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-->--'''Monster Dionysus,''' ''Literature/{{Monster}}''
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-->--'''Monster Dionysus,''' ''Literature/{{Monster}}''
''Literature/{{Monster|2009}}''
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[[{{Determinator}} I'm still standing here screaming,]] '''"Fuck the free world!"'''
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[[{{Determinator}} I'm still standing here screaming,]] '''"Fuck the free world!"'''world!"'''''
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->Do you ever wake up and think ''what the hell happened? What am I doing?'' And you realize that everything's all screwed up and it's probably your own damn fault, but it's too late to fix it and you just have to learn to live with it because there's no way you're going back to school or dealing with the rat race or starting from the ground up. Because that sounds good, sounds like it should work, but if you weren't such a screwup in the first place you wouldn't be [[BlueCollarWarlock in the mess you are now]]. So why bother starting over? Because you're still a screwup and that's not gonna change, no matter how you want it to.
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->On that morning, as he rinsed himself for another trip into the void, [[JadedWashout Brad]] knew: he was a failure.
->[[ICouldaBeenAContender You only get one chance in this life]]. His career browser couldn't be refreshed. Brad was just about out of dimes for the meter.
-->--''Literature/{{Repeat}}''
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Don't pothole in quotes.
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[[WithFriendsLikeThese I do got a]] [[StrawLoser dumb friend named Cheddar Bob]]\\
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-->-- ''VideoGame/Paradigm''
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-->-- ''VideoGame/Paradigm''''VideoGame/{{Paradigm}}''
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-->--'''Monster Dionysus,''' ''Literature/{{Monster}}''''Literature/{{Monster}}''
->'''[[PlayerCharacter Paradigm]]:''' What else do you know about me?\\
'''Rebel Leader:''' Other than the fact you're a self-loathing loser who can't handle criticism and never follows through with his goals? Not to mention whose internet viewing habits would make long-time fetishists gag.\\
'''Paradigm:''' ...You know, I was hoping for a more fun answer.
-->-- ''VideoGame/Paradigm''
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->'''[[PlayerCharacter Paradigm]]:''' What else do you know about me?\\
'''Rebel Leader:''' Other than the fact you're a self-loathing loser who can't handle criticism and never follows through with his goals? Not to mention whose internet viewing habits would make long-time fetishists gag.\\
'''Paradigm:''' ...You know, I was hoping for a more fun answer.
-->-- ''VideoGame/Paradigm''
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->Do you ever wake up and think ''what the hell happened? What am I doing'' And you realize that everything's all screwed up and it's probably your own damn fault, but it's too late to fix it and you just have to learn to live with it because there's no way you're going back to school or dealing with the rat race or starting from the ground up. Because that sounds good, sounds like it should work, but if you weren't such a screwup in the first place you wouldn't be [[BlueCollarWarlock in the mess you are now]]. So why bother starting over? Because you're still a screwup and that's not gonna change, no matter how you want it to.
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->Do you ever wake up and think ''what the hell happened? What am I doing'' doing?'' And you realize that everything's all screwed up and it's probably your own damn fault, but it's too late to fix it and you just have to learn to live with it because there's no way you're going back to school or dealing with the rat race or starting from the ground up. Because that sounds good, sounds like it should work, but if you weren't such a screwup in the first place you wouldn't be [[BlueCollarWarlock in the mess you are now]]. So why bother starting over? Because you're still a screwup and that's not gonna change, no matter how you want it to.
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-->--'''Jimmy "B-Rabbit" Smith Jr''', ''Film/EightMile''
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-->--'''Jimmy "B-Rabbit" Smith Jr''', ''Film/EightMile''''Film/EightMile''
->Do you ever wake up and think ''what the hell happened? What am I doing'' And you realize that everything's all screwed up and it's probably your own damn fault, but it's too late to fix it and you just have to learn to live with it because there's no way you're going back to school or dealing with the rat race or starting from the ground up. Because that sounds good, sounds like it should work, but if you weren't such a screwup in the first place you wouldn't be [[BlueCollarWarlock in the mess you are now]]. So why bother starting over? Because you're still a screwup and that's not gonna change, no matter how you want it to.
