees to work under her, but the Dockworkers Association cannot suggest that anyone accept her offers, as her ulterior motives are unknown.
This area is not currently the site of any ongoing disputes between capes. There is limited power in this area. There is limited cell service in this area. There is not water service in this area.'
-->-- One in a series of information sheets being distributed by Taylor's dad about supervillains in Brockton Bay.
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->''" I panicked, freaked out. My mind went someplace else, and it found the bugs there. Not that I knew what they were, at that point. I didn’t have a sense of proportion, and with all the info my power was giving me then, my brain didn’t know how to process it all. As far as I knew, all around me, in the walls of the school, in the corners, and crawling around the filthy interior of the locker, there were thousands of these twitchy, alien, distorted things that were each shoving every tiny detail about their bodies and their fucked up biology into my head. I sighed, “It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off. "''
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->''" I panicked, freaked out. My mind went someplace else, and it found the bugs there. Not that I knew what they were, at that point. I didn’t have a sense of proportion, and with all the info my power was giving me then, my brain didn’t know how to process it all. As far as I knew, all around me, in the walls of the school, in the corners, and crawling around the filthy interior of the locker, there were thousands of these twitchy, alien, distorted things that were each shoving every tiny detail about their bodies and their fucked up biology into my head. I "''
->''I sighed, “It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off. "''
->''I sighed, “It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off. "''
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->''"Running forward, he swung the club at the swarm like he was trying to hit a home run. The head was scattered, dashed to pieces, and he laughed again. Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming.'"
->''"“Motherfucker.” Even without intending to do it, I used my swarm to carry my voice. His head craned around, as if to look at the swarming bugs who had just, for all intents and purposes, spoken. Eventually his ‘face’ turned back to me. “I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
-->--''Taylor in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''
->''"“Motherfucker.” Even without intending to do it, I used my swarm to carry my voice. His head craned around, as if to look at the swarming bugs who had just, for all intents and purposes, spoken. Eventually his ‘face’ turned back to me. “I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
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->''"Running forward, he swung the club at the swarm like he was trying to hit a home run. The head was scattered, dashed to pieces, and he laughed again. Until ''
->''Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming.'"
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->''"“Motherfucker.” Even without intending to do it, I used my swarm to carry my voice. His head craned around, as if to look at the swarming bugs who had just, for all intents and purposes, spoken. Eventually his ‘face’ turned back to me.“I ''
->''“I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
-->--''Taylor -->--''Taylor, in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''
->''Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming.
->''"“Motherfucker.” Even without intending to do it, I used my swarm to carry my voice. His head craned around, as if to look at the swarming bugs who had just, for all intents and purposes, spoken. Eventually his ‘face’ turned back to me.
->''“I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
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->''"Doing the wrong things for the right reasons."''
->''" I panicked, freaked out. My mind went someplace else, and it found the bugs there. Not that I knew what they were, at that point. I didn’t have a sense of proportion, and with all the info my power was giving me then, my brain didn’t know how to process it all. As far as I knew, all around me, in the walls of the school, in the corners, and crawling around the filthy interior of the locker, there were thousands of these twitchy, alien, distorted things that were each shoving every tiny detail about their bodies and their fucked up biology into my head. I sighed, “It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off. "''
-->--''Taylor's trigger event''
->''"Don't underestimate me."''
-->--'''Skitter''', ''Right before she carves out the eyes of a villain that has fought off entire teams of heroes.''
->''"Running forward, he swung the club at the swarm like he was trying to hit a home run. The head was scattered, dashed to pieces, and he laughed again. Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming.'"
->''"“Motherfucker.” Even without intending to do it, I used my swarm to carry my voice. His head craned around, as if to look at the swarming bugs who had just, for all intents and purposes, spoken. Eventually his ‘face’ turned back to me. “I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
-->--''Taylor in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''
->''" I panicked, freaked out. My mind went someplace else, and it found the bugs there. Not that I knew what they were, at that point. I didn’t have a sense of proportion, and with all the info my power was giving me then, my brain didn’t know how to process it all. As far as I knew, all around me, in the walls of the school, in the corners, and crawling around the filthy interior of the locker, there were thousands of these twitchy, alien, distorted things that were each shoving every tiny detail about their bodies and their fucked up biology into my head. I sighed, “It’s hard to explain what it’s like, having a new sense open up, but you can’t understand it all. Every sound that they heard was bounced back to me at a hundred times the volume, with the pitch and everything else all screwed up as if they wanted to make it as unpleasant and painful to listen to as possible. Even what they were seeing, it’s like having my eyes open after being in the dark for a long time, but the eyes weren’t attached to my body, and what they were seeing was like looking into a really dingy, grimy kaleidoscope. Thousands of them. And I didn’t know how to turn any of it off. "''
-->--''Taylor's trigger event''
->''"Don't underestimate me."''
-->--'''Skitter''', ''Right before she carves out the eyes of a villain that has fought off entire teams of heroes.''
->''"Running forward, he swung the club at the swarm like he was trying to hit a home run. The head was scattered, dashed to pieces, and he laughed again. Until the rest of the swarm dog piled him. Then he started screaming.'"
->''"“Motherfucker.” Even without intending to do it, I used my swarm to carry my voice. His head craned around, as if to look at the swarming bugs who had just, for all intents and purposes, spoken. Eventually his ‘face’ turned back to me. “I have no idea how the fuck I’m going to do it,” my voice was a low snarl, barely recognizable as my own beneath my anger and the noises of the swarm. ”But I’m going to make you regret that.”"''
-->--''Taylor in response to a villain who just murdered some of her people and is the perfect counter to her power. ''