-->--'''Monster Dionysus,''' ''Literature/{{Monster}}''
->Do you ever wake up and think ''what the hell happened? What am I doing'' And you realize that everything's all screwed up and it's probably your own damn fault, but it's too late to fix it and you just have to learn to live with it because there's no way you're going back to school or dealing with the rat race or starting from the ground up. Because that sounds good, sounds like it should work, but if you weren't such a screwup in the first place you wouldn't be [[BlueCollarWarlock in the mess you are now]]. So why bother starting over? Because you're still a screwup and that's not gonna change, no matter how you want it to.
-->--'''Monster Dionysus,''' ''Literature/{{Monster}}''
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Renamed to Token Black Friend in TRS. Not just about any black friend but a token black Satelite Character to increase diversity.
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[[BlackBestFriend My boy Future]] [[UncleTomfoolery is an Uncle Tom.]]\\
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-->--'''Music/ElectricLightOrchestra''', "The Diary of Horace Wimp"
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-->--'''Music/ElectricLightOrchestra''', "The Diary of Horace Wimp"Wimp"
->''This guy ain't no motherfucking MC,\\
[[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know everything he's got to say against me,]]\\
[[PrettyFlyForAWhiteGuy I am white]], [[LoserProtagonist I am a fucking bum,]]\\
[[LowerClassLout I do live in a trailer]] [[BasementDweller with my mom,]]\\
[[BlackBestFriend My boy Future]] [[UncleTomfoolery is an Uncle Tom.]]\\
[[WithFriendsLikeThese I do got a]] [[StrawLoser dumb friend named Cheddar Bob]]\\
[[IJustShotMarvinInTheFace Who shoots himself in his leg]] [[TooDumbToLive with his own gun,]]\\
[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown I did get jumped by]] [[DirtyCoward all 6 of you chumps]]\\
[[{{Cuckold}} And Wink did fuck my girl,]]\\
[[{{Determinator}} I'm still standing here screaming,]] '''"Fuck the free world!"'''
-->--'''Jimmy "B-Rabbit" Smith Jr''', ''Film/EightMile''
->''This guy ain't no motherfucking MC,\\
[[HeroicSelfDeprecation I know everything he's got to say against me,]]\\
[[PrettyFlyForAWhiteGuy I am white]], [[LoserProtagonist I am a fucking bum,]]\\
[[LowerClassLout I do live in a trailer]] [[BasementDweller with my mom,]]\\
[[BlackBestFriend My boy Future]] [[UncleTomfoolery is an Uncle Tom.]]\\
[[WithFriendsLikeThese I do got a]] [[StrawLoser dumb friend named Cheddar Bob]]\\
[[IJustShotMarvinInTheFace Who shoots himself in his leg]] [[TooDumbToLive with his own gun,]]\\
[[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown I did get jumped by]] [[DirtyCoward all 6 of you chumps]]\\
[[{{Cuckold}} And Wink did fuck my girl,]]\\
[[{{Determinator}} I'm still standing here screaming,]] '''"Fuck the free world!"'''
-->--'''Jimmy "B-Rabbit" Smith Jr''', ''Film/EightMile''
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-->''(Monday)\\
Late again today\\
He'd be in trouble though he'd say he was sorry\\
He'd have to hurry out to the bus\\
\\
(Tuesday)\\
Horace was so sad\\
He'd never had a girl that he could care for\\
And if he was late once more, he'd be out\\
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Don't be afraid, just knock on the door\\
Well, he just stood there mumblin' and fumblin'\\
Then a voice from above said:\\
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"Horace Wimp, this is your life!\\
Go out and find yourself a wife!\\
Make a stand and be a man!\\
And you will have a great life plan!"''
-->--'''Music/ElectricLightOrchestra''', "The Diary of Horace Wimp"
Late again today\\
He'd be in trouble though he'd say he was sorry\\
He'd have to hurry out to the bus\\
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(Tuesday)\\
Horace was so sad\\
He'd never had a girl that he could care for\\
And if he was late once more, he'd be out\\
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Don't be afraid, just knock on the door\\
Well, he just stood there mumblin' and fumblin'\\
Then a voice from above said:\\
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"Horace Wimp, this is your life!\\
Go out and find yourself a wife!\\
Make a stand and be a man!\\
And you will have a great life plan!"''
-->--'''Music/ElectricLightOrchestra''', "The Diary of Horace Wimp"